Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Cool Loser TRS cleanup
, has been renamed to Unconvincingly Unpopular Character and is a YMMV audience reaction.
, has been renamed to Unconvincingly Unpopular Character and is a YMMV audience reaction.Deleted line(s) 39,40 (click to see context) :
* CoolLoser: Everyone seems quite dismissive of Kung Shoe except Flibbage and the Queen (who uses them as bodyguards) but their instructor Prada-sensei was the only teacher hired based on actual competence. The others were hired primarily because it was safer than letting them run around loose.
** the story seems to have pegged Keti as the designated CoolLoser due to her PrimaryProtagonistSyndrome and [[FunnySchizophrenia Multiple Generic-induced Sanity Dysfunction]].
** the story seems to have pegged Keti as the designated CoolLoser due to her PrimaryProtagonistSyndrome and [[FunnySchizophrenia Multiple Generic-induced Sanity Dysfunction]].
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Cool Loser TRS cleanup, has been renamed to Unconvincingly Unpopular Character and is a YMMV audience reaction.
, has been renamed to Unconvincingly Unpopular Character and is a YMMV audience reaction.Changed line(s) 11 (click to see context) from:
* ActionSurvivor: Keti seemed doomed to be a CoolLoser due to her heritage and primary protagonist syndrome. Fprtunately she has caring and effective friends.
to:
* ActionSurvivor: Keti seemed doomed to be a CoolLoser "loser" due to her heritage and primary protagonist syndrome. Fprtunately Fortunately she has caring and effective friends.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Deleted line(s) 80 (click to see context) :
* KickTheSonOfABitch: Captain Kitty is constantly tormenting Sparkle the AlphaBitch, despite having no idea who she is.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Baleful Polymorph is no longer a trope
Deleted line(s) 23 (click to see context) :
* BalefulPolymorph: One of Flibbage's favorite methods of dealing with people, and one of the many spells protecting [[SwordOfPlotAdvancement The Sword of Slayskull]].
Added DiffLines:
* ForcedTransformation: One of Flibbage's favorite methods of dealing with people, and one of the many spells protecting [[SwordOfPlotAdvancement The Sword of Slayskull]].
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 9 (click to see context) from:
!!Examples
to:
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Deleted line(s) 88,89 (click to see context) :
* LoveMakesYouCrazy
* LuminescentBlush
* LuminescentBlush
Deleted line(s) 95,96 (click to see context) :
*** Although this particular move [[WrongGenreSavvy bites him in the ass]].
* {{Magitek}}
* {{Magitek}}
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Deleted line(s) 58,61 (click to see context) :
* GeniusDitz: Jin, especially after she's had sufficient caffeine and sugar.
* GenkiGirl: Jin once again, as well as Liame.
* GenreBlindness: Humans and weres have difficulty with the TheoryOfNarrativeCausality, to the point of occasional partial amnesia when a point is explained.
* GenreSavvy: Most of the fae are GenreSavvy and have a basic understanding of the TheoryOfNarrativeCausality. They teach it, but it only sticks well with fae. Humans and eveh half humans like Keti and Beansprout can only comprehend the subject with great difficulty and have difficulty retaining the information.
* GenkiGirl: Jin once again, as well as Liame.
* GenreBlindness: Humans and weres have difficulty with the TheoryOfNarrativeCausality, to the point of occasional partial amnesia when a point is explained.
* GenreSavvy: Most of the fae are GenreSavvy and have a basic understanding of the TheoryOfNarrativeCausality. They teach it, but it only sticks well with fae. Humans and eveh half humans like Keti and Beansprout can only comprehend the subject with great difficulty and have difficulty retaining the information.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Dangerously Genre Savvy is being merged with Genre Savvy. Misuse and zero context examples will be cut.
Deleted line(s) 48 (click to see context) :
* DangerouslyGenreSavvy: [[spoiler:Keti's elf side.]] Which makes sense, as the Fey are aware of the Plot.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 108 (click to see context) from:
* OddShapedPanel
to:
* OddShapedPanelOddShapedPanel: used primarily for action sequences
Changed line(s) 121 (click to see context) from:
* ProtagonistCenteredMorality: a genuine occupational hazard for people who suffer from both Primary Protagonist Syndrome and MGSD. Flibbage appears to have invested a lot in converting Beansproat's protagonist centered morality to a relatively mild case of ItsAllAboutMe, if only for the good of the realm. Keti appears to have avoided this so far, having spent days crying over the price her friends (and Iordan in particular) paid to rescue her from her own insanity.
to:
* ProtagonistCenteredMorality: a genuine occupational hazard for people who suffer from both Primary Protagonist Syndrome and MGSD. Flibbage appears to have invested a lot in converting Beansproat's turning Beansprout's protagonist centered morality to morality; into a relatively mild case of ItsAllAboutMe, if only for the good of the realm. Keti appears to have avoided this so far, having spent days crying over the price her friends (and Iordan in particular) paid to rescue her from her own insanity.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 62 (click to see context) from:
* GenreSavvy: Most of the fae are GenreSavvy and have a basic understanding of the TheoryOfNarrativeCausality. They teach it, but it only sticks well with fae.
to:
* GenreSavvy: Most of the fae are GenreSavvy and have a basic understanding of the TheoryOfNarrativeCausality. They teach it, but it only sticks well with fae. Humans and eveh half humans like Keti and Beansprout can only comprehend the subject with great difficulty and have difficulty retaining the information.
