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* HomoeroticDream: Gil has a [[https://www.avasdemon.com/2407.html vivid, tender]] dream about Odin, though it's unclear whether it's a sign of personal interest, Nevy [[EmotionControl influencing his emotions]] with her own feelings [[spoiler:for Pedri]], or a bit of both.
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* WinterOfStarvation: Odin's home planet was condemned to EndlessWinter when its sun collapsed into a black hole, setting off brutal wars to claim its dwindling resources.
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* DoesNotLikeShoes: Wrathia is an example of the "too important to walk anywhere she might need them" variation. This carries over into the [[FusionDance Wrava]] form.
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* OffModel: Occasionally characters will have 4 fingers instead of 5.
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* AnAxeToGrind: When Wrathia's potion sends Ava into a rage-fueled SuperMode, she brings out [[http://www.avasdemon.com/1466.php this]].
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* TheConqueror: TITAN. Yes his name is always entirely in uppercase.
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* DoubleEntendre:
** "Yeah, I'll put honey in your [[http://www.avasdemon.com/pages.php#0357 tea]]."
** "Yeah, I'll put honey in your [[http://www.avasdemon.com/pages.php#0357 tea]]."
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* TheEmpire: TITAN and his "army".
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* ExactEavesDropping: Post-burning down Titan Headquarters, Ava overhears Maggie and Gil talking about all the destruction and everything about her.
* ExactWords: Wrathia tries to use this on Ava when they form a pact. [[http://www.avasdemon.com/pages.php#0275 Ava, however is not having any of it]].
* ExactWords: Wrathia tries to use this on Ava when they form a pact. [[http://www.avasdemon.com/pages.php#0275 Ava, however is not having any of it]].
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* ExoticEyeDesigns: While Ava's pupils are round, Maggie's are triangular, Odin's are square, Gil's are diamond-shaped, and Fira's are star-shaped. Disembodied spirits have cross-shaped ones.
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** ExoticEyeDesigns: While Ava's pupils are round, Maggie's are triangular, Odin's are square, Gil's are diamond-shaped, and Fira's are star-shaped. Disembodied spirits have cross-shaped ones.
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** Ava is ''Literature/AliceInWonderland''
** Gil is ''Literature/TheLittleMermaid''
** Given the flower imagery and how she reacts to being called a "monster", Maggie's seems to be ''Literature/BeautyAndTheBeast.''
** Gil is ''Literature/TheLittleMermaid''
** Given the flower imagery and how she reacts to being called a "monster", Maggie's seems to be ''Literature/BeautyAndTheBeast.''
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* IdentityAmnesia: Nevy. None of the other demons shown so far have it, though.
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* LetsGetDangerous: [[http://www.avasdemon.com/pages.php#0890 Tuls and Maggie.]] Dating is SeriousBusiness.
** When Ava finally drinks the potion given to her by Wrathia. [[http://www.avasdemon.com/pages.php#1345 Hoo boy.]]
** When Ava finally drinks the potion given to her by Wrathia. [[http://www.avasdemon.com/pages.php#1345 Hoo boy.]]
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* LoserProtagonist: Ava's one former friend thinks she is crazy and hates her guts now. Because of Wrathia's frequent possessions which get Ava into trouble, she is eventually expelled to a [[http://www.avasdemon.com/pages.php#0022 "Special Needs" child containment planet]].
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* LoserProtagonist: Ava's one former friend thinks she is crazy and hates her guts now. Because of Wrathia's frequent possessions which get Ava into trouble, she is eventually expelled to a [[http://www.avasdemon.com/pages.php#0022 "Special Needs" child containment planet]].planet.
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* MeaningfulName: All of the character's last names have a meaning to them.
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* RoomFullOfCrazy: Tuls' abode has a little bit of this.
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* SayMyName: The [[http://www.avasdemon.com/pages.php#0947 "I am genuinely surprised to see you,"]] variant.
** And then later on, the [[http://www.avasdemon.com/pages.php#1528 "What the hell are you doing,"]] variant.
** And then later on, the [[http://www.avasdemon.com/pages.php#1528 "What the hell are you doing,"]] variant.
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* SugarBowl: Maggie's MentalWorld is filled with [[PlantPerson talking flowers]] and [[OurFairiesAreDifferent little green pixies]] that [[SatelliteCharacter constantly flatter her and make her]] [[CoolCrown flower crowns...]] [[ExtremeDoormat no matter how much]] [[KillTheCutie she crushes them with her bare hands.]]
