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* SuperSargassoSea: Tattertown. Miles puts it best.
-->'''Miles''': Tattertown is the elephant's graveyard for junk, where all forgotten objects come to rest.
-->//Streetlight he was leaning on suddenly [[AnimateInanimateObject gets up and walks away.]]//
-->But as you can see, nothing rests around here. An amazing thing happens to some of the things that find their way here- they become ''alive''.
-->'''Miles''': Tattertown is the elephant's graveyard for junk, where all forgotten objects come to rest.
-->//Streetlight he was leaning on suddenly [[AnimateInanimateObject gets up and walks away.]]//
-->But as you can see, nothing rests around here. An amazing thing happens to some of the things that find their way here- they become ''alive''.
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* PaperThinDisguise: Muffet dons a Santa suit, but it's obvious who she is, especially with her blonde ringlets sticking out from under the hat. Sidney's disguise is hardly better; it consists only of a few bells and a reindeer-antler headband.
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* PaperThinDisguise: Muffet dons a Santa suit, but it's obvious who she is, especially with her blonde ringlets sticking out from under the hat. Sidney's disguise is hardly better; better: it consists only of a few bells and a reindeer-antler headband.
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* AndIMustScream: Before landing in Tattertown, Muffet is fully conscious, but unable to move or speak. She spends her days being stuffed by Debbie into new outfits and being made to sit at tea parties, helpless to protest or run away. As Miles, the saxophone who narrates the story, explains...
-->'''Miles:''' She was always dressing her up, sometimes just for fun. But ''her'' fun, not Muffet's.
-->'''Miles:''' She was always dressing her up, sometimes just for fun. But ''her'' fun, not Muffet's.
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* SlidingScaleOfLivingToys: Before landing in Tattertown, Muffet is immobile but still sentient. She spends her days being stuffed by Debbie into new outfits and being made to sit at tea parties, helpless to protest or run away. As Miles, the saxophone who narrates the story, explains...
-->'''Miles:''' She was always dressing her up, sometimes just for fun. But ''her'' fun, not Muffet's.
-->'''Miles:''' She was always dressing her up, sometimes just for fun. But ''her'' fun, not Muffet's.
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Storybook Opening is when a story opens with a storybook being opened, and the focus going into that book. Christmas in Tattertown starts with a shot of Debbie playing with Muffet and Dog, in the time before they found the book.
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* PlotTriggeringBook: The strange book Debbie finds sucks her, Dog, and Muffet into Tatterown.
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* PlotTriggeringBook: The strange book Debbie finds sucks her, Dog, and Muffet into Tatterown. Muffet then runs away from Debbie and plots to conquer Tattertown.
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* LetThereBeSnow: On hearing "White Christmas", Sidney bursts into tears, then begins sprinkling soap flakes to bring snow to Tattertown.
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* LetThereBeSnow: On hearing "White Christmas", Sidney bursts into tears, then begins sprinkling boxes of soap flakes downward to bring snow to Tattertown.
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* LetThereBeSnow: On hearing "White Christmas", Sidney has a change of heart and begins sprinkling soap flakes to bring snow to Tattertown.
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* LetThereBeSnow: On hearing "White Christmas", Sidney has a change of heart and bursts into tears, then begins sprinkling soap flakes to bring snow to Tattertown.
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* PaperThinDisguise: Muffet dons a Santa suit, but it's obvious who she is, especially with her blonde ringlets sticking out from under the hat. Sidney's disguise is hardly better; it consists only of a few bells and a reindeer-antler headband.
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* FallingIntoJail: When Debbie plays Music/BingCrosby's rendition of "White Christmas" on an old phonograph, Sidney stops flying in mid-air to listen, sending Muffet, who's riding on his back, crashing into the town jail.
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* FallingIntoJail: When During the air raid, Debbie decides to make one last effort to show the residents of Tattertown what Christmas is. She finds an old phonograph and plays Music/BingCrosby's rendition of "White Christmas" on an old phonograph, it. Sidney stops flying in mid-air to listen, sending Muffet, who's riding on his back, crashing into the town jail.
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* LetThereBeSnow: At the end, Sidney has a change of heart and begins sprinkling soap flakes to bring snow to Tattertown.
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* LetThereBeSnow: At the end, On hearing "White Christmas", Sidney has a change of heart and begins sprinkling soap flakes to bring snow to Tattertown.
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* PerversePuppet: Muffet, a doll who comes to life and tries to conquer Tattertown.
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* PerversePuppet: Muffet, a doll who comes to life and tries to conquer Tattertown.
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While Dog remains loyal to Debbie, Muffet, who has long felt oppressed by the wear and tear of being a toy, runs away. Muffet eludes Debbie and, calling herself Muffet the Merciless, makes up her mind to conquer Tattertown, with the aid of Sidney the Spider, who had attempted to take over Tattertown before. Sidney takes Muffet to the "Deadster Zone", located outside of Tattertown and inhabited by the unsavory rejected items (such as war toys and TV sets). Muffet recruits these inhabitants as goons into her army.
