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* NightOfTheLivingMooks: The fate of Mycaelis and Vagus's parents. [[spoiler:Soon to be fate of the crew of the Argo]].
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* BerserkButton: Don’t ever make a big mess in front of Aamon the Espurr; His crewmates claim warn Vagus that he doesn’t doesn't like being interrupted from his janitorial duties be talked to or given orders either.
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* FamilyOfChoice: Leon, Meri and Noir are this; Kareena and Narda are this for Mycaelis and Vagus.
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* FamilyOfChoice: Leon, Meri and Noir are this; this for Leon; Kareena and Narda are this for Mycaelis and Vagus.
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* MadeOfIndestructium: The Book.
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* WeHardlyKnewYe: The first casualties in the attack on the Argo are [[spoiler:crew members that had yet to be named in the story]].
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* BleachedUnderpants: Before the comic began, Leon and Vagus made an appearance in a porn comic Haychel drew. WordOfGod is that said comic isn't canon here, though.
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* BleachedUnderpants: Before the comic began, Haychel and Sly created a standalone porn comic starring Leon and Vagus made an appearance in a porn comic Haychel drew. entitled 'Now and Forever.' WordOfGod is that said comic isn't canon here, though.
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* ObliviousJanitorCut: The Argo is under attack, yet Aamon the Espurr would rather concentrate on swabbing the lower deck.
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* WouldHurtAChild: Levi the Gallade sees the group of young pokemon possessing Leon's book as children; This does not stop him from attacking them and [[spoiler:almost killing
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* WouldHurtAChild: Levi the Gallade sees addresses the group of young pokemon possessing Leon's book as children; This does not stop him from attacking them and [[spoiler:almost killing Kareena]]
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* WouldHurtAChild: Levi the Gallade sees the group of young pokemon possessing Leon's book as children; This does not stop him from attacking them and [[spoiler:almost killing Kareena]].
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* WouldHurtAChild: Levi the Gallade sees the group of young pokemon possessing Leon's book as children; This does not stop him from attacking them and [[spoiler:almost killing Kareena]].killing
* WritingAroundTrademarks: In PMDExplorers, the Pokémon village is named Tao. For Tales of Elysium, the village is renamed 'Oat.'
* WritingAroundTrademarks: In PMDExplorers, the Pokémon village is named Tao. For Tales of Elysium, the village is renamed 'Oat.'
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Oops! It was out of alphabetical order!
* RedOniBlueOni: Mycaelis and Vagus.
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* RedOniBlueOni: Mycaelis and Vagus.
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* SpoilerCover: The cover image for the first chapter appears to give away [[spoiler:how the chapter will end for Leon and Vagus]].
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* FamilyOfChoice: Leon, Meri and Noir are this; Kareena and Narda are this for Mycaelis and Vagus.
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Vagus doesn't leave his team. His team leaves the guild.
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Leon is a Riolu without a past, save for memories of ColdBloodedTorture and a strange book that only he can open and with contents that change constantly. Vagus is a Totodile who quit his team after discovering their boss was crooked. Together, they search for the mythical land of Elysium in hopes of finding answers to their past, present, and future.
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Leon is a Riolu without a past, save for memories of ColdBloodedTorture and a strange book that only he can open and with contents that change constantly. Vagus is a the Totodile who quit his is part of a rescue team that leaves their guild after discovering being fed up with their boss was crooked.corrupt boss. Together, they search for the mythical land of Elysium in hopes of finding answers to their past, present, and future.
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* VillainWithGoodPublicity: The crew of the Argo believes the Laconians to have been this.
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* VillainWithGoodPublicity: The crew of the Argo believes the Laconians to have been this.
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* BerzerkButton: Don’t ever make a mess in front of Aamon the Espurr; His crewmates claim he doesn’t like being interrupted from his janitorial duties either.
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* PunnyName: The Argo's Bronzong (known as the Bronze Bell Pokémon) is named... Isabell.
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* RedOniBlueOni: Mycaelis and Vagus.
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* WouldHurtAChild: Levi the Gallade sees the group of young pokemon possessing Leon's book as children; This does not stop him from attacking them and [[spoiler:almost killing Kareena]].
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[[http://ssp-comics.com/comics/toe/ Tales of Elysium]] is a webcomic by Haychel and [=SlyGrovyle=] inspired by the VideoGame/PokemonMysteryDungeon series of games, but going in a very different direction than the games usually do. It updates on Sunday and Tuesday.
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[[http://ssp-comics.com/comics/toe/ Tales of Elysium]] is a webcomic by Haychel and [=SlyGrovyle=] inspired by the VideoGame/PokemonMysteryDungeon series of games, but going in [[DarkerAndEdgier a very different direction direction]] than the games usually do. It updates on Sunday and Tuesday.
