Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* [[BunnyEarsLawyer Bunny Ears Officer]]: Averted with the ''Fitzgerald'' crew in all three films, significant for a fan work. The crew behaves exactly as Starfleet officers should, right down to Hargrove (as acting first officer) objects to Ronston's beaming down to Vandor IV.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 26,28 (click to see context) from:
* AmazonianBeauty: Renee Mitchell, whose shoulders are noticeably broad compared to the other female cast members. More clearly visible during the scene where she makes up with Kal in Ten Forward; the black leather tank top shows she's muscular under that uniform.
** Kristie winds up being one of these in the epilogue.
*** Making Dr. Garr an AmazonChaser. WordOfGod says this is TruthInTelevision.
** Kristie winds up being one of these in the epilogue.
*** Making Dr. Garr an AmazonChaser. WordOfGod says this is TruthInTelevision.
to:
* AmazonianBeauty: AmazonianBeauty:
** Renee Mitchell, whose shoulders are noticeably broad compared to the other female cast members. More clearly visible during the scene where she makes up with Kal in Ten Forward; the black leather tank top shows she's muscular under that uniform.
** Kristie winds up being one of these in theepilogue.
*** Makingepilogue, making Dr. Garr an AmazonChaser. WordOfGod says this is TruthInTelevision.
** Renee Mitchell, whose shoulders are noticeably broad compared to the other female cast members. More clearly visible during the scene where she makes up with Kal in Ten Forward; the black leather tank top shows she's muscular under that uniform.
** Kristie winds up being one of these in the
*** Making
Changed line(s) 190 (click to see context) from:
** Drakus. [[ThisIsSPARTA "I. AM. Forever!"]]
to:
** Drakus. [[ThisIsSPARTA [[PunctuatedForEmphasis "I. AM. Forever!"]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 105 (click to see context) from:
* DamageControl: Renee Mitchell, first during the Battle of Beta Stromgren, then as the crippled ''Fitzgerald'' hides in the Azure Nebula.
to:
* DamageControl: Renee Mitchell, first during the Battle of Beta Stromgren, then as the crippled ''Fitzgerald'' hides in the Azure Nebula.Nebula, then during the Battle of Beta Stromgren.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 102 (click to see context) from:
* CurbStompBattle: The Battle of Wolf 359.
to:
* CurbStompBattle: The Battle of Beta Stromgren. ''Especially'' in the revision.
** And later, the Battle of Wolf 359.
** And later, the Battle of Wolf 359.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 26,27 (click to see context) from:
* AmazonianBeauty: Kristie winds up being one of these in the epilogue.
** Making Dr. Garr an AmazonChaser. WordOfGod says this is TruthInTelevision.
** Making Dr. Garr an AmazonChaser. WordOfGod says this is TruthInTelevision.
to:
* AmazonianBeauty: Renee Mitchell, whose shoulders are noticeably broad compared to the other female cast members. More clearly visible during the scene where she makes up with Kal in Ten Forward; the black leather tank top shows she's muscular under that uniform.
** Kristie winds up being one of these in the epilogue.
** *** Making Dr. Garr an AmazonChaser. WordOfGod says this is TruthInTelevision.
** Kristie winds up being one of these in the epilogue.
Deleted line(s) 32 (click to see context) :
* AmazonianBeauty: Renee Mitchell, whose shoulders are noticeably broad compared to the other female cast members. More clearly visible during the scene where she makes up with Kal in Ten Forward; the black leather tank top shows she's muscular under that uniform.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 6,7 (click to see context) from:
The year is 2399, and the USS ''F. Scott Fitzgerald'' is about to be decommissioned, when [[DisasterMovie disaster strikes]]. A NegativeSpaceWedgie suddenly and inexplicably starts tearing through the space-time continuum, destroying planets and leaving nothing in its wake. Several of our heroes [[ThereAreNoCoincidences just happen]] to be aboard their mothballed ship when it happens, and they [[MandatoryUnretirement courageously set out to stop the disasterhip]]. After [[OutrunTheFireball narrowly escaping destruction themselves]], they discover that even Earth is reduced to a LethalLavaLand. An investigation reveals that [[BigBad Drakus]] is behind it, and that the whole string of DisasterDominoes was set off by his going back in time. To prevent the cataclysm, they have to follow him back and stop him.
