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* BrokenBase: The fans were absolutely shattered during one of the Discord sessions when Extra admitted that, should Grey go to ''Franchise/StarWars'', he would do nothing to save the Republic, primarily due to Extra’s reasoning that, aside from there being literally nothing Grey could do to stop the Rise of the Empire, [[AuthorTract he believed the Republic deserved to turn into the Empire because it was horribly corrupt and do nothing to end slavery in the Outer Rim]]. ''Many''fans pointed out how blatantly this threw billions of innocents under the bus, though some did acknowledge Extra had a point.
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* BrokenBase: The fans were absolutely shattered during one of the Discord sessions when Extra admitted that, should Grey go to ''Franchise/StarWars'', he would do nothing to save the Republic, primarily due to Extra’s reasoning that, aside from there being literally nothing Grey could do to stop the Rise of the Empire, [[AuthorTract he believed the Republic deserved to turn into the Empire because it was horribly corrupt and do nothing to end slavery in the Outer Rim]]. ''Many''fans pointed out how blatantly this threw billions of innocents under the bus, though some did acknowledge Extra had a point. [[Administrivia/RuleOfCautiousEditingJudgement And that is all that will be said on the matter]].
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* BrokenBase: The fans were absolutely shattered during one of the Discord sessions when Extra admitted that, should Grey go to ''Franchise/StarWars'', he would do nothing to save the Republic, primarily due to Extra’s reasoning that, aside from there being literally nothing Grey could do to stop the Rise of the Empire, [[AuthorTract he believed the Republic deserved to turn into the Empire because it was horribly corrupt and do nothing to end slavery in the Outer Rim]]. ''Many''fans pointed out how blatantly this threw billions of innocents under the bus, though some did acknowledge Extra had a point. [[Administrivia/RuleOfCautiousEditingJudgement And that is all that will be said on the matter]].
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* HarsherInHindsight: The backstory for this fic had the United States end up coming under the command of a {{Trumplica}}, and ending up doing surprisingly well as a nation until the North American War happened, though it did have to apparnetly deal with moe aggressive Liberal entities. Suffice to say, real life has had the exact opposite occur....[[AuthorTract which the author has entirely blamed on the Democrats]].
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* HarsherInHindsight: The backstory for this fic had the United States end up coming under the command of a {{Trumplica}}, and ending up doing surprisingly well as a nation until the North American War happened, though it did have to apparnetly deal with moe aggressive Liberal entities. Suffice to say, real life has had the exact opposite occur....[[AuthorTract which the author has entirely blamed on the Democrats]].occur...
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* HarsherInHindsight: The backstory for this fic had the United States end up coming under the command of a {{Trumplica}}, and ending up doing surprisingly well as a nation until the North American War happened, though it did have to apparnetly deal with moe aggressive Liberal entities. Suffice to say, real life has had the exact opposite occur....[[AuthorTract which the author has entirely blamed on the Democrats]].
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** Druella crossed when she ended up [[RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil having sex with her Grey Dolls so many times that they ended up becoming intelligent mamono.]] It's rather unsurprising that [[ScrewThisImOutOfHere the Dolls immediately try to leave the Royal Makai after becoming intelligent.]]
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** Druella crossed it within seconds of her introduction, when she ended up [[RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil having sex with her Grey Dolls so many times that they ended up tries to MindRape a mother and daughter into becoming intelligent mamono.]] It's rather unsurprising that [[ScrewThisImOutOfHere the Dolls immediately try to leave the Royal Makai after becoming intelligent.]]Mamono.
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* BrokenBase: The fans were absolutely shattered during one of the Discord sessions when Extra admitted that, should Grey go to ''Franchise/StarWars'', he would do nothing to save the Republic, primarily due to Extra’s reasoning that, aside from there being literally nothing Grey could do to stop the Rise of the Empire, [[AuthorTract he believed the Republic deserved to turn into the Empire because it was horribly corrupt and do nothing to end slavery in the Outer Rim]]. ''Many''fans pointed out how blatantly this threw billions of innocents under the bus, though some did acknowledge Extra had a point. [[RuleOfCatiousEditingJudgement And that is all that will be said on the matter]].
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* BrokenBase: The fans were absolutely shattered during one of the Discord sessions when Extra admitted that, should Grey go to ''Franchise/StarWars'', he would do nothing to save the Republic, primarily due to Extra’s reasoning that, aside from there being literally nothing Grey could do to stop the Rise of the Empire, [[AuthorTract he believed the Republic deserved to turn into the Empire because it was horribly corrupt and do nothing to end slavery in the Outer Rim]]. ''Many''fans pointed out how blatantly this threw billions of innocents under the bus, though some did acknowledge Extra had a point. [[RuleOfCatiousEditingJudgement [[Administrivia/RuleOfCautiousEditingJudgement And that is all that will be said on the matter]].
