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* AmazingTechnicolorBattlefield: When fighting the bizarre thing that emerged from the meat grinder.
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* AmazingTechnicolorBattlefield: When fighting the bizarre thing that emerged from the meat grinder.Glumdroodler.
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* CrossOver: With the "Burgrr" cast. Although it and Awful Hospital are now a part of the same fictional universe, until now their separate elements never commingled.
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* CrossOver: With the "Burgrr" cast. Although it and Awful Hospital are now a part of the same fictional universe, until now their separate elements had never before commingled.
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* Crossoveer: With the "Burgrr" cast. Although it and Awful Hospital are now a part of the same fictional universe, until now their separate elements never commingled.
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* Crossoveer: CrossOver: With the "Burgrr" cast. Although it and Awful Hospital are now a part of the same fictional universe, until now their separate elements never commingled.
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* Crossoveer: With the "Burgrr" cast. Although it and Awful Hospital are now a part of the same fictional universe, until now their separate elements never commingled.
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* AmazingTechnicolorBattlefield: When fighting the bizarre thing that emerged from the meat grinder.
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* ChainOfDeals: With the patients at the hospital, the traded items ranged from bleeding skulls to ''malaria''.
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** Same with Burgrr employee [=BBQ=] Girll.
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* FetchQuest: Parodied twice, the second time with a montage.
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* GlamourFailure: [[spoiler: During [=BBQ=] Girll's betrayal, holding the mouse over her face reveals her actual form.]]
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* BlueAndOrangeMorality: Pretty much everyone the protagonist has encountered, and most of the comments section, as well.
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** Until they started trying to get her to sleep with the giant, rotten hamburger.
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The comic is ongoing and updated daily, typically with one to three pages of content each day. Similar to MSPaintAdventures and other InteractiveComic[=s=], the comic takes on a vertical panel format with descriptive text and dialogue appearing below, and viewers can use the comment section below to make suggestions not just for what the main character does, but what she can say to other characters as well.
well - this manifests in-universe as voices she's been hearing since she woke up.
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** The voices of the players themselves. Some are legitimately trying to help the protagonist survive, but some are just trying to get her to fulfill their desires.
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* AmbiguouslyEvil: pretty much ''everyone'' and ''everything'' save for Ms. Green:
** The medical staff is just trying to do its job, but we still don't know why they're keeping Ms. Green in the Hospital. Phage, however, seems ObliviouslyEvil thanks to his inflated ego, general incompetence, and his position as head of the Hospital.
** The Mother Pissrock [[spoiler:[[MonsterIsAMommy Is A Mommy]]]], but is also pretty violent about this.
** Dr. Man's alignment was debated from the very moment he appeared, thanks to being an UncannyValley human in a land of alien creatures.
** The ''Burgrr'' is pretty affable... when not "at work", that is.
** The medical staff is just trying to do its job, but we still don't know why they're keeping Ms. Green in the Hospital. Phage, however, seems ObliviouslyEvil thanks to his inflated ego, general incompetence, and his position as head of the Hospital.
** The Mother Pissrock [[spoiler:[[MonsterIsAMommy Is A Mommy]]]], but is also pretty violent about this.
** Dr. Man's alignment was debated from the very moment he appeared, thanks to being an UncannyValley human in a land of alien creatures.
** The ''Burgrr'' is pretty affable... when not "at work", that is.
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* AnthropomorphicFood: The hospital chef is a huge, rotting hamburger.
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* AnthropomorphicFood: The hospital chef is Harmburger of ''Burgrr'' fame, a huge, rotting hamburger.
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* DeconstructedTrope: Specifically, the InteractiveComic trope itself. The readers suggesting commands are not abstractions and are very real and powerful beings of an unknown nature according to WordOfGod. After so many people tell Ms. Green to [[CrackPairing seduce the hamburger]], it actually happens very briefly against her will, so when she snaps out of it, [[spoiler:she completely ceases to let them control her and in fact changes the narration from second-person to first-person, blocking the involvement of the readers completely.]]
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* DeconstructedTrope: Specifically, the InteractiveComic trope itself. The readers suggesting commands are not abstractions and are very real and powerful beings of an unknown nature according to WordOfGod. After so many people tell Ms. Green to [[CrackPairing seduce the hamburger]], Harmburger]], it actually happens very briefly against her will, so when she snaps out of it, [[spoiler:she completely ceases to let them control her and in fact changes the narration from second-person to first-person, blocking the involvement of the readers completely.]]
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* DatingSim/RomanceGame: Parodied very briefly after a mass amount of suggestions regarding a CrackPairing.
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* DatingSim/RomanceGame: DatingSim[=/=]RomanceGame: Parodied very briefly after a mass amount of suggestions regarding a CrackPairing.
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* AudienceParticipation: Reader comments help to determine what Ms. Green will do next.
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* AudienceParticipation: Reader comments help to determine what Ms. Green will do next.
* DatingSim/RomanceGame: Parodied very briefly after a mass amount of suggestions regarding a CrackPairing.
