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* AfterActionPatchUp: Narinder and Star share a quiet moment after the battle with Deckard and Fox, while Star heals Narinder's wounds with the power of the crown.
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* AfterActionPatchUp: Narinder and Star share a quiet moment after the battle with Deckard and Fox, while Star heals Narinder's wounds with the power of the crown.crown.
* WatchingTroyBurn: [[spoiler: After the battle with Fox and Deckard, Star and Narinder return to the base of the Starry-Eyed Cult, only to find all of the followers killed and the resurrected Bishops burning the place to the ground. ]]
* WatchingTroyBurn: [[spoiler: After the battle with Fox and Deckard, Star and Narinder return to the base of the Starry-Eyed Cult, only to find all of the followers killed and the resurrected Bishops burning the place to the ground. ]]
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* MortalWoundReveal: [[spoiler: After a confrontation with Deckard, Star survives and returns to the compound, where it's revealed that she is missing her heart. ]]
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* MortalWoundReveal: [[spoiler: After a confrontation with Deckard, Star survives and returns to the compound, where it's revealed that she is missing her heart. ]]]]
* AfterActionPatchUp: Narinder and Star share a quiet moment after the battle with Deckard and Fox, while Star heals Narinder's wounds with the power of the crown.
* AfterActionPatchUp: Narinder and Star share a quiet moment after the battle with Deckard and Fox, while Star heals Narinder's wounds with the power of the crown.
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''Usurper AU'' is an alternate universe fic of ''VideoGame/CultOfTheLamb'' that takes place post-game. In this AU, a sheep named Star has successfully defeated the Four Bishops and reduced Narinder the former Bishop of Death to mortal status but she struggles to master the powers of the Red Crown even with the help of Narinder and on an expedition into Darkwood, the two are surprised by Haro who informs them that the Crowns have a grudge against Star and are seeking new bearers. Haro soon departs, leaving behind their creation, Stolas who keeps Haro's knowledge of the Crowns. Together, the three must face against the new Crown Bearers, a certain Fox, a sibling of Star long-thought dead, and a certain quartet returning from the dead while dealing with their issues.
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* BloodlessCarnage: Averted heavily.
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* CrapsaccharineWorld: Same as the video game.
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* DeviousDaggers: Deckard's favoured weapon and their primary way of convincing people that they're not a lamb.
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* MatureAnimalStory: Same as the game.
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** Star ends up sacrificing Ratau but has no regrets unlike the Lamb in the game.
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** Star ends up sacrificing Ratau but has no regrets unlike the Lamb in the game.game.
* MortalWoundReveal: [[spoiler: After a confrontation with Deckard, Star survives and returns to the compound, where it's revealed that she is missing her heart. ]]
* MortalWoundReveal: [[spoiler: After a confrontation with Deckard, Star survives and returns to the compound, where it's revealed that she is missing her heart. ]]
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* EvilVsEvil: Same as the video game. We have the resurrected Bishops who slaughtered an entire race to prevent their deaths and after their revival, slaughtered the majority of the Red Crown's followers. We have Star's cult who is just as harsh in dealing with heretics, encourages cannibalism and sacrifices the elderly.
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* EvilVsEvil: EvilVersusEvil: Same as the video game. We have the resurrected Bishops who slaughtered an entire race to prevent their deaths and after their revival, slaughtered the majority of the Red Crown's followers. We have Star's cult who is just as harsh in dealing with heretics, encourages cannibalism and sacrifices the elderly.
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* OffWithHisHead: During Narinder's recount of the prophecy of the Bishops killing the Archbishops, Verchiel's head is shown to have fallen off his neck.
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* OffWithHisHead: During Narinder's recount of the prophecy of the Bishops killing the Archbishops, Verchiel's head is shown to have fallen off his neck.been cut off.
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* TearsOfBlood: Same as the game.
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* Irony: Same as the game.
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''Usurper AU'' is an alternate universe fic of ''VideoGame/WrathOfTheLamb'' that takes place post-game. In this AU, a sheep named Star has successfully defeated the Four Bishops and reduced Narinder the former Bishop of Death to mortal status but she struggles to master the powers of the Red Crown even with the help of Narinder and on an expedition into Darkwood, the two are surprised by Haro who informs them that the Crowns have a grudge against Star and are seeking new bearers. Haro soon departs, leaving behind their creation, Stolas who keeps Haro's knowledge of the Crowns. Together, the three must face against the new Crown Bearers, a certain Fox, a sibling of Star long-thought dead, and a certain quartet returning from the dead while dealing with their issues.
