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* LoadsAndLoadsOfCharactersLoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters: There are four categories of characters listed on the [[http://evus-comic.com/characters/ website]], and so far we're only able to access the section of Pandese characters. Just wait for it...
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* OpeningMonologue: Wester's narration in his journal.
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* OpeningMonologue: Wester's narration in his journal.journal introduces us to [[WorldInTheSky Nem]], the three nations, and the war.
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* CoolPlanes: The pteroplanespteroplanes. Wester's particular pteroplane is called [[https://www.facebook.com/photo.php?fbid=390789151029396&set=pb.373289999445978.-2207520000.1404263429.&type=3&theater/ the Kite]].
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Set in a vast world of [[TheSkyIsAnOcean endless cloud seas]], Evus is a [[{{Steampunk}} steampunk]]-inspired story about adventure and discovery – of both the mysteries of the world outside and the world within.
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Set in a vast world of [[TheSkyIsAnOcean endless cloud seas]], Evus ''Evus'' is a [[{{Steampunk}} steampunk]]-inspired story about adventure and discovery – of both the mysteries of the world outside and the world within.
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Evus is written and illustrated by Kirsten Mackey and can be found [[http://evus-comic.com/ here]]. It is part of the SpiderForest webcomic community.
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* SlidingScaleOfGenderInequality: Based on Lira's appointment as a cargo pilot for the Pandese military being the best she could get as a woman, Pandion seems to be in the "Men Are More Equal" mindset.
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* SlidingScaleOfGenderInequality: Based on [[http://evus-comic.com/comic/1-31/ Lira's appointment appointment]] as a cargo pilot for the Pandese military being the best she could get as a woman, Pandion seems to be in the "Men Are More Equal" mindset.
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* SlidingScaleOfGenderInequality: Based on Lira's appointment as a cargo pilot for the Pandese military being the best she could get as a woman, Pandion seems to be in the "Men Are More Equal" mindset.
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* ActionGirl: Caswin's older sister, Lira. Maisy's friend Laine thinks Lira [[http://evus-comic.com/comic/1-30/ "totally [kicks] butt"]], and Caswin is [[http://evus-comic.com/comic/1-29/ very much afraid]] of what she'll do to him if he reveals her DarkAndTroubledPast. Lira wanted to be a pteroplane fighter, but had to settle for piloting a cargo ship due to gender roles. She is determined to do everything in her power to kill the Lord President of Accipiter.
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* ActionGirl: Caswin's older sister, Lira. Maisy's friend Laine thinks Lira [[http://evus-comic.com/comic/1-30/ "totally [kicks] butt"]], and Caswin is [[http://evus-comic.com/comic/1-29/ very much afraid]] of [[TheyreCalledPersonalIssuesForAReason what she'll do to him him]] if he reveals her DarkAndTroubledPast. Lira wanted to be a pteroplane fighter, but had to settle for piloting a cargo ship due to gender roles. She is determined to do everything in her power to kill the Lord President of Accipiter.
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* DarkAndTroubledPast: Lira's is the cause of her grudge against the Lord President of Accipiter, the man with the mechanical arm.
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* ActionGirl: Caswin's older sister, Lira.
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* ActionGirl: Caswin's older sister, Lira. Maisy's friend Laine thinks Lira [[http://evus-comic.com/comic/1-30/ "totally [kicks] butt"]], and Caswin is [[http://evus-comic.com/comic/1-29/ very much afraid]] of what she'll do to him if he reveals her DarkAndTroubledPast. Lira wanted to be a pteroplane fighter, but had to settle for piloting a cargo ship due to gender roles. She is determined to do everything in her power to kill the Lord President of Accipiter.
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* TheSkyIsAnOceanTheSkyIsAnOcean: Since the setting is a WorldInTheSky, ships and pteroplanes fly through the Midcloud Layer. The Undercloud Layer compares to the dark, unexplored depths of the ocean[[http://evus-comic.com/world/places/layers-of-nem/ .]]
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* ArtEvolution: Kirsten's art for Evus was great from the [[http://evus-comic.com/comic/1-9/ start]], but the quality has [[http://evus-comic.com/comic/2-4/ increased considerably]] even just over the course of a year.
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* ColorMotif: Pandion is associated with gold, Accipiter is negatively associated with red, and Elanus is associated with blue[[http://evus-comic.com/world/nations/ .]]