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* SugarBowl: Maggie's MentalWorld is filled with [[PlantPerson talking flowers]] and [[OurFairiesAreDifferent little green pixies]] that [[SatelliteCharacter constantly flatter her and make her]] [[CoolCrown flower crowns...]] crowns]]... [[ExtremeDoormat no matter how much]] [[KillTheCutie she crushes them with her bare hands.]]
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* TemptingFate: A Follower unknowingly does it [[http://www.avasdemon.com/pages.php#1287 here on page 1287.]] What happens next is [[NightmareFuel horrifying.]]
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* WhamEpisode: When the ship crashes and Ava is impaled on a statue, killing her.
** [[http://www.avasdemon.com/pages.php#0947 Maggie meets Ava]] in Maggie's MentalWorld.
** [[http://www.avasdemon.com/pages.php#1288 A follower is made.]]
** [[http://www.avasdemon.com/pages.php#1490 Maggie exposes herself to save Gil.]]
** [[http://www.avasdemon.com/1546.php Wrava's rampage. No wonder Wraithia and her followers once ruled.]]
** [[http://www.avasdemon.com/pages.php#1752 The update for Pages 1752-1766.]] Wrathia, Predi, and implicitly the other demons are ''much'' larger than we thought, and TITAN is even ''bigger'' than them. Also, TITAN has his first lines in the comic.
** [[http://www.avasdemon.com/pages.php#2272 Odin reveals his sister is a Vessel.]]
* WhamShot: [[http://www.avasdemon.com/0762.php Observe.]]
** [[http://www.avasdemon.com/pages.php#1108 Observe again.]]
** [[http://www.avasdemon.com/pages.php#0947 Maggie meets Ava]] in Maggie's MentalWorld.
** [[http://www.avasdemon.com/pages.php#1288 A follower is made.]]
** [[http://www.avasdemon.com/pages.php#1490 Maggie exposes herself to save Gil.]]
** [[http://www.avasdemon.com/1546.php Wrava's rampage. No wonder Wraithia and her followers once ruled.]]
** [[http://www.avasdemon.com/pages.php#1752 The update for Pages 1752-1766.]] Wrathia, Predi, and implicitly the other demons are ''much'' larger than we thought, and TITAN is even ''bigger'' than them. Also, TITAN has his first lines in the comic.
** [[http://www.avasdemon.com/pages.php#2272 Odin reveals his sister is a Vessel.]]
* WhamShot: [[http://www.avasdemon.com/0762.php Observe.]]
** [[http://www.avasdemon.com/pages.php#1108 Observe again.]]
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* SugarBowl: Maggie's MentalWorld is a fusion of this and TheLostWoods. It's filled with [[PlantPerson talking flowers]] and [[OurFairiesAreDifferent little green pixies]] that [[SatelliteCharacter constantly flatter her and make her]] [[CoolCrown flower crowns...]] [[ExtremeDoormat no matter how much]] [[KillTheCutie she crushes them with her bare hands.]]
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* SugarBowl: Maggie's MentalWorld is a fusion of this and TheLostWoods. It's filled with [[PlantPerson talking flowers]] and [[OurFairiesAreDifferent little green pixies]] that [[SatelliteCharacter constantly flatter her and make her]] [[CoolCrown flower crowns...]] [[ExtremeDoormat no matter how much]] [[KillTheCutie she crushes them with her bare hands.]]
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Three days later...
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Currently on hiatus. The first page can be found [[http://www.avasdemon.com/pages.php#0001 here]] and the author's blog [[http://avasdemon.tumblr.com/ here]]. It is also available to read on [[https://m.webtoons.com/en/challenge/avas-demon-/list?title_no=349705&page=1&webtoon-platform-redirect=true Webtoons]].
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Updates every Thursday. The first page can be found [[http://www.avasdemon.com/pages.php#0001 here]] and the author's blog [[http://avasdemon.tumblr.com/ here]]. It is also available to read on [[https://m.webtoons.com/en/challenge/avas-demon-/list?title_no=349705&page=1&webtoon-platform-redirect=true Webtoons]].
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** As confirmed [[http://new.spring.me/#!/undefined/q/514959646990031154 here]] by the [[WordOfGod creator]] herself, souls that have made a pact trigger their powers when reacting with emotions such anger or embarrassment.
