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** Subverted with Rubiline, who is implied to have died by his space helment cracking in space.
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** Subverted with Rubiline, who is implied to have died by his space helment helmet cracking in space.
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* CivilizedAnimal: [[spoiler: In the first interlude, Aister (who would eventually become Doraidis/Miracle) is this. Even teaching the other foxes hunan mannerisms.]]
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* CivilizedAnimal: [[spoiler: In the first interlude, Aister (who would eventually become Doraidis/Miracle) is this. Even teaching the other foxes hunan human mannerisms.]]
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* MakeAWish: Wishes are the main driving force of the star warriors's modus operandi. And there are a lot of them out there!
* MysteriousParent: [[spoiler: Doraidis/Miracle is Ezmeralda's mother. Though she is a star warrior before Ezmeralda, she seems to have a lot going on. What that is is hard to tell.]]
* MysteriousParent: [[spoiler: Doraidis/Miracle is Ezmeralda's mother. Though she is a star warrior before Ezmeralda, she seems to have a lot going on. What that is is hard to tell.]]
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* MakeAWish: Wishes are the main driving force of the star warriors's warriors' modus operandi. And there are a lot of them out there!
* MysteriousParent: [[spoiler: Doraidis/Miracle is Ezmeralda's mother. Though she is a star warrior before Ezmeralda, she seems to have a lot going on. What that is is hard totell.]]tell, because]] the rules of the warriors at large prevent them from being in contact.
* MysteriousParent: [[spoiler: Doraidis/Miracle is Ezmeralda's mother. Though she is a star warrior before Ezmeralda, she seems to have a lot going on. What that is is hard to
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* OurGeniesAreDifferent: Not really genies, but given the wish granting aspect. However, star warriors don't grant wishes the way you expect. Though it varies from case to case, it usually boils down to motivating or talking to the wisher in a way to get them to actively persue their wishes.
* PassionIsEvil: Not nessessaily evil, but it is painted to be a detriment to star warriors.
* PassionIsEvil: Not nessessaily evil, but it is painted to be a detriment to star warriors.
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* OurGeniesAreDifferent: Not really genies, but given the wish granting aspect. However, star warriors don't grant wishes the way you expect. Though it varies from case to case, it usually boils down to motivating or talking to the wisher in a way to get them to actively persue pursue their wishes.
* PassionIsEvil: Notnessessaily necessarily evil, but it is painted to be a detriment to star warriors.
* PassionIsEvil: Not
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[[https://www.starwarriorscomic.com StarWarriors]] is a webcomic created by Scott Fraser.
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[[https://www.starwarriorscomic.com StarWarriors]] Star Warriors]] is a webcomic created by Scott Fraser.
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** Weaver can fit under this as well, though in her case, more complex details pertaining to the Star Warriors' missions are covered.[[spoiler: Especially late in Chapter 5, where she puts together something going on in the story's full lore.]]
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** Weaver can fit under this as well, though in her case, more complex details pertaining to the Star Warriors' missions are covered.[[spoiler: Especially late in Chapter 5, where she puts things together something going on in that helps reveal important lore of the story's full lore.universe.]]
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* TheWatson: Ezmeralda fills this role often, as basic concepts of the StarWarriors organization have to be explained to her (and the audience). Weaver can fit under this as well, though in her case, more complex details pertaining to the StarWarriors' missions are covered.
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* TheWatson: Ezmeralda fills this role often, as basic concepts of the StarWarriors Star Warriors organization have to be explained to her (and the audience). audience).
** Weaver can fit under this as well, though in her case, more complex details pertaining to theStarWarriors' Star Warriors' missions are covered.[[spoiler: Especially late in Chapter 5, where she puts together something going on in the story's full lore.]]
** Weaver can fit under this as well, though in her case, more complex details pertaining to the
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* TheWatson: Ezmeralda fills this role often, as basic concepts of the StarWarriors organization have to be explained to her (and the audience). Weaver can fit under this as well, though in her case, more complex details pertaining to the StarWarriors' missions are covered.