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**Pandion, Nem’s western nation, is associated withgold, Accipiter is negatively associated with red, gold and Elanus yellow. This, our protagonist's homeland, is a sunny, low-lying country comprised of chains of grassy islands. The people here live peaceful lives, focused on farming, mining, and serving their nation in times of war.
**Accipiter is associated withblue[[http://evus-comic.red. The eastern nation is by far the largest, strongest, and most influential of them all. Its people devote much of their time to manufacturing, metalworking, and providing all manner of supplies to support the country’s massive military armada. War, honor, and victory are concepts deeply ingrained in the Accipitrans’ mindsets.
**Elanus is associated with blue. Lying in the far northern reaches and resting high in the clouds, the islands of Elanus are bitterly cold and windy year-round. Its people adapted well to their environment, building cities into mountains and the bases of islands to conserve heat. Elanusians live strongly based on tradition and culture [[http://evus-comic.com/world/nations/ .]]
**Pandion, Nem’s western nation, is associated with
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**Elanus is associated with blue. Lying in the far northern reaches and resting high in the clouds, the islands of Elanus are bitterly cold and windy year-round. Its people adapted well to their environment, building cities into mountains and the bases of islands to conserve heat. Elanusians live strongly based on tradition and culture [[http://evus-comic.com/world/nations/ .]]
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In the midst of this chaos, an adventurous, idealistic boy named Wester comes face-to-face with the reality of the world’s crisis. Fearing the eventual fall of his beloved hometown, he sets off on a journey to his capital city. Little does he know, his adventure will quickly become far different and far greater than he could have ever imagined…
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In the midst of this chaos, an adventurous, idealistic [[TheIdealist idealistic]] boy named Wester comes face-to-face with the reality of the world’s crisis. Fearing the eventual fall of his beloved hometown, he sets off on a journey to his capital city. Little does he know, his adventure will quickly become far different and far greater than he could have ever imagined…
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* ColorMotif: Pandion is associated with gold, Accipiter is negatively associated with red, and Elanus is associated with blue[[http://evus-comic.com/world/nations/ .]]
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* DuringTheWar: Fought primarily between Pandion and Accipiter.
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* WarIsHell: Wester espouses this belief quite strongly.
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* CrocodileTears: [[DeliberatelyCuteChild Maisy]] uses this to get Caswin to talk about Lira.
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* ActionGirl: Caswin's older sister, Lira.
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* NoOSHACompliance: See [[http://evus-comic.com/2013/06/23/1-7/ here]]
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* NoOSHACompliance: See Wester's [[http://evus-comic.com/2013/06/23/1-7/ here]]workplace]]
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* NoOSHACompliance: See [[http://evus-comic.com/2013/06/23/1-7/ here]]
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Evus is written and illustrated by Kirsten Mackey and can be found [[http://evus-comic.com/ here]].
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Evus is written and illustrated by Kirsten Mackey and can be found [[http://evus-comic.com/ here]].
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The [[WorldInTheSky planet of Nem]] is a troubled one, torn by brutal wars between its three nations for as long as anyone can remember. As technology continues to advance and the battlefronts become ever more deadly, mysterious events have begun to occur. Entire cities drop from the sky without warning, sinking into the lethal storms of the Underclouds. Crystalline monsters called Lightstriders have begun to emerge from these storms, attacking and eating unsuspecting people at night. No weapons can harm them, and no one knows their intentions. Some believe the war may be the cause, while others believe it’s the fault of “Evus,” a mysterious, illegal, and supposedly lethal art.
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The [[WorldInTheSky planet of Nem]] is a troubled one, torn by brutal wars between its three nations for as long as anyone can remember. As technology continues to advance and the battlefronts become ever more deadly, mysterious events have begun to occur. Entire cities drop from the sky without warning, sinking into the lethal storms of the Underclouds.[[ForbiddenZone Underclouds]]. Crystalline monsters called Lightstriders have begun to emerge from these storms, attacking and eating unsuspecting people at night. No weapons can harm them, and no one knows their intentions. Some believe the war may be the cause, while others believe it’s the fault of “Evus,” a mysterious, illegal, and supposedly lethal art.
* ForbiddenZone: The Undercloud [[http://evus-comic.com/world/places/layers-of-nem/ Layer]]
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Set in a vast world of endless cloud seas, Evus is a steampunk-inspired story about adventure and discovery – of both the mysteries of the world outside and the world within.