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''Usurper AU'' is an alternate universe fic of ''VideoGame/WrathOfTheLamb'' ''VideoGame/CultOfTheLamb'' that takes place post-game. In this AU, a sheep named Star has successfully defeated the Four Bishops and reduced Narinder the former Bishop of Death to mortal status but she struggles to master the powers of the Red Crown even with the help of Narinder and on an expedition into Darkwood, the two are surprised by Haro who informs them that the Crowns have a grudge against Star and are seeking new bearers. Haro soon departs, leaving behind their creation, Stolas who keeps Haro's knowledge of the Crowns. Together, the three must face against the new Crown Bearers, a certain Fox, a sibling of Star long-thought dead, and a certain quartet returning from the dead while dealing with their issues.
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Takes place post-game. In this AU, a sheep named Star has successfully defeated the Four Bishops and reduced Narinder the former Bishop of Death to mortal status but she struggles to master the powers of the Red Crown even with the help of Narinder and on an expedition into Darkwood, the two are surprised by Haro who informs them that the Crowns have a grudge against Star and are seeking new bearers. Haro soon departs, leaving behind their creation, Stolas who keeps Haro's knowledge of the Crowns. Together, the three must face against the new Crown Bearers, a certain Fox, a sibling of Star long-thought dead, and a certain quartet returning from the dead while dealing with their issues.
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* DealWithTheDevil: 3 examples.
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* DealWithTheDevil: 3 examples.DealWithTheDevil:
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* Deckard puts on the Yellow Crown and allies with the Fox.
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* Deckard puts on the Yellow Crown and allies with the Fox.
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* Cult: Every Crown Bearer in existence has run one with the possible exception of Haro.
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* Cult: {{Cult}}: Every Crown Bearer in existence has run one with the possible exception of Haro.
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* MurderIsTheBestSolution: Narinder is for killing Deckard which drives a wedge between him and Star.
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* MurderIsTheBestSolution: Narinder is for killing Deckard which drives a wedge between him and Star. Same for the Bishops who slaughter Star's followers to weaken the Red Crown.
* MutuallyExclusivePowerUps: Same as the video game.
* NiceJobBreakingItHerod: Same as the game as part of Star's backstory. Subverted for Shamura who was banking on this happening.
* OffWithHisHead: During Narinder's recount of the prophecy of the Bishops killing the Archbishops, Verchiel's head is shown to have fallen off his neck.
* PuppeteerParasite: After his death, Sozo is shown to now have his body controlled by the Menticide Mushrooms.
* RapePillageAndBurn: In Narinder's backstory, raiders from the Chaos sect under Archbishop Zuriel, destroyed his village, leaving him the sole survivor. The same thing happens to Star's compound when the Bishops return.
* ReligionIsMagic: Devotion powers the Crowns and without any Followers, the Crown becomes dormant. The Bishops slaughter Star's followers to ensure this scenario.
* ScrewThisIMOutOfHere: The Fox runs for it when the battle with Star turns against him and Deckard.
* SealedEvilInACan: Same as the game.
* SelfFulfillingProphecy: Same as the game but with the twist that Shamura was planning on this.
* SinisterMinister: Vessels of the Crown serve as missionaries and right-hands of the Bishops, expanding the influence of their Bishops.
* TamperingWithFoodAndDrink: [[spoiler: Shamura has Heket prepare a separate meal for Star and Deckard, filled with mushrooms. It works on Star but not on Deckard.]]
* TearsOfBlood: Same as the game.
* WeHaveReserves: Subverted with Star's cult who all end up dying by the Bishops' hands, weakening the Red Crown.
* YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness: 2 examples.
** Same as the game with Narinder and Star.
** Star ends up sacrificing Ratau but has no regrets unlike the Lamb in the game.
* MutuallyExclusivePowerUps: Same as the video game.
* NiceJobBreakingItHerod: Same as the game as part of Star's backstory. Subverted for Shamura who was banking on this happening.