* DeconstructedTrope: Specifically, the InteractiveComic trope itself. The readers suggesting commands are not abstractions and are very real and powerful beings of an unknown nature according to WordOfGod. After so many people tell Ms. Green to [[CrackPairing seduce the hamburger]], it actually happens very briefly against her will, so when she snaps out of it, [[spoiler:she completely ceases to let them control her and in fact changes the narration from second-person to first-person, blocking the involvement of the readers completely.]]
* EldritchAbomination: [[spoiler:Most everything in The Abyss is likely this. Depending on the in-universe nature of the readers, [[WordOfGod which will apparently not be revealed]], they may very well be this too.]]
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* TheFourthWallWillNotProtectYou: The [[spoiler:X-ray skeleton]] looks directly at the audience and makes a "sshh" motion before attacking Ms. Green.
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* TheFourthWallWillNotProtectYou: The [[spoiler:X-ray skeleton]] looks directly at the audience and makes a "sshh" motion before attacking Ms. Green. Green.
** According to WordOfGod, [[spoiler:the in-universe beings who the readers and commentators represent influence humans in our world, as in ''us'', as well, it's just a lot less noticeable here.]]
** According to WordOfGod, [[spoiler:the in-universe beings who the readers and commentators represent influence humans in our world, as in ''us'', as well, it's just a lot less noticeable here.]]
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* ArtShift: Ms. Green's design suddenly becomes [[Animesque]] for a few panels when the comic temporarily turns into a dating sim.
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* ArtShift: Ms. Green's design suddenly becomes [[Animesque]] {{Animesque}} for a few panels when the comic temporarily turns into a dating sim.
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* Anthropomorphic food: AnthropomorphicFood: The hospital chef is a huge, rotting hamburger.hamburger.
* ArtShift: Ms. Green's design suddenly becomes [[Animesque]] for a few panels when the comic temporarily turns into a dating sim.
* ArtShift: Ms. Green's design suddenly becomes [[Animesque]] for a few panels when the comic temporarily turns into a dating sim.
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* Anthropomorphic food: The hospital chef is a huge, rotting hamburger.
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** WhatTheHellHero: She rants at the audience after snapping out of a forced DatingSim-like scene with an (uncomfortable) Harmburger.
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** WhatTheHellHero: WhatTheHellPlayer: She rants at the audience after snapping out of a forced DatingSim-like scene with an (uncomfortable) Harmburger.
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* PunnyName: Pretty much everyone besides the protagonist.
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* [[RageAgainstTheAuthor Rage Against The Commenters]]: Ms. Green has the last word on viewers' suggestions, and she did '''not''' appreciate being ordered to do a FetchQuest. [[spoiler:Too bad that her decision to disregard the voices and exit the patient ward causes her first death]].
** WhatTheHellHero: She rants at the audience after snapping out of a forced DatingSim-like scene with an (uncomfortable) Harmburger.
** WhatTheHellHero: She rants at the audience after snapping out of a forced DatingSim-like scene with an (uncomfortable) Harmburger.
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* CrackPairing: After one person jokingly requested that she seduce him, the pairing Ms. Greene/Harmburger became inexplicably popular with fans. Harmburger is a festering, rotten anthropomorphic sandwich creature.
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* SweatDrop: done [[http://www.bogleech.com/awfulhospital/124.html here]] with, of all things, an azure drop-shaped slug.
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* CrackPairing: After one person jokingly requested that she seduce him, the pairing Ms. Greene/Harmburger became inexplicably popular with fans. Harmburger is a festering, rotten anthropomorphic sandwich creature.
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** Played with in that while Dr. Circula Tori behaves as if she has only the faintest idea what she's doing (and even leaves her ID card in Mrs. Green's chest), she's ''brought her back from death twice so far.''
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** [[spoiler:It appears that, overall, the hospital setting is a distinct place floating in an endless black void that is populated by at least hundreds of gargantuan [[EldritchAbomination Eldritch Abominations]]. According to Scythe, this is the area between Zones.]]
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* JackOfAllStats: Conversing with [[spoiler:Dr. Man]] implies that [[spoiler:the staff at the hospital are trying their best to cure their patients; in fact, they're some of the most talented medical professionals inside their native zones. It's just that they deal with patients from ALL zones, and they're unfamiliar with the biology of most of them, making mistakes constantly in their attempts to treat them. Dr. Man likens it to a human neurosurgeon who has to operate on an octopus.]]
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** [[spoiler:It appears that, overall, the hospital setting is a distinct place floating in an endless black void that is populated by at least hundreds of gargantuan [[EldritchAbomination Eldritch Abominations]]. According to Scythe, this is the area between Zones, or dimensions.]]
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** [[spoiler:It appears that, overall, the hospital setting is a distinct place floating in an endless black void that is populated by at least hundreds of gargantuan [[EldritchAbomination Eldritch Abominations]]. According to Scythe, this is the area between Zones, or dimensions.Zones.]]
