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*OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Lopin being startled by Yannit suddenly showing up in a recent strip prompts Kass to tell Lopin that he really *should* get used to Yannit's presence, that she means no harm, and and that, just because another species can seem scary at first sight doesn't mean they're ''bad'', citing the Baxxid as an example because, while the Baxxid are very much alien in nature compared to humans, they're still respected citizens of Val Salia in their own right and nobody's afraid of them... Which prompts Yannit to admit that she came to the heights of the fortress because she was scared of the Baxxids "moving around so fast" in the streets, which lets Kass know that something is, indeed, ''very'' wrong.
--> '''Kass:''' "...Wait. Baxxid ? ''Fast ?'' I've ''never'' seen a Baxxid in a hurry. Za Hell's going on down zhere ?"
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* GoryDiscretionShot: The death of the thief who was accidentally killed by Kalgkur is shown only as a white silhouette. Considering that he was apparently ''[[HalfTheManHeUsedToBe torn in half]]'' by the Baxxid's claw, it's for the best.
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* MonochromaticImpactShot: The moment Kalgkur [[AccidentalMurder accidentally kills]] a thief is shown entirely in silhouettes. It's still quite graphic, showing the poor thief being torn to pieces by the impact of Kalgkur's claw.
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** After multiple pages of Kalgkur being his usual {{adorkable}} self and finally getting to talk to his secret crush (who looks like she might actually reciprocate), he accidentally kills someone in the most graphic way seen so far in the comic, traumatizing everyone around including himself.
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* AccidentalMurder: Kalkgur ''slightly'' misjudges his turning speed when trying to stop a thief. Unfortunately since he is a giant serpentine creature made almost entirely of muscle and blades, the result is a spectacular and gory mess.

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* AccidentalMurder: Kalkgur Kalgkur ''slightly'' misjudges his turning speed when trying to stop a thief. Unfortunately since he is a giant serpentine creature made almost entirely of muscle and blades, the result is a spectacular and gory mess.



** At one point, the baxxid Kalkgur visits [[https://www.valsalia.com/comic/out-of-placers/oops-165/ what appears to be a baxxid cemetery of sorts]], where ossified baxxid exoskeletons rest with gigantic mushrooms growing from their skulls. After three pages of TalkingToTheDead, reminiscing about the things he and his parent did together, [[https://www.valsalia.com/comic/out-of-placers/oops-167/ the exoskeleton of Kalkgur's parent suddenly speaks]] [[StarfishLanguage (laboriously, over the course of an entire night)]] to chide him for being so sentimental, revealing the cemetery to actually be a sort of retirement home, and the mushrooms to be a benign part of the baxxids' BizarreAlienBiology.

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** At one point, the baxxid Kalkgur Kalgkur visits [[https://www.valsalia.com/comic/out-of-placers/oops-165/ what appears to be a baxxid cemetery of sorts]], where ossified baxxid exoskeletons rest with gigantic mushrooms growing from their skulls. After three pages of TalkingToTheDead, reminiscing about the things he and his parent did together, [[https://www.valsalia.com/comic/out-of-placers/oops-167/ the exoskeleton of Kalkgur's Kalgkur's parent suddenly speaks]] [[StarfishLanguage (laboriously, over the course of an entire night)]] to chide him for being so sentimental, revealing the cemetery to actually be a sort of retirement home, and the mushrooms to be a benign part of the baxxids' BizarreAlienBiology.



** Another Baxxid, Kalkgur, has a crush on a human coppersmith running a stall in the lower markets. HilarityEnsues when he causes a bit of an incident and is assigned guard duty in that very area as a punishment.

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** Another Baxxid, Kalkgur, Kalgkur, has a crush on a human coppersmith running a stall in the lower markets. HilarityEnsues when he causes a bit of an incident and is assigned guard duty in that very area as a punishment.
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* AccidentalMurder: Kalkgur ''slightly'' misjudges his turning speed when trying to stop a thief. Unfortunately since he is a giant serpentine creature made almost entirely of muscle and blades, the result is a spectacular and gory mess.
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* YouDidEverythingYouCould: Surgeon Merrs uses the 'I did everything I could' variant after [[spoiler:operating on Elim.]] Ends up being a variation: rather than having failed to save his patient, Merrs regretfully informs the patient's friends that the recovery process will take months.

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* YouDidEverythingYouCould: Surgeon Merrs uses the 'I did everything I could' variant after [[spoiler:operating on Elim.]] Ends up being a variation: rather than having failed to save his patient, Merrs regretfully informs the patient's friends that the recovery process will take months. This regretful tone was justified, since most officers and management just want to know [[https://www.valsalia.com/comic/out-of-placers/oops-213/ how quickly a recruit can get back into the field]], if ever, and Merrs didn't know Kass was ''personally'' close to Elim as a friend.

