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** Superstar, the girl who ignores Power Kid at the Meet & Greet, bears more than a passing resemblance to {{Supergirl}}.
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** Superstar, the girl who ignores Power Kid at the Meet & Greet, bears more than a passing resemblance to {{Supergirl}}.Comicbook/{{Supergirl}}.
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* AGlassInTheHand: Powerkid breaks his mug when Dark Cop says he did a background check on him. But, he only discovered that Powerkid's SuperStrength has a maximum of 9.875 times his own weight.
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* AGlassInTheHand: Powerkid breaks his mug when Dark Cop says he did a background check on him. But, he only discovered that Powerkid's SuperStrength has a maximum of 9.875 times his own weight.
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* FacePalm: Dark Cop
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* FacePalm: Dark CopCop, after he sees the third of the alternate costumes he has Powerkid try.
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* CostumeTestMontage: Of Dark Cop's alternative costumes to Powerkid's initial T-shirt.
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* FreezeFrameBonus: In the student database, every single student is signed up for the class "Reading and Writing 1".
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* FreezeFrameBonus: In the student database, every single student is signed up for the class "Reading and Writing 1".Whrighting 1" [sic.].
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* AGlassInTheHand: Powerkid breaks his mug when Dark Cop says he did a background check on him. But, he only discovered that Powerkid's SuperStrength has a maximum of 9.875 times his own weight.
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'''Super Academy''' is a short film written and directed by Ben Lifson about the young superhero [[FailOSuckyname Power Kid]] as he faces down all the challenges of being a freshman at college: no friends, weird schedules, [[BreadEggsMilkSquick supervillain dad trying to kill you...]] Oh yeah, forgot to mention that part, [[DarkSecret he's secretly the son of]] [[NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast Deathside the Conqueror]], a globally feared supervillain. That could make things weird.
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'''Super Academy''' is a short film written and directed by Ben Lifson about the young superhero [[FailOSuckyname Power Kid]] Kid as he faces down all the challenges of being a freshman at college: no friends, weird schedules, [[BreadEggsMilkSquick supervillain dad trying to kill you...]] Oh yeah, forgot to mention that part, [[DarkSecret he's secretly the son of]] [[NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast Deathside the Conqueror]], a globally feared supervillain. That could make things weird.
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** Dark Cop is a dead ringer for a college aged {{Batman}}.
** Gothel is a female {{Batman}}, for added weirdness and hilarity.
** Power Kid is quite clearly {{Superman}}
** Deathside, due to a mishap involving costume acquisition, essentially IS [[TheDarkKnightRises Bane]]. However, his voice just screams [[TeenTitans Slade]].
** Gothel is a female {{Batman}}, for added weirdness and hilarity.
** Power Kid is quite clearly {{Superman}}
** Deathside, due to a mishap involving costume acquisition, essentially IS [[TheDarkKnightRises Bane]]. However, his voice just screams [[TeenTitans Slade]].
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** Dark Cop is a dead ringer for a college aged {{Batman}}.
Franchise/{{Batman}}.
** Gothel is a female{{Batman}}, Franchise/{{Batman}}, for added weirdness and hilarity.
** Power Kid is quite clearly{{Superman}}
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** Deathside, due to a mishap involving costume acquisition, essentially IS[[TheDarkKnightRises [[Film/TheDarkKnightRises Bane]]. However, his voice just screams [[TeenTitans Slade]].
** Gothel is a female
** Power Kid is quite clearly
** Deathside, due to a mishap involving costume acquisition, essentially IS
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'''Super Academy''' is a short film written and directed by Ben Lifson about the young superhero [[FailOSuckyname Power Kid]] as he faces down all the challenges of being a freshman at college: no friends, weird schedules, [[BreadEggsMilkSquick supervillain dad trying to kill you...]] Oh yeah, forgot to mention that part, [[DarkSecret he's secretly the son of]] Deathside the Conqueror, a globally feared supervillain. That could make things weird.
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'''Super Academy''' is a short film written and directed by Ben Lifson about the young superhero [[FailOSuckyname Power Kid]] as he faces down all the challenges of being a freshman at college: no friends, weird schedules, [[BreadEggsMilkSquick supervillain dad trying to kill you...]] Oh yeah, forgot to mention that part, [[DarkSecret he's secretly the son of]] [[NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast Deathside the Conqueror, Conqueror]], a globally feared supervillain. That could make things weird.
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* ThrowItIn: Acording to the creators, of Dark Cop's commentary on why Power Kid's costume is terrible was made up on the spot by the actor, Beck DeRoberts.