to:
The year is 2399, and the USS ''F. Scott Fitzgerald'' is about to be decommissioned, when [[DisasterMovie disaster strikes]]. A NegativeSpaceWedgie suddenly and inexplicably starts tearing through the space-time continuum, destroying planets and leaving nothing in its wake. Several of our heroes [[ThereAreNoCoincidences just happen]] to be aboard their mothballed ship when it happens, and they [[MandatoryUnretirement courageously set out to stop the disasterhip]].disaster]]. After [[OutrunTheFireball narrowly escaping destruction themselves]], they discover that even Earth is reduced to a LethalLavaLand. An investigation reveals that [[BigBad Drakus]] is behind it, and that the whole string of DisasterDominoes was set off by his going back in time. To prevent the cataclysm, they have to follow him back and stop him.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 326 (click to see context) from:
*** Hargrove stepping forward and boldly declaring "Today IS a good day to die!" is both a reference to to TNG and DS9, as well as a rare CallBack to StarTrekRetribution, when she quoted Chancellor Martok, strongly hinting at some form of Klingon heritage in her. This is lampshaded when, after shooting Drakus only for the phaser blast to be stopped by a forcefield, [[PardonMyKlingon she swears in Klingon]]. For bonus points, the curse is a longer version of one she muttered in Retribution.
to:
*** Hargrove stepping forward and boldly declaring "Today IS a good day to die!" is both a reference to to TNG and DS9, ''Series/StarTrekDeepSpaceNine'', as well as a rare CallBack to StarTrekRetribution, when she quoted Chancellor Martok, strongly hinting at some form of Klingon heritage in her. This is lampshaded when, after shooting Drakus only for the phaser blast to be stopped by a forcefield, [[PardonMyKlingon she swears in Klingon]]. For bonus points, the curse is a longer version of one she muttered in Retribution.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 316 (click to see context) from:
** "That was a waste of a perfectly good heartfelt sentiment" harkens back to a similar line spoken by DeadpanSnarker Jack O'Neill (with two L's) in Series/StargateSG1: "That was a waste of a perfectly good explanation."
to:
** "That was a waste of a perfectly good heartfelt sentiment" harkens back to a similar line spoken by DeadpanSnarker Jack O'Neill (with two L's) in Series/StargateSG1: ''Series/StargateSG1'': "That was a waste of a perfectly good explanation."
Changed line(s) 322 (click to see context) from:
** When we see Kal's quarters, a number of allusions to the StargateVerse are scattered about: [[Series/StargateSG1 the Ancient repository of knowledge]], [[Series/StargateAtlantis an Atlantis DHD]], the touchstone from early in SG-1, and at one point even the Milky Way gate address to Earth shows up as a piece of wall decor.
to:
** When we see Kal's quarters, a number of allusions to the StargateVerse Franchise/StargateVerse are scattered about: [[Series/StargateSG1 the Ancient repository of knowledge]], [[Series/StargateAtlantis an Atlantis DHD]], the touchstone from early in SG-1, and at one point even the Milky Way gate address to Earth shows up as a piece of wall decor.
Changed line(s) 328 (click to see context) from:
*** [[StargateSG1 "For our father."]]
to:
*** [[StargateSG1 [[Series/StargateSG1 "For our father."]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* AmazonianBeauty: Kristie winds up being one of these in the epilogue.
** Making Dr. Garr an AmazonChaser. WordOfGod says this is TruthInTelevision.
** Making Dr. Garr an AmazonChaser. WordOfGod says this is TruthInTelevision.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
** This is somewhat lampshaded during the epilogue, as Ronston mentions the Kristie android from 2378, but doesn't make any mention of the one we last saw on the bridge of the ''Iron Vulture'' at the end of ''Retribution''.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* UnfortunateImplications: The Kristie android is neither seen nor mentioned the entire film. Initially this might be taken to mean she simply went down with the Mark-I ISS ''Voyager'' at the end of the previous film, but as we go on and see Drakus' increasing insanity, it's not hard to imagine he devised some far more sinister end for her.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* SpaceIsNoisy. A signature element of the trilogy is that anytime an exterior shot of space is shown, some form of wind is audible, in addition to whatever standard StockSoundEffects might also be in use.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* EarnYourHappyEnding:
** Kendra Ronston has seen her ex-husband killed after she was mean to him, only to come face to face with his younger self; been forced to ally herself with Dark Garr, whose motives and loyalties are questionable at best; and been forced to sit by and allow the Battle of Wolf 359 to happen without interfering, listening silently as 11,000 Starfleet officers in 2367 lose their lives to the Borg. When she returns to 2399 to find Merv alive and well and the Federation restored, it's because she persevered through circumstances that would break most people.