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* CurbStompBattle: Elim, despite having had [[ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice a jagged piece of metal shoved all the way through him]] and struggling to stay conscious, completely wipes out Brakka's gang in a matter of ([[http://www.valsalia.com/comic/out-of-placers/oops-95/ very, very violent]]) seconds. The one survivor (aside from Brakka himself) is a {{Cloudcuckoolander}} who wandered off to do his own thing instead of fighting.
* CuteButCacophonic: Not necessarily "cute" by conventional standards, but baxxid are nevertheless often [[GentleGiant very peaceful and shy]]. They also have very powerful lungs. One baxxid in the streets is frightened by an insect crawling over it, and [[http://www.valsalia.com/comic/out-of-placers/oops-41/ screams loudly enough]] to be heard across the entirety of Val Salia. The author's note on the page sheds some light on it:

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* CurbStompBattle: Elim, [[spoiler:Elim]], despite having had [[ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice a jagged piece of metal shoved all the way through him]] and struggling to stay conscious, completely wipes out Brakka's [[spoiler:Brakka's]] gang in a matter of ([[http://www.valsalia.com/comic/out-of-placers/oops-95/ very, very violent]]) seconds. The one survivor (aside from Brakka [[spoiler:Brakka]] himself) is a {{Cloudcuckoolander}} who wandered off to do his own thing instead of fighting.
* CuteButCacophonic: Not necessarily "cute" by conventional standards, but baxxid Baxxid are nevertheless often [[GentleGiant very peaceful and shy]]. They also have very powerful lungs. One baxxid Baxxid in the streets is frightened by an insect crawling over it, and [[http://www.valsalia.com/comic/out-of-placers/oops-41/ screams loudly enough]] to be heard across the entirety of Val Salia. The author's note on the page sheds some light on it:



** [[https://www.valsalia.com/comic/out-of-placers/oops-113/ Chakki]] deserves a mention as well.

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** [[https://www.valsalia.com/comic/out-of-placers/oops-113/ Patriarch Chakki]] deserves a mention as well.



* FantasticLivestock: In the absence of any non-fantastic livestock, humans on this world have domesticated a number of more alien creatures, such as tiplods: giant isopod-like animals that take the place of oxen as draft animals and sources of meat. A [[https://www.valsalia.com/comic/out-of-placers/oops-85/ later page]] features a hauler-crab, a massive, lumbering creature that serves as both a beast of burden and an emergency water source in coastal regions.

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* FantasticLivestock: In the absence of any non-fantastic livestock, humans on this world have domesticated a number of more alien creatures, such as tiplods: [[https://www.valsalia.com/comic/prologue/07/ tiplods]]: giant isopod-like animals that take the place of oxen as draft animals and sources of meat. A [[https://www.valsalia.com/comic/out-of-placers/oops-85/ later page]] features a hauler-crab, a massive, lumbering creature that serves as both a beast of burden and an emergency water source in coastal regions.



** The Baxxid are basically giant, serpentine creatures made of armor and knives; they also avoid conflict at all costs and are incredibly adept [[ProudScholarRace interpreters and mathematicians]].

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** The Baxxid [[https://www.valsalia.com/comic/out-of-placers/the-val-salian-regional-field-guide-entry-8/ Baxxid]] are basically giant, serpentine creatures made of armor and knives; they also avoid conflict at all costs and are incredibly adept [[ProudScholarRace interpreters and mathematicians]].



** Poak is a yinglet version. He comes up to a human's chest as opposed to their crotch, and while he occasionally punishes unruly yinglets by sitting on them, he's a friendly, jovial member of the enclave.

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** Poak [[https://www.valsalia.com/comic/out-of-placers/oops-014/ Patriarch Poak]] is a yinglet version. He comes up to a human's chest as opposed to their crotch, and [[https://www.valsalia.com/comic/out-of-placers/oops-120/ while he occasionally punishes unruly yinglets by sitting on them, he's a friendly, jovial member of the enclave.enclave]].



* InadequateInheritor: Vizlet is in the middle of such a situation: while Lippie has a lot of potential, [[spoiler: being favored by Vizlet to be the next Matriarch]], she's also a complete NervousWreck most of the time, and the other females, while relatively more mentally stable, don't seem to be as capable as Lippie.

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* InadequateInheritor: Vizlet is in the middle of such a situation: while Lippie has a lot of potential, [[spoiler: being [[spoiler:being favored by Vizlet to be the next Matriarch]], she's also a complete NervousWreck most of the time, and the other females, while relatively more mentally stable, don't seem to be as capable as Lippie.



