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* SlasherSmile: [[spoiler:Protobot, the real identity of Monobert, is prone to making these, complete with his eyes being widened to give him a more crazed look.]]
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* SlasherSmile: [[spoiler:Protobot, the real identity of Monobert, is prone to making these, complete with his eyes being widened to give him a more crazed AxCrazy look.]]
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** Another victim example. [[spoiler:Kluzty is frozen to death and it's made worse by the fact ''he did it to himself''.]]
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** Another victim example. [[spoiler:Kluzty [[spoiler:Klutzy is frozen to death and it's made worse by the fact ''he did it to himself''.]]
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* DrivenToSuicide: [[spoiler:In Chapter 4, Klutzy kills himself.]]
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* DrivenToSuicide: [[spoiler:In Chapter 4, Klutzy kills himself.himself [[HeroicSuicide to exploit an error in Monobert's code]].]]
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* KillTheCutie: Cartoony penguins dying in all sorts of gruesome ways.
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* KillTheCutie: Cartoony penguins dying in all sorts of gruesome ways.[[spoiler:Klutzy]] bites it on Chapter 4.
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*SubvertedKidsShow: Has the trappings of one - Cartoony penguins dying in all sorts of gruesome ways.
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*KillTheCutie: Cartoony penguins dying in all sorts of gruesome ways.
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* SlasherSmile: [[spoiler:Protobot, the real identity of Monobert, is prone to making these, complete with his eyes being widened to give him a more crazed look.]]
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* HeroicBSOD: Agent falls into it [[spoiler: after Klutzy becomes the victim of Chapter 4.]]
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* HeroicBSOD: HeroicBSOD:
** Agent falls into it [[spoiler: after Klutzy becomes the victim of Chapter 4.]] ]]
** In chapter 6, [[spoiler: Amy barely speaks after what Sam was killed last Chapter.]]
** Agent falls into it [[spoiler: after Klutzy becomes the victim of Chapter 4.
** In chapter 6, [[spoiler: Amy barely speaks after what Sam was killed last Chapter.]]
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* BreakingTheFourthWall: Rookie comments it feels like they've been in the killing game for three years instead of three weeks, which is how long it's been since the story started.
** [[spoiler: It's revealed that everyone's memories were erased from anything that happened after 2010.]]
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* ShmuckBait: The motives.
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* ShmuckBait: SchmuckBait: The motives.
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** [[spoiler:Rory is punished by being assaulted with jackhammers before being run over by a minecart.]]
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** [[spoiler:Rory is punished by being assaulted with jackhammers before being run over by a minecart.train.]]
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** [[spoiler:Shadow Guy is quite literally ''deleted from existence''.]]
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** Chapter 4 ends with a video message that turns the story up on it's head: [[spoiler: Monobert is not the real Herbert, but just a robot copy. The real Herbert is trapped inside his underground base thanks to the force fields, and has been communicating secretly with Klutzy to help the surviving penguins escape. Monobert is revealed to be programmed to make up information that would make sense, meaning he could be lying about everything, and that he can't respond to things he doesn't expect to happen. So, Klutzy made a plan to do something completely unexpected to send out the video message and something else... [[HeroicSacrifice which is by killing himself.]]]]
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* AnyoneCanDie: It doesn't matter how important you were in the original Club Penguin, you can still die. Case in point, the first victim is [[spoiler:Aunt Artic]] and their killer is [[spoiler:Sensei]]. By the time of chapter five only [[spoiler:Agent, Dot, Rookie, Jet Pack Guy, Sam and Amy are left.]]
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* AnyoneCanDie: It doesn't matter how important you were in the original Club Penguin, you can still die. Case in point, the first victim is [[spoiler:Aunt Artic]] Arctic]] and their killer is [[spoiler:Sensei]]. By the time of chapter five Chapter Six, only [[spoiler:Agent, [[spoiler: Agent, Dot, Rookie, Jet Pack Guy, Sam and Amy are left.]]
** Chapter One [[spoiler: features Aunt Arctic and Sensei biting the dust.]]
** Chapter Two [[spoiler: is where the deaths of Rockhopper and Puffle Handler Paige occur.]]
** Chapter Three [[spoiler: has Franky, Cadence, and Rory all die.]]
** Chapter Four [[spoiler: involves the death of Klutzy.]]
** Chapter Five [[spoiler: includes the deaths of Herbert, Gary and Shadow Guy.]]
** Chapter Two [[spoiler: is where the deaths of Rockhopper and Puffle Handler Paige occur.]]
** Chapter Three [[spoiler: has Franky, Cadence, and Rory all die.]]
** Chapter Four [[spoiler: involves the death of Klutzy.]]
** Chapter Five [[spoiler: includes the deaths of Herbert, Gary and Shadow Guy.]]
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* {{Deuteragonist}}: DotDot the Disguise Gal, who serves as the primary assistant throughout the trials, being the Kirigiri to Agent's Naegi.
