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* KlingonPromotion: Maximus gives himself one, when he [[spoiler: kills Sevarian and forces Ferneris to flee.]] The rest of the Cabal falls right in line.
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** Evon storms off alone, in a fit of jealousy, when Hero tells her to stay indoors for the night, while he heads off with a female friend. They're actually trying to track down an unknown creature responsible for killing several women,and whom they suspected (correctly) was hunting Evon. Guess what Evon runs into immediately after storming off?
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** Evon storms off alone, in a fit of jealousy, when Hero tells her to stay indoors for the night, while he heads off with a female friend. They're actually trying to track down an unknown creature responsible for killing several women,and women, and whom they suspected (correctly) was hunting Evon. Guess what Evon runs into immediately after storming off?
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* EnemyCivilWar: The members of the Cabal are constantly plotting for Sevarian's favour and/or spot, which leads them to interfere with each other a lot.
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* EnemyCivilWar: The members of the Cabal are constantly plotting for Sevarian's favour and/or spot, which leads them to interfere with each other a lot. Comes to a head when Maximus, charged up on Dark Mana, makes his move [[spoiler: killing Sevarian and forcing Feneris to flee]]
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** Evon storms off alone, in a fit of jealousy, when Hero tells her to stay indoors for the night, while he heads off with a female friend. They're actually trying to track down an unknown creature responsible for killing several women,adn women,and whom they suspected (correctly) was hunting Evon. Guess what Evon runs into immediately after storming off?
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* EvilVsEvil: A team of Feneris' goons manage to capture Evon, only for [[http://evoncomics.com/?p=1190 Legune and his creatures to show up, slaughter them and steal her.]]
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* EvilVsEvil: EvilVersusEvil: A team of Feneris' goons manage to capture Evon, only for [[http://evoncomics.com/?p=1190 Legune and his creatures to show up, slaughter them and steal her.]]
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* EarlyInstallmentWeirdness: In addition to the ArtEvolution, early comics included such {{animesque}} elements as [[FunnyBackgroundEvent funny background]] [[http://evoncomics.com/?p=67 events]], [[http://evoncomics.com/?p=73 Imagine Spots]] as well as far more explicit nudity (mostly male).
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* EarlyInstallmentWeirdness: In addition to the ArtEvolution, early comics included such {{animesque}} elements as [[FunnyBackgroundEvent funny background]] [[http://evoncomics.com/?p=67 events]], [[http://evoncomics.com/?p=73 Imagine Spots]] as well as far more frequent explicit nudity (mostly male).(especially male nudity).
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''[[http://evoncomics.com Evon]]'' is a [[UsefulNotes/FurryFandom furry]] HeroicFantasy webcomic created by Brittany E. Sheppard (artist) and Mr. Wax (writer), first published in 2008.
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''[[http://evoncomics.com Evon]]'' is a [[UsefulNotes/FurryFandom furry]] HeroicFantasy webcomic created by Brittany E. Sheppard Shepard (artist) and Mr. Wax (writer), first published in 2008.
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* PettingZooPeople
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* EarlyInstallmentWeirdness: In addition to the ArtEvolution, early comics included such {{animesque}} elements as [[FunnyBackgroundEvent funny background]] [[http://evoncomics.com/?p=67 events]], ImagineSpot[[http://evoncomics.com/?p=73 s]] as well as far more explicit nudity (mostly male).
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* EarlyInstallmentWeirdness: In addition to the ArtEvolution, early comics included such {{animesque}} elements as [[FunnyBackgroundEvent funny background]] [[http://evoncomics.com/?p=67 events]], ImagineSpot[[http://evoncomics.[[http://evoncomics.com/?p=73 s]] Imagine Spots]] as well as far more explicit nudity (mostly male).
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* AttemptedRape: [[spoiler: Evon]] is the victim of this twice, in a row.
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* ShoutOut: When [[spoiler:the Evon clone]] is rampaging through the villan's lair, a random mook calls out, "[[WesternAnimation/{{Wizards}} She killed Fritz!]]"
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* SelectiveObliviousness: [[http://evoncomics.com/?comic=volume-four-chapter-16-page-639 Evon denies her feelings for Hero]] to Evee: despite the above-mentioned LoveEpiphany and the fact that Evee flat out tells her that she (Evee) has the same set of memories and knows what kind of thoughts she's (Evon) has had about Hero.
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* MayDecemberRomance: (Possible) mild example with Hero (27) and Evon (18, looks younger). Extreme example with Lanna and Traveller, the youngest ([[VainSorceress so she claims]]) and oldest members of the Cabal, respectively.
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* MayDecemberRomance: (Possible) mild example with Hero (27) and Evon (18, looks younger). Extreme example with Lanna and Traveller, the youngest ([[VainSorceress so she claims]]) and oldest members of the Cabal, respectively.