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* BrokenBase: The fans were absolutely shattered during one of the Discord sessions when Extra admitted that, should Grey go to ''Franchise/StarWars'', he would do nothing to save the Republic, primarily due to Extra’s reasoning that, aside from there being literally nothing Grey could do to stop the Rise of the Empire, [[AuthorTract he believed the Republic deserved to turn into the Empire because it was horribly corrupt and do nothing to end slavery in the Outer Rim]]. ''Many''fans pointed out how blatantly this threw billions of innocents under the bus, though some did acknowledge Extra had a point. [[RuleOfCatiousEditingJudgement And that is all that will be said on the matter]].
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** Her fathe, the Incubus Hero, crossed it '''a long time ago.''' To wit, not only did he betray his entire party to side with the 13th Demon Lord, [[spoiler:he also allowed them to be raped by mamono until they underwent monsterization[=/=]incubization so as to keep them all as his 'friends']]. Unlike with his daughter, though, his moral compass is still functional, [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone and will NEVER let him live this down.]]
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** Her fathe, father, the Incubus Hero, crossed it '''a long time ago.''' To wit, not only did he betray his entire party to side with the 13th Demon Lord, [[spoiler:he also allowed them to be raped by mamono until they underwent monsterization[=/=]incubization so as to keep them all as his 'friends']]. Unlike with his daughter, though, his moral compass is still functional, [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone and will NEVER let him live this down.]]
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** Druella crossed when she ended up [[RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil having sex with her Grey Dolls so many times that they ended up becoming intelligent mamono.]] It's rather unsurprising that [[ScrewThisImOutOfHere the Dolls immediately try to leave the Royal Makai after becoming intelligent.
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** Druella crossed when she ended up [[RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil having sex with her Grey Dolls so many times that they ended up becoming intelligent mamono.]] It's rather unsurprising that [[ScrewThisImOutOfHere the Dolls immediately try to leave the Royal Makai after becoming intelligent.]]
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* UnreliableNarrator: Grey's POV can be a bit lopsided and biased to be honest.
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** Druella crossed when she ended up [[RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil having sex with her Grey Dolls so many times that they ended up becoming intelligent mamono.]] It's rather unsurprising that [[ScrewThisImOutOfHere the Dolls immediately try to leave the Royal Makai after becoming intelligent.
** Her fathe, the Incubus Hero, crossed it '''a long time ago.''' To wit, not only did he betray his entire party to side with the 13th Demon Lord, [[spoiler:he also allowed them to behonest.raped by mamono until they underwent monsterization[=/=]incubization so as to keep them all as his 'friends']]. Unlike with his daughter, though, his moral compass is still functional, [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone and will NEVER let him live this down.]]
** Druella crossed when she ended up [[RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil having sex with her Grey Dolls so many times that they ended up becoming intelligent mamono.]] It's rather unsurprising that [[ScrewThisImOutOfHere the Dolls immediately try to leave the Royal Makai after becoming intelligent.
** Her fathe, the Incubus Hero, crossed it '''a long time ago.''' To wit, not only did he betray his entire party to side with the 13th Demon Lord, [[spoiler:he also allowed them to be
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* SpeculationFuel: The next worlds that Grey would visit as well as how well he would react to worlds suggested.
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* SpeculationFuel: The next worlds that Grey would visit as well as how well he would react UnreliableNarrator: Grey's POV can be a bit lopsided and biased to worlds suggested.be honest.
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* AlwaysChaoticEvil: While the Mamono could be classified as more as [[AllWomenAreLustful Always Horny and Uncaring of Refusal to Sex]], there are a couple of subversions, including one of the Demon Lord's own daughters.
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* AlwaysChaoticEvil: While the Mamono could be classified SpeculationFuel: The next worlds that Grey would visit as more well as [[AllWomenAreLustful Always Horny and Uncaring of Refusal how well he would react to Sex]], there are a couple of subversions, including one of the Demon Lord's own daughters.worlds suggested.
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* AlwaysChaoticEvil: While the Mamono could be classified as more as [[AllWomenAreLustful Always Horny and Uncaring of Refusal to Sex]], there are a couple of subversions, including one of the Demon Lord's own daughters.