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* ThrowItIn: Acording [[WordOfGod According to the creators, creators]], much of Dark Cop's commentary on why Power Kid's costume is terrible was made up on the spot by the actor, Beck DeRoberts.[=DeRobertis=].
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* ThrowItIn: Most of Dark Cop's commentary on why Power Kid's costume is terrible was made up on the spot by Beck [=DeRoberts=].
** In a far more unfortunate example, Darkside looking like Bane was the result of a mishandled delivery of his original costume. Ben decided to just roll with it and make the look as close as possible.
** In a far more unfortunate example, Darkside looking like Bane was the result of a mishandled delivery of his original costume. Ben decided to just roll with it and make the look as close as possible.
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* ThrowItIn: Most Acording to the creators, of Dark Cop's commentary on why Power Kid's costume is terrible was made up on the spot by the actor, Beck [=DeRoberts=].
** In a far more unfortunate example, Darkside looking like Bane was the result of a mishandled delivery of his original costume. Ben decided to just roll with it and make the look as close as possible.DeRoberts.
** In a far more unfortunate example, Darkside looking like Bane was the result of a mishandled delivery of his original costume. Ben decided to just roll with it and make the look as close as possible.
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Ben hopes to make the short film a sort of pilot episode for a new [=YouTube=] series, the Kickstarter for which is [[http://www.kickstarter.com/projects/benlifson/super-academy-a-superhero-comedy-webseries?ref=live found here]].
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-->--'''Powerkid''' filming his aplication.''
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-->--'''Powerkid''' filming his aplication.application.''
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"If you don't leave by tomorrow morning, I will make sure everyone here [[DarkSecret knows who you really are.]] And when they find out the truth... they ''will'' destroy you."
-->'''[[NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast Deathside the Conqueror]]'''
"That might just be ''the worst'' [[StylisticSuck piece of clothing every conceived.]]" {{Beat}} "I'm sorry, I was just agreeing with you."
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-->'''[[NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast Deathside the Conqueror]]'''
"That might just be ''the worst'' [[StylisticSuck piece of clothing every conceived.]]" {{Beat}} "I'm sorry, I was just agreeing with you."
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-->'''[[NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast Deathside the Conqueror]]'''
"That might just be ''the worst'' [[StylisticSuck piece
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-->--'''Powerkid''' filming his aplication.''
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Ben hopes to make the short film a sort of pilot episode for a new [=YouTube=] series, so watch this space.
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Ben hopes to make the short film a sort of pilot episode for a new [=YouTube=] series, so watch this space.
the Kickstarter for which is [[http://www.kickstarter.com/projects/benlifson/super-academy-a-superhero-comedy-webseries?ref=live found here]].
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You can see the "pilot" [[http://vimeo.com/69426387 here]].
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You can see the "pilot" [[http://vimeo.com/69426387 here]] and [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OHFfn83vVfY here]].
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* ChekovsGun: Everything Dark Cop owns has a miniature tracking device.
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* ChekovsGun: ChekhovsGun: Everything Dark Cop owns has a miniature tracking device.
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* CreatorCameo: Ben appears as [[TheDanza "Blifson the Clown"]], whose sole role is to be the victim of Dark Cops EstablishingCharacterMoment.
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* CreatorCameo: Ben appears as [[TheDanza "Blifson the Clown"]], whose sole role is to [[DeathByCameo be the victim victim]] of Dark Cops EstablishingCharacterMoment.
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* AwesomeButImpractical: Mild example in Dark Cop's outfit. Looks badass, but is exhausting to attempt even moderately exerting physical activity in [[spoiler: and doesn't offer much protection from Super Strong villains with a bone to pick]].
-->'''Dark Cop:''' *fighting for breath* "''GOD'' this thing's hard to run in!"
-->'''Dark Cop:''' *fighting for breath* "''GOD'' this thing's hard to run in!"
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'''[[NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast Deathside the Conqueror]]:''' "If you don't leave by tomorrow morning, I will make sure everyone here [[DarkSecret knows who you really are.]] And when they find out the truth... they ''will'' destroy you."
'''Dark Cop''': "That might just be ''the worst'' [[StylisticSuck piece of clothing every conceived.]]" {{Beat}} "I'm sorry, I was just agreeing with you."
'''Dark Cop''': "That might just be ''the worst'' [[StylisticSuck piece of clothing every conceived.]]" {{Beat}} "I'm sorry, I was just agreeing with you."