-->'''Figgins''': ...But you're not ready to give up on ze [[spoiler: 'Lippie as Matriarch']] possibility.

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-->'''Figgins''': ...But you're not ready to give up on ze [[spoiler: 'Lippie [[spoiler:'Lippie as Matriarch']] possibility.



** Kuldra, a young, female Baxxid, has a crush on the human Trademaster Viracroix, much to Varakses' annoyance.

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** Kuldra, a young, female Baxxid, has a crush on the human Trademaster Viracroix, much to her elder Varakses' annoyance.



* IsItSomethingYouEat: on the "Of Ends and Beginnings" side-story, that's the reaction of the average Antenillian yinglets when Cairo begins talking about copper and infrastructure.

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* IsItSomethingYouEat: on In the "Of Ends and Beginnings" side-story, that's the reaction of the average Antenillian yinglets when Cairo begins talking about copper and infrastructure.



* NobleBigot: Before his transformation, Kassen was sympathetic but condescending to the "younger races".

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* NobleBigot: Before his transformation, Kassen was sympathetic but condescending to towards the "younger races".



** Matriarch Vizlet [[https://www.valsalia.com/comic/out-of-placers/oops-26/ was apprenticed]] under multiple human tradesmen before becoming matriarch, hence her "strange ideas," her background also allows her to see through Kass's cover story and help her maintain it around the less educated Yinglets.

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** Matriarch Vizlet [[https://www.valsalia.com/comic/out-of-placers/oops-26/ was apprenticed]] under multiple human tradesmen before becoming matriarch, hence her "strange ideas," her ideas". Her background also allows her to see through Kass's cover story and help her maintain it around the less educated Yinglets.


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* StealthHiBye: Beizel, being Patriarch of Scouting & Intel (read: Yinglet [[TheSpymaster Spymaster]]), ''excels'' at these. Quite a few interactions with him begin with him startling the party he's interacting with.
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** Another Baxxid, Kalkgur, has a crush on a human coppersmith running a stall in the lower markets. HilarityEnsues when he causes a bit of an incident and is assigned guard duty in that very area as a punishment.

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** Isher is horrified to realize that Ran recognizes her species (or her origin, it's not entirely clear from the context), but they both agree that some secrets are best kept secret.

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** Isher is horrified to realize that Ran [[https://www.valsalia.com/comic/out-of-placers/oop003/ recognizes her species species]] (or her origin, it's not entirely clear from the context), but they both agree that some secrets are best kept secret.
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* EatsBabies: Trademaster Viracroix's great-grandfather, before being quietly assassinated and replaced with another, saner relative.
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* FantasticSlurs: 'Scav' for yinglets, short for scavenger. (To be fair, a lot of them ''are'' scavengers.)

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* FantasticSlurs: 'Scav' for yinglets, short for scavenger. (To be fair, While Yinglets do a lot of them ''are'' scavengers.)scavenging and at time of writing no one has responded to it negatively, it definitely reads as a slur.
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** Yinglets in general favor [[BladeOnAStick spears]] and [[BladeEnthusiast knives]], as their arms are built for quick thrusts and suffer badly when trying to swing anything heavy.

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** Yinglets in general favor [[BladeOnAStick spears]] spears and [[BladeEnthusiast knives]], as their arms are built for quick thrusts and suffer badly when trying to swing anything heavy.
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* CallASmeerpARabbit: The dog of this world looks like something out of the Mesozoic
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* CeilingCling: Yannit can easiely [[WallCrawl climb walls]] and [[https://www.valsalia.com/comic/prologue/24/ can sleep hanging off a ceiling.]]

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* CeilingCling: Yannit can easiely easily [[WallCrawl climb walls]] and [[https://www.valsalia.com/comic/prologue/24/ can sleep hanging off a ceiling.]]
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** Apparently, the vision of the hind pairs of [[ExtraEyes Baxxid]] eyes [[https://www.valsalia.com/comic/out-of-placers/the-val-salian-regional-field-guide-entry-8/ isn't obfuscated by cloth.]] Some Baxxid will wear headdresses when interacting with humans to cut down on any confusion over which eyes the human should be looking at.