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** As confirmed [[http://new.spring.me/#!/undefined/q/514959646990031154 here]] by the [[WordOfGod creator]] herself, creator]], souls that have made a pact trigger their powers when reacting with emotions such anger or embarrassment.
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* AmbiguousSituation: It's currently unclear whether Gil and Odin knew each other at an earlier point in their lives, and at least one or both have forgotten, or if they're being affected by Nevy and Pedri's past memories, or ''both''. There's the hosts' crushes occasionally reflecting their "ghosts'", too, but there's more than a few indications that it's less the ghosts' "influence," and more their own (or, at least, current selves') feelings.
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* AmbiguousSituation: It's currently unclear whether Gil and Odin knew each other at an earlier point in their lives, and at least one or both have forgotten, or if they're being affected by Nevy and Pedri's past memories, or ''both''. There's the hosts' crushes occasionally reflecting their "ghosts'", too, but there's more than a few indications that it's less the ghosts' "influence," and more their own (or, feelings (Gil blushes at least, current selves') feelings.Odin during the time Nevy is KO'd, for example).
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* AmbiguousSituation: It's currently unclear whether Gil and Odin knew each other at an earlier point in their lives, and at least one or both have forgotten, or if they're being affected by Nevy and Pedri's past memories, or ''both''. There's the hosts' crushes occasionally reflecting their "ghosts'", too, but there's more than a few indications that it's less the ghosts' "influence," and more their own (or, at least, current selves') feelings.
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Updates every Thursday. The first page can be found [[http://www.avasdemon.com/pages.php#0001 here]] and the author's blog [[http://avasdemon.tumblr.com/ here]]. It is also available to read [[https://m.webtoons.com/en/challenge/avas-demon-/list?title_no=349705&page=1&webtoon-platform-redirect=true here]].
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Updates every Thursday. The first page can be found [[http://www.avasdemon.com/pages.php#0001 here]] and the author's blog [[http://avasdemon.tumblr.com/ here]]. It is also available to read on [[https://m.webtoons.com/en/challenge/avas-demon-/list?title_no=349705&page=1&webtoon-platform-redirect=true here]].
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Updates every Thursday. The first page can be found [[http://www.avasdemon.com/pages.php#0001 here]] and the author's blog [[http://avasdemon.tumblr.com/ here]].
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* MagicPotion: Wrathia makes a potion that binds the drinker's soul to the next being that is born in the universe upon the drinker's death.
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** [[http://www.avasdemon.com/pages.php#1715 While scolding Maggie,]] Gil lists off what she did wasn't very true to TITAN's rules. Little does does he know that TITAN's follows would break those rules to serve TITAN.
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** [[http://www.avasdemon.com/pages.php#1715 While scolding Maggie,]] Gil lists off what she did wasn't very true to TITAN's rules. Little does does he know that TITAN's follows would break those rules to serve TITAN.
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* DrunkOnTheDarkSide: Literally, in Ava's case. After she ingests the potion Wrathia gave her, she becomes so fuelled by the power and rage that she stops being scared and starts being furious. She proceeds to brutally massacre the followers of TITAN HQ. WordOfGod calls her Wrava in this state.
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* DreamSequence: Early on chapter 26, Gil has a dream where [[spoiler:he is on a beach with Odin and they kiss. It's unclear whether this is his ''actual'' dream or if he is seeing Nevy's memories, overlaying himself in her place and Odin in Pedri's.]]
* DrunkOnTheDarkSide: Literally, in Ava's case. After she ingests the potion Wrathia gave her, she becomes sofuelled fueled by the power and rage that she stops being scared and starts being furious. She proceeds to brutally massacre the followers of TITAN HQ. WordOfGod calls her Wrava in this state.
* DrunkOnTheDarkSide: Literally, in Ava's case. After she ingests the potion Wrathia gave her, she becomes so
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* DramaticIrony: [[http://www.avasdemon.com/pages.php#1715 While scolding Maggie,]] Gil lists off what she did wasn't very true to TITAN's rules. Little does does he know that TITAN's follows would break those rules to serve TITAN.
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* DramaticIrony: DramaticIrony:
** [[http://www.avasdemon.com/pages.php#1715 While scolding Maggie,]] Gil lists off what she did wasn't very true to TITAN's rules. Little does does he know that TITAN's follows would break those rules to serve TITAN.
** [[http://www.avasdemon.com/pages.php#1715 While scolding Maggie,]] Gil lists off what she did wasn't very true to TITAN's rules. Little does does he know that TITAN's follows would break those rules to serve TITAN.
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