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* SuperPrototype: The ''Intrepid'' and the Falcon fighters. Both offense-oriented craft of a type that canon Starfleet wouldn't create until the ''Defiant''.
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* GungHolierThanThou: Science Officer Burns, who insists that Starfleet regulations be followed to the letter, no matter what the actual situation. Also seems to be a bit of a xenophobe, if his reaction to dealing with the Ferengi trader on his terms[[note]]Trading warehoused Federation goods for a much-need replacement warp core and the Falcon fighters[[/note]] is any indication.
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* GungHolierThanThou: [[LawfulStupid Science Officer Burns, Burns]], who insists that Starfleet regulations be followed to the letter, no matter what the actual situation. Also seems to be a bit of a xenophobe, if his reaction to dealing with the Ferengi trader on his terms[[note]]Trading warehoused Federation goods for a much-need replacement warp core and the Falcon fighters[[/note]] is any indication.
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* EverythingsBetterWithDinosaurs: The Gorn appear frequently in the comic, being depicted by Lego velociraptor figures.
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* Technobabble: Thus far, the Tajarans have used more technobabble than the Federation crew. Weird.
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* GungHolierThanThou: Science Officer Burns, who insists that Starfleet regulations be followed to the letter, no matter what the actual situation. Also seems to be a bit of a xenophobe, if his reaction to dealing with the Ferengi trader on his terms[[note]]Trading warehoused Federation goods for a much-need replacement warp core and the Falcon fighters[[/note]] is any indication.
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* SpaceFighter: The Falcons - a Federation project abandoned for being "too warlike". The Intrepid encounters a Ferengi trader with four of them in his hold. Andre is ecstatic over encountering them, as he couldn't even get the Federation to admit the prototypes existed.
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* Blackmail: Dale threatens to go public with his version of events during the Battle of Wogglenather, prompting the Admiralty to give him what he wants instead.
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* Blackmail: BlackmailIsSuchAnUglyWord: Dale threatens to go public with his version of events during the Battle of Wogglenather, prompting the Admiralty to give him what he wants instead.
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* SpaceMarine: Both depicted Starfleet ships carry a complement of space marines, who prove to be as tough as should be expected.
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* SpaceIsNoisy: Largely averted. The big SFX shots in space are (mostly) done without sound effects.
* SpaceMarine: Both depicted Starfleet ships carry a complement of space marines, who prove to be as tough as should beexpected.expected.
* StandardAlienSpaceship: The Tajarans' flagship is called a "Flying Slug" and somewhat resembles one, with a long neck and "antenna" at the end of two pylongs. The ship may be partly alive, but this hasn't been delved into as yet. The Tajaran cruiser vessels are all the same type of ship, used as large escorts/fighters.
* Technobabble: Thus far, the Tajarans have used more technobabble than the Federation crew. Weird.
* TheMainCharactersDoEverything: Averted. While the main characters do a lot, we often see the lower decks crew struggling with problems, officers from other rotations, and new characters introduced to handle new jobs (like flying star fighters).
* SpaceMarine: Both depicted Starfleet ships carry a complement of space marines, who prove to be as tough as should be
* StandardAlienSpaceship: The Tajarans' flagship is called a "Flying Slug" and somewhat resembles one, with a long neck and "antenna" at the end of two pylongs. The ship may be partly alive, but this hasn't been delved into as yet. The Tajaran cruiser vessels are all the same type of ship, used as large escorts/fighters.
* Technobabble: Thus far, the Tajarans have used more technobabble than the Federation crew. Weird.
* TheMainCharactersDoEverything: Averted. While the main characters do a lot, we often see the lower decks crew struggling with problems, officers from other rotations, and new characters introduced to handle new jobs (like flying star fighters).
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* AlternateUniverse: This story does not take place in the main Star Trek timeline, though many things are the same. But TNG command characters (including Picard) wearing gold instead of red (http://startrek.swiftbow.com/38.html) is a dead giveaway that things are a little different.
