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* CombatTentacles: Cendarii have two each, extending from their backs.
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* CallingYourAttacks: The "Move's name appears on-screen without any implication that the attacker is actually saying it out loud" variant is a common sight in action scenes.
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* WimpFight: Trainer Wyvern assigns Marael and Lily to spar. So they run at each other... and both flinch and back away at the same time. Second try, they get their legs tangled together and both fall over.
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* WimpFight: Trainer Wyvern assigns Marael and Lily to spar. So they run at each other... and both flinch and back away at the same time. Second try, they get their legs tangled together and both fall over.over.
* WindIsGreen: It is when it's used as part of wind magic.
* WindIsGreen: It is when it's used as part of wind magic.
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* DreamSpying: Sienna has a nightmare about Shades attacking her while praising their God, and senses psychic noise when she wakes up, causing her to suspect this trope. Lily explains that psychically sensitive people involuntarily become "dreamers" all the time.
* FantasticRacism: Bioroids are highly mistrusted on Terra, to the point where making new ones is outright illegal.
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* TheMaze: Navigating one is the first trial at Saint Scarlet's. The InfiniteCanvas is used to show just how huge it is.
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* WimpFight: Trainer Wyvern assigns Marael and Lily to spar. So they run at each other... and both flinch and back away at the same time. Second try, they get their legs tangled together and both fall over.
* WimpFight: Trainer Wyvern assigns Marael and Lily to spar. So they run at each other... and both flinch and back away at the same time. Second try, they get their legs tangled together and both fall over.
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* DontThinkFeel: Raziel tells Marael that if she keeps a clear, meditative state of mind in a fight, her shell will move on its own. Once she forces herself to take a deep breath and ignore the world around her, she sudden awakens to incredible powers.
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* ImprobablyFemaleCast: The only non-women to have appeared in the comic so far are Instructor Graves, Alaric, and [[NoBiologicalSex Rime]].
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* ImprobablyFemaleCast: The only non-women to have appeared in the comic so far are Instructor Graves, Alaric, and [[NoBiologicalSex Rime]]. Even the Cendarii Master System uses female pronouns.
* LightEmUp: Light elemental magic is definitely a thing. Cendarii, being divine powered beings, are naturally extremely gifted with it, and Sienna also uses it with the help of a magic focus.
* LightEmUp: Light elemental magic is definitely a thing. Cendarii, being divine powered beings, are naturally extremely gifted with it, and Sienna also uses it with the help of a magic focus.
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* RPGMechanicsVerse: Characters are given classes and levels.
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* GodIsDead: According to the shadows in Sienna's dream, the goddess of Terra has been slowly dying alongside her planet.
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* GodIsDead: According to the shadows in Sienna's dream, the goddess of Terra has been slowly dying alongside her planet. When Marael is told about it, she bursts into tears and yells that they "can't lose another one", implying that the Cendarii have lost a god of their own.
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The comic can be read on [[https://www.webtoons.com/en/canvas/cendaran-marael/list?title_no=903904 Webtoons]] or on [[https://cendaran.com/comics/ Miss M's personal website]], with updates going up on the latter first.
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The comic can be read on [[https://www.webtoons.com/en/canvas/cendaran-marael/list?title_no=903904 Webtoons]] Webtoons]], [[https://tapas.io/series/Cendaran-Marael/info Tapas]], or on [[https://cendaran.com/comics/ Miss M's personal website]], with updates going up on the latter first.website]].
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* FirstEpisodeSpoiler: Though it won't come as a surprise to anyone with prior familiarity with the Maia Starchild character, Marael isn't revealed to have divine power until the end of the third strip, isn't revealed as artificial until the seventh, and it isn't revealed that the Cendarii are aliens until strip 10.
** At the end of the first day of in-comic time, High Priestess Auriel tells Marael that she isn't an ordinary scout unit, but a prototype for a new model who has been charged with an important mission.
** At the end of the first day of in-comic time, High Priestess Auriel tells Marael that she isn't an ordinary scout unit, but a prototype for a new model who has been charged with an important mission.
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* GodIsDead: According to the shadows in Sienna's dream, the goddess of Terra has been slowly dying alongside her planet.
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* LivingShadow: Sienna has a nightmare of being attacked by a small army of shadows called Shades who ask her to [[AssimilationPlot "join us"]]. Her reactions indicate that they are a known quantity in the setting and usually summoned by {{Necromancer}}s, but the ones in her dream just giggle as they talk about their [[GodOfEvil God]]...
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* SealedEvilInACan: The shadows eagerly look forward to being freed from Terra's prison upon her death.
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* EldritchAbomination: The "Amorphous Flesh" Marael shows in a hologram looks like something between a tentacle monster and a [[BodyHorror massive pile of undulating muscle tissue]], with [[EyesDoNotBelongThere drastically misaligned eyes]] and jagged, foot long teeth. And according to the voice over, it can spread [[TheCorruption Flesh Corruption]]...