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While Dog remains loyal to Debbie, Muffet, who has long felt oppressed by the wear and tear of being a toy, runs away. Muffet eludes Debbie and, calling herself Muffet the Merciless, makes up her mind to conquer Tattertown, with the aid of Sidney the Spider, who had attempted to take over Tattertown before. Sidney takes Muffet to the "Deadster Zone", located outside of Tattertown and inhabited by the unsavory rejected items (such as war toys and TV sets).toys). Muffet recruits these inhabitants as goons into her army.
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* BizarreTasteInFood: Muffet loves tobacco pie. It even has cigarette butts sticking out of it.
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* BizarreTasteInFood: At one point, Muffet loves is about to enjoy a piece of tobacco pie. It even has cigarette butts sticking out of it.
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* AssInALionSkin: Muffet, trying to conquer Tattertown, disguises Sidney as a reindeer.
* BadSanta: Muffet disguises herself as Santa Claus and tries to conquer Tattertown.
* BadSanta: Muffet disguises herself as Santa Claus and tries to conquer Tattertown.
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* AssInALionSkin: BadSanta: Muffet, trying to conquer Tattertown, disguises Sidney as a reindeer.
* BadSanta: Muffet disguisesherself as Santa Claus and tries to conquer Tattertown.[[AssInALionSkin Sidney as a reindeer]].
* BadSanta: Muffet disguises
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* AssInALionSkin: Muffet, trying to conquer Tattertown, disguises Sidney as a reindeer.
* BadSanta: Muffet disguises herself as Santa Claus and tries to conquer Tattertown.
* BadSanta: Muffet disguises herself as Santa Claus and tries to conquer Tattertown.
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A girl named Debbie finds a strange book, which sucks her, her Little Miss Muffet doll, and her stuffed dog into the realm of Tattertown, where discarded items—including Muffet and the dog—come to life.
While the dog remains loyal to Debbie, Muffet, who has long felt oppressed by the wear and tear of being a toy, runs away. Muffet eludes Debbie and, calling herself Muffet the Merciless, makes up her mind to conquer Tattertown, with the aid of Sidney the Spider, who had attempted to take over Tattertown before. Sidney takes Muffet to the "Deadster Zone", located outside of Tattertown and inhabited by the unsavory rejected items (such as war toys and TV sets). Muffet recruits these inhabitants as goons into her army.
While the dog remains loyal to Debbie, Muffet, who has long felt oppressed by the wear and tear of being a toy, runs away. Muffet eludes Debbie and, calling herself Muffet the Merciless, makes up her mind to conquer Tattertown, with the aid of Sidney the Spider, who had attempted to take over Tattertown before. Sidney takes Muffet to the "Deadster Zone", located outside of Tattertown and inhabited by the unsavory rejected items (such as war toys and TV sets). Muffet recruits these inhabitants as goons into her army.
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A girl named Debbie finds a strange book, which sucks her, her Little Miss Muffet doll, and Dog, her stuffed dog dog, into the realm of Tattertown, where discarded items—including Muffet and the dog—come Dog—come to life.
Whilethe dog Dog remains loyal to Debbie, Muffet, who has long felt oppressed by the wear and tear of being a toy, runs away. Muffet eludes Debbie and, calling herself Muffet the Merciless, makes up her mind to conquer Tattertown, with the aid of Sidney the Spider, who had attempted to take over Tattertown before. Sidney takes Muffet to the "Deadster Zone", located outside of Tattertown and inhabited by the unsavory rejected items (such as war toys and TV sets). Muffet recruits these inhabitants as goons into her army.
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* ADogNamedDog: Debbie's dog is called simply "Dog".
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* GirlsLoveStuffedAnimals: Debbie loves her stuffed dog, especially when he comes to life after landing in Tattertown.
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* GirlsLoveStuffedAnimals: Debbie loves her stuffed dog, Dog, especially when he comes to life after landing in Tattertown.
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* LivingToys: Muffet and the stuffed dog, among others.
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* LivingToys: Muffet and the stuffed dog, Dog, among others.
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* PlotTriggeringBook: The strange book Debbie finds sucks her, her stuffed dog, and Muffet into Tatterown.
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* PlotTriggeringBook: The strange book Debbie finds sucks her, her stuffed dog, Dog, and Muffet into Tatterown.
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And Call Him George is about dangerously smothering someone with affection.
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* AndCallHimGeorge: Why Muffet avoids Debbie like the plague.
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* AndIMustScream: Before landing in Tattertown, Muffet is fully conscious, but unable to move or speak. She spends her days being stuffed by Debbie into new outfits and being made to sit at tea parties, helpless to protest or run away. As the saxophone who narrates the story explains...
-->'''Saxophone:''' She was always dressing her up, sometimes just for fun. But ''her'' fun, not Muffet's.
-->'''Saxophone:''' She was always dressing her up, sometimes just for fun. But ''her'' fun, not Muffet's.
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* AndIMustScream: Before landing in Tattertown, Muffet is fully conscious, but unable to move or speak. She spends her days being stuffed by Debbie into new outfits and being made to sit at tea parties, helpless to protest or run away. As Miles, the saxophone who narrates the story story, explains...
