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* EscapeFromTheCrazyPlace: Ms. Green's ultimate goal, after finding her son of course.
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* DissonantSerenity: Dr. Man's smile never waves.
* EscapeFromTheCrazyPlace: Ms. Green's ultimate goal, after finding her son of course.
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* EscapeFromTheCrazyPlace: Ms. Green's ultimate goal, after finding her son of course.
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* NoNameGiven: The protagonist, hence the FanNickname "Ms. Green". Green".
* NothingIsScarier: Dr. Man, at least from what little we've seen of him, is what appears to be a normal human doctor. He's a bit odd-looking for a human, but not unrealistically, and compared to everything else in the hospital he's incredibly ordinary. After all that's come before, ''being relatively normal'' is what makes him scary. As a commenter mentioned, "He's too normal. I don't like this."
* NothingIsScarier: Dr. Man, at least from what little we've seen of him, is what appears to be a normal human doctor. He's a bit odd-looking for a human, but not unrealistically, and compared to everything else in the hospital he's incredibly ordinary. After all that's come before, ''being relatively normal'' is what makes him scary. As a commenter mentioned, "He's too normal. I don't like this."
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** [[spoiler:It appears that, overall, the hospital setting is a distinct place floating in an endless black void that is populated by at least hundreds of gargantuan [[EldrichAbomination Eldrich Abominations]]. According to Scythe, this is the area between Zones, or dimensions.]]
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** [[spoiler:It appears that, overall, the hospital setting is a distinct place floating in an endless black void that is populated by at least hundreds of gargantuan [[EldrichAbomination Eldrich [[EldritchAbomination Eldritch Abominations]]. According to Scythe, this is the area between Zones, or dimensions.]]
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* AlienGeometries: During the conversation with Nobody Nose and later with Depressed Spleen, it's implied that The Hospital exists in another dimension seperate from ours, and that the building is all that exists within its own dimension.
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** [[spoiler]]It [[spoiler:It appears that, overall, the hospital setting is a distinct place floating in an endless black void that is populated by at least hundreds of [[EldrichAbomination gargantuan[[EldrichAbomination Eldrich Abominations]]. According to Scythe, this is the area between Zones, or dimensions.[[/spoiler]]]]
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** [[spoiler]]It appears that, overall, the hospital setting is a distinct place floating in an endless black void that is populated by at least hundreds of [[EldrichAbomination Eldrich Abominations]]. According to Scythe, this is the area between Zones, or dimensions.[[/spoiler]]
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* MeatgrinderSurgery: Head surgeon C. Tori operates on you with a spork and [[spoiler:drops her ID card into your chest cavity]]...but nonetheless manages to bring you successfully back to life.
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* AnimateBodyParts: The hospital is full of them.
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* FanNickname: Ms. Green for the protagonist.
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* WordOfGod: When people started to wonder who Ms. Green's baby's father was, the author [[http://bogleech.tumblr.com/post/96226831673/theres-been-an-ongoing-comment-debate-over said that]] Ms. Green was a single parent, and that the father wasn't important and wouldn't be plot relevant.
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* VisualPun: An apple in the hospital refrigerator is marked "DANGEROUS". Why? Because [[spoiler:an apple a day keeps the doctor away]].
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* WordOfGod: When people started to wonder who Ms. Green's baby's father was, the author [[http://bogleech.tumblr.com/post/96226831673/theres-been-an-ongoing-comment-debate-over said that]] Ms. Green was a single parent, and that the father wasn't important and wouldn't be plot relevant.
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* MonsterIsAMommy: After Ms. Green helps Nobody Nose to get rid of his kidney stones, they are both attacked by the Kidney Stone Mother who wants revenge for the death of her children. Trying to politely inform her that kidney stones usually aren't living creatures does nothing to cool her down.
-->'''Kidney Stone Mother :''' "I AM GOING TO PLUCK OUT YOUR SIGHT-BALLS AND TWIST OFF YOUR BRANCHES BEFORE MY LITTLE ONES DRAG [Ms. Green's baby] HERE AND YOU WILL LISTEN TO ITS PATHETIC LITTLE SQUEALS AS A BILLION BROODS RIP IT INSIDE OUT A BILLION TIMES BEFORE I LET IT DIE. "
-->'''Kidney Stone Mother :''' "I AM GOING TO PLUCK OUT YOUR SIGHT-BALLS AND TWIST OFF YOUR BRANCHES BEFORE MY LITTLE ONES DRAG [Ms. Green's baby] HERE AND YOU WILL LISTEN TO ITS PATHETIC LITTLE SQUEALS AS A BILLION BROODS RIP IT INSIDE OUT A BILLION TIMES BEFORE I LET IT DIE. "
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* InfiniteCanvas: Used effectively to convey the sheer scale of [[spoiler:The Abyss]].
