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* AcceptableTargets: Gendo and the Black Bunnies.
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* InternetBackdraft: A lot of readers left the story entirely after the punishment of the Black Bunnies.
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* BrokenBase: A lot of readers left the story entirely after [[spoiler:the punishment of the Black Bunnies]].
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** Gendo, from authorizing [[spoiler:the creation of the nanomachines]] to taking advantage of the Black Bunnies. Oh and [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking he's a jerk too]].
** Both Satsuki and Kaede gleefully cross over the line at the very start of Chapter 8, when [[spoiler:they slaughter the families of three of Shinji's classmates and have one of them repeatedly raped and tortured]].
** Aoi rounds us out with her MotiveRant, specifically [[spoiler:she got off sexually on the destruction wrought by Second Impact]].
** Shinji has probably crossed this. It's worth noting that he already views himself beyond redemption before he's done anything truly morally objectionable.
* NauseaFuel: [[spoiler:A man urinating on Aoi as she begs for death. Even Gendo is disgusted by it.]]
** Both Satsuki and Kaede gleefully cross over the line at the very start of Chapter 8, when [[spoiler:they slaughter the families of three of Shinji's classmates and have one of them repeatedly raped and tortured]].
** Aoi rounds us out with her MotiveRant, specifically [[spoiler:she got off sexually on the destruction wrought by Second Impact]].
** Shinji has probably crossed this. It's worth noting that he already views himself beyond redemption before he's done anything truly morally objectionable.
* NauseaFuel: [[spoiler:A man urinating on Aoi as she begs for death. Even Gendo is disgusted by it.]]
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** Gendo, from authorizing [[spoiler:the the creation of the nanomachines]] nanomachines to taking advantage of the Black Bunnies. Oh and [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking he's a jerk too]].
** Both Satsuki and Kaede gleefully cross over the line at the very start of Chapter 8, when[[spoiler:they they slaughter the families of three of Shinji's classmates and have one of them repeatedly raped and tortured]].
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** Aoi rounds us out with her MotiveRant, specifically[[spoiler:she she got off sexually on the destruction wrought by Second Impact]].
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** Shinjihas probably crossed this. It's worth noting that he already views himself beyond redemption before he's done anything truly morally objectionable.
* NauseaFuel:[[spoiler:A A man urinating on Aoi as she begs for death. Even Gendo is disgusted by it.]]
** Both Satsuki and Kaede gleefully cross over the line at the very start of Chapter 8, when
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** Shinji has probably crossed this, but YourMileageMayVary. It's worth noting that he already views himself beyond redemption before he's done anything truly morally objectionable.
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** Shinji has probably crossed this, but YourMileageMayVary.this. It's worth noting that he already views himself beyond redemption before he's done anything truly morally objectionable.
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* HighOctaneNightmareFuel: Shinji's fever dream at the start of 11; the Black Bunnies' [[FateWorseThanDeath final fates]].
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* NauseaFuel: [[spoiler:A man urinating on Aoi as she begs for death. Notable in that even [[CompleteMonster Gendo]] is disgusted by it.]]]]
* NightmareFuel:
** Shinji's fever dream at the start of 11
** The Black Bunnies' [[FateWorseThanDeath final fates]].
* NightmareFuel:
** Shinji's fever dream at the start of 11
** The Black Bunnies' [[FateWorseThanDeath final fates]].
