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** Well, not so much Jossed as "hasn't happened ''yet''". There's been multiple references already to some mysterious "Sea Devil"; Angora knows it exists, and it doesn't seem to be either Mocheril or the Dagre. I still think it's likely Soli is going to get her own one in time.
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'''Angora:''' *confused* [[TheIngenue Do I belong to him?]]
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'''Angora:''' *confused* [[TheIngenue Do I belong to him?]]him?]]
[[WMG: Angora is going to use her powers to destroy those tanks.]]
You know it's coming.
[[WMG: Angora is going to use her powers to destroy those tanks.]]
You know it's coming.
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2) He sees his only son Sudu as a InadequateInheritor and may decide that the solution to the problem of the succession and the continuation of his legacy is to [[BabyFactory breed a new son with someone else, whom he can raise from birth to be as ruthless and relentless as he is.]]
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2) He sees his only son Sudu as a InadequateInheritor and may decide that the solution to the problem of the succession and the continuation of his legacy is to [[BabyFactory breed a new son with someone else, else]], [[HeirClubForMen whom he can raise from birth to be as ruthless and relentless as he is.]]
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1) This is the guy who has no problem with [[spoiler: forcing his teenage daughter Rana to marry a man his own age. Among the Pasori, it may be the cultural norm for men to marry much younger girls.]]
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1) This is the guy who has no problem with [[spoiler: forcing his teenage daughter Rana to marry a man his own age. Among the Pasori, it may be the cultural norm for [[OldManMarryingAChild men to marry much younger girls.]]
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Also, in chapter four, there's a conversation between Pinter and Angora that could possibly be Foreshadowing.
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Also, in chapter four, there's a conversation between Pinter and Angora that could possibly be Foreshadowing.foreshadowing.
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4) [[DirtyOldMan Pure lust.]] Without Phe, Luca is clearly going mad with loneliness. If Angora resembles a young Phe, she would be the ReplacementGoldfish.
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4) [[DirtyOldMan Pure lust.]] Without Phe, Luca is clearly going mad with loneliness. If Angora resembles a young Phe, she would be the ReplacementGoldfish.ReplacementGoldfish.
Also, in chapter four, there's a conversation between Pinter and Angora that could possibly be Foreshadowing.
->'''Angora:''' What's an emperor?\\
'''Pinter:''' The Emperor is the leader of the country that Etan and I come from. Most of the world belongs to him.\\
'''Angora:''' *confused* [[TheIngenue Do I belong to him?]]
Also, in chapter four, there's a conversation between Pinter and Angora that could possibly be Foreshadowing.
->'''Angora:''' What's an emperor?\\
'''Pinter:''' The Emperor is the leader of the country that Etan and I come from. Most of the world belongs to him.\\
'''Angora:''' *confused* [[TheIngenue Do I belong to him?]]
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4) [[DirtyOldMan Pure lust.]] Without Phe, Luca is clearly going mad with loneliness. If Angora resembles a young Phe, she would be the ReplacementGoldfish.
** Also, in chapter four, there's a conversation between Pinter and Angora that could possibly be {{Foreshadowing.}}
-->'''Angora:''' What's an emperor?
'''Pinter:''' The Emperor is the leader of the country that Etan and I come from. Most of the world belongs to him.
'''Angora:''' *confused* [[TheIngenue Do ''I'' belong to him?]]
** Also, in chapter four, there's a conversation between Pinter and Angora that could possibly be {{Foreshadowing.}}
-->'''Angora:''' What's an emperor?
'''Pinter:''' The Emperor is the leader of the country that Etan and I come from. Most of the world belongs to him.
'''Angora:''' *confused* [[TheIngenue Do ''I'' belong to him?]]
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4) [[DirtyOldMan Pure lust.]] Without Phe, Luca is clearly going mad with loneliness. If Angora resembles a young Phe, she would be the ReplacementGoldfish.
** Also, in chapter four, there's a conversation between Pinter and Angora that could possibly be {{Foreshadowing.}}
-->'''Angora:''' What's an emperor?
'''Pinter:''' The Emperor is the leader of the country that Etan and I come from. Most of the world belongs to him.
'''Angora:''' *confused* [[TheIngenue Do ''I'' belong to him?]]ReplacementGoldfish.
** Also, in chapter four, there's a conversation between Pinter and Angora that could possibly be {{Foreshadowing.}}
-->'''Angora:''' What's an emperor?
'''Pinter:''' The Emperor is the leader of the country that Etan and I come from. Most of the world belongs to him.
'''Angora:''' *confused* [[TheIngenue Do ''I'' belong to him?]]
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4) [[DirtyOldMan Pure lust.]] Without Phe, Luca is clearly going mad with loneliness. If Angora resembles a young Phe, she would be the ReplacementGoldfish.