** Kendra Ronston has seen her ex-husband killed after she was mean to him, only to come face to face with his younger self; been forced to ally herself with Dark Garr, whose motives and loyalties are questionable at best; and been forced to sit by and allow the Battle of Wolf 359 to happen without interfering, listening silently as 11,000 Starfleet officers in 2367 lose their lives to the Borg. When she returns to 2399 to find Merv alive and well and the Federation restored, it's because she persevered through circumstances that would break most people.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 4,5 (click to see context) from:
LighterAndSofter sequel to the popular Star Trek fan film ''WebAnimation/StarTrekRetribution'', set to be completed by Winter 2013.
to:
LighterAndSofter sequel to the popular Star Trek fan film ''WebAnimation/StarTrekRetribution'', set to be completed by in Winter 2013.
Changed line(s) 8,9 (click to see context) from:
Like its predecessors, ''Redemption'' is to be released onto YouTube as a series of webisodes, with a final full cut to be posted once it's complete.
to:
Like its predecessors, ''Redemption'' is to be was initially released onto YouTube as a series of webisodes, with a final full cut to be posted once it's it was complete.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
** The BMG actually does this, doubling as a bit of bookending. The first scene in the film--of Kendra Ronston saying her final goodbye to the old ''Fitzgerald''--is backed by the First Contact theme, which plays again through her final log entry, which ends with the reveal of the new ''Fitzgerald''.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* WhyDontYaJustShootHim: Invoked by Hargrove when they finally catch up with Drakus. When they meet, Drakus greets them, but before he can start monologuing, she steps forward, declares "Today IS a good day to die!", pulls up her phaser rifle and FIRES!...only for the phaser burst to hit a forcefield.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: Despite a plot resolution that was neat and tidy, no mention is made of what happened to Drakus' "starship replicator" from Beta Stromgren.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* WhatMightHaveBeen. WordOfGod suggests that in the film's original ending, the ''Fitzgerald''-B was to have been another Mark-II ''Galaxy''-class vessel, replacing its predecessor in much the same way as the ''Enterprise''-A at the end of StarTrekIVTheVoyageHome. That idea was ultimately scrapped in favor of the new ship being a ''Sovereign''-class starship. Its bridge is depicted by a redressed version of the ''Daystrom'' bridge from the first film, with updated LCARs and colors.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
** Also, the end credits--though several meshes sourced from Scifi-Meshes.com appear in the film, in the wake of what happened during production of ''Retribution'', SFM does not appear as a source for 3D models.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 65 (click to see context) from:
* BondOneLiner. After [[spoiler:Dark Reyf]] shoots Drakus, Dark Garr quips, "I guess forever just isn't what it used to be."
to:
* BondOneLiner. BondOneLiner: After [[spoiler:Dark Reyf]] shoots Drakus, Dark Garr quips, "I guess forever just isn't what it used to be.""
* BookEnds: In ''Specter'', the first scene set aboard the ''Fitzgerald'' began with Reyf reading in his quarters. The final scene of ''Redemption'' shows the same thing.
* BookEnds: In ''Specter'', the first scene set aboard the ''Fitzgerald'' began with Reyf reading in his quarters. The final scene of ''Redemption'' shows the same thing.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
** In a way, the music for the scene where Dark Garr says his goodbyes to the others is a shoutout. The music is from a scene in [[Series/Supernatural Supernatural]] with the two lead characters saying goodbye to their father; in the same way, Garr is saying goodbye to Reyf, who in all three films has been portrayed as something of a father figure to his officers--while at the same time acknowledging Reyf's own father.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* GettingCrapPastTheRadar. While confronting the Borg cube, there's this gem between Dark Garr and Hargrove:
-->HARGROVE: "I thought the Borg ship was supposed to be shut down by now!"
-->DARK GARR: [[DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything "So I was premature, don't take it personally!"]]
-->HARGROVE: "I thought the Borg ship was supposed to be shut down by now!"
-->DARK GARR: [[DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything "So I was premature, don't take it personally!"]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 6,7 (click to see context) from:
The year is 2399, and the USS ''F. Scott Fitzgerald'' is about to be decommissioned, when [[DisasterMovie disaster strikes]]. A NegativeSpaceWedgie suddenly and inexplicably starts tearing through the space-time continuum, destroying planets and leaving nothing in its wake. Several of our heroes [[ThereAreNoCoincidences just happen]] to be aboard their mothballed ship when it happens, and they [[MandatoryUnretirement courageously set out to stop the disaster]]. After [[OutrunTheFireball narrowly escaping destruction themselves]], they discover that even Earth is reduced to a LethalLavaLand. An investigation reveals that [[BigBad Drakus]] is behind it, and that the whole string of DisasterDominoes was set off by his going back in time. To prevent the cataclysm, they have to follow him back and stop him.
to:
The year is 2399, and the USS ''F. Scott Fitzgerald'' is about to be decommissioned, when [[DisasterMovie disaster strikes]]. A NegativeSpaceWedgie suddenly and inexplicably starts tearing through the space-time continuum, destroying planets and leaving nothing in its wake. Several of our heroes [[ThereAreNoCoincidences just happen]] to be aboard their mothballed ship when it happens, and they [[MandatoryUnretirement courageously set out to stop the disaster]].disasterhip]]. After [[OutrunTheFireball narrowly escaping destruction themselves]], they discover that even Earth is reduced to a LethalLavaLand. An investigation reveals that [[BigBad Drakus]] is behind it, and that the whole string of DisasterDominoes was set off by his going back in time. To prevent the cataclysm, they have to follow him back and stop him.