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* MayDecemberRomance: (Possible) mild example with Hero (27) and Evon (18, looks younger). Extreme example with Lanna and Traveller, the youngest ([[VainSorceress so she claims]]) and oldest members of the Cabal, respectively.
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* TreacherousSpiritChase: One of the creatures sent after Evon is a Blank (a life force-stealing demonic creature) in the shape of Evon's father, Serris.
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* TreacherousSpiritChase: One of the creatures sent after Evon is a Blank (a life force-stealing demonic creature) in the shape of Evon's father, Serris.Serrin.
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* WizardsLiveLonger: Spellcasters age more slowly than normal people.
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* DragonWithAnAgenda: Every named member of the Cabal who ''isn't'' Sevarian (except Ferneris, who just wants to be TheDragon and thinks The Cabal's pursuit of Evon is a waste of time and resources).
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* DragonWithAnAgenda: Every named member of the Cabal who ''isn't'' Sevarian (except Ferneris, who just wants to be TheDragon and thinks The Cabal's pursuit of Evon is a waste of time and resources).resources) is plotting to [[TheStarscream overthrow him]] or something.
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* BloodyMurder: Lanna the Shadow uses her blood to form [[http://evoncomics.com/?comic=volume-one-chapte-169 projectiles]].
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* CoolDownHug: Areth administers one [[http://evoncomics.com/?comic=volume-one-chapte-177 to Evon]] after the battle with Lanna.
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* DragonWithAnAgenda: Almost everyone in the Cabal who ''isn't'' Sevarian (except maybe Ferneris, who wants to ''be'' TheDragon once again).
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* DragonWithAnAgenda: Almost everyone in Every named member of the Cabal who ''isn't'' Sevarian (except maybe Ferneris, who just wants to ''be'' be TheDragon once again).and thinks The Cabal's pursuit of Evon is a waste of time and resources).
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** SixthRanger: Shakar the Manipulator [[note]]Who seems to have moved into the Genius role with Legune's death.[[/note]]
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* GroinAttack: [[spoiler: After which Evee spits a piece of Legune's anatomy out before snapping his neck. You do the math.]]
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* GroinAttack: [[spoiler: After which Evee spits a piece of Legune's anatomy out before snapping his neck. [[{{Squick}} You do the math.]]]]]]
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* GroinAttack: [[spoiler: After which Evee spits a piece of Legune's anatomy out before snapping his neck. You do the math.]]
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** And, a few strips later, Corrin's face when his mother demands [[http://evoncomics.com/?comic=volume-three-chapter-12-page-512 "What did you do THIS time?"]] And he thought Hero beating the stuffing out of him was bad...
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* EnemyCivilWar: The members of the Cabal are constantly plotting for Sevarus's favour and/or spot.
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* StrongButUnskilled: Evon has the magical power of experienced mage, but thanks to her botched education, has a beginner's level of actual skill.
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* FanService: The nudity has grown far less explicit from the early days, but there's still plenty of it (of both genders).
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* FanService: The nudity has grown less frequent and far less explicit from the early days, but there's still plenty of it (of both genders).
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* ScrewTheRulesIHaveSupernaturalPowers: The reason Corrin is willing to pick up his relationship with Evon: [[http://evoncomics.com/?p=1603 As sorcerers,]] they're not "bound by the rules that govern ordinary people" and shouldn't let said rules keep them from "continuing something wonderful'. Evon [[HitYouSoHardYourXWillFeelIt vehemently]] [[http://evoncomics.com/?p=1646 disagreed.]]
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* ScrewTheRulesIHaveSupernaturalPowers: The reason Corrin [[spoiler:Corrin]] is willing to pick up his relationship with Evon: [[http://evoncomics.com/?p=1603 As sorcerers,]] they're not "bound by the rules that govern ordinary people" and shouldn't let said rules keep them from "continuing something wonderful'. Evon [[HitYouSoHardYourXWillFeelIt vehemently]] [[http://evoncomics.com/?p=1646 disagreed.]]
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* OhCrap: Evon's reaction when she sees a picture of her newly-discovered half-brother [[spoiler: It's Corrin.]] His reaction is the same when he sees her "for the first time." [[spoiler: He gets over it quickly. See ScrewTheRulesIHaveSupernaturalPowers]]
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* OhCrap: Evon's reaction when she sees a picture of her newly-discovered half-brother [[spoiler: It's Corrin.Corrin, Evon's first lover.]] His reaction is the same when he sees her "for the first time." [[spoiler: He gets over it quickly. See ScrewTheRulesIHaveSupernaturalPowers]]ScrewTheRulesIHaveSupernaturalPowers