The planet of Nem is a troubled one, torn by brutal wars between its three nations for as long as anyone can remember. As technology continues to advance and the battlefronts become ever more deadly, mysterious events have begun to occur. Entire cities drop from the sky without warning, sinking into the lethal storms of the Underclouds. Crystalline monsters called Lightstriders have begun to emerge from these storms, attacking and eating unsuspecting people at night. No weapons can harm them, and no one knows their intentions. Some believe the war may be the cause, while others believe it’s the fault of “Evus,” a mysterious, illegal, and supposedly lethal art.
The planet of Nem is a troubled one, torn by brutal wars between its three nations for as long as anyone can remember. As technology continues to advance and the battlefronts become ever more deadly, mysterious events have begun to occur. Entire cities drop from the sky without warning, sinking into the lethal storms of the Underclouds. Crystalline monsters called Lightstriders have begun to emerge from these storms, attacking and eating unsuspecting people at night. No weapons can harm them, and no one knows their intentions. Some believe the war may be the cause, while others believe it’s the fault of “Evus,” a mysterious, illegal, and supposedly lethal art.
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Set in a vast world of endless cloud seas, Evus is a steampunk-inspired [[{{Steampunk}} steampunk]]-inspired story about adventure and discovery – of both the mysteries of the world outside and the world within.
The [[WorldInTheSky planet ofNem Nem]] is a troubled one, torn by brutal wars between its three nations for as long as anyone can remember. As technology continues to advance and the battlefronts become ever more deadly, mysterious events have begun to occur. Entire cities drop from the sky without warning, sinking into the lethal storms of the Underclouds. Crystalline monsters called Lightstriders have begun to emerge from these storms, attacking and eating unsuspecting people at night. No weapons can harm them, and no one knows their intentions. Some believe the war may be the cause, while others believe it’s the fault of “Evus,” a mysterious, illegal, and supposedly lethal art.
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* CoolPlanes: The pteroplanes
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[[caption-width-right:287:The Flag of Pandion]]
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Set in a vast world of endless cloud seas, Evus is a steampunk-inspired story about adventure and discovery – of both the mysteries of the world outside and the world within.
The planet of Nem is a troubled one, torn by brutal wars between its three nations for as long as anyone can remember. As technology continues to advance and the battlefronts become ever more deadly, mysterious events have begun to occur. Entire cities drop from the sky without warning, sinking into the lethal storms of the Underclouds. Crystalline monsters called Lightstriders have begun to emerge from these storms, attacking and eating unsuspecting people at night. No weapons can harm them, and no one knows their intentions. Some believe the war may be the cause, while others believe it’s the fault of “Evus,” a mysterious, illegal, and supposedly lethal art.
In the midst of this chaos, an adventurous, idealistic boy named Wester comes face-to-face with the reality of the world’s crisis. Fearing the eventual fall of his beloved hometown, he sets off on a journey to his capital city. Little does he know, his adventure will quickly become far different and far greater than he could have ever imagined…
Evus is written and illustrated by Kirsten Mackey and can be found [[http://evus-comic.com/ here]].
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!! This webcomic provides examples of:
* {{Steampunk}}: The comic is influenced by the steampunk style.
* LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters: The full cast is huge.
The planet of Nem is a troubled one, torn by brutal wars between its three nations for as long as anyone can remember. As technology continues to advance and the battlefronts become ever more deadly, mysterious events have begun to occur. Entire cities drop from the sky without warning, sinking into the lethal storms of the Underclouds. Crystalline monsters called Lightstriders have begun to emerge from these storms, attacking and eating unsuspecting people at night. No weapons can harm them, and no one knows their intentions. Some believe the war may be the cause, while others believe it’s the fault of “Evus,” a mysterious, illegal, and supposedly lethal art.
In the midst of this chaos, an adventurous, idealistic boy named Wester comes face-to-face with the reality of the world’s crisis. Fearing the eventual fall of his beloved hometown, he sets off on a journey to his capital city. Little does he know, his adventure will quickly become far different and far greater than he could have ever imagined…
Evus is written and illustrated by Kirsten Mackey and can be found [[http://evus-comic.com/ here]].
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!! This webcomic provides examples of:
* {{Steampunk}}: The comic is influenced by the steampunk style.
* LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters: The full cast is huge.