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** In Book 2, Chapter 11, Lexi sends pictures of Bea along with Kingsley, causing the Professor to be fired. In the next chapter, Bea and Lexi sabotage Lexi's work at the natural history museum causing Lexi to be fired.
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** In Book 2, Chapter 11, Lexi sends pictures of Bea along with Kingsley, causing the Professor to be fired. In the next chapter, Bea and Lexi Zoey sabotage Lexi's work at the natural history museum causing Lexi to be fired.
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* NoCelebritiesWereHarmed: Face 1 for Ian bears a resemblance to LetsPlay/{{Markiplier}}.
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* NoCelebritiesWereHarmed: Face 1 for Ian bears a resemblance to LetsPlay/{{Markiplier}}.WebVideo/{{Markiplier}}.
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--> '''Zoey:''' "Nothing under the bed either except a box that I ''beg'' you not to open. Mistakes were made today.
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* WheresTheKaboom: A more figurative sense in Chapter 14 after Bea goes through so much effort to destroy all of Poppy's blackmail about her relation with Professor Kingsley, whether it's happening or not.
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* WheresTheKaboom: A more figurative sense in Book 1 Chapter 14 after Bea goes through so much effort to destroy all of Poppy's blackmail about her relation with Professor Kingsley, whether it's happening or not.
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* DestroyTheEvidence: Chapter 13 has Bea do this to any evidence Poppy has about her affair with Professor Kingsley, whether it's happening or not. It only involves finding the physical pictures, but also the negatives, the backups off of Poppy's phone and also off of her cloud backup.
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* DestroyTheEvidence: Book 1, Chapter 13 has Bea do this to any evidence Poppy has about her affair with Professor Kingsley, whether it's happening or not. It only involves finding the physical pictures, but also the negatives, the backups off of Poppy's phone and also off of her cloud backup.
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* DidntThinkThisThrough: In Chapter 4 if Bea chooses to backflip off the throne during rehearsal, the narration makes it clear she's never done one at all and it's only thanks to Ford she doesn't get hurt.
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* DidntThinkThisThrough: In Book 1, Chapter 4 if Bea chooses to backflip off the throne during rehearsal, the narration makes it clear she's never done one at all and it's only thanks to Ford she doesn't get hurt.
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* DontCelebrateJustYet: Chapter 2 can have Bea climbing the rankings of the T by not only playing flip cup but throwing Poppy in the jello pool until an anonymous source reveals Bea cheated her way into Belvoire, and she's up for official review.
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* DontCelebrateJustYet: Book 1, Chapter 2 can have Bea climbing the rankings of the T by not only playing flip cup but throwing Poppy in the jello pool until an anonymous source reveals Bea cheated her way into Belvoire, and she's up for official review.
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* EnemyMine: In Chapter 6, Bea has to work together with Poppy after they are paired together for an assignment. When Chloe steals the Number 1 spot from Poppy, the latter agrees to a temporary truce for as long as Poppy is no longer Number 1.
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* EnemyMine: In Book 1, Chapter 6, Bea has to work together with Poppy after they are paired together for an assignment. When Chloe steals the Number 1 spot from Poppy, the latter agrees to a temporary truce for as long as Poppy is no longer Number 1.
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** Chapter 10 opens with one on depictions of harassment and intimidation.
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** Book 1, Chapter 10 opens with one on depictions of harassment and intimidation.
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* DisgustingVegetarianFood: In Chapter 8, Zoey gets her and Bea vegan smoothies made with matcha and kale.
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* DisgustingVegetarianFood: In Book 1, Chapter 8, Zoey gets her and Bea vegan smoothies made with matcha and kale.
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** Chapter 7 has Professor Kingsley call a random student named Caroline Bea by mistake, especially if you're romancing them. You get reputation points by saying they were preoccupied by the lecture. Since they have so many students coming into their class, they defaulted to their TA, in this case, Bea.
