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* HomoeroticDream: Chapter 2 starts with Mitch having one. If his reaction is anything to go by, he's more annoyed that he woke up than at the dream itself.
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''Long Exposure'' is a comic by Mars, currently available in [[https://tapastic.com/episode/471669 Tapastic]] and [[https://longexposurecomic.tumblr.com/ Tumblr]].
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''Long Exposure'' is a comic ScienceFiction {{Romance}} webcomic by Mars, currently available in [[https://tapastic.com/episode/471669 Tapastic]] and [[https://longexposurecomic.tumblr.com/ Tumblr]].
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[[TheWikiRule Of course]], it has [[https://longexposurewebcomic.fandom.com/wiki/Long_Exposure_Wiki its very own wiki]].
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* ADateWithRosiePalms: Chapter 2 starts with Mitch touching himself after having a wet dream with Jonas.
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* [[ViolentlyProtectiveGirlfriend Violently Protective Boyfriend]]: Mitch will definitely rough anyone up if they dare mess with Jonas. [[spoiler:And when he learns that Dean sexually abused his foster children, he became murderously enraged.]]
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* [[ViolentlyProtectiveGirlfriend Violently Protective Boyfriend]]: Mitch ViolentlyProtectiveGirlfriend: Gender-inverted with Mitch, who will definitely rough anyone up if they dare mess with Jonas. [[spoiler:And when he learns that Dean sexually abused his foster children, he became murderously enraged.]]
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* ADateWithRosiePalms: Chapter 2 starts with Mitch touching himself after having a wet dream with Jonas.
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* ADateWithRosiePalms: Chapter 2 AffectionateNickname:
** Mitch startswith Mitch touching himself after having a wet dream with Jonas.calling Jonas "Joey" in an affectionate matter as their relationship evolves.
** Likewise, Javier calls Jonas "little bro".
** Mitch starts
** Likewise, Javier calls Jonas "little bro".
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* DeliberatelyMonochrome: The whole comic is in gray monochrome...
** SplashOfColor: Except when it's not, and the author wants to call attention to a really important scene. Or Jonas's powers.
** SplashOfColor: Except when it's not, and the author wants to call attention to a really important scene. Or Jonas's powers.
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* ADateWithRosiePalms: Chapter 2 starts with Mitch touching himself after having a wet dream with Jonas.
* DeliberatelyMonochrome: The whole comic is in graymonochrome...
** SplashOfColor: Exceptmonochrome... [[SplashOfColor except when it's not, and the author wants to call attention to a really important scene. scene]]. Or Jonas's powers.[[ColourCodedEmotions powers]].
* DeliberatelyMonochrome: The whole comic is in gray
** SplashOfColor: Except
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* InSeriesNickname: Joey, Jojo, Wagnerd, and Spots - all for Jonas.
** AffectionateNickname: When Mitch uses "Joey".
*** Javier calls Jonas "little bro".
** InsultOfEndearment: Mitch calling Jonas "Spots" becomes this.
* {{Jerkass}}: Neil, who picks on Jonas when he talks with his girlfriend. Never mind that said girlfriend was the one who went talk with Jonas in the first place.
** AffectionateNickname: When Mitch uses "Joey".
*** Javier calls Jonas "little bro".
** InsultOfEndearment: Mitch calling Jonas "Spots" becomes this.
* {{Jerkass}}: Neil, who picks on Jonas when he talks with his girlfriend. Never mind that said girlfriend was the one who went talk with Jonas in the first place.
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* InSeriesNickname: Joey, Jojo, Wagnerd, Jonas gets called "Joey", "Jojo", "Wagnerd", and Spots - all "Spots" (the last one referring to Jonas' freckles) by Mitch. It also serves as InsultOfEndearment as Mitch has feelings for Jonas.him, and later graduates to AffectionateNickname as they grow closer to each other.
* InsultOfEndearment: Mitch calling Jonas "Spots" becomes this.
** AffectionateNickname: When Mitch uses "Joey".
*** Javier calls Jonas "little bro".
** InsultOfEndearment: Mitch calling Jonas "Spots" becomes this.
* {{Jerkass}}: Neil, who In contrast to Mitch, who's a LovingBully to Jonas, Neil has no redeeming qualities whatsoever. He picks on Jonas when he talks with his girlfriend. Never girlfriend -- never mind that said girlfriend was the one who went talk with Jonas in the first place.
* InsultOfEndearment: Mitch calling Jonas "Spots" becomes this.
*** Javier calls Jonas "little bro".
** InsultOfEndearment: Mitch calling Jonas "Spots" becomes this.
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* KnifeNut: Mitch, though it's unclear how much of it he is just playing up to look scary.
-->'''Neil:''' What're you gonna do? Stab me?
-->'''Mitch:''' That's what I do, right?
-->'''Neil:''' What're you gonna do? Stab me?
-->'''Mitch:''' That's what I do, right?
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* PsychoKnifeNut: Mitch wields a knife, and what elevated his dangerous reputation as an aggressive bully was the time when he stabbed his [[AbusiveParents abusive stepfather]] with a knife to protect his mother. Neil also goads him based on this, though it's unclear if Mitch acting like a knife-wielding psycho is just a facade to make himself look scary.