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4) [[DirtyOldMan Pure lust.]] Without Phe, Luca is clearly going mad with loneliness. If Angora resembles a young Phe, she would be the ReplacementGoldfish.ReplacementGoldfish.
** Also, in chapter four, there's a conversation between Pinter and Angora that could possibly be {{Foreshadowing.}}
-->'''Angora:''' What's an emperor?
'''Pinter:''' The Emperor is the leader of the country that Etan and I come from. Most of the world belongs to him.
'''Angora:''' *confused* [[TheIngenue Do ''I'' belong to him?]]
** Also, in chapter four, there's a conversation between Pinter and Angora that could possibly be {{Foreshadowing.}}
-->'''Angora:''' What's an emperor?
'''Pinter:''' The Emperor is the leader of the country that Etan and I come from. Most of the world belongs to him.
'''Angora:''' *confused* [[TheIngenue Do ''I'' belong to him?]]
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1) This is the guy who has no problem with [[spoiler: forcing his teenage daughter Rana to marry a man his own age. Among the Pasori, it may be the cultural norm for men to marry much-younger girls.]]
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1) This is the guy who has no problem with [[spoiler: forcing his teenage daughter Rana to marry a man his own age. Among the Pasori, it may be the cultural norm for men to marry much-younger much younger girls.]]
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3) After finding out about Angora's powers, Luca (who has powers himself) might see her as [[WeCanRuleTogether the perfect consort to help his annihilate his enemies and strengthen his reign.]]
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3) After finding out about Angora's powers, Luca (who has powers himself) might see her as [[WeCanRuleTogether the perfect consort to help his annihilate his enemies and strengthen his reign.]]]]
4) [[DirtyOldMan Pure lust.]] Without Phe, Luca is clearly going mad with loneliness. If Angora resembles a young Phe, she would be the ReplacementGoldfish.
4) [[DirtyOldMan Pure lust.]] Without Phe, Luca is clearly going mad with loneliness. If Angora resembles a young Phe, she would be the ReplacementGoldfish.
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1) This is the guy who has no problem with [[spoiler: forcing his teenage daughter Rana to marry a man his own age. Among his people, it may be the cultural norm for men to marry much-younger girls.]]
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1) This is the guy who has no problem with [[spoiler: forcing his teenage daughter Rana to marry a man his own age. Among his people, the Pasori, it may be the cultural norm for men to marry much-younger girls.]]
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1) This is the guy who has no problem with [[spoiler: forcing his teenage daughter Rana to marry a man his own age. Among the Caris people, it may be the cultural norm for men to marry much-younger girls.]]
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1) This is the guy who has no problem with [[spoiler: forcing his teenage daughter Rana to marry a man his own age. Among the Caris his people, it may be the cultural norm for men to marry much-younger girls.]]
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WordOfGod has said that Angora [[IdenticalStranger resembles a young Phe.]] [[{{Squick As gross as it sounds,}}]] it makes perfect sense. [[AndNowYouMustMarryMe Luca is going to want to have Angora for his second empress]] and here's why.
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WordOfGod has said that Angora [[IdenticalStranger resembles a young Phe.]] [[{{Squick [[{{Squick}} As gross as it sounds,}}]] sounds,]] it makes perfect sense. [[AndNowYouMustMarryMe Luca is going to want to have Angora for his second empress]] and here's why.
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I've just noticed the three leads - Angora, Luca and Soli - have a grass-fire-water theme going on. Angora's got her powers, Luca has some sort of heat ability, and Soli has a teardrop tattoo. No doubt this will be important somehow. The story is actually leading up to all three characters being stuffed into Poke Balls by some professor before they give it to a new Pokemon protagonist.
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I've just noticed the three leads - Angora, Luca and Soli - have a grass-fire-water theme going on. Angora's got her powers, Luca has some sort of heat ability, and Soli has a teardrop tattoo. No doubt this will be important somehow. The story is actually leading up to all three characters being stuffed into Poke Balls by some professor before they give it to a new Pokemon
[[WMG: Luca is going to try to force Angora to marry him]]
WordOfGod has said that Angora [[IdenticalStranger resembles a young Phe.]] [[{{Squick As gross as it sounds,}}]] it makes perfect sense. [[AndNowYouMustMarryMe Luca is going to want to have Angora for his second empress]] and here's why.
1) This is the guy who has no problem with [[spoiler: forcing his teenage daughter Rana to marry a man his own age. Among the Caris people, it may be the cultural norm for men to marry much-younger girls.]]
2) He sees his only son Sudu as a InadequateInheritor and may decide that the solution to the problem of the succession and the continuation of his legacy is to [[BabyFactory breed a new son with someone else, whom he can raise from birth to be as ruthless and relentless as he is.]]
3) After finding out about Angora's powers, Luca (who has powers himself) might see her as [[WeCanRuleTogether the perfect consort to help his annihilate his enemies and strengthen his reign.]]