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* HumbleHero: Agent
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* HumbleHero: AgentAgent.
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* SleptThroughTheApocalypse: The main characters, aside from Klutzy. By virtue of memory erasure.
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* SleptThroughTheApocalypse: The main characters, aside from Klutzy.Klutzy and the traitor, [[spoiler: Shadow Guy]]. By virtue of memory erasure.
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* TwoDunIt: In at least one case.
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* TwoDunIt: In at least one case. [[spoiler: In Case 3, Cadence had killed Franky, and Rory had walked in and killed her out of panic she would kill him. Meanwhile, in Case 5, Sam and Amy both killed Herbert and Gary via their lightning bolts by combining their powers, with the second hero who added their powers being called the killer for each death.]]
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* WhamEpisode: Chapter 4 ends with a video message that turns the story up on it's head: [[spoiler: Monobert is not the real Herbert, but just a robot copy. The real Herbert is trapped inside his underground base thanks to the force fields, and has been communicating secretly with Klutzy to help the surviving penguins escape. Monobert is revealed to be programmed to make up information that would make sense, meaning he could be lying about everything, and that he can't respond to things he doesn't expect to happen. So, Klutzy made a plan to do something completely unexpected to send out the video message and something else... [[HeroicSacrifice which is by killing himself.]]]]
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* WhamEpisode: Chapter The fourth and fifth chapters, respectively.
**Chapter 4 ends with a video message that turns the story up on it's head: [[spoiler: Monobert is not the real Herbert, but just a robot copy. The real Herbert is trapped inside his underground base thanks to the force fields, and has been communicating secretly with Klutzy to help the surviving penguins escape. Monobert is revealed to be programmed to make up information that would make sense, meaning he could be lying about everything, and that he can't respond to things he doesn't expect to happen. So, Klutzy made a plan to do something completely unexpected to send out the video message and something else... [[HeroicSacrifice which is by killing himself.]]]]]]]]
** Chapter 5 is an even bigger one. [[spoiler: The chapter starts with Monobert being shut off after Agent's failed execution, and then Shadow Guy revealing himself as the traitor to the audience. It also has Sam and Amy become the heroes...and one of their missions is hijacked by the Test Bots, who then stay dormant..Until Herbert's dead body is discovered by Agent, Rookie, Jet Pack Guy, and Dot, and they are reactivated, beginning the killing game once again. However, the Heroes and Gary are missing, which seems normal..until Agent opens the door to the Gadget Room, and Gary's body is discovered, with the Heroes nowhere to be found. After the four vow to solve the mystery and the rest of the investigation occurs, it is revealed through Gary's machine that they were in a virtual world all along, and then as soon as they enter the trial room, they discover that Monobert was actually Protobot the entire time...and then Sam and Amy reveal themselves as Gary and Herbert's killers by accident. As well, Protobot kills the Test Bots due to them serving no more purpose. However, soon afterwards, Agent reveals that Sam was the traitor, and then Sam and Amy insist on voting for themselves so the other does not die, before Agent decides to not vote..and then it is revealed that in a lack of votes, Protobot himself would vote..for the wrong killer, Amy, and everyone besides Sam seemingly is about to be executed..before Sam sacrifices himself and is deleted by Protobot from the game. Soon afterwards, as Protobot is about to kill the rest of the cast, the Test Bots return with their original programming, saving everyone, along with a message from Gary in his modern design, about having returned everyone to the past with a gadget to make a code to restore everything to what it once was, and playing a video of the last party in Club Penguin, showing Agent in their modern design with a vow to protect the island, and then cutting to the Participants Remaining screen.]] [[{{Understatement}} Holy shit.]]
**Chapter 4 ends with a video message that turns the story up on it's head: [[spoiler: Monobert is not the real Herbert, but just a robot copy. The real Herbert is trapped inside his underground base thanks to the force fields, and has been communicating secretly with Klutzy to help the surviving penguins escape. Monobert is revealed to be programmed to make up information that would make sense, meaning he could be lying about everything, and that he can't respond to things he doesn't expect to happen. So, Klutzy made a plan to do something completely unexpected to send out the video message and something else... [[HeroicSacrifice which is by killing himself.
