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* HoYay: Henry is a bit too obsessed with Charles, and it's vaguely implied that he has sexual feelings for him.
** This is hardly vague in the text. "Yes, he [Henry] loved Bon, who seduced him as surely as he seduced Judith— the country boy born and bred who, with five or six others of that small undergraduate body composed of other planters' sons who Bon permitted to become intimate with him," p. 76
** This is hardly vague in the text. "Yes, he [Henry] loved Bon, who seduced him as surely as he seduced Judith— the country boy born and bred who, with five or six others of that small undergraduate body composed of other planters' sons who Bon permitted to become intimate with him," p. 76
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* HoYay: Henry is a bit too obsessed with Charles, and it's vaguely implied that he has sexual feelings for him.
** This is hardly vague in the text. "Yes, he [Henry] loved Bon, who seduced him as surely as he seduced Judith— the country boy born and bred who, with five or six others of that small undergraduate body composed of other planters' sons who Bon permitted to become intimate with him," p. 76him.
** This is hardly vague in the text. "Yes, he [Henry] loved Bon, who seduced him as surely as he seduced Judith— the country boy born and bred who, with five or six others of that small undergraduate body composed of other planters' sons who Bon permitted to become intimate with him," p. 76
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** This is hardly vague in the text. "Yes, he [Henry] loved Bon, who seduced him as surely as he seduced Judith— the country boy born and bread who, with five or six others of that small undergraduate body composed of other planters' sons who Bon permitted to become intimate with him," p. 76
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** This is hardly vague in the text. "Yes, he [Henry] loved Bon, who seduced him as surely as he seduced Judith— the country boy born and bread bred who, with five or six others of that small undergraduate body composed of other planters' sons who Bon permitted to become intimate with him," p. 76
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* HoYay: Henry is a bit too obsessed with Charles, and it's vaguely implied that he has sexual feelings for him.
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* HoYay: Henry is a bit too obsessed with Charles, and it's vaguely implied that he has sexual feelings for him.him.
**This is hardly vague in the text. "Yes, he [Henry] loved Bon, who seduced him as surely as he seduced Judith— the country boy born and bread who, with five or six others of that small undergraduate body composed of other planters' sons who Bon permitted to become intimate with him," p. 76
**This is hardly vague in the text. "Yes, he [Henry] loved Bon, who seduced him as surely as he seduced Judith— the country boy born and bread who, with five or six others of that small undergraduate body composed of other planters' sons who Bon permitted to become intimate with him," p. 76
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* HoYay: Henry is a bit too obsessed with Charles, and it's vaguely implied that he has sexual feelings for him.