** Chapter 8 has this as an option for Bea where can congratulate Professor Kingsley on their oral skills, though she means to say oration. Depending on Professor Kingsley gender, Ian knows what she means and says he gives good ''dic''tion, while Ina says that the key to good public speaking is all in the tongue exercises.
** Chapter 8 has this as an option for Bea where can congratulate Professor Kingsley on their oral skills, though she means to say oration. Depending on Professor Kingsley gender, Ian knows what she means and says he gives good ''dic''tion, while Ina says that the key to good public speaking is all in the tongue exercises.
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** Book 1, Chapter 7 has Professor Kingsley call a random student named Caroline Bea by mistake, especially if you're romancing them. You get reputation points by saying they were preoccupied by the lecture. Since they have so many students coming into their class, they defaulted to their TA, in this case, Bea.
** Book 1, Chapter 8 has this as an option for Bea where can congratulate Professor Kingsley on their oral skills, though she means to say oration. Depending on ProfessorKingsley Kingsley's gender, Ian knows what she means and says he gives good ''dic''tion, while Ina says that the key to good public speaking is all in the tongue exercises.
** Book 1, Chapter 8 has this as an option for Bea where can congratulate Professor Kingsley on their oral skills, though she means to say oration. Depending on Professor
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* HollywoodNewEngland: Chapter 12 takes place in Martha's Vineyard in Massachusetts.
* HumiliationConga: Chapter 11 reveals that Zeta House's annual bacchanalia has a "human sacrifice" where one guest has their past dug up and utterly humiliated, especially because they're not old money like Poppy Min-Sinclaire. In this chapter, it was Zoey getting dragged through the mud.
* InstantHumiliationJustAddYouTube: Just as it looks like Bea and Poppy might be friends, if not lovers in Chapter 7, Poppy says "the truce is over" and posts a video from Bea's childhood of her hogcalling[[note]]A contest that involves calling out to pigs[[/note]].
* HumiliationConga: Chapter 11 reveals that Zeta House's annual bacchanalia has a "human sacrifice" where one guest has their past dug up and utterly humiliated, especially because they're not old money like Poppy Min-Sinclaire. In this chapter, it was Zoey getting dragged through the mud.
* InstantHumiliationJustAddYouTube: Just as it looks like Bea and Poppy might be friends, if not lovers in Chapter 7, Poppy says "the truce is over" and posts a video from Bea's childhood of her hogcalling[[note]]A contest that involves calling out to pigs[[/note]].
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* HollywoodNewEngland: Book 1, Chapter 12 takes place in Martha's Vineyard in Massachusetts.
* HumiliationConga: Book 1, Chapter 11 reveals that Zeta House's annual bacchanalia has a "human sacrifice" where one guest has their past dug up and utterly humiliated, especially because they're not old money like PoppyMin-Sinclaire.Min-Sinclair. In this chapter, it was Zoey getting dragged through the mud.
* InstantHumiliationJustAddYouTube: Just as it looks like Bea and Poppy might be friends, if not lovers in Book 1, Chapter 7, Poppy says "the truce is over" and posts a video from Bea's childhood of her hogcalling[[note]]A contest that involves calling out to pigs[[/note]].
* HumiliationConga: Book 1, Chapter 11 reveals that Zeta House's annual bacchanalia has a "human sacrifice" where one guest has their past dug up and utterly humiliated, especially because they're not old money like Poppy
* InstantHumiliationJustAddYouTube: Just as it looks like Bea and Poppy might be friends, if not lovers in Book 1, Chapter 7, Poppy says "the truce is over" and posts a video from Bea's childhood of her hogcalling[[note]]A contest that involves calling out to pigs[[/note]].
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* MistreatmentInducedBetrayal: If you choose the diamond option in Chapter 5, Taylor will ally herself with Bea instead of Poppy.
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* MistreatmentInducedBetrayal: If you choose the diamond option in Book 1, Chapter 5, Taylor will ally herself with Bea instead of Poppy.