* OffWithHisHead: During Narinder's recount of the prophecy of the Bishops killing the Archbishops, Verchiel's head is shown to have fallen off his neck.
* PuppeteerParasite: After his death, Sozo is shown to now have his body controlled by the Menticide Mushrooms.
* RapePillageAndBurn: In Narinder's backstory, raiders from the Chaos sect under Archbishop Zuriel, destroyed his village, leaving him the sole survivor. The same thing happens to Star's compound when the Bishops return.
* ReligionIsMagic: Devotion powers the Crowns and without any Followers, the Crown becomes dormant. The Bishops slaughter Star's followers to ensure this scenario.
* ScrewThisIMOutOfHere: The Fox runs for it when the battle with Star turns against him and Deckard.
* SealedEvilInACan: Same as the game.
* SelfFulfillingProphecy: Same as the game but with the twist that Shamura was planning on this.
* SinisterMinister: Vessels of the Crown serve as missionaries and right-hands of the Bishops, expanding the influence of their Bishops.
* TamperingWithFoodAndDrink: [[spoiler: Shamura has Heket prepare a separate meal for Star and Deckard, filled with mushrooms. It works on Star but not on Deckard.]]
* TearsOfBlood: Same as the game.
* WeHaveReserves: Subverted with Star's cult who all end up dying by the Bishops' hands, weakening the Red Crown.
* YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness: 2 examples.
** Same as the game with Narinder and Star.
** Star ends up sacrificing Ratau but has no regrets unlike the Lamb in the game.
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* AllThereInTheManual: A lot of information about the characters' backstories are in their character bio.
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* FromNobodyToNightmare: Several examples.
** Same as the game, Star was a normal sheep who was killed and brought back to life as the Red Crown's Vessel.
** Narinder and the other Bishops used to be regular people before killing the Archbishops and seizing their Crowns. Same as their predecessors.
** Deckard used to be a terrified young lamb who underwent a drastic change after separating from Star. They have killed dozens of people and are the current bearer of the Yellow Crown.
** The Fox was a normal follower of Narinder before something happened to him to turn him into the being he is today.
* GruesomeGoat: Star is a powerful cult leader who slaughtered the four Bishops and many of their followers.
* HumanlikeHandAnatomy: Nearly every character besides the Owls have human-like hands.
* HumanSacrifice: Star has the Belief in Sacrifice doctrine and sacrifices the elderly.
* IAteWhat: Star has the Cannibalism doctrine.
* InTheHood: Same as the game for the Old Faith cultists.
* Irony: Same as the game.
* JerkassGods: Both the Bishops and the Archbishops are the worse, though its mentioned that the Archbishops were much worse.
* LastOfHisKind: Before Deckard reappeared, Star thought that she was the only sheep left in the Lands of the Old Faith.
* MatureAnimalStory: Same as the game.
* MorphWeapon: The Crown Bearers can transform their crowns into different weapons.
* MurderIsTheBestSolution: Narinder is for killing Deckard which drives a wedge between him and Star.
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* CurbstompBattle: The Bishops return and slaughter all of Star's followers without suffering any visible injuries. Downplayed as most of Star's followers don't know how to fight.
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* BloodlessCarnage: Averted heavily.
* CoolCrown: All Crown Bearers wear the 5 crowns in existence. Downplayed as the Crowns corrupt every weak-willed bearer that places them on their head.
* CrapsaccharineWorld: Same as the video game.
* Cult: Every Crown Bearer in existence has run one with the possible exception of Haro.
* CurbstompBattle: The Bishops return and slaughter all of Star's followers without suffering any visible injuries. Downplayed as most of Star's followers don't know how tofight.fight.
* DealWithTheDevil: 3 examples.
** Star agreed to one with Narinder after the former was executed.
** Star makes one with Shamura in the Lingering. In exchange for Shamura's help, Star allows them to name their price. This comes back to bite her hard when the Bishops use the resurrection spell to return and slaughter her followers.
* DeathIsASlapOnTheWrist: While serving Narinder, Star could be resurrected each time she died. Note that she was the only one out of every Berserk Clan member that served as a vessel to accept being resurrected again.
* DeathOfTheOldGods: As per the game, Star kills the Bishops, leaving her and Narinder as the last gods. Subverted when the Crowns start seeking new Crown Bearers.