**Dan interrupts Keti's attempt at an apology by hugging her while telling her to "Shut the hell uyp."
* IJustWantToBeNormal: Keti, after her ordeal: "I used to think my life was boring. Now I wish it was."
Changed line(s) 133 (click to see context) from:
* SuperpoweredEvilSide
to:
* SuperpoweredEvilSideSuperpoweredEvilSide: Keti under the influence of the Sword, though her "superpowers" are really her protagonist, nymph, and werewolf powers unfettered by any inhibitions.
**Princess Flibbage deliberately tries to steer the narrative towards comedy for Keti's sake, and is very apologetic to Beansprout when her first attempt fails.
Changed line(s) 154 (click to see context) from:
* ThickerThanWater
to:
* ThickerThanWaterThickerThanWater: Jin and Dan, Keti and her mother (surprisingly) averted with An and Kitty: An loves Kitty, but Kitty is too much of a sociopath to have true loyalty to her sister in return.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 17 (click to see context) from:
* AlwaysSaveTheGirl: Played with: the kids completely forget about rescuing Sparkle during their quest to retreive the sword and don't even realize they'd forgotten about her until she shows up weeks later to complain about it. Sorta-kinda played straight with Keti, though the other kids were as much interested in saving the whole world from her insanity as the were in saving Keti herself at that point.
to:
* AlwaysSaveTheGirl: Played with: the kids completely forget about rescuing Sparkle during their quest to retreive retrieve the sword and don't even realize they'd forgotten about her until she shows up weeks later to complain about it. Sorta-kinda played straight with Keti, though the other kids were as much interested in saving the whole world from her insanity as the were in saving Keti herself at that point.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
* AlwaysSaveTheGirl: Played with: the kids completely forget about rescuing Sparkle during their quest to retreive the sword and don't even realize they'd forgotten about her until she shows up weeks later to complain about it. Sorta-kinda played straight with Keti, though the other kids were as much interested in saving the whole world from her insanity as the were in saving Keti herself at that point.
**the story seems to have pegged Keti as the designated CoolLoser due to her PrimaryProtagonistSyndrome and [[FunnySchizophrenia Multiple Generic-induced Sanity Dysfunction]].
Changed line(s) 68 (click to see context) from:
* HonoraryUncle
to:
* HonoraryUncleHeroicSacrifice: Iordan allows Keti to run him through in the hope that it will bring her back to her senses. He succeeds but the grief nearly breaks her.
* HonoraryUncle: Honorary Aunt, in Princess Flibbage's case.
* HonoraryUncle: Honorary Aunt, in Princess Flibbage's case.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 11 (click to see context) from:
* ActionSurvivor
to:
* ActionSurvivorActionSurvivor: Keti seemed doomed to be a CoolLoser due to her heritage and primary protagonist syndrome. Fprtunately she has caring and effective friends.
Changed line(s) 15 (click to see context) from:
-->'''Keti''': "Where did they get a photo of me from?"
to:
-->'''Keti''': "Where did they get a photo of me from?"from?" (and it's literally a photo of Keti ''holding that book at that moment'')
Changed line(s) 20 (click to see context) from:
* AsideGlance
to:
* AsideGlanceAsideGlance: A given, due to the variable opacity of the fourth wall to Fey.
Changed line(s) 116 (click to see context) from:
* RedShirt: Jimmy is determined not to be the team red shirt even though Princess Flibbage practically states that's the major reason he's being sent on the quest.
to:
* ProtagonistCenteredMorality: a genuine occupational hazard for people who suffer from both Primary Protagonist Syndrome and MGSD. Flibbage appears to have invested a lot in converting Beansproat's protagonist centered morality to a relatively mild case of ItsAllAboutMe, if only for the good of the realm. Keti appears to have avoided this so far, having spent days crying over the price her friends (and Iordan in particular) paid to rescue her from her own insanity.
* RedShirt: Jimmy is determined not to be the team red shirt even though Princess Flibbage practically states that's the major reason he's being sent on thequest.quest, and Jimmy's own AI actually agrees with the assessment.
* RedShirt: Jimmy is determined not to be the team red shirt even though Princess Flibbage practically states that's the major reason he's being sent on the
