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* AndTheFandomRejoiced: The very moment that [[spoiler: Yellow became a {{Badass}} and dueled it down fist-to-fist in the rooftop scene with Red]], people were pretty much screaming their lungs out.
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* GrowingTheBeard: Starran's writing has been improving constantly over course of the year the fic has taken. While the first few chapters are great light-hearted comedy, by Chapter 9 Starran has clearly come into her own.
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* CrowningMomentOfFunny: A parodied pokemon battle between Green and Blue in chapter 9.
* CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming: [[spoiler: Gold and Crystal's]] confessions, especially the ''second'' one
* CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming: [[spoiler: Gold and Crystal's]] confessions, especially the ''second'' one
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* CrowningMomentOfFunny: A parodied pokemon battle between Green and Blue in chapter 9.
* CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming:AndTheFandomRejoiced: The very moment that [[spoiler: Gold Yellow became a {{Badass}} and Crystal's]] confessions, especially dueled it down fist-to-fist in the ''second'' onerooftop scene with Red]], people were pretty much screaming their lungs out.
* CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming:
