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** [[BreakingTheFourthWall Which Lewk bumps his head on.]]
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* NotWhatItLooksLike: Used almost word for word on [[http://70-seas.com/?p=580 this page.]]
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* CountryMatters: [[PlayingWithATrope Could be a coincidence,]] but the Etoese expletive, "tunk," is an (sort-of) anagram of... [[DontExplainTheJoke well, I think we get it.]]
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* WhamEpisode: Chapter XIV. Yeah, you remember that whole thing about [[spoiler: Nikol being the [[LastOfHisKind last of the Mimagis?]] Turns out she's not. And Grin knows where the other one is.]]
---> [[spoiler:'''Nikol:''']] [[spoiler: ''Tsubasa...'']]
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* WhamEpisode: [[http://70-seas.com/?p=5895 This page]] in Chapter XIV. Yeah, you remember that whole thing about [[spoiler: Nikol being the [[LastOfHisKind last of the Mimagis?]] [[SubvertedTrope Turns out she's not. And Grin knows where the other one is.]]
not.]]]]
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---> '''Bludgeon King:''' [[spoiler:''Tsubasa...'']][[WhamLine That would be a letter from your sister.]]]]
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* WhamEpisode: Chapter XIV. Yeah, you remember that whole thing about [[spoiler: Nikol being the [[LastOfHisKind last of the Mimagis? Mimagis?]] Turns out she's not. And Grin knows where the other one is.]]
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* WhamEpisode: Chapter XIV. Yeah, you remember that whole thing about [[spoiler: Nikol being the [[LastOfHisKind last of the Mimagis? Turns out she's not. And Grin knows where the other one is.]]
---> [[spoiler:'''Nikol:''']] [[spoiler: ''Tsubasa...'']]
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* BrownNote: The [[EldritchAbomination horror from the deep]] [[http://70-seas.com/?p=1082 in a jar.]] [[SchmuckBait Do NOT look at it.
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* BrownNote: The [[EldritchAbomination horror from the deep]] [[http://70-seas.com/?p=1082 in a jar.]] [[SchmuckBait Do NOT look at it.]]
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* BrownNote: The [[EldritchAbomination horror from the deep]] [[http://70-seas.com/?p=1082 in a jar.]] Do NOT look at it.
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* BrownNote: The [[EldritchAbomination horror from the deep]] [[http://70-seas.com/?p=1082 in a jar.]] [[SchmuckBait Do NOT look at it.
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* [[LastOfHisKind Last of Her Kind:]] Nikol is the last of the Mimagi clan, since the rest of them were killed by [[CompleteMonster Grin.]]
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* ImpossibleThief: In chapter 1, Lewk steals a sword [[http://70-seas.com/?p=491 right out of its owner's hands,]] and [[http://70-seas.com/?p=495 and Sawl's cross-]] ''right from around his neck.''
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* ImpossibleThief: In chapter 1, Lewk steals a sword [[http://70-seas.com/?p=491 right out of its owner's hands,]] and [[http://70-seas.com/?p=495 and Sawl's cross-]] ''right cross]] from around his neck.neck. The impossible part is because he was ''dangling off of a cliff at the time.''
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* ImpossibleThief: In chapter 1, Lewk steals a sword [[http://70-seas.com/?p=491 right out of its owner's hands,]] and [[http://70-seas.com/?p=495 and Sawl's cross-]] ''right from around his neck.''
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* InWhichATropeIsDescribed: The long chapter title. One fake cover parodied it with an ''extra-long'' title.
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* KleptomaniacHero: If it's not nailed down, Lewk's probably already stolen it.
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* [[LastOfHisKind Last Of Her Kind:]] Nikol is the last of the Mimagi clan, since the rest of them were killed by [[CompleteMonster Grin.]]
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* {{Privateer}}: Serra and by extension her crew.
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* TheHeretic: Lewk has dissident opinions on how to worship Lapak. And given how badly they want him silenced, his church is outright scared of him and his silver tongue. With good reason, if Crystal's reaction is typical.
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* TheHeretic: Lewk has dissident opinions on how to worship Lapak. And given how badly they want him silenced, his church is outright scared of him and his silver tongue. With good reason, if Crystal's reaction is typical.InWhichATropeIsDescribed: The long chapter title. One fake cover parodied it with an ''extra-long'' title.
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* ThemeNaming: Sera's biological family is named after character fonts.
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* NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast: Sister Mary Mendele.
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* TomatoSurprise: Used offensively in the side story, [[http://70-seas.com/?p=3146 Lost and Found]] when a man in a stolen Toby Terrier convinces the Toby Town security guards that have surrounded him that he was a lost child who grew up in the park's lost and found, only to reveal that it was actually the park guards who had been raised in the lost and found and suppressed their memories of it.
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* TomatoSurprise: Used offensively in the side story, [[http://70-seas.com/?p=3146 Lost and Found]] when a man in a stolen Toby Terrier costume convinces the Toby Town security guards that have surrounded him that he was a lost child who grew up in the park's lost and found, only to reveal that it was actually the park guards who had been raised in the lost and found and suppressed their memories of it.
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* BrownNote: The [[EldritchAbomination horror from the deep]] in a jar. Do NOT look at it.
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* FantasticDrug: The side-story "The Dive" has brain snails, that latch on people's head and make them high.
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* TheHeretic: Lewk has dissident opinions on how to worship Lapak. And given how badly they want him silenced, his church is outright scared of him and his silver tongue. With good reason, if Crystal's reaction is typical.
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* BrownNote: The [[EldritchAbomination horror from the deep]] in a jar. Do NOT look at it.
* OrgasmicCombat: When asked how killing feels to him, Boomerang King compares it to sex.
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** Though to be fair, the other two are against killing. For different reasons. And according to the Three Kings arc, Nikol didn't actually kill anyone, or at least never in cold blood.
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* BodySurf: [[spoiler: Grin]].
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* ShortCon: Lewk has a fondness for the three-card monte.
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* FantasyCounterpartCulture: Several. The Republican Empire of Fra is a cross between [[{{Eagleland}} America]] and the British Empire, Eto is Japan, the Sorse are the Norse, Tarka is Greece, and Wetonet is England. Maybe. They have a ''very'' fancy flag, though.
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* FantasyCounterpartCulture: Several. The Republican Empire of Fra is a cross between [[{{Eagleland}} America]] and the British Empire, Eto is Japan, the Sorse are the Norse, Tarka is Rome and Greece, and Wetonet is England. Maybe. They have a ''very'' fancy flag, though.
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* SimilarSquad: Chapter V involves the gang running into another group of Fra privateers consisting of a quack doctor, a Scottish Highlander equivalent, and one of Serra's half-sisters (her old man [[http://www.formspring.me/P5ych/q/1190909731?1316403262877 ''really'']] got around).
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* SimilarSquad: Chapter V involves the gang running into another group of Fra privateers consisting of a quack doctor, a Scottish Highlander equivalent, and one of Serra's half-sisters (her old man [[http://www.''[[http://www.formspring.me/P5ych/q/1190909731?1316403262877 ''really'']] really]]'' got around).
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* FlockOfWolves: The false-flag approach in chapter V.
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* FantasyCounterpartCulture: Several. The Republican Empire of Fra is a cross between [[{{Eagleland}} America]], America]] and the British Empire, Eto is Japan, the Sorse are the Norse, Tarka is Greece, and Wetonet is England. Maybe. They have a ''very'' fancy flag, though.
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** All of the aforementioned badasses are [[{{BadassFurry}} furry]].