Added DiffLines:
** At the climax of the film, we go from being scared of Drakus, to elated that he's dead, to feeling warm and fuzzy as Ronston forgives Dark Reyf, to hating Drakus for [[spoiler:shooting Dark Reyf]], to feeling sorry for Dark Reyf again...right before our pulses start pounding again when we realize the 2399 Fitzgerald will have to be abandoned due to battle damage, to confusion (and anger?) at Dark Garr for [[spoiler:sealing himself behind Drakus' forcefield]].
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
** On the Borg cube, the tool Drakus is using on the Borg drone is clearly Dr. Phlox's medical scanner from StarTrekEnterprise.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* HeelFaceTurn: [[spoiler:Dark Reyf]] at the end of the film.
Added DiffLines:
*** Drakus, chewing the scenery as he shouts, [[BatmanForever "No more games, no more riddles, no more curtains ONE AND TWO, just PLAIN CURTAINS!"]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
** Drakus. [[ThisIsSPARTA "I. AM. Forever!"]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* BondOneLiner. After [[spoiler:Dark Reyf]] shoots Drakus, Dark Garr quips, "I guess forever just isn't what it used to be."
Added DiffLines:
** At the climax of the film, what prompts [[spoiler:Dark Reyf]] to finally turn against Drakus is remembrance of his father.
Added DiffLines:
* PreMortemOneLiner. Inverted; the one liner is actually Drakus.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
** When Ronston and her away team confront Drakus on the Borg cube, the scene is full of them:
*** Drakus greets them by saying, "Well what were you expecting--[[WesternAnimation/TeenageMutantNinjaTurtles1987 a disembodied brain in an android body? A chrome mask with blades and a cape perhaps?"]]
*** Hargrove stepping forward and boldly declaring "Today IS a good day to die!" is both a reference to to TNG and DS9, as well as a rare CallBack to StarTrekRetribution, when she quoted Chancellor Martok, strongly hinting at some form of Klingon heritage in her. This is lampshaded when, after shooting Drakus only for the phaser blast to be stopped by a forcefield, [[PardonMyKlingon she swears in Klingon]]. For bonus points, the curse is a longer version of one she muttered in Retribution.
*** [[StargateSG1 "For our father."]]
*** Drakus greets them by saying, "Well what were you expecting--[[WesternAnimation/TeenageMutantNinjaTurtles1987 a disembodied brain in an android body? A chrome mask with blades and a cape perhaps?"]]
*** Hargrove stepping forward and boldly declaring "Today IS a good day to die!" is both a reference to to TNG and DS9, as well as a rare CallBack to StarTrekRetribution, when she quoted Chancellor Martok, strongly hinting at some form of Klingon heritage in her. This is lampshaded when, after shooting Drakus only for the phaser blast to be stopped by a forcefield, [[PardonMyKlingon she swears in Klingon]]. For bonus points, the curse is a longer version of one she muttered in Retribution.
*** [[StargateSG1 "For our father."]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
** So, Drakus' entire motivation is the fact that the Borg technology keeping him alive was destroyed. Right? Yet, when the Mark-II ISS ''Voyager'' is launched, it can clearly be heard making the same sounds as a Borg ship, implying it has Borg technology of some kind. If Drakus can replicate one type of Borg technology, why can't he replicate another?
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* FridgeLogic. When 2399!Kendra talks with 2378!Prentice on the 2378 ship's Ten Forward, she tells him about 2399!Merv sacrificing himself to save her life. Later, when 2378!Merv confronts her about it, she remarks, "I won't ask who let that slip."
** In the second holodeck scene at the dam, the water is very clearly moving ''towards'' the dam. But looking at the clouds, the wind is just as clearly blowing in the opposite direction.
*** Potentially justified; could be the result of the dam pulling water to its far side for purposes of making electricity.
** In the second holodeck scene at the dam, the water is very clearly moving ''towards'' the dam. But looking at the clouds, the wind is just as clearly blowing in the opposite direction.
*** Potentially justified; could be the result of the dam pulling water to its far side for purposes of making electricity.