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Other crew members are named after Argonauts
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* ThemeNaming: Very much a thing in this comic. Aside from Team Spartan using a Laconian symbol, Theseus is the first mate of a ship named the Argo (which was originally sailing in the direction of Tartarus), and Leon's name is [[AllThereInTheManual short for Leonidas]].
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* ThemeNaming: Very much a thing in this comic. Aside from Team Spartan using uses a Laconian symbol, symbol; Theseus is the first mate of a ship named the Argo (which was originally sailing in the direction of Tartarus), Tartarus) and at least five other crew members (Idas, Tiphys, Atalanta, Castor and Pollux) are also named after Argonauts; Leon's name is [[AllThereInTheManual short for Leonidas]].
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The characters and plot points originated in comics and literature that the authors created for PMDExplorers. By Mission 7, Haychel and Sly decided to abandon the storyline and create an AlternateCannon story incorporating their characters and their backstories.
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The characters and plot points originated in comics and literature that the authors created for PMDExplorers. By Mission 7, Haychel and Sly decided to abandon the storyline and create an AlternateCannon alternate cannon story incorporating their characters and their backstories.
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The characters and plot points originated in comics and literature that the authors created for PMD-Explorers. By Mission 7, Haychel and Sly decided to abandon the storyline and create an alternate cannon story incorporating their characters and their backstories.
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The characters and plot points originated in comics and literature that the authors created for PMD-Explorers. PMDExplorers. By Mission 7, Haychel and Sly decided to abandon the storyline and create an alternate cannon AlternateCannon story incorporating their characters and their backstories.
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The characters and plot points originated in comics and literature that the authors created for PMD-Explorers. By Mission 7, Haychel and Sly decided to abandon the storyline and create an alternate cannon story incorporating their characters and their backstories.
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* HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler:Olly the Scrafty]], who puts himself in the way of a lethal blow meant for Vagus before punching him off the ''Argo.''
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* EyepatchOfPower: Vagus has one of these due to a horrific injury that took place before the comic.
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* AbusiveParents: While Mycaelis and Vagus's Charizard mother doesn't appear to have been this, their father, a Feraligatr, constantly pushed Mycaelis to be stronger using TrainingFromHell. This has also had a bad effect on Mycaelis's personality.
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* PowerStrainBlackout: [[spoiler:Vagus]] is prone to these.
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* PowerStrainBlackout: [[spoiler:Vagus]] is prone to these.these due to a medical condition he has known as "Lethargy", which causes him to get tired in battle faster if he puts too much strain on himself..
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* ActionPrologue: Featuring a Snorlax caught in the middle of a battle between Rayquaza and Deoxys.
* AllThereInTheManual: Both the [[https://haychel.deviantart.com artist]] and [[https://slydragoon16.deviantart.com writer]] have DeviantArt accounts that are sometimes used to delve deeper into the setting.
* AllThereInTheManual: Both the [[https://haychel.deviantart.com artist]] and [[https://slydragoon16.deviantart.com writer]] have DeviantArt accounts that are sometimes used to delve deeper into the setting.
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* ActionPrologue: Featuring a Snorlax Slowpoke caught in the middle of a battle between Rayquaza and Deoxys.
* AllThereInTheManual: Both the [[https://haychel.deviantart.com artist]] and [[https://slydragoon16.deviantart.com writer]] have DeviantArt accounts that are sometimes used to delve deeper into thesetting.setting, including expanding on the relationship between Leon and Vagus.
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* ChekhovsSkill: At one point Leon's book shows him a number of different rope knots. Cue he and Vagus being accepted onto the Argo because he can tie a bowline knot due to studying the book.
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[[http://ssp-comics.com/comics/toe/ Tales of Elysium]] is a webcomic by Haychel and [=SlyGrovyle=] inspired by the VideoGame/PokemonMysteryDungeon series of games, but going in a very different direction than the games usually do. It updates on Sunday and Tuesday.
Leon is a Riolu without a past, save for memories of ColdBloodedTorture and a strange book that only he can open and with contents that change constantly. Vagus is a Totodile who quit his team after discovering their boss was crooked. Together, they search for the mythical land of Elysium in hopes of finding answers to their past, present, and future.
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!!This webcomic provides examples of:
* ActionPrologue: Featuring a Snorlax caught in the middle of a battle between Rayquaza and Deoxys.
* AllThereInTheManual: Both the [[https://haychel.deviantart.com artist]] and [[https://slydragoon16.deviantart.com writer]] have DeviantArt accounts that are sometimes used to delve deeper into the setting.