-->'''Saxophone:''' -->'''Miles:''' She was always dressing her up, sometimes just for fun. But ''her'' fun, not Muffet's.
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* {{Narrator}}: A saxophone residing in Tattertown tells the story.
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* {{Narrator}}: A Miles, a saxophone residing in Tattertown Tattertown, tells the story.
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While the dog remains loyal to Debbie, Muffet, who has long felt oppressed by the wear and tear of being a toy, runs away. Muffet eludes Debbie and, calling herself Muffet the Merciless, makes up her mind to conquer Tattertown, with the aid of Sidney the Spider, who had attempted to take over Tattertown before. Sidney takes Muffet to the "Deadster Zone," located outside of Tattertown and inhabited by the unsavory rejected items (such as war toys and TV sets). Muffet recruits these inhabitants as goons into her army.
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While the dog remains loyal to Debbie, Muffet, who has long felt oppressed by the wear and tear of being a toy, runs away. Muffet eludes Debbie and, calling herself Muffet the Merciless, makes up her mind to conquer Tattertown, with the aid of Sidney the Spider, who had attempted to take over Tattertown before. Sidney takes Muffet to the "Deadster Zone," Zone", located outside of Tattertown and inhabited by the unsavory rejected items (such as war toys and TV sets). Muffet recruits these inhabitants as goons into her army.
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* TearsOfJoy: Muffet, when she first lands in Tattertown, sheds these on realizing she's alive.
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* TearsOfJoy: Muffet, when she first lands in Tattertown, sheds these on realizing she's alive.she can move and speak.
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* AndIMustScream: Before landing in Tattertown, Muffet is fully conscious, but unable to move or speak. She spends her days being stuffed by Debbie into new outfits and being made to sit at tea parties, helpless to protest or run away. As the saxophone who narrates the story explains...
-->'''Saxophone:''' She was always dressing her up, sometimes just for fun. But ''her'' fun, not Muffet's.
-->'''Saxophone:''' She was always dressing her up, sometimes just for fun. But ''her'' fun, not Muffet's.
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* FallingIntoJail: When Debbie plays Music/BingCrosby's "White Christmas" on an old phonograph, Sidney stops flying in mid-air to listen, sending Muffet, who's riding on his back, crashing into the town jail.
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* FallingIntoJail: When Debbie plays Music/BingCrosby's rendition of "White Christmas" on an old phonograph, Sidney stops flying in mid-air to listen, sending Muffet, who's riding on his back, crashing into the town jail.
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* PlotTriggeringBook: The strange book Debbie finds sucks her, her stuffed dog, and Muffet into Tatterown.
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* TearsOfJoy: Muffet, when she first lands in Tattertown, sheds these on realizing she's alive.
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* PerversePuppet: Muffet, a doll who comes to life and tries conquer Tattertown.
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* PerversePuppet: Muffet, a doll who comes to life and tries to conquer Tattertown.
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Meanwhile, Debbie decides to introduce the concept of Christmas to Tattertown. But unknown to her, Muffet, disguised as Santa, is planning an air raid.
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Meanwhile, Debbie decides to introduce the concept of Christmas to Tattertown. But unknown to her, Muffet, disguised as Santa, SantaClaus, is planning an air raid.
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* FallingIntoJail: When Debbie plays Music/BingCrosby's "White Christmas" on an old phonograph, Sidney stops flying in mid-air to listen, sending Muffet, who's riding on his back, into the town jail.
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* FallingIntoJail: When Debbie plays Music/BingCrosby's "White Christmas" on an old phonograph, Sidney stops flying in mid-air to listen, sending Muffet, who's riding on his back, crashing into the town jail.
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* FallingIntoJail: When Debbie plays Music/BingCrosby's "White Christmas" on an old phonograph, Sidney stops in mid-air to listen, sending Muffet flying into the town jail.
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* FallingIntoJail: When Debbie plays Music/BingCrosby's "White Christmas" on an old phonograph, Sidney stops flying in mid-air to listen, sending Muffet flying Muffet, who's riding on his back, into the town jail.
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* ClothesForChristmasCringe: Debbie, chasing Muffet, tells her she's got a new dress for her. While the dress is not, strictly speaking, a Christmas present, Muffet reacts with disgusted noises.
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* ClothesForChristmasCringe: Debbie, chasing Muffet, tells her she's got a new dress for her. While the dress is not, strictly speaking, not stated to be a Christmas present, Muffet reacts with disgusted noises.
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* FallingIntoJail: When Debbie plays Music/BingCrosby's "White Christmas" on an old phonograph, Sidney stops in mid-air to listen, sending Muffet flying into the town jail.
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A young girl named Debbie finds a strange book, which sucks her, her Little Miss Muffet doll, and her stuffed dog into the realm of Tattertown, where discarded items—including Muffet and the dog—come to life.
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A young girl named Debbie finds a strange book, which sucks her, her Little Miss Muffet doll, and her stuffed dog into the realm of Tattertown, where discarded items—including Muffet and the dog—come to life.
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* ClothesForChristmasCringe: Debbie, chasing Muffet, tells her she's got a new dress for her. While the dress is not, strictly speaking, a Christmas present, Muffet reacts with disgusted noises.