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* PlanetTerra: Marael is part of the "Terran Expedition Team" and refers to the people of Earth as terrans, despite the actual Earth people of the comic still preferring "Earth".
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* AfterTheEnd: 200 years prior to the events of the main comic, the Earth passed through a giant cosmic LeyLine, which rendered a majority of the planet uninhabitable, and reduced civilization to a collection of city-states.
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* ExtranormalInstitute: Saint Scarlet's Combat Academy is one; the first class only features two humans, both of whom are mages of some sort.
* FirstContact: Occurred shortly before the beginning of the comic, with Marael being part of an expeditionary squad to study Earth and figure out the basics of the planet and its society.
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* HumanAliens: Cendarii look like short human woman with electric blue hair and eyes. Marael finds this as confusing as anyone, considering that the Cendarii only learned that humans exist very recently.
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* ProudScholarRace: The Cendarii, although they aren't "proud" so much as they are "adorably enthusiastic data hoarders".
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* OneGenderRace: All Cendarii are women, including the Master System, which may or may not even have a physical body. They are manufactured, not born, so the issue of reproduction doesn't come up.
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* CurbStompBattle: [[NonActionGuy Marael]] vs. [[TheAce Sienna]]. Sienna breaks Mar's ribs with one hit, Mar harmlessly wraps her in an energy rope, Sienna flares her [[BattleAura aura]], disintegrating the rope and sending Mar flying into the wall. Marael never lands a hit.
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->''"...A kid? No... Not a child. Not with that aura...!"''
-->-- '''Sienna Harris'''
After countless years searching the stars, the Cendarii finally found a suitable world for colonization. Unfortunately, it was already occupied. Marael was sent to Earth to study its inhabitants and learn their combat techniques. But what was supposed to be a relatively simple operation quickly turned out to be much more complicated...
''Cendaran: Marael'' is a [[KoreanWebtoons webtoon]] written and drawn by "Miss M", A.K.A. independent [[VirtualYoutuber VTuber]] Maia Starchild, chronicling the adventures of Marael and her classmates at [[AcademyOfAdventure Saint Scarlet's Combat Academy]] in a world where [[TheMagicComesBack magic and monsters have returned to Earth]].
The comic can be read on [[https://www.webtoons.com/en/canvas/cendaran-marael/list?title_no=903904 Webtoons]] or on [[https://cendaran.com/comics/ Miss M's personal website]], with updates going up on the latter first.
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!!''[=Cendaran: Marael=]'' features examples of:
* AcademyOfAdventure: The comic's first arc is the [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin aptly named]] Academy Arc, detailing Mar's time at Saint Scarlet's Combat Academy, a school where the first lesson is being thrown in a huge maze and encouraged to fight any other student you encounter for points.
* AfterTheEnd: 200 years prior to the events of the main comic, the Earth passed through a giant cosmic LeyLine, which killed most life, rendered a majority of the planet uninhabitable, and reduced civilization to a collection of city-states.
* ArtEvolution: Even within the first few months, Miss M's art style developed quite a bit. It's most obvious looking at Rime: in the early chapters, they had a constant transparency effect on their body and looked like they were constantly melting. By the end of Marael's fight with Sienna, they'd become totally opaque and had a much more stable SlimeGirl design.
* DittoAliens: All Cendarii look pretty much the same - pale skin, similar faces, long, electric blue hair, [[CurtainsMatchTheWindows matching eyes]], and extremely short and petite by human standards, unless they're a Paladin, in which case they might just be ''pretty'' short by human standards. Of course, they are ArtificialHumans.
* ElementalPowers: The Tribes inscribe themselves with runes of power tied to a specific element, allowing them to manipulate their tribe's element. The Graves family are from the [[CastingAShadow Shadow Tribe]].
* FantasticCasteSystem: Cendarii are created with specific purposes in mind. Marael herself was designed to be a scout, and protests that she isn't a combat model multiple times during the first trial.
* HiveMind: [[DownplayedTrope Downplayed.]] All Cendarii are constantly in mental contact with the Master System and their batchmates, and have access to the combined knowledge of the entire history of the species. [[WordOfGod According to Miss M]], any Cendaran who was cut off from the hive would instantly fall into a coma, and, even if they were to ever recover, they would feel a deep, profound emptiness.
* HumanAliens: Cendarii look like short human woman with electric blue hair and eyes. Marael finds this as confusing as anyone, considering that the Cendarii only learned that humans exist very recently.
* ImprobablyFemaleCast: The only non-women to have appeared in the comic so far are Instructor Graves, Alaric, and [[NoBiologicalSex Rime]].
* OneGenderRace: All Cendarii are women, including the Master System, which may or may not even have a physical body. They are manufactured, not born, so the issue of reproduction doesn't come up.