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* AlternateUniverse: This story does not take place in the main Star Trek timeline, though many things are the same. But TNG command characters (including Picard) wearing gold instead of red (http://startrek.( http://startrek.swiftbow.com/38.html) html ) is a dead giveaway that things are a little different.
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* BigBadassBattleSequence: A recent installment (http://startrek.swiftbow.com/95.html) involved the Intrepid and its fighter craft battling the Tajaran fleet in an all-out assault.
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* BigBadassBattleSequence: A recent installment (http://startrek.( http://startrek.swiftbow.com/95.html) html ) involved the Intrepid and its fighter craft battling the Tajaran fleet in an all-out assault.
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* AlternateUniverse: This story does not take place in the main Star Trek timeline, though many things are the same. But TNG command characters (including Picard) wearing gold instead of red (http://startrek.swiftbow.com/38.html)is a dead giveaway that things are a little different.
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* AlternateUniverse: This story does not take place in the main Star Trek timeline, though many things are the same. But TNG command characters (including Picard) wearing gold instead of red (http://startrek.swiftbow.com/38.html)is html) is a dead giveaway that things are a little different.
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* AliensNeverInventedTheWheel: The Tajarans have ship shields and weapons that can challenge Federation ships, but they never invented warp. Their best attempt to create warp drive instead resulted in the Slow Dimension, which has the opposite effect, and they use as a weapon.
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* AliensNeverInventedTheWheel: The Tajarans have ship shields and weapons that can challenge Federation ships, but they never invented warp. Their best attempt to create warp drive do so instead resulted in the Slow Dimension, which has the opposite effect, and they use it as a weapon.
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* AlternateUniverse: This story does not take place in the main Star Trek timeline, though many things are the same. But TNG command characters (including Picard) wearing gold instead of red is (http://startrek.swiftbow.com/38.html)is a dead giveaway that things are a little different.
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* BigBadassBattleSequence: A recent installment http://startrek.swiftbow.com/95.html involved the Intrepid and its fighter craft battling the Tajaran fleet in an all-out assault.
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* BigBadassBattleSequence: A recent installment http://startrek.(http://startrek.swiftbow.com/95.html html) involved the Intrepid and its fighter craft battling the Tajaran fleet in an all-out assault.
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* AbandonShip: The crew of the Shadowburn is forced to flee when the Tajaran fleet cripples their ship and begins harvesting their technology. Much of the first episode deals with their difficult escape.
* ActionPrologue: Part of Episode 1 involves flashbacks to the Tajaran's previous attempt to conquer Wogglenather, which several of the main characters were involved in, too.
* AlienAnimals: The Wogglenathers are apparently sapient dog people with an otherwise normal, if pre-warp, civilization. They even walk on all fours, but operate cars and build large structures.
* AliensNeverInventedTheWheel: The Tajarans have ship shields and weapons that can challenge Federation ships, but they never invented warp. Their best attempt to create warp drive instead resulted in the Slow Dimension, which has the opposite effect, and they use as a weapon.
* AlienNonInterferenceClause: Dale Zurkett is court-martialed out of Starfleet for violating the Prime Directive. (He intervened to save the Wogglenathers from the Tajarans and brought the Federation into a brief war.) He is reinstated at the start of the story, partly to prevent him making trouble for some politicians by telling his side of the story.
* AlternateUniverse: This story does not take place in the main Star Trek timeline, though many things are the same. But TNG command characters (including Picard) wearing gold instead of red is a dead giveaway that things are a little different.
* AmazingTechnicolorPopulation: The Tajarans come in orange and green varieties, which is part of their caste system. They are, apparently though, able to change their skin color given certain circumstances.
* ActionPrologue: Part of Episode 1 involves flashbacks to the Tajaran's previous attempt to conquer Wogglenather, which several of the main characters were involved in, too.
* AlienAnimals: The Wogglenathers are apparently sapient dog people with an otherwise normal, if pre-warp, civilization. They even walk on all fours, but operate cars and build large structures.