* ArcSymbol: The armbands worn by Team Spartan bear a Laconian symbol.
* BattleCouple: Leon and Vagus provide one of the rare BadassGay examples of this trope.
* BleachedUnderpants: Before the comic began, Leon and Vagus made an appearance in a porn comic Haychel drew. WordOfGod is that said comic isn't canon here, though.
* TheChosenMany: The Laconians are said to have once been the protectors of Elysium.
* ElementalPowers: Well, they are Pokémon, after all...
** MakingASplash: Vagus (Totodile), Theseus (Samurott).
** PlayingWithFire: Mycaelis (Charmeleon).
* GreatBigBookOfEverything: Leon's book straddles the line between this and TomeOfEldritchLore: it shows Leon what it thinks he needs to know, although it's not very good at telling Leon why he needs to know it.
* HealingHands: Leon has shown the ability to do this.
* [[HumanShield Pokemon Shield]]: One of the early villains, an Aggron named Slade, tries to pull this against Mycaelis. [[spoiler:Mycaelis calls his bluff.]]
* MixedAncestry: The children of Laconians and ordinary Pokemon are called "Abnormals"; they're still stronger than most Pokemon, but nowhere near the level of Laconians.
* {{Pirate}}: The crew of the Argo.
* PowerStrainBlackout: [[spoiler:Vagus]] is prone to these.
* SuperpowerfulGenetics: The Laconians.
* ThemeNaming: Very much a thing in this comic. Aside from Team Spartan using a Laconian symbol, Theseus is the first mate of a ship named the Argo (which was originally sailing in the direction of Tartarus), and Leon's name is [[AllThereInTheManual short for Leonidas]].
* VillainWithGoodPublicity: The crew of the Argo believes the Laconians to have been this.
* YouCantGoHomeAgain: Above all else, Theseus wants to return home...[[spoiler:to Elysium]].
* ZombieApocalypse: This, or something like it, appears to have been the fate of Elysium.
Leon is a Riolu without a past, save for memories of ColdBloodedTorture and a strange book that only he can open and with contents that change constantly. Vagus is a Totodile who quit his team after discovering their boss was crooked. Together, they search for the mythical land of Elysium in hopes of finding answers to their past, present, and future.
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!!This webcomic provides examples of:
* ActionPrologue: Featuring a Snorlax caught in the middle of a battle between Rayquaza and Deoxys.
* AllThereInTheManual: Both the [[https://haychel.deviantart.com artist]] and [[https://slydragoon16.deviantart.com writer]] have DeviantArt accounts that are sometimes used to delve deeper into the setting.
* ArcSymbol: The armbands worn by Team Spartan bear a Laconian symbol.
* BattleCouple: Leon and Vagus provide one of the rare BadassGay examples of this trope.
* BleachedUnderpants: Before the comic began, Leon and Vagus made an appearance in a porn comic Haychel drew. WordOfGod is that said comic isn't canon here, though.
* TheChosenMany: The Laconians are said to have once been the protectors of Elysium.
* ElementalPowers: Well, they are Pokémon, after all...
** MakingASplash: Vagus (Totodile), Theseus (Samurott).
** PlayingWithFire: Mycaelis (Charmeleon).
* GreatBigBookOfEverything: Leon's book straddles the line between this and TomeOfEldritchLore: it shows Leon what it thinks he needs to know, although it's not very good at telling Leon why he needs to know it.
* HealingHands: Leon has shown the ability to do this.
* [[HumanShield Pokemon Shield]]: One of the early villains, an Aggron named Slade, tries to pull this against Mycaelis. [[spoiler:Mycaelis calls his bluff.]]
* MixedAncestry: The children of Laconians and ordinary Pokemon are called "Abnormals"; they're still stronger than most Pokemon, but nowhere near the level of Laconians.
* {{Pirate}}: The crew of the Argo.
* PowerStrainBlackout: [[spoiler:Vagus]] is prone to these.
* SuperpowerfulGenetics: The Laconians.
* ThemeNaming: Very much a thing in this comic. Aside from Team Spartan using a Laconian symbol, Theseus is the first mate of a ship named the Argo (which was originally sailing in the direction of Tartarus), and Leon's name is [[AllThereInTheManual short for Leonidas]].
* VillainWithGoodPublicity: The crew of the Argo believes the Laconians to have been this.
* YouCantGoHomeAgain: Above all else, Theseus wants to return home...[[spoiler:to Elysium]].
* ZombieApocalypse: This, or something like it, appears to have been the fate of Elysium.