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** Apparently, the vision of the hind pairs of [[ExtraEyes Baxxid]] eyes [[https://www.valsalia.com/comic/out-of-placers/the-val-salian-regional-field-guide-entry-8/ isn't obfuscated obstructed by cloth.]] Some Baxxid will wear headdresses when interacting with humans to cut down on any confusion over which eyes the human should be looking at.
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* AppropriatedAppellation: An unwitting version. The indrel exile Kassen and Elim bring to Val Salia has no verbal name (due to the indrel language being based on pheremones and body language), [[http://www.valsalia.com/comic/prologue/06/ but when prompted]] quickly declares she wants to adopt the "name" given to her by a human she met long ago - [[FailOSuckyname Hyanoisyskank]]. Fortunately, she's later convinced to shorten it to the much more innocuous "Yannit".

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* AppropriatedAppellation: An unwitting version. The indrel exile Kassen and Elim bring to Val Salia has no verbal name (due to the indrel language being based on pheremones and body language), [[http://www.valsalia.com/comic/prologue/06/ but when prompted]] quickly declares she wants to adopt the "name" given to her by a human she met long ago - [[FailOSuckyname [[UnfortunateNames Hyanoisyskank]]. Fortunately, she's later convinced to shorten it to the much more innocuous "Yannit".

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* CeilingCling: Yannit can easiely climb walls and [[https://www.valsalia.com/comic/prologue/24/ can sleep hanging off a ceiling.]]

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* CeilingCling: Yannit can easiely [[WallCrawl climb walls walls]] and [[https://www.valsalia.com/comic/prologue/24/ can sleep hanging off a ceiling.]]
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* CeilingCling: Yannit can easiely climb walls and [[https://www.valsalia.com/comic/prologue/24/ can sleep hanging off a ceiling.]]
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* ArtEvolution: In addition to the general artwork improvement over the course of several years, Isher in particular has had some character design updates. [[https://www.valsalia.com/comic/prologue/09/ Early pages]] depicted her with four-fingered hands and toe claws. [[https://www.valsalia.com/comic/out-of-placers/oops-123/ Later pages]] depict her with five fingers and giant talons on two of her toes.

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* ArtEvolution: In addition to the general artwork improvement over the course of several years, a several-year comic runtime, Isher in particular has had some character design updates. [[https://www.valsalia.com/comic/prologue/09/ Early pages]] depicted her with four-fingered hands and modestly-sized toe claws. [[https://www.valsalia.com/comic/out-of-placers/oops-123/ Later pages]] depict her with five fingers and giant talons on two of her toes.



* CassandraTruth: Vizlet doesn't buy Kass' story for a while, and while she's willing to go along with the Trademaster's machinations, she doesn't have much interest in easing his transition into enclave life. One [[ArmorPiercingResponse flippant answer]] to "When was the last time you slept", though, and Vizlet is forced to revise her position in a hurry.

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* CassandraTruth: Vizlet doesn't buy Kass' story for a while, at first, and while she's willing to go along with the Trademaster's machinations, she doesn't initially have much interest in easing his transition into enclave life. One [[ArmorPiercingResponse flippant answer]] to "When was the last time you slept", though, and Vizlet is forced to revise her position in a hurry.
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* StumblingInTheNewForm: When Kass first gets turned into a yinglet, he falls over several times due to being unused to his spindly, digitigrade legs. It doesn't help that he initially tries to keep a humanlike pose with a vertically oriented spine when yinglets are physiologically meant to keep their torsos parallel with the ground like a bird. He also has trouble writing with clawed, paw-padded hands, making his handwriting very sloppy until he adjusts.
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* ObliviousToHatred: The two yinglet human-chasers that Brakka first meets when trying to find Lopin - Brakka makes it very clear that he doesn't like them, even telling them to their faces how they're "everything wrong with the species", but they're still convinced he's their friend.
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* IsItSomethingYouEat: on the "Of Ends and Beginnings" side-story, that's the reaction of the average Antenillian yinglets when Cairo begins talking about copper and infrastructure.
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* CumbersomeClaws:
** Kassen is [[ForcedTransformation turned into]] a yinglet, a type of ratlike creature with clawed fingers. At one point he writes about wanting to ball his hand into a fist to punch someone, but that would just jab the claws into the puffy paw pads he has now. He also initially has trouble holding a quill, making his handwriting sloppier-looking than it used to be until he adjusts.
** The Baxxid are serpentine insectoids with spiky limbs that, according to Ran Ste-Su G'Mindel's Val Salian Regional Field Guide, "are suited for ripping apart large, armored plains-beasts in an instant." But these are not gripping limbs, so despite having memories and [[CunningLinguist language-learning skills]] that greatly surpass those of humans, they cannot make tools/structures or write things down like other civilized races. They have to rely on human servants to do those things for them.