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According to [[http://wiki.shingworks.com/Main_Page the Meekipedia]], she's 35 years old, he's 12-ish, and they do share the same hair and eye color. While his facial features aren't an exact match for hers, we don't yet know who Al's father is.
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According to [[http://wiki.shingworks.com/Main_Page the Meekipedia]], she's 35 years old, he's 12-ish, and they do share the same hair and eye color. While his facial features aren't an exact match for hers, we don't yet know who Al's father is.is.
[[WMG: The three main characters are secretly Pokemon starters.]]
I've just noticed the three leads - Angora, Luca and Soli - have a grass-fire-water theme going on. Angora's got her powers, Luca has some sort of heat ability, and Soli has a teardrop tattoo. No doubt this will be important somehow. The story is actually leading up to all three characters being stuffed into Poke Balls by some professor before they give it to a new Pokemon protagonist.
[[WMG: The three main characters are secretly Pokemon starters.]]
I've just noticed the three leads - Angora, Luca and Soli - have a grass-fire-water theme going on. Angora's got her powers, Luca has some sort of heat ability, and Soli has a teardrop tattoo. No doubt this will be important somehow. The story is actually leading up to all three characters being stuffed into Poke Balls by some professor before they give it to a new Pokemon protagonist.
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According to the Meekipedia, she's 35 years old, he's 12-ish, and they do share the same hair and eye color. While his facial features aren't an exact match for hers, we don't yet know who Al's father is.
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According to [[http://wiki.shingworks.com/Main_Page the Meekipedia, Meekipedia]], she's 35 years old, he's 12-ish, and they do share the same hair and eye color. While his facial features aren't an exact match for hers, we don't yet know who Al's father is.
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According to the Meekipedia, she's 35 years old, he's 12-ish, and they do look somewhat alike.
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According to the Meekipedia, she's 35 years old, he's 12-ish, and they do look somewhat alike.share the same hair and eye color. While his facial features aren't an exact match for hers, we don't yet know who Al's father is.
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The ambassadors of Caris had no reason to murder Phe. It would offer no political advantage: it seems the only possible outcome is that the hair-trigger temper Emperor is determined to declare war on their country. The Dagre (or is it just Dagre?) murdered Phe [[AWizardDidIt (by magic)]] and made it look like poisoning, because although the Dagre acts like he's on Luca's side, all that he wants is to see all humans eliminated, and an international war is the best way to do it.
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The ambassadors of Caris had no reason to murder Phe. It would offer no political advantage: it seems the only possible outcome is that the hair-trigger temper Emperor is determined to declare war on their country. The Dagre (or is it just Dagre?) murdered Phe [[AWizardDidIt (by magic)]] and made it look like poisoning, because although the Dagre acts like he's on Luca's side, all that he wants is to see all humans eliminated, and an international war is the best way to do it.it.
[[WMG: Soli is either Alamand's mother or aunt.]]
According to the Meekipedia, she's 35 years old, he's 12-ish, and they do look somewhat alike.
[[WMG: Soli is either Alamand's mother or aunt.]]
According to the Meekipedia, she's 35 years old, he's 12-ish, and they do look somewhat alike.
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* Jossed. Chapter 3 has now started and no giant floating monster.
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* Jossed. Chapter 3 has now started (and ended) and no giant floating monster.
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*Jossed. Chapter 3 has now started and no giant floating monster.
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I don't have much proof, it's just a hunch. A giant bird will be involved of course.
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I don't have much proof, it's just a hunch. A giant bird will be involved of course.course.
[[WMG: The Dagre murdered Phe.]]
The ambassadors of Caris had no reason to murder Phe. It would offer no political advantage: it seems the only possible outcome is that the hair-trigger temper Emperor is determined to declare war on their country. The Dagre (or is it just Dagre?) murdered Phe [[AWizardDidIt (by magic)]] and made it look like poisoning, because although the Dagre acts like he's on Luca's side, all that he wants is to see all humans eliminated, and an international war is the best way to do it.
[[WMG: The Dagre murdered Phe.]]
The ambassadors of Caris had no reason to murder Phe. It would offer no political advantage: it seems the only possible outcome is that the hair-trigger temper Emperor is determined to declare war on their country. The Dagre (or is it just Dagre?) murdered Phe [[AWizardDidIt (by magic)]] and made it look like poisoning, because although the Dagre acts like he's on Luca's side, all that he wants is to see all humans eliminated, and an international war is the best way to do it.
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Alternately, it could all be the booze.
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Alternately, it could all be the booze.booze.
[[WMG: Soli is a time traveler]]
I don't have much proof, it's just a hunch. A giant bird will be involved of course.
[[WMG: Soli is a time traveler]]
I don't have much proof, it's just a hunch. A giant bird will be involved of course.