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Picking up some years after the events of the first film, the Mousekewitz family are disillusioned with living in New York, with the final straw being a cat attack on their alley home. After the villain, Cat R. Waul, tricks them and a crowd of other mice into buying train tickets to a small town in the West via using a mouse puppet, the family boards a train to the Wild West. But, echoing the tone of disillusionment in the first film, it turns out the town of Green River is a DyingTown, and Cat R. Waul had more nefarious motives for bringing the mice there. Fievel is the only one who overheard Waul's plans, and no one who will believe him except for a washed-up former hero sheriff, Wylie Burp (voiced by none other than [[Creator/JimmyStewart James Stewart]] in his final film role).
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Picking up some years after the events of the first film, the Mousekewitz family are disillusioned with living in New York, with the final straw being a cat attack on their alley home. After the villain, Cat R. Waul, tricks them and a crowd of other mice into buying train tickets to a small town in the West via using a mouse puppet, the family boards a train to the Wild West.TheWildWest. But, echoing the tone of disillusionment in the first film, it turns out the town of Green River is a DyingTown, and Cat R. Waul had more nefarious motives for bringing the mice there. Fievel is the only one who overheard Waul's plans, and no one who will believe him except for a washed-up former hero sheriff, Wylie Burp (voiced by none other than [[Creator/JimmyStewart James Stewart]] in his final film role).
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* HappyEndingOverride: Warren and his gang may not have come back from Hong Kong, but that doesn't mean there aren't ''other'' hostile cats to menace our main characters.
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* HappyEndingOverride: Warren and his gang may not have come back from Hong Kong, but that doesn't mean there aren't ''other'' hostile cats to menace our main characters. And the Mousekewitz family is still as poor as it was in Russia in the first film.
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* AcquiredSituationalNarcissism: Tanya temporarily becomes narcissistic after her successful singing performance in front of the cats, to the point where she disregards her brother's concerns and signs an autograph for him when he tries warning her about the dangers of her new manager Cat R. Waul, who plots to eat the mice in town except for Tanya because he’s entranced by her singing voice.
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* AcquiredSituationalNarcissism: Tanya temporarily becomes narcissistic after her successful singing performance in front of the cats, to the point where she disregards gives her brother's concerns and signs brother an autograph for him when he tries warning her and disregards his warnings about the dangers of her new manager Cat R. Waul, who plots to eat the mice in town except for Tanya because he’s entranced by her singing voice.