-->'''Neil:''' What're you gonna do? Stab me?\\
'''Mitch:''' That's what I do, right?
-->'''Neil:''' What're you gonna do? Stab me?\\
'''Mitch:''' That's what I do, right?
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* AloofBigBrother: [[spoiler:Freddie, Mitch's deceased older brother, who was a bit of a bully towards Mitch but also loved and cared for him. He also had an inkling that Mitch as gay.]]
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* AloofBigBrother: [[spoiler:Freddie, Mitch's deceased older brother, who was a bit of a bully towards Mitch but also loved and cared for him. He also had an inkling that Mitch as was gay.]]
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** InsultOfEndearment: "Spots" is becoming this.
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** InsultOfEndearment: Mitch calling Jonas "Spots" is becoming becomes this.
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''Long Exposure'' is a comic by Mars, currently avaiable in [[https://tapastic.com/episode/471669 Tapastic]] and [[https://longexposurecomic.tumblr.com/ Tumblr]].
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''Long Exposure'' is a comic by Mars, currently avaiable available in [[https://tapastic.com/episode/471669 Tapastic]] and [[https://longexposurecomic.tumblr.com/ Tumblr]].
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* AmbiguouslyBrown: Jonas and Sidney, who probably don't know their race/ethnicity due to being abandoned by their birth parents at a young age. WordOfGod says that they're most likely Saudi Arabian, since they referenced actors of that ethnicity when designing Jonas.
* AsideGlance: Javier gives a particularly funny one during Chapter 4 when [[spoiler: their wasn't enough room in the car while escaping and Mitch and Cliff didn't want to have Jonas sit in Cliff's lap.]]
* AssholeVictim: Mitch uses his telekinesis to prank Neil and his lackeys early in Chapter 2, and given that it was done in response to Neil attacking Jonas for next to nothing, it's hard to feel any sympathy for him.
* AsideGlance: Javier gives a particularly funny one during Chapter 4 when [[spoiler: their wasn't enough room in the car while escaping and Mitch and Cliff didn't want to have Jonas sit in Cliff's lap.]]
* AssholeVictim: Mitch uses his telekinesis to prank Neil and his lackeys early in Chapter 2, and given that it was done in response to Neil attacking Jonas for next to nothing, it's hard to feel any sympathy for him.
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* AmbiguouslyBrown: Jonas and Sidney, who probably don't know their race/ethnicity due to being abandoned by their birth parents at a young age. WordOfGod says that they're most likely Saudi Arabian, Arabian since they referenced actors of that ethnicity when designing Jonas.
* AsideGlance: Javier gives a particularly funny one during Chapter 4 when [[spoiler: their wasn't enough room in the car while escaping and Mitch and Cliff didn't want to have Jonas sit in Cliff's lap.]]
* AssholeVictim: Mitch uses his telekinesis to prank Neil and his lackeys early in Chapter 2, and given that it was done in response to Neil attacking Jonas for next to nothing, it's hard to feel any sympathy for him.Jonas.
* AsideGlance: Javier gives a particularly funny one during Chapter 4 when [[spoiler: their wasn't enough room in the car while escaping and Mitch and Cliff didn't want to have Jonas sit in Cliff's lap.]]
* AssholeVictim: Mitch uses his telekinesis to prank Neil and his lackeys early in Chapter 2, and given that it was done in response to Neil attacking Jonas for next to nothing, it's hard to feel any sympathy for him.
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* BerserkButton: Mitch gets irritated very quickly when someone talks shit about the ones he loves (his mother and Jonas).
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** Sometimes his powers will be a combination of a bunch of colors, signifying how he's experiencing a ton of emotions at once and doesn't know how to feel about the situation. Notably, the biggest mix of colors happen when Jonas first realizes he even has powers.
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** Sometimes his powers will be a combination of a bunch of colors, signifying how he's experiencing a ton of emotions at once and doesn't know how to feel about the situation. Notably, the biggest mix of colors happen happens when Jonas first realizes he even has powers.
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** SplashOfColor: Except when its not, and the author wants to call attention to a really important scene. Or Jonas's powers.
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** SplashOfColor: Except when its it's not, and the author wants to call attention to a really important scene. Or Jonas's powers.
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* ForegoneConclusion: The fact that Mitch and Jonas will eventually be together is literally written in the description of the comic. Some of the extra material shows them still together by their early 30's.
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* ForegoneConclusion: The fact that Mitch and Jonas will eventually be together is literally written in the description of the comic. Some of the extra material shows them still together by their early 30's.30s.
* HomoeroticDream: Chapter 2 starts with Mitch having one. If his reaction is anything to go by, he's more annoyed that he woke up than at the dream itself.
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--> '''Neil:''' What're you gonna do? Stab me?
--> '''Mitch:''' That's what I do, right?
* LuminescentBlush: Mitch and Jonas are prone to this in extra material, when flirting with each other.
--> '''Mitch:''' That's what I do, right?
