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* PoisonIsEvil: Chimera’s [[SnakesAreSinister snake head]] poison doesn't kill Discord at soon because of his chaotic magic; by other turn, or for this exact reason, it keeps him from using it.[[spoiler: [[ThePowerOfLove When Fluttershy is attacked by Acrios, Discord finds himself able to use magic again]], but that makes the poidon spread through his body. He decides then to use the last of his strength to destroy the medallion and kill Acrios, although that costs his life. Fortunately, Zecora's potion is able to neutralize the poison and revive him... in the happy ending.]]
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* PoisonIsEvil: Chimera’s [[SnakesAreSinister snake head]] poison doesn't kill Discord at soon because of his chaotic magic; by other turn, or for this exact reason, it keeps him from using it.[[spoiler: [[ThePowerOfLove When Fluttershy is attacked by Acrios, Discord finds himself able to use magic again]], but that makes the poidon poison spread through his body. He decides then to use the last of his strength to destroy the medallion and kill Acrios, although that costs his life. Fortunately, Zecora's potion is able to neutralize the poison and revive him... in the happy ending.]]
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* GettingEatenIsHarmless: Zecora and Twilight are briefly swallowed by a Hydra. In its stomach, Twilight frets mainly about being separated from the action, and isn't bothered at all by the juices they're sitting in.
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* GettingEatenIsHarmless: Zecora and Twilight are briefly swallowed by a Hydra. [[https://www.deviantart.com/eveeka/art/MLP-FIM-TLA-pg-81-84-Hydra-825216305 In its stomach, stomach]], Twilight frets mainly about being separated from the action, and isn't bothered at all by the juices they're sitting in.
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* GettingEatenIsHarmless: Zecora and Twilight are briefly swallowed by a Hydra. In its stomach, Twilight frets mainly about being separated from the action, and isn't bothered at all by the juices they're sitting in.
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** [[spoiler: Discord receives two in the second ending. One, after lying to Fluttershy he doesn't love her and sending the poor mare away in tears. Zecora gives him quite an earful, telling Discord that Fluttershy never left his side while he was in comma and how much she suffered because of him. Besides, even if she isn't immortal like him, both can make each other happy during their time together. Then Discord runs after Fluttershy to apologize and it's Fluttershy's turn to chew him out before he can blurt his love for her.]]
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** [[spoiler: Discord receives two in the second ending. One, after lying to Fluttershy he doesn't love her and sending the poor mare away in tears. Zecora gives him quite an earful, telling Discord that Fluttershy never left his side while he was in comma coma and how much she suffered because of him. Besides, even if she isn't immortal like him, both can make each other happy during their time together. Then Discord runs after Fluttershy to apologize and it's Fluttershy's turn to chew him out before he can blurt his love for her.]]
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** [[spoiler: Both Rarity and Rainbow Dash are humbled by the entire Chimera misadventure in a way that their canon adventures never were able to do.]]
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** [[spoiler: Both Rarity and Rainbow Dash are humbled by the entire Chimera misadventure in a way that their canon adventures could never were able to do.]]
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* AllOfTheOtherReindeer: Except for Fluttershy and Spike, everybody else treats Discord like trash, or are cold with him at best. Subverted during the Everfree Forest arc, when the Mane Five come to realize they truly care about Discord.
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* AllOfTheOtherReindeer: Except for Fluttershy and Fluttershy, Spike, and Big Mac, everybody else treats Discord like trash, or are cold with him at best. Subverted during the Everfree Forest arc, when the Mane Five come to realize they truly care about Discord.
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* {{Hypocrite}}: When Fluttershy calls out the Mane Five for their prejudice against Discord (see ContinuityNod), Rarity insists that, “none of them actually put Equestria in danger” - just after Fluttershy rubbed on her face that time when Rarity tried to change Equestria to her taste... which was EXACTLY what Discord did in his villainous days! (not to mention that, as Nightmare Moon, she was worse than Luna in the comics) Pinkie Pie [[FacePalm face hoofs]] at her stuborness.
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* {{Hypocrite}}: When Fluttershy calls out the Mane Five for their prejudice against Discord (see ContinuityNod), Rarity insists that, “none of them actually put Equestria in danger” - just after Fluttershy rubbed on her face that time when Rarity tried to change Equestria to her taste... which was EXACTLY what Discord did in his villainous days! (not to mention that, as Nightmare Moon, she was worse than Luna in the comics) Pinkie Pie [[FacePalm face hoofs]] at her stuborness.stubbornness.
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: After being insulted by Nightlight, Discord decides to get revenge on the ponies by flooding Poneyville with a chocolate milk storm, only to realize he would hurt Fluttershy again… and that he didn’t want to hurt anyone at all. The remorse for his past errors [[HeroicBSOD finally gets on him, so he decides to leave,]] [[PersonalRainCloud with the cloud he just summoned raining over his head]].
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: After being insulted by Nightlight, Discord decides to get revenge on the ponies by flooding Poneyville Ponyville with a chocolate milk storm, only to realize he would hurt Fluttershy again… and that he didn’t want to hurt anyone at all. The remorse for his past errors [[HeroicBSOD finally gets on him, so he decides to leave,]] [[PersonalRainCloud with the cloud he just summoned raining over his head]].