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** YouWakeUpInARoom: A very dirty hospital room, to be exact.
** YouWakeUpInARoom: A very dirty hospital room, to be exact.
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** UnfazedEveryman: As Ms. Green gets used to the casual morbidity and cartoon logic of the hospital.
* PortalDoor: The "out of order" door that leads to [[spoiler: The Abyss]].
* PortalDoor: The "out of order" door that leads to [[spoiler: The Abyss]].
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* TheFourthWallWillNotProtectYou: The [[spoiler:X-ray skeleton]] looks directly at the audience and makes a "sshh" motion before attacking Ms. Green.
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* NeckSnap: [[spoiler:Ms. Green's death at the hands of the X-ray skeleton. This being the hospital, she gets better.]]
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* {{Determinator}}: Ms. Green, fighting her way through incomprehensible weirdness to get her kid back.
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* MamaBear: Ms. Green takes out a ''giant kidney stone monster'' after it threatens her baby.
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* DeathIsASlapOnTheWrist: The doctors will happily fix you up, free of charge. [[spoiler:Though there will be "accidents", to not talk about [[FinalDeath what happens if you die]] "outside of the hospital"...]]
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* BowTiesAreCool: Dr. Phage has an impressive collection.
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The comic stars a nameless mother with a sick baby, whose condition had gotten progressively worse no matter what she tried. After her latest desperate attempt at saving her baby, she wakes up in a strange, twisted hospital of nightmarishly cartoonish design, run by the dangerously inept and insufferably egotistical Dr. H.M. Phage, a giant talking virus. She must face dangerously inept doctors, impossible alien physics, and talking body parts who spout terrible puns in her desperate search for her baby's whereabouts.
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* EyeScream: How the protagonist defeats the Kidney Stone Mother.
* FanNickname: Ms. Green for the protagonist.
* HonestJohnsDealership: The Crooked Spine and his questionable wares.
* FanNickname: Ms. Green for the protagonist.
* HonestJohnsDealership: The Crooked Spine and his questionable wares.
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* SceneryGorn: UselessSpleen: Discussed by the Depressed Spleen.
--> "'''DEPRESSED SPLEEN:''' All I can really hope for around here is a good solid blood disease, not that there's any even unique to a spleen. Oh no, you get a blood disease, therooms in whole system starts to shut down, doesn't it? The last thing anybody talks about is what happens to your spleen. Even if you need a splenectomy, they don't even bother giving you a new one. They don't have to. Waste of money. You can't even really die just from a lack of spleen. Even the hospital are filthy, poorly-lit and cartoonishly designed.appendix got a better deal; at least that can explode."
--> "'''DEPRESSED SPLEEN:''' All I can really hope for around here is a good solid blood disease, not that there's any even unique to a spleen. Oh no, you get a blood disease, the
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The comic stars a nameless mother with a sick baby, whose condition had gotten progressively worse no matter what she tried. After her latest desperate attempt at saving er baby, she wakes up in a strange, twisted hospital of nightmarishly cartoonish design, run by the dangerously inept and insufferably egotistical Dr. H.M. Phage. Dr. Phage is a giant talking virus She must face dangerously inept doctors, impossible alien physics, and talking body parts who spout terrible puns in her desperate search for her baby's whereabouts.
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The comic stars a nameless mother with a sick baby, whose condition had gotten progressively worse no matter what she tried. After her latest desperate attempt at saving er her baby, she wakes up in a strange, twisted hospital of nightmarishly cartoonish design, run by the dangerously inept and insufferably egotistical Dr. H.M. Phage. Dr. Phage is Phage, a giant talking virus virus. She must face dangerously inept doctors, impossible alien physics, and talking body parts who spout terrible puns in her desperate search for her baby's whereabouts.
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Full title '''Awful Hospital: ''Seriously the Worst Ever''''', ''Awful Hospital'' is an interactive webcomic by Jonathan "Tropers/{{Scythemantis}}" Wojcik.
The comic stars a nameless mother with a sick baby, whose condition had gotten progressively worse no matter what she tried. After her latest desperate attempt at saving er baby, she wakes up in a strange, twisted hospital of nightmarishly cartoonish design, run by the dangerously inept and insufferably egotistical Dr. H.M. Phage. Dr. Phage is a giant talking virus She must face dangerously inept doctors, impossible alien physics, and talking body parts who spout terrible puns in her desperate search for her baby's whereabouts.
The comic is ongoing and updated daily, typically with one to three pages of content each day. Similar to MSPaintAdventures, the comic takes on a vertical panel format with descriptive text and dialogue appearing below. The content of the comic itself is user-generated: viewers can use the comment section below to make suggestions not just for what the main character does, but what she can say to other characters as well.
