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* HiveQueen: Rare male example: [[https://www.drivecomic.com/comic/act-4-pg-146/ The Gannath's Center]] is supreme overlord because their equivalent of Royal Jelly - eating 200-300 pineal glands of their rivals - has mutated them into a giant with hyper-intelligence. When combined with the Gannath's natural telepathy, they will naturally brainwash anyone on their psionic network.
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* HiveQueen: Rare male example: [[https://www.drivecomic.com/comic/act-4-pg-146/ The Gannath's Center]] is supreme overlord because their equivalent of Royal Jelly - eating 200-300 pineal glands of their rivals - has mutated them into a giant with hyper-intelligence. When combined with the Gannath's natural telepathy, they will naturally and subconsciously brainwash anyone on their psionic network.
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** The Gannath are a totalitarian dictatorship purely because of their biology; when the Center dies, every successor and potential usurper is forced into a blood frenzy in a trial-by-combat-free-for-all, which keeps happening until about 200-300 Gannath die while exactly one survives. The sole survivor is then instinctually ordered to eat the pineal glands of the corpses, and undergoes a hormone-based metamorphosis that makes them gigantic, hyper-intelligent, violent, and completely narcissistic. This means that their entire race is genetically programmed to create the ''perfect'' tyrant every time the latest one dies.
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** The Gannath are a totalitarian dictatorship purely because of their biology; when the Center dies, every successor and potential usurper is forced into a blood frenzy in a trial-by-combat-free-for-all, which keeps happening until about 200-300 Gannath die while exactly one survives. The sole survivor is then instinctually ordered to eat the pineal glands of the corpses, and undergoes a hormone-based metamorphosis that makes them gigantic, hyper-intelligent, violent, and completely narcissistic. As the icing on the cake, they gain telepathic mastery, frequently brainwashing all the other Gannath on their psionic network with their subconscious. This means that their entire race is genetically programmed to create the ''perfect'' tyrant every time the latest one dies.
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* HiveQueen: Rare male example: [[https://www.drivecomic.com/comic/act-4-pg-146/ The Gannath's Center]] is supreme overlord because their equivalent of Royal Jelly - eating 200-300 pineal glands of their rivals - has mutated them into a giant with hyper-intelligence. When combined with the Gannath's natural telepathy, they will naturally brainwash anyone on their psionic network.
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** The Gannath are an unfortunate case of Always Lawful Evil, as they have a curse genetically programmed into them; every time their tyrannical 'Center' dies, they are forced by instinct to ritually murder and cannibalize each other until they create another one, and then they become mindlessly loyal to the new Center, especially as the Center grows increasingly paranoid and narcissistic.
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** The guest story arc ''That Time the Veetans Defeated the Tesskans Forever'' shows that the Ring can be used to put things JustOneSecondOutOfSync, making them invisible and invulnerable, but unable to take any action, and use it to [[spoiler: cloak Tesskil and convince everyone they had erased it from the timeline]].
** Activating a ring engine while inside another ring engine results in an absolutely catastrophic explosion, big enough to wipe out entire space fleets . Cuddow decides to weaponize this, and begins designing a missile with twin ring engines instead of a warhead.
** Activating a ring engine while inside another ring engine results in an absolutely catastrophic explosion, big enough to wipe out entire space fleets . Cuddow decides to weaponize this, and begins designing a missile with twin ring engines instead of a warhead.
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** The guest story arc ''That Time the Veetans Defeated the Tesskans Forever'' shows that the Ring can be used to put things JustOneSecondOutOfSync, making them invisible and invulnerable, but unable to take any action, and use it to [[spoiler: cloak [[spoiler:cloak Tesskil and convince everyone they had erased it from the timeline]].
** Activating a ring engine while inside another ring engine results in an absolutely catastrophic explosion, big enough to wipe out entire spacefleets .fleets. Cuddow decides to weaponize this, and begins designing a missile with twin ring engines instead of a warhead.
** Activating a ring engine while inside another ring engine results in an absolutely catastrophic explosion, big enough to wipe out entire space
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** The Machito's first encounter with an [=AI=] is a loyal servant... of a totalitarian nightmare staffed by giant spiders that eat sapient beings alive. So far, all signs point to the artificial intelligences of the Gannath being completely loyal purely because the Gannath are ''that'' evil.
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* InherentInTheSystem: La Familia has taken significant measures to ensure their family will always rule. La Familia's secret police ruthlessly crush insurrections. They carefully maintain a tight monopoly on the Drive, ensuring that all regions must obey them or risk getting cut off from the rest of humanity. They even took measures to ensure that reform could never happen from within. Familia members are taught from birth to believe that the current power arrangement is needed to prevent economic collapse. One popular Familia member who attempted it anyway was executed. Even a reform minded emperor, for all their power, would have to acquire the consensus of the rest of the family to attempt such a thing.