* AliensNeverInventedTheWheel: The Tajarans have ship shields and weapons that can challenge Federation ships, but they never invented warp. Their best attempt to create warp drive instead resulted in the Slow Dimension, which has the opposite effect, and they use as a weapon.
* AlienNonInterferenceClause: Dale Zurkett is court-martialed out of Starfleet for violating the Prime Directive. (He intervened to save the Wogglenathers from the Tajarans and brought the Federation into a brief war.) He is reinstated at the start of the story, partly to prevent him making trouble for some politicians by telling his side of the story.
* AlternateUniverse: This story does not take place in the main Star Trek timeline, though many things are the same. But TNG command characters (including Picard) wearing gold instead of red is a dead giveaway that things are a little different.
* AmazingTechnicolorPopulation: The Tajarans come in orange and green varieties, which is part of their caste system. They are, apparently though, able to change their skin color given certain circumstances.
* BigBadassBattleSequence: A recent installment http://startrek.swiftbow.com/95.html involved the Intrepid and its fighter craft battling the Tajaran fleet in an all-out assault.
* Blackmail: Dale threatens to go public with his version of events during the Battle of Wogglenather, prompting the Admiralty to give him what he wants instead.
* Blackmail: Dale threatens to go public with his version of events during the Battle of Wogglenather, prompting the Admiralty to give him what he wants instead.
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* RagtagBunchOfMisfits: Most of the crew were previously thrown out of Starfleet or placed into terrible positions because they didn't fit the "mold" of the ideal 24th century Federation citizen.
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* FasterThanLightTravel: It's Star Trek, so warp drive is the most common. The pre-warp Tajarans, though, are stuck in a 20 year relativistic trip between their planet and their closest neighbor, who they decided to conquer.
* HumanoidAliens: The Tajarans are roughly person-shaped, but they are evolved from slugs. Their ships are kept muddy and moist (and are apparently partly organic). They also consider salt to be a deadly chemical weapon, and are surprised that the rest of the galaxy doesn't share this opinion.
* HyperspeedAmbush: The Intrepid's star fighters use a form of the "Picard Maneuver" that they call "warp skip" in order to evade enemy fire while attacking.
* NamedAfterTheirPlanet: The Tajarans are from Tajara, the Wogglenathers are from Wogglenather. (And the Earthlings are from Earth, though they are more generally called humans.)
* PlanetLooters: The Tajarans are after the large dilithium deposits on Wogglenather.
* RagtagBunchOfMisfits: Most of the crew were previously thrown out of Starfleet or placed into terrible positions because they didn't fit the "mold" of the ideal 24th century Federationcitizen.citizen.
* ScaryDogmaticAliens: The Tajarans (at least those the reader has observed) see themselves as a master race. They wish to conquer Wogglenather for its resources, hate Earthlings for stopping them before, and often don't even regard other species as sapient at all. (They refer to Gorn as beasts.)
* SpaceMarine: Both depicted Starfleet ships carry a complement of space marines, who prove to be as tough as should be expected.
* HumanoidAliens: The Tajarans are roughly person-shaped, but they are evolved from slugs. Their ships are kept muddy and moist (and are apparently partly organic). They also consider salt to be a deadly chemical weapon, and are surprised that the rest of the galaxy doesn't share this opinion.
* HyperspeedAmbush: The Intrepid's star fighters use a form of the "Picard Maneuver" that they call "warp skip" in order to evade enemy fire while attacking.
* NamedAfterTheirPlanet: The Tajarans are from Tajara, the Wogglenathers are from Wogglenather. (And the Earthlings are from Earth, though they are more generally called humans.)
* PlanetLooters: The Tajarans are after the large dilithium deposits on Wogglenather.
