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%%* CrazyAwesome: Angus the Mauler. [[spoiler:''"ELEPHAAAANTS!"'']]
* CreepyAwesome: Fearghus Campbell
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%%* CrazyAwesome: Crazy Awesome: Angus the Mauler. [[spoiler:''"ELEPHAAAANTS!"'']]
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* MoralEventHorizon: Likable the protagonists may be, several of the Scotsman and their enemies perform acts that go well beyond dickish, into truly appalling crimes, though given the GreyAndGrayMorality and ProtagonistCentredMorality on all sides, what constitutes the horizon will depend on the reader.
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* MoralEventHorizon: Likable the protagonists may be, several of the Scotsman and their enemies perform acts that go well go beyond dickish, dickish into truly appalling crimes, though although given the GreyAndGrayMorality and ProtagonistCentredMorality ProtagonistCenteredMorality on all sides, what constitutes the horizon will depend on the reader.
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** [[spoiler: Aodh forges documents framing Denmark for causing the excommunication of Scotland, incensing Domnall enough to start a war with Denmark. He does this because he felt that the new found peace was weakening Domnall and making him lose respect amongst his people. For the record, this act leads to an unmitigated, one sided genocide of the Danish people, and he did it because he felt his King was getting soft without a war to fight.]]
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** [[spoiler: Aodh forges documents framing Denmark for causing the excommunication of Scotland, incensing Domnall enough to start a war with Denmark. He does this because he felt that the new found newfound peace was weakening Domnall and making him lose respect amongst his people. For the record, this act leads to an unmitigated, one sided genocide of the Danish people, and he did it because he felt his King was getting soft without a war to fight.]]
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* CrazyAwesome: Angus the Mauler. [[spoiler:''"ELEPHAAAANTS!"'']]
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* HolyShitQuotient: The Timurids bring nine thousand troops into Scotland, totally dwarfing any army that could be assembled against them. [[spoiler: Except the '''fifteen thousand''' Scots waiting for them.]]
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* ShockingMoments: The Timurids bring nine thousand troops into Scotland, totally dwarfing any army that could be assembled against them. [[spoiler: Except the '''fifteen thousand''' Scots waiting for them.]]