* OurAngelsAreDifferent: Cendarii are frequently regarded as "artificial angels" by humans, especially ones who can sense their divine auras. Thought they haven't appeared yet, WordOfGod is that real angels exist in the setting, and that they have no individual personalities or free will and would vanish from existence the moment they were cut off from their god.
* PowerTattoo: The Tribes derive their magical abilities by tattooing unique runes on their bodies, usually on the face.
* ScienceFantasy: Let's start with the fact that our heroine is an [[ArtificialHuman artificial]] alien [[OurAngelsAreDifferent angel]] and go from there...
* TheMagicComesBack: Due to Earth's decreasing mana density, magic users and fantasy creatures were much rarer before the LeyLine hit.
* TheMaze: Navigating one is the first trial at Saint Scarlet's. The InfiniteCanvas is used to show just how huge it is.
-->-- '''Sienna Harris'''
After countless years searching the stars, the Cendarii finally found a suitable world for colonization. Unfortunately, it was already occupied. Marael was sent to Earth to study its inhabitants and learn their combat techniques. But what was supposed to be a relatively simple operation quickly turned out to be much more complicated...
''Cendaran: Marael'' is a [[KoreanWebtoons webtoon]] written and drawn by "Miss M", A.K.A. independent [[VirtualYoutuber VTuber]] Maia Starchild, chronicling the adventures of Marael and her classmates at [[AcademyOfAdventure Saint Scarlet's Combat Academy]] in a world where [[TheMagicComesBack magic and monsters have returned to Earth]].
The comic can be read on [[https://www.webtoons.com/en/canvas/cendaran-marael/list?title_no=903904 Webtoons]] or on [[https://cendaran.com/comics/ Miss M's personal website]], with updates going up on the latter first.
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!!''[=Cendaran: Marael=]'' features examples of:
* AcademyOfAdventure: The comic's first arc is the [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin aptly named]] Academy Arc, detailing Mar's time at Saint Scarlet's Combat Academy, a school where the first lesson is being thrown in a huge maze and encouraged to fight any other student you encounter for points.
* AfterTheEnd: 200 years prior to the events of the main comic, the Earth passed through a giant cosmic LeyLine, which killed most life, rendered a majority of the planet uninhabitable, and reduced civilization to a collection of city-states.
* ArtEvolution: Even within the first few months, Miss M's art style developed quite a bit. It's most obvious looking at Rime: in the early chapters, they had a constant transparency effect on their body and looked like they were constantly melting. By the end of Marael's fight with Sienna, they'd become totally opaque and had a much more stable SlimeGirl design.
* DittoAliens: All Cendarii look pretty much the same - pale skin, similar faces, long, electric blue hair, [[CurtainsMatchTheWindows matching eyes]], and extremely short and petite by human standards, unless they're a Paladin, in which case they might just be ''pretty'' short by human standards. Of course, they are ArtificialHumans.
* ElementalPowers: The Tribes inscribe themselves with runes of power tied to a specific element, allowing them to manipulate their tribe's element. The Graves family are from the [[CastingAShadow Shadow Tribe]].
* FantasticCasteSystem: Cendarii are created with specific purposes in mind. Marael herself was designed to be a scout, and protests that she isn't a combat model multiple times during the first trial.
* HiveMind: [[DownplayedTrope Downplayed.]] All Cendarii are constantly in mental contact with the Master System and their batchmates, and have access to the combined knowledge of the entire history of the species. [[WordOfGod According to Miss M]], any Cendaran who was cut off from the hive would instantly fall into a coma, and, even if they were to ever recover, they would feel a deep, profound emptiness.
* HumanAliens: Cendarii look like short human woman with electric blue hair and eyes. Marael finds this as confusing as anyone, considering that the Cendarii only learned that humans exist very recently.
* ImprobablyFemaleCast: The only non-women to have appeared in the comic so far are Instructor Graves, Alaric, and [[NoBiologicalSex Rime]].
* OneGenderRace: All Cendarii are women, including the Master System, which may or may not even have a physical body. They are manufactured, not born, so the issue of reproduction doesn't come up.
* OurAngelsAreDifferent: Cendarii are frequently regarded as "artificial angels" by humans, especially ones who can sense their divine auras. Thought they haven't appeared yet, WordOfGod is that real angels exist in the setting, and that they have no individual personalities or free will and would vanish from existence the moment they were cut off from their god.
* PowerTattoo: The Tribes derive their magical abilities by tattooing unique runes on their bodies, usually on the face.
* ScienceFantasy: Let's start with the fact that our heroine is an [[ArtificialHuman artificial]] alien [[OurAngelsAreDifferent angel]] and go from there...
* TheMagicComesBack: Due to Earth's decreasing mana density, magic users and fantasy creatures were much rarer before the LeyLine hit.
* TheMaze: Navigating one is the first trial at Saint Scarlet's. The InfiniteCanvas is used to show just how huge it is.