* RagtagBunchOfMisfits: Most of the crew were previously thrown out of Starfleet or placed into terrible positions because they didn't fit the "mold" of the ideal 24th century Federation
* ScaryDogmaticAliens: The Tajarans (at least those the reader has observed) see themselves as a master race. They wish to conquer Wogglenather for its resources, hate Earthlings for stopping them before, and often don't even regard other species as sapient at all. (They refer to Gorn as beasts.)
* SpaceMarine: Both depicted Starfleet ships carry a complement of space marines, who prove to be as tough as should be expected.
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And, oh yeah, it's done with [[BuiltWithLego LEGO]]. The creators previously finished another Lego webcomic in 2019, 'HarryPotterComics.'
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And, oh yeah, it's done with [[BuiltWithLego LEGO]]. The creators previously finished another Lego webcomic in 2019, 'HarryPotterComics.'
Webcomic/HarryPotterComics.
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* CoolStarship: The Intrepid is somewhat blocky (it is made of Lego), but most of the rooms depicted in the comic are actually IN the ship. It's about 3 feet long and a foot and a half wide.
* EverythingsBetterWithDinosaurs: The Gorn appear frequently in the comic, being depicted by Lego velociraptor figures.
* RagtagBunchOfMisfits: Most of the crew were previously thrown out of Starfleet or placed into terrible positions because they didn't fit the "mold" of the ideal 24th century Federation citizen.
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''[[http://startrek.swiftbow.com/ Star Trek: Federation Star Defense]]'', written and photographed by Travers "Swiftbow" and Rioux "Brogen" Jordan, is a webcomic following the exploits of Federation Star Defense, a division of Starfleet. Set in an alternate Star Trek universe (related to the Kelvin timeline), it takes place in the Next Generation era, starting at the equivalent of season 3 of TNG.
Commodore Jeffrey Bannister, whose heart is in the right place, even if his brain doesn't always keep up, encourages the formation of the new division to deal with new threats in the Federation. A resistant Admiralty goes along to get him (and other Starfleet misfits) out of their way.
But threats do come, in the form of the dangerous, yet pre-warp species, the Tajarans and their unstoppable Slow Dimension. Will these Federation cast-offs be able to save their ship and the peaceful planet Wogglenather? And what other threats may come?
And, oh yeah, it's done with [[BuiltWithLego LEGO]]. The creators previously finished another Lego webcomic in 2019, 'HarryPotterComics.'
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'Battlestar:' The Intrepid is much tougher than most Starfleet ships, as it was designed to take and deal out punishment. Andre Peters, who designed it, incorporated many technologies Starfleet felt were either outdated, dead-ends, or too warlike. Eventually, the ship becomes a carrier as well.
[[caption-width-right:350:Make it Got]]
''[[http://startrek.swiftbow.com/ Star Trek: Federation Star Defense]]'', written and photographed by Travers "Swiftbow" and Rioux "Brogen" Jordan, is a webcomic following the exploits of Federation Star Defense, a division of Starfleet. Set in an alternate Star Trek universe (related to the Kelvin timeline), it takes place in the Next Generation era, starting at the equivalent of season 3 of TNG.
Commodore Jeffrey Bannister, whose heart is in the right place, even if his brain doesn't always keep up, encourages the formation of the new division to deal with new threats in the Federation. A resistant Admiralty goes along to get him (and other Starfleet misfits) out of their way.
But threats do come, in the form of the dangerous, yet pre-warp species, the Tajarans and their unstoppable Slow Dimension. Will these Federation cast-offs be able to save their ship and the peaceful planet Wogglenather? And what other threats may come?
And, oh yeah, it's done with [[BuiltWithLego LEGO]]. The creators previously finished another Lego webcomic in 2019, 'HarryPotterComics.'
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!!Tropes in Star Trek: Federation Star Defense:
'Battlestar:' The Intrepid is much tougher than most Starfleet ships, as it was designed to take and deal out punishment. Andre Peters, who designed it, incorporated many technologies Starfleet felt were either outdated, dead-ends, or too warlike. Eventually, the ship becomes a carrier as well.