** Chapter 5 is an even bigger one. [[spoiler: The chapter starts with Monobert being shut off after Agent's failed execution, and then Shadow Guy revealing himself as the traitor to the audience. It also has Sam and Amy become the heroes...and one of their missions is hijacked by the Test Bots, who then stay dormant..Until Herbert's dead body is discovered by Agent, Rookie, Jet Pack Guy, and Dot, and they are reactivated, beginning the killing game once again. However, the Heroes and Gary are missing, which seems normal..until Agent opens the door to the Gadget Room, and Gary's body is discovered, with the Heroes nowhere to be found. After the four vow to solve the mystery and the rest of the investigation occurs, it is revealed through Gary's machine that they were in a virtual world all along, and then as soon as they enter the trial room, they discover that Monobert was actually Protobot the entire time...and then Sam and Amy reveal themselves as Gary and Herbert's killers by accident. As well, Protobot kills the Test Bots due to them serving no more purpose. However, soon afterwards, Agent reveals that Sam was the traitor, and then Sam and Amy insist on voting for themselves so the other does not die, before Agent decides to not vote..and then it is revealed that in a lack of votes, Protobot himself would vote..for the wrong killer, Amy, and everyone besides Sam seemingly is about to be executed..before Sam sacrifices himself and is deleted by Protobot from the game. Soon afterwards, as Protobot is about to kill the rest of the cast, the Test Bots return with their original programming, saving everyone, along with a message from Gary in his modern design, about having returned everyone to the past with a gadget to make a code to restore everything to what it once was, and playing a video of the last party in Club Penguin, showing Agent in their modern design with a vow to protect the island, and then cutting to the Participants Remaining screen.]] [[{{Understatement}} Holy shit.]]
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--> '''[[spoiler: Sam:]]''' [[spoiler: ...You wanted a traitor? Then you shouldn't have picked a hero.]]
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The series can be found [[https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLUHyBSvTk-iDf-ot2CiVayZGJVqwW8NQ2 here]].
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The series can be found [[https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLUHyBSvTk-iDf-ot2CiVayZGJVqwW8NQ2 here]] or on Instagram [[https://www.instagram.com/penguinronpa/ here]].
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* AnyoneCanDie: It doesn't matter how important you were in the original Club Penguin, you can still die. Case in point, the first victim is [[spoiler:Aunt Artic]] and their killer is [[spoiler:Sensei]]
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* AnyoneCanDie: It doesn't matter how important you were in the original Club Penguin, you can still die. Case in point, the first victim is [[spoiler:Aunt Artic]] and their killer is [[spoiler:Sensei]][[spoiler:Sensei]]. By the time of chapter five only [[spoiler:Agent, Dot, Rookie, Jet Pack Guy, Sam and Amy are left.]]
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** [[spoiler:Rockhopper is killed in an explosion caused by a remote-controlled jet pack crashing into an ice rink while he's wearing it. His body remains mostly intact, despite being [[PGExplosives right where the explosion went off]].]]
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** In a rare case of a victim suffering this, [[spoiler:Rockhopper is killed in an explosion caused by a remote-controlled jet pack crashing into an ice rink while he's wearing it. His body remains mostly intact, despite being [[PGExplosives right where the explosion went off]].]]
** [[spoiler:Paige is punished via exploding robotic puffles.]]
** [[spoiler:Rory is punished by being assaulted with jackhammers before being run over by a minecart.]]
** Another victim example. [[spoiler:Kluzty is frozen to death and it's made worse by the fact ''he did it to himself''.]]
** [[spoiler:Paige is punished via exploding robotic puffles.]]
** [[spoiler:Rory is punished by being assaulted with jackhammers before being run over by a minecart.]]
** Another victim example. [[spoiler:Kluzty is frozen to death and it's made worse by the fact ''he did it to himself''.]]
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* ForcedSleep: In Chapter 2, the penguins find a mysterious piano that causes anyone who listens to it fall asleep.
[[spoiler:This is used by Paige to kill Rockhopper]].
[[spoiler:This is used by Paige to kill Rockhopper]].
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* ForcedSleep: In Chapter 2, the penguins find a mysterious piano that causes anyone who listens to it fall asleep.
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* WhamLine: WhamLine:
** [[spoiler: Chapter 5 has some serious ones when the heroes enter the EPF hideout. They discover some case files that claim everything that happened after Mission 11 in the original game did... and it's apparently 2017 instead of 2012 like they all remember.]]]]
** At the beginning the Chapter 5 trial, [[spoiler:Protobot]] tells the group that they need to find the killers of both [[spoiler:Gary and Herbert]], only for Sam to drop some surprising news on the group.
--> '''Sam:''' [[spoiler:...Herbert and Gary died because of us. W-We [him and Amy] killed them!]]
** [[spoiler: Chapter 5 has some serious ones when the heroes enter the EPF hideout. They discover some case files that claim everything that happened after Mission 11 in the original game did... and it's apparently 2017 instead of 2012 like they all remember.
** At the beginning the Chapter 5 trial, [[spoiler:Protobot]] tells the group that they need to find the killers of both [[spoiler:Gary and Herbert]], only for Sam to drop some surprising news on the group.
--> '''Sam:''' [[spoiler:...Herbert and Gary died because of us. W-We [him and Amy] killed them!]]
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