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* NaughtyUnderTheTable: In Chapter 9 while Bea hides under Professor Kingsley's desk as they talk with Dean Steinhelm, Bea can give them a couple gropes to their legs, though a premium choice allows her to take it even further with the Dean unaware of the action.
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* NaughtyUnderTheTable: In Book 1, Chapter 9 while Bea hides under Professor Kingsley's desk as they talk with Dean Steinhelm, Bea can give them a couple gropes to their legs, though a premium choice allows her to take it even further with the Dean unaware of the action.
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* NotHelpingYourCase: The trope name is said in Chapter 13 when Bea calls Professor Kingsley by their first name begging Poppy not to release photos of them during her trip to Martha's Vineyard.
* NoodleIncident: Chapter 5 ends with Poppy threatening Bea telling her that people who don't follow her warnings end up like Persephone Dalton. It's not until a premium choice in Chapter 13 you can find out what it was about. Poppy says it was about "following her passion to study moose" and she transferred to Juneau University in Alaska. That's when Ohio says she slipped ipecac into Persephone's beer, which makes Chase dump his drink. Hayley then says Persephone's mom made her drop out and go to rehab cause she thought her daughter was a drunk.
* NoodleIncident: Chapter 5 ends with Poppy threatening Bea telling her that people who don't follow her warnings end up like Persephone Dalton. It's not until a premium choice in Chapter 13 you can find out what it was about. Poppy says it was about "following her passion to study moose" and she transferred to Juneau University in Alaska. That's when Ohio says she slipped ipecac into Persephone's beer, which makes Chase dump his drink. Hayley then says Persephone's mom made her drop out and go to rehab cause she thought her daughter was a drunk.
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* NotHelpingYourCase: The trope name is said in Book 1, Chapter 13 when Bea calls Professor Kingsley by their first name begging Poppy not to release photos of them during her trip to Martha's Vineyard.
* NoodleIncident: Book 1, Chapter 5 ends with Poppy threatening Bea telling her that people who don't follow her warnings end up like Persephone Dalton. It's not until a premium choice in Chapter 13 you can find out what it was about. Poppy says it was about "following her passion to study moose" and she transferred to Juneau University in Alaska. That's when Ohio says she slipped ipecac into Persephone's beer, which makes Chase dump his drink. Hayley then says Persephone's mom made her drop out and go to rehab cause she thought her daughter was a drunk.
* NoodleIncident: Book 1, Chapter 5 ends with Poppy threatening Bea telling her that people who don't follow her warnings end up like Persephone Dalton. It's not until a premium choice in Chapter 13 you can find out what it was about. Poppy says it was about "following her passion to study moose" and she transferred to Juneau University in Alaska. That's when Ohio says she slipped ipecac into Persephone's beer, which makes Chase dump his drink. Hayley then says Persephone's mom made her drop out and go to rehab cause she thought her daughter was a drunk.
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* PassThePopcorn: Chapter 16 has Veronica loving Poppy's VillainousBreakdown.
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* PassThePopcorn: Book 1, Chapter 16 has Veronica loving Poppy's VillainousBreakdown.
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* PlayingCyrano: Poppy's plan in Chapter 7 is to have Bea feed lines to her boyfriend Bradley as he romances Chloe before pulling the rug from her. Chloe thinks Bradley is being romantic about her when really it's about Poppy.
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* PlayingCyrano: Poppy's plan in Book 1, Chapter 7 is to have Bea feed lines to her boyfriend Bradley as he romances Chloe before pulling the rug from her. Chloe thinks Bradley is being romantic about her when really it's about Poppy.
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** Chapter 8 has one user name on The T be named [[Manga/{{Naruto}} Rasengan69]].
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** Book 1, Chapter 8 has one user name on The T be named [[Manga/{{Naruto}} Rasengan69]].
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** Chapter 10 has The T call Benji "a total ''[[Series/You2018 You]]'' situation."
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** Book 1, Chapter 10 has The T call Benji "a total ''[[Series/You2018 You]]'' situation."