Can be found [[http://www.bogleech.com/awfulhospital/intro.html here.]] Updates can be followed via Dr. Phage's twitter feed [[https://twitter.com/awfulhospital here]].
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*AbandonedHospital: Subverted- the Hospital in question appears to be abandoned at first due to how dirty and disused everything looks, but once Dr. Phage shows up it's clear that the hospital does have a working staff. Granted, there only seem to be about four people on staff, but still.
*AlienGeometries: During the conversation with Nobody Nose and later with Depressed Spleen, it's implied that The Hospital exists in another dimension seperate from ours, and that the building is all that exists within its own dimension.
*BackAlleyDoctor: None of the doctors seem to have any idea what they're doing, or how the human body works. At one point a nurse is performing surgery on you with a ''spork''.
*DeadpanSnarker: Pretty much everything Depressed Spleen says is either sarcastic, depressing, or both.
*NaughtyNurseOutfit: The Nurse wears sexy, short-skirted scrubs... although her "sexiness" is debatable, seeing as how her outfit is stained with blood. And she's literally nothing but a humanoid cluster of blood vessels with eyes.
*MonsterClown: Gooey Pink Eyes is revealed to be suffering from a strange plague of tiny, flea-sized clowns.
*OmnidisciplinaryScientist: Dr. Phage describes himself as the "chief physician, radiologist, surgeon, pathologist, pathogen, immunologist, urologist, gynaecologist, [[{{Squick}} reverse gynaecologist]], taxidermist, dentist, forensic entomologist, necrobiological reconstructionist, herbalist, fashionist and twin-core husk intersector licensed in all chromatic, material and hypothetical perception zones."
*TalkingPest: Dr. Phage is a giant, talking bacteriophage.
*SceneryGorn: All the rooms in the hospital are filthy, poorly-lit and cartoonishly designed.
*WakingUpElsewhere: The nameless mother starts out waking up not in her own bed, but the hospital bed. It might classify as AbandonedHospitalAwakening, but as previously stated, The Hospital is anything but.
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The comic stars a nameless mother with a sick baby, whose condition had gotten progressively worse no matter what she tried. After her latest desperate attempt at saving er baby, she wakes up in a strange, twisted hospital of nightmarishly cartoonish design, run by the dangerously inept and insufferably egotistical Dr. H.M. Phage. Dr. Phage is a giant talking virus She must face dangerously inept doctors, impossible alien physics, and talking body parts who spout terrible puns in her desperate search for her baby's whereabouts.
The comic is ongoing and updated daily, typically with one to three pages of content each day. Similar to MSPaintAdventures, the comic takes on a vertical panel format with descriptive text and dialogue appearing below. The content of the comic itself is user-generated: viewers can use the comment section below to make suggestions not just for what the main character does, but what she can say to other characters as well.
Can be found [[http://www.bogleech.com/awfulhospital/intro.html here.]] Updates can be followed via Dr. Phage's twitter feed [[https://twitter.com/awfulhospital here]].
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*AbandonedHospital: Subverted- the Hospital in question appears to be abandoned at first due to how dirty and disused everything looks, but once Dr. Phage shows up it's clear that the hospital does have a working staff. Granted, there only seem to be about four people on staff, but still.
*AlienGeometries: During the conversation with Nobody Nose and later with Depressed Spleen, it's implied that The Hospital exists in another dimension seperate from ours, and that the building is all that exists within its own dimension.
*BackAlleyDoctor: None of the doctors seem to have any idea what they're doing, or how the human body works. At one point a nurse is performing surgery on you with a ''spork''.
*DeadpanSnarker: Pretty much everything Depressed Spleen says is either sarcastic, depressing, or both.
*NaughtyNurseOutfit: The Nurse wears sexy, short-skirted scrubs... although her "sexiness" is debatable, seeing as how her outfit is stained with blood. And she's literally nothing but a humanoid cluster of blood vessels with eyes.
*MonsterClown: Gooey Pink Eyes is revealed to be suffering from a strange plague of tiny, flea-sized clowns.
*OmnidisciplinaryScientist: Dr. Phage describes himself as the "chief physician, radiologist, surgeon, pathologist, pathogen, immunologist, urologist, gynaecologist, [[{{Squick}} reverse gynaecologist]], taxidermist, dentist, forensic entomologist, necrobiological reconstructionist, herbalist, fashionist and twin-core husk intersector licensed in all chromatic, material and hypothetical perception zones."
*TalkingPest: Dr. Phage is a giant, talking bacteriophage.
*SceneryGorn: All the rooms in the hospital are filthy, poorly-lit and cartoonishly designed.
*WakingUpElsewhere: The nameless mother starts out waking up not in her own bed, but the hospital bed. It might classify as AbandonedHospitalAwakening, but as previously stated, The Hospital is anything but.
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