* LuminescentBlush: Mitch and Jonas are prone to this in extra material, when flirting with each other.
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* LuminescentBlush: Mitch and Jonas are prone to this in extra
** In the comic proper, [[spoiler:she loudly cheers on Jonas at his high school graduation while a thoroughly embarrassed Mitch sits next to her]].
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* [[PrecisionFStrike Precision H-Strike]]: While the word is pretty tame in itself, [[spoiler:Jonas asking Mitch what the hell is his problem really underscores how pissed he is with Mitch for ruining his potential study date]].
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* PsychicNosebleed: After trying to telekinetically lift a rock, Mitch gets one of these. Possibly downplayed since he's prone to nosebleeds anyway.
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* ToxicWasteCanDoAnything: While investigating a fenced off area of a nearby forest, Mitch and Jonas slip into some weird puddle. Next day, they develop powers and discover people in hazmat suits trying to clean the mess up.
* TranquilFury: Jonas, after [[spoiler:being told he couldn't see Mitch anymore by Dean due to Mitch being gay. After Dean leaves, Jonas glows red. At first it seemed like it was due to him being upset that he wasn't going to be able to see Mitch anymore but it is also most likely because he knows Dean is being a hypocrite due to his child porn stash.]]
* [[ViolentlyProtectiveGirlfriend Violently Protective Boyfriend]]: Mitch will definitely rough anyone up if they dare mess with Jonas. [[spoiler:And when he learns that Dean sexually abused his foster children, he became murderously enraged.]]
* TranquilFury: Jonas, after [[spoiler:being told he couldn't see Mitch anymore by Dean due to Mitch being gay. After Dean leaves, Jonas glows red. At first it seemed like it was due to him being upset that he wasn't going to be able to see Mitch anymore but it is also most likely because he knows Dean is being a hypocrite due to his child porn stash.]]
* [[ViolentlyProtectiveGirlfriend Violently Protective Boyfriend]]: Mitch will definitely rough anyone up if they dare mess with Jonas. [[spoiler:And when he learns that Dean sexually abused his foster children, he became murderously enraged.]]
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* ToxicWasteCanDoAnything: While investigating a fenced off fenced-off area of a nearby forest, Mitch and Jonas slip into some weird puddle. Next day, they develop powers and discover people in hazmat suits trying to clean the mess up.
* TranquilFury: Jonas, after [[spoiler:being told he couldn't see Mitch anymore by Dean due to Mitch being gay. After Dean leaves, Jonas glows red. At first it seemed like it was due to him being upset that he wasn't going to be able to see Mitch anymore but it is also most likely because he knows Dean is being a hypocrite due to his child porn stash.]]
* [[ViolentlyProtectiveGirlfriend Violently Protective Boyfriend]]: Mitch will definitely rough anyone up if they dare mess with Jonas. [[spoiler:And when he learns that Dean sexually abused his foster children, he became murderously enraged.]]]]
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''Long Exposure'' is a comic by Mars, currently avaiable in [[https://tapastic.com/episode/471669 Tapastic]] and [[http://longexposurecomic.tumblr.com/ Tumblr]].
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''Long Exposure'' is a comic by Mars, currently avaiable in [[https://tapastic.com/episode/471669 Tapastic]] and [[http://longexposurecomic.[[https://longexposurecomic.tumblr.com/ Tumblr]].
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[[TheWikiRule Of course]], it has [[http://longexposurewebcomic.wikia.com/wiki/Long_Exposure_Wiki it's very own wiki]].
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[[TheWikiRule Of course]], it has [[http://longexposurewebcomic.wikia.[[https://longexposurewebcomic.fandom.com/wiki/Long_Exposure_Wiki it's its very own wiki]].
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* {{Adorkable}}: Both Mitch and Jonas have qualities of these, particularly in extra material, that shows their relationship as boyfriends.
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Did Dean ever molest Jonas?
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** Jonas's foster father is controlling, homophobic,[[spoiler: and hit Jonas across the face during an argument. And he's later revealed to be a pedophile who has taken pictures of the foster children naked.]]
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** Jonas's foster father is controlling, homophobic,[[spoiler: and homophobic, [[spoiler:and hit Jonas across the face during an argument. And he's later revealed to be a pedophile who has taken pictures of the foster children naked.]]
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* BerserkButton: Mitch gets irritated very quickly when someone talks shit about the ones he loves(his mother and Jonas).
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* BerserkButton: Mitch gets irritated very quickly when someone talks shit about the ones he loves(his loves (his mother and Jonas).
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* [[ViolentlyProtectiveGirlfriend Violently Protective Boyfriend]]: Mitch will definitely rough anyone up if they dare mess with Jonas. [[spoiler: And when he learns that Dean sexually abused Jonas and the other foster Children he became murderously enraged.]]
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* [[ViolentlyProtectiveGirlfriend Violently Protective Boyfriend]]: Mitch will definitely rough anyone up if they dare mess with Jonas. [[spoiler: And [[spoiler:And when he learns that Dean sexually abused Jonas and the other his foster Children children, he became murderously enraged.]]