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* ArtEvolution: In addition to the general artwork improvement over the course of several years, Isher in particular has had some character design updates. [[https://www.valsalia.com/comic/prologue/09/ Early pages]] depicted her with four-fingered hands and toe claws. [[https://www.valsalia.com/comic/out-of-placers/oops-123/ Later pages]] depict her with five fingers and giant talons on two of her toes.



** Indrel, due to their pheromone-based communication, have automatic emotional reactions to certain scents. In an attempt to help Yannit acclimate to living among humans, Ran explores her reaction of a variety of scents and substances. The results range from 'nothing' to 'PANIC'.

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** Indrel, due to their pheromone-based communication, have automatic emotional reactions to certain scents. In an attempt to help Yannit acclimate to living among humans, Ran explores her reaction of a variety of scents and substances. [[https://www.valsalia.com/comic/out-of-placers/oops-131/ The results range from 'nothing' to 'PANIC'.'hooray' to 'PANIC']].



* FantasticLivestock: In the absence of any non-fantastic livestock, humans on this world have domesticated a number of more alien creatures, such as Tiplods: giant isopod-like animals that take the place of oxen as draft animals and sources of meat.

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* FantasticLivestock: In the absence of any non-fantastic livestock, humans on this world have domesticated a number of more alien creatures, such as Tiplods: tiplods: giant isopod-like animals that take the place of oxen as draft animals and sources of meat.meat. A [[https://www.valsalia.com/comic/out-of-placers/oops-85/ later page]] features a hauler-crab, a massive, lumbering creature that serves as both a beast of burden and an emergency water source in coastal regions.



** Poak is this to the yinglets...he comes up to a human's chest as opposed to their crotch. He punishes one yinglet by sitting on him.

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** Poak is this to the yinglets...he a yinglet version. He comes up to a human's chest as opposed to their crotch. He crotch, and while he occasionally punishes one yinglet unruly yinglets by sitting on him.them, he's a friendly, jovial member of the enclave.



-->'''Craylor''': So House Ivenmoth's got some kinda ''shit'' goin' on...

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-->'''Craylor''': So House Ivenmoth's got some kinda ''shit'' goin' on...on



* MadeOfIron: Elim. Surviving a serious gut wound in the middle of a war in a medieval setting is already enough to qualify, but ''then'' [[spoiler: he also gets a foot-long metal shiv rammed through his body and not only manages to get back up, but also to ''utterly destroy'' the yinglet gang that was threatening Kass.]]

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* MadeOfIron: Elim. Surviving a serious gut wound in the middle of a war in a medieval setting is already enough to qualify, but ''then'' [[spoiler: he [[spoiler:he also gets a foot-long metal shiv rammed through his body and not only manages to get back up, but also to ''utterly destroy'' the yinglet gang that was threatening Kass.]]


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* SneezeCut: Played with in [[https://www.valsalia.com/comic/out-of-placers/oops-98/ one page]] where [[spoiler:Elim]] refuses to seek medical treatment from Galen, a former medic who [[TheStoner spends most days getting high]] after his country's destruction. Cut to Galen, who sneezes, but it turns out it was from a fly getting stuck up his nose.
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* FantasticLivestock: In the absence of any non-fantastic livestock, humans on this world have domesticated a number of more alien creatures, such as Tiplods...giant isopod-like animals that take the place of oxen as draft animals and sources of meat.

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* FantasticLivestock: In the absence of any non-fantastic livestock, humans on this world have domesticated a number of more alien creatures, such as Tiplods...Tiplods: giant isopod-like animals that take the place of oxen as draft animals and sources of meat.



* LiteralMetaphor: An unintentional example on Elim's part when he suggests "grilling" Lopin for information. [[ComicallyMissingThePoint Lopin does not take this well]]. It's a reasonable mistake for a downtrodden minority race in a late Medieval milieu mistake to make.

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* LiteralMetaphor: An unintentional example on Elim's part when he suggests "grilling" Lopin for information. [[ComicallyMissingThePoint Lopin does not take this well]]. It's a reasonable mistake for a downtrodden minority race in a late Medieval milieu mistake to make.



* SpitTake: Well, what would YOU do if you just found out yinglets were having gay sex in your supply closet? #209

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* SpitTake: Well, what would YOU do if you just found out [[https://www.valsalia.com/comic/out-of-placers/oops-209/ yinglets were having gay sex in your supply closet? #209closet]]?
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* ArtShift: [[https://www.valsalia.com/comic/prologue/25/ Pages from]] [[https://www.valsalia.com/comic/out-of-placers/oops-68/ Yannit's perspective]] are drawn depicting both what she sees ([[BizarreAlienSenses essentially thermal imaging]]) and her thoughts (which are drawn in a very simple, almost cave painting-esque style).

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