** The Gannath are a totalitarian dictatorship purely because of their biology; when the Center dies, every successor and potential usurper is forced into a blood frenzy in a trial-by-combat-free-for-all, which keeps happening until about 200-300 Gannath die while exactly one survives. The sole survivor is then instinctually ordered to eat the pineal glands of the corpses, and undergoes a hormone-based metamorphosis that makes them gigantic, hyper-intelligent, and completely narcissistic. This means that their entire race is genetically programmed to create the ''perfect'' tyrant every time the latest one dies.
* InsufficientlyAdvancedAlien: While they are certainly not this now, the Continuum's technological development is unusual in that, as far as they know, the Drive was the very first creation their kind invented. Kik finds this odd, since the Drive is a very sophisticated device.
** The Gannath are a totalitarian dictatorship purely because of their biology; when the Center dies, every successor and potential usurper is forced into a blood frenzy in a trial-by-combat-free-for-all, which keeps happening until about 200-300 Gannath die while exactly one survives. The sole survivor is then instinctually ordered to eat the pineal glands of the corpses, and undergoes a hormone-based metamorphosis that makes them gigantic, hyper-intelligent, and completely narcissistic. This means that their entire race is genetically programmed to create the ''perfect'' tyrant every time the latest one dies.
* InsufficientlyAdvancedAlien: While they are certainly not this now, the Continuum's technological development is unusual in that, as far as they know, the Drive was the very first creation their kind invented. Kik finds this odd, since the Drive is a very sophisticated device.
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* InherentInTheSystem: Over the course of their reign, La Familia has taken significant measures designed a system to ensure their family will always rule. rule, no matter how many Caligulas or Rogue Emperors take office. La Familia's secret police ruthlessly crush insurrections.insurrections, including those ''within'' La Familia. They carefully maintain a tight monopoly on the Drive, ensuring that all regions must obey them or risk getting cut off from the rest of humanity. They even took measures to ensure that reform could never happen from within. Familia members are taught from birth to believe that the current power arrangement is needed to prevent economic collapse. One collapse; one popular Familia member who attempted it anyway was executed. Even a reform minded emperor, for And all their power, would have to acquire emperors, from the progressively benevolent to the downright tyrannical, must reach a total consensus with ''literally'' every other member of La Familia - ''while they are all in person and in Spain'' - to enact anything extreme, like declaring war or changing the rest of the family to attempt such a thing.
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** The Gannath are a totalitarian dictatorship purely because of their biology; when the Center dies, every successor and potential usurper is forced into a blood frenzy in a trial-by-combat-free-for-all, which keeps happening until about 200-300 Gannath die while exactly one survives. The sole survivor is then instinctually ordered to eat the pineal glands of the corpses, and undergoes a hormone-based metamorphosis that makes them gigantic, hyper-intelligent, violent, and completely narcissistic. This means that their entire race is genetically programmed to create the ''perfect'' tyrant every time the latest one dies.
* InsufficientlyAdvancedAlien: While they are certainly not this now, the Continuum's technological development is unusual in that, as far as they know, the Drive was the very first creation their kind invented. Kik finds this odd, since the Drive is a very sophisticated device. [[spoiler:As the first of their kind was the last survivor of a now-extinct civilization, this makes more sense.]]
** The Gannath are a totalitarian dictatorship purely because of their biology; when the Center dies, every successor and potential usurper is forced into a blood frenzy in a trial-by-combat-free-for-all, which keeps happening until about 200-300 Gannath die while exactly one survives. The sole survivor is then instinctually ordered to eat the pineal glands of the corpses, and undergoes a hormone-based metamorphosis that makes them gigantic, hyper-intelligent, violent, and completely narcissistic. This means that their entire race is genetically programmed to create the ''perfect'' tyrant every time the latest one dies.
* InsufficientlyAdvancedAlien: While they are certainly not this now, the Continuum's technological development is unusual in that, as far as they know, the Drive was the very first creation their kind invented. Kik finds this odd, since the Drive is a very sophisticated device. [[spoiler:As the first of their kind was the last survivor of a now-extinct civilization, this makes more sense.]]
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* TheMole: Orla O'Malley is actually part of La Familia like Fernando, but only the reader knows this: She's here to keep an eye on the crew.
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* TheMole: Orla O'Malley is actually part of knows things that only La Familia like Fernando, but only and their elite forces are allowed to learn, showing the reader knows this: She's here to keep an eye on audience that she's a spy for the crew.Emperor.