* DemonicPossession: Implied with the Crowns who are mentioned to turn weak-willed Crown Bearers into their puppets.
* DeviousDaggers: Deckard's favoured weapon and their primary way of convincing people that they're not a lamb.
* DidYouJustRomanceCthulhu: Star has strong romantic feelings for Narinder during and after her service to him. This goes away after Star learns about Solaria, her mother.
* DivineIntervention: Same as the game.
* DueToTheDead: One of Star's doctrines was the Funeral doctrine.
* EvilPowerVacuum: After the Archbishops were killed, it was pandemonium until the Bishops could restore order to the Old Faith. Nowadays, Shamura and Heket fear the same scenario happening if people find out that the Crowns have new bearers.
* EvilVsEvil: Same as the video game. We have the resurrected Bishops who slaughtered an entire race to prevent their deaths and after their revival, slaughtered the majority of the Red Crown's followers. We have Star's cult who is just as harsh in dealing with heretics, encourages cannibalism and sacrifices the elderly.
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* CoolCrown: All Crown Bearers wear the 5 crowns in existence. Downplayed as the Crowns corrupt every weak-willed bearer that places them on their head.
* CrapsaccharineWorld: Same as the video game.
* Cult: Every Crown Bearer in existence has run one with the possible exception of Haro.
* CurbstompBattle: The Bishops return and slaughter all of Star's followers without suffering any visible injuries. Downplayed as most of Star's followers don't know how to
* DealWithTheDevil: 3 examples.
** Star agreed to one with Narinder after the former was executed.
** Star makes one with Shamura in the Lingering. In exchange for Shamura's help, Star allows them to name their price. This comes back to bite her hard when the Bishops use the resurrection spell to return and slaughter her followers.
* DeathIsASlapOnTheWrist: While serving Narinder, Star could be resurrected each time she died. Note that she was the only one out of every Berserk Clan member that served as a vessel to accept being resurrected again.
* DeathOfTheOldGods: As per the game, Star kills the Bishops, leaving her and Narinder as the last gods. Subverted when the Crowns start seeking new Crown Bearers.
* DemonicPossession: Implied with the Crowns who are mentioned to turn weak-willed Crown Bearers into their puppets.
* DeviousDaggers: Deckard's favoured weapon and their primary way of convincing people that they're not a lamb.
* DidYouJustRomanceCthulhu: Star has strong romantic feelings for Narinder during and after her service to him. This goes away after Star learns about Solaria, her mother.
* DivineIntervention: Same as the game.
* DueToTheDead: One of Star's doctrines was the Funeral doctrine.
* EvilPowerVacuum: After the Archbishops were killed, it was pandemonium until the Bishops could restore order to the Old Faith. Nowadays, Shamura and Heket fear the same scenario happening if people find out that the Crowns have new bearers.
* EvilVsEvil: Same as the video game. We have the resurrected Bishops who slaughtered an entire race to prevent their deaths and after their revival, slaughtered the majority of the Red Crown's followers. We have Star's cult who is just as harsh in dealing with heretics, encourages cannibalism and sacrifices the elderly.
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Takes place post-game. In this AU, a sheep named Star has successfully defeated the Four Bishops and reduced Narinder the former Bishop of Death to mortal status but she struggles to master the powers of the Red Crown even with the help of Narinder and on an expedition into Darkwood, the two are surprised by Haro who informs them that the Crowns have a grudge against Star and are seeking new bearers. Haro soon departs, leaving behind their creation, Stolas who keeps Haro's knowledge of the Crowns. Together, the three must face against the new Crown Bearers, a certain Fox, a sibling of Star long-thought dead, and a certain quartet returning from the dead while dealing with their issues.
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* BackFromTheDead: Ratau is revived by Star due to the latter needing his help. The Bishops also return as well.
* CurbstompBattle: The Bishops return and slaughter all of Star's followers without suffering any visible injuries. Downplayed as most of Star's followers don't know how to fight.
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* BackFromTheDead: Ratau is revived by Star due to the latter needing his help. The Bishops also return as well.
* CurbstompBattle: The Bishops return and slaughter all of Star's followers without suffering any visible injuries. Downplayed as most of Star's followers don't know how to fight.
