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* DeliberatelyMonochrome: Pages and characters are either tinted in shades of a single color--often purples or yellows, with various [[SplashOfColor splashes of color]] to indicate how Jackie sees characters as being free of Middlevale or not from there. [[spoiler:The only character fully in black and white is Norma, when she's either interacting with Jackie or taking over her body.]]
* DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything: A closed door has two voices behind it talking about "trying to get it up" for the past hour, and using spit so it's not limp, before stroking upwards. Then it's revealed to be Saffron and Jackie, with Jackie trying to gel her hair.
* DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything: A closed door has two voices behind it talking about "trying to get it up" for the past hour, and using spit so it's not limp, before stroking upwards. Then it's revealed to be Saffron and Jackie, with Jackie trying to gel her hair.
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* DeliberatelyMonochrome: Pages and characters are either tinted in shades of a single color--often purples or yellows, color with various [[SplashOfColor splashes of color]] yellow]] to indicate how Jackie sees characters as being free of Middlevale or not from there.there. The world gets more red-toned as it slides into the past: blues are the modern era, royal purple are Jackie's college years, plum her high school years, middle school is magenta, and early elementary is raspberry red. [[spoiler:The only character fully in black and white is Norma, when she's either interacting with Jackie or taking over her body.]]
* DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything: A closed door has two voices behind it talking about "trying to get it up" for the past hour, and using spit so it's not limp, before stroking upwards. Then it's revealed to be Saffron and Jackie, with Jackie trying to gel herhair.hair into a mohawk.
* DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything: A closed door has two voices behind it talking about "trying to get it up" for the past hour, and using spit so it's not limp, before stroking upwards. Then it's revealed to be Saffron and Jackie, with Jackie trying to gel her
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The webcomic only went to eleven chapters before becoming an OrphanedSeries in 2017, and Salarian stated there had been too much time since the delay for them to attempt a reboot or continue. They released a {{Novelization}} downloadable for free on their site in 2020 that tells the whole story. The novel tweaks some details about characters and expands on others, including backstory.
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The webcomic only went to eleven chapters before becoming an OrphanedSeries in 2017, and OrphanedSeries; the first eight chapters were released as a book. Salarian stated there had been too much time since the delay for them to attempt a reboot or continue. They released a {{Novelization}} downloadable for free on their site in 2020 that tells the whole story. The novel tweaks some details about characters and expands on others, including backstory.
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* PunBasedTitle: "Meaty Yogurt" is a play on the word "mediocre." This is clarified in the novelization as Jackie mishearing Slogar calling their music as a punk band mediocre.
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* PunBasedTitle: "Meaty Yogurt" is a play on the word "mediocre." This is clarified in the novelization as Jackie mishearing Slogar calling their music as a punk band mediocre.mediocre and in the print book as something Salarian did as she thought "mediocre" would be too easy for critics.