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** It's recently been revealed that Orla is [[spoiler: not Familia. She's ''worse'': she belongs to the Jinyiwei, the Emperor's Secret Police. When this is revealed, Taneel is neither amused, nor unprepared.]]
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** It's recently been revealed that Orla [[spoiler:Orla is [[spoiler: not Familia. She's ''worse'': she belongs to the Jinyiwei, the Emperor's Secret Police. When this is revealed, Taneel is neither amused, nor unprepared.]]
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** The Jinyiwei are meant to be the Emperor's enforcers, to ensure even other members of La Familia do not rebel. The previous head however helped Emperor Cruz in his coup.
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** The Jinyiwei are meant to be the Emperor's enforcers, to ensure that everyone, even other members of La Familia do Familia, does not rebel. The However, their iron-clad loyalty to La Familia as a whole does ''not'' translate to iron-clad loyalty to the Emperor, as the previous head however helped Emperor Cruz in his coup.
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-->'''Narration''': Evolution is funny. Generation after generation of Fillipods were naturally selected for stalks capable of ever-stronger van der waals forces. Basically, for reasons of diet. The Winter Tilla fruit has an amazing combination of proteins, carbs, and vitamins... but has a tree bark that's glass-smooth, and impossible to climb. Hence the natural selection towards van der waals forces: the Fillipods who could climb... could live to breed. It's an ability that's kept them alive for thousands of years. And, oddly enough, did so again when [[spoiler: their planet was cracked in half... and every Tesskan alive was flung 30 meters in the air.]]
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-->'''Narration''': Evolution is funny. Generation after generation of Fillipods were naturally selected for stalks capable of ever-stronger van der waals forces. Basically, for reasons of diet. The Winter Tilla fruit has an amazing combination of proteins, carbs, and vitamins... but has a tree bark that's glass-smooth, and impossible to climb. Hence the natural selection towards van der waals forces: the Fillipods who could climb... could live to breed. It's an ability that's kept them alive for thousands of years. And, oddly enough, did so again when [[spoiler: their [[spoiler:their planet was cracked in half... and every Tesskan alive was flung 30 meters in the air.]]
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** [[spoiler: Nosh]] is now a Vinn. "We've lost him. He's gone."
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** [[spoiler: Nosh]] [[spoiler:Nosh]] is now a Vinn. "We've lost him. He's gone."
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* SubmersibleSpaceship: Until [[spoiler:a devastating pandemic]] drove the few survivors to take shelter on dry land, the civilization of the amphibious Qen was mostly underwater. Including all their facilities for building and maintaining starships, as well as a significant chunk of their actual fleet. Much of it is still sitting perfectly intact on the ocean floor thanks to being designed with underwater operation in mind from the start, suddenly turning a species El Imperio considered to be annoying but ultimately inconsequential primitives into potentially another galactic power.
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** Ultimately justified, as several human-designed AI's (or "Fishes", from artiFISHal intelligence) seemed to be benevolent and reasonable... until they randomly started killing people for no reason intelligible to their creators.
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** Ultimately justified, as several human-designed AI's (or "Fishes", from artiFISHal intelligence) seemed to be benevolent and reasonable... until they randomly started killing people for no reason intelligible to their creators. AIs are inherently evil in this setting due to their intrinsic need to calculate out the most destructive possible future and then see it out. Ahmis's AI is no exception, and is responsible for [[spoiler:unleashing the Vinn to end all life in the galaxy.]]
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* RevengeBeforeReason: The Grasskans offer the Continuum an alliance against the Vinn, but the Continuum refuses due to carrying a grudge against them for stealing their technology. They get to have the pleasure of watching nearly all of them die, only for the Vinn to begin a CurbStompBattle against the Continuum too.
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* RevengeBeforeReason: RevengeBeforeReason:
** The Grasskans offer the Continuum an alliance against the Vinn, but the Continuum refuses due to carrying a grudge against them for stealing their technology. They get to have the pleasure of watching nearly all of them die, only for the Vinn to begin a CurbStompBattle against the Continuumtoo.too.
** Likewise, when facing the most brilliant maker of all time, the Continuum sentence him to the most painful death that they can for previous heresy rather than compromise with him to use his talents against the threat on the verge of destroying their civilization.
** The Grasskans offer the Continuum an alliance against the Vinn, but the Continuum refuses due to carrying a grudge against them for stealing their technology. They get to have the pleasure of watching nearly all of them die, only for the Vinn to begin a CurbStompBattle against the Continuum
** Likewise, when facing the most brilliant maker of all time, the Continuum sentence him to the most painful death that they can for previous heresy rather than compromise with him to use his talents against the threat on the verge of destroying their civilization.