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'''Dark Cop''':
-->'''[[NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast Deathside the Conqueror]]'''
"That might just be ''the worst'' [[StylisticSuck piece of clothing every conceived.]]" {{Beat}} "I'm sorry, I was just agreeing with you."
-->'''Dark Cop'''
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* AmbiguousDisorder: DC has a somewhat flat facial expression, oddly monotone voice and trouble reading social situations.
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* AmbiguousDisorder: DC has a somewhat flat facial expression, an oddly monotone voice voice, exhibits antisocial behavior and has trouble reading social situations.
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* AsHimself: Blifson is credited this way.
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* CreatorCameo: Ben appears as "Blifson the Clown", whose sole role is to be the victim of Dark Cops EstablishingCharacterMoment.
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* CreatorCameo: Ben appears as [[TheDanza "Blifson the Clown", Clown"]], whose sole role is to be the victim of Dark Cops EstablishingCharacterMoment.
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** He also is the voice of the guy who freaks out when Power Kid starts pulling the car.
* DawsonCasting: Power Kid is 19 and Dark Cop is likely slightly older, being a sophomore. Ted Femrite and Beck [=DeRoberts=] are both in their mid-twenties.
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** Dark Cop is a dead ringer for a college aged {{Batman}}, albeit without Bruce's ludicrous funds.
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** Dark Cop is a dead ringer for a college aged {{Batman}}, albeit without Bruce's ludicrous funds.{{Batman}}.
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** Deathside, due to a mishap involving costume acquisition, essentially IS [[TheDarkKnightRises Bane]]. However, his default voice just screams [[TeenTitans Slade]].
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** Deathside, due to a mishap involving costume acquisition, essentially IS [[TheDarkKnightRises Bane]]. However, his default voice just screams [[TeenTitans Slade]].
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* NaiveNewcomer: Power Kid
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* ShakyCam: Occurs when Power Kid begins demonstrating his SuperStrength and his cameraman freaks out.
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* SuperStrength: Power Kid's primary power.
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* IncrediblyLamePun: Two, from Starburst.
--> '''Starburst:''' "...and so Mummy Man says, 'I guess that WRAPS things up!"
--> '''Starburst:''' "So I saved the day... yesterday!"
--> '''Starburst:''' "...and so Mummy Man says, 'I guess that WRAPS things up!"
--> '''Starburst:''' "So I saved the day... yesterday!"
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* SomethingPerson: Power Kid is, surprisingly, the sole example we see.
** Starburst does mention a Mummy Man as part of a joke.
** Starburst does mention a Mummy Man as part of a joke.
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* TalkingIsAFreeAction: Seemingly taught as a skill at the Academy, since it offers the course "Basics of Talking While Fighting".
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* ColdOpen: A pair of teachers are reviewing Power Kid's application and discussing what to make of his DarkSecret.
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* StylisticSuck: Power Kid's poorly edited webcam video in the ColdOpen, as well as his costume, [[LampshadeHanging the latter of which he acknowledges and gets mocked for incessantly.]]
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* SuperHeroSchool: The titular institution, obviously.
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* OffscreenTeleportation: How Deathside and Chaotrix leave Power Kids dorm [[spoiler: both times.]]
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* OffscreenTeleportation: How Deathside and Chaotrix leave Power Kids dorm [[spoiler: both times.the first time.]]
* SmokeOut: [[spoiler: How Chaotrix flees from PK and DC after Deathside's defeat.]]
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** In a far more unfortunate example, Darkside looking like Bane was the result of a mishandled delivery of his original costume. Ben Lifson decided to just roll with it and make the look as close as possible.
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* PsychoStrings: Heard just before [[spoiler: Deathside lays into Dark Cop.]]
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* TeenGenius: Chaotrix and Dark Cop, though Dark Cop is a little more self-evident.
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* TeenGenius: Chaotrix and Dark Cop, though Dark Cop is a little more self-evident.may or may not fit the "teen" part anymore.
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* AmbiguousDisorder: DC has a somewhat flat facial expression, oddly monotone voice and trouble reading social situations.
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* Big Bad: BigBad: Deathside
* CompletelyMissingThePoint: Dark Cop, twice. Both times followed by him asserting that his bizarre response to the sitation "seemed easier."
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* DarkSecretDarkSecret: Power Kid being Deathside's son.
* OffscreenTeleportation: How Deathside and Chaotrix leave Power Kids dorm [[spoiler: both times.]]
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* WearingAFlagOnYourHead: Cousin Sam
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* WearingAFlagOnYourHead: Cousin Sam