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** Chapter 14 is called "[[VisualNovel/DesireAndDecorum Designer & Decorum]]." Taking a premium scene with Professor Kingsley is "[[Music/{{LMFAO}} Sexty And I Know It]]." Chloe's act for the talent show is the wine glass section from ''Film/MissCongeniality.''
** In Chapter 16 during Poppy's VillainousBreakdown, once she turns her attention to Bea...
** In Chapter 16 during Poppy's VillainousBreakdown, once she turns her attention to Bea...
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** Book 1, Chapter 14 is called "[[VisualNovel/DesireAndDecorum Designer & Decorum]]." Taking a premium scene with Professor Kingsley is "[[Music/{{LMFAO}} Sexty And I Know It]]." Chloe's act for the talent show is the wine glass section from ''Film/MissCongeniality.''
** In Book 1, Chapter 16 during Poppy's VillainousBreakdown, once she turns her attention to Bea...
** In Book 1, Chapter 16 during Poppy's VillainousBreakdown, once she turns her attention to Bea...
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* StalkerShrine: In Chapter 9, it's revealed that [[spoiler: Benji]] made one of these for Bea.
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* StalkerShrine: In Book 1, Chapter 9, it's revealed that [[spoiler: Benji]] made one of these for Bea.
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** Chapter 9 reveals that [[spoiler: Benji has a StalkerShrine for Bea and he's been stealing things from her room using his position as RA to do so.]]
** Chapter 11 has Poppy's bacchanalia have the "human sacrifice" be her utterly humiliating Zoey by digging up her past, including her sealed juvenile record which gets the party [[ProducePelting throwing tomatoes]] at her. Even after Bea airs out Poppy's credit cards on the T and gets Zoey out, far as her friend is concerned, she's [[FullCircleRevolution turning just as bad as Poppy]].
** Chapter 12, whether Bea has sex with Professor Kingsley or not, [[spoiler:it doesn't look good when Poppy texts her a picture of them looking quite close to her]].
** Chapter 11 has Poppy's bacchanalia have the "human sacrifice" be her utterly humiliating Zoey by digging up her past, including her sealed juvenile record which gets the party [[ProducePelting throwing tomatoes]] at her. Even after Bea airs out Poppy's credit cards on the T and gets Zoey out, far as her friend is concerned, she's [[FullCircleRevolution turning just as bad as Poppy]].
** Chapter 12, whether Bea has sex with Professor Kingsley or not, [[spoiler:it doesn't look good when Poppy texts her a picture of them looking quite close to her]].
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** Book 1, Chapter 9 reveals that [[spoiler: Benji has a StalkerShrine for Bea and he's been stealing things from her room using his position as RA to do so.]]
** Book 1, Chapter 11 has Poppy's bacchanalia have the "human sacrifice" be her utterly humiliating Zoey by digging up her past, including her sealed juvenile record which gets the party [[ProducePelting throwing tomatoes]] at her. Even after Bea airs out Poppy's credit cards on the T and gets Zoey out, far as her friend is concerned, she's [[FullCircleRevolution turning just as bad as Poppy]].
** Book 1, Chapter 12, whether Bea has sex with Professor Kingsley or not, [[spoiler:it doesn't look good when Poppy texts her a picture of them looking quite close to her]].
** Book 1, Chapter 11 has Poppy's bacchanalia have the "human sacrifice" be her utterly humiliating Zoey by digging up her past, including her sealed juvenile record which gets the party [[ProducePelting throwing tomatoes]] at her. Even after Bea airs out Poppy's credit cards on the T and gets Zoey out, far as her friend is concerned, she's [[FullCircleRevolution turning just as bad as Poppy]].
** Book 1, Chapter 12, whether Bea has sex with Professor Kingsley or not, [[spoiler:it doesn't look good when Poppy texts her a picture of them looking quite close to her]].
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* WrongGenreSavvy: Chapter 10 is this for Benji. [[spoiler: He learns the hard way that no woman is not only gonna like a creepy stalker who breaks into their apartment to steal their things as well make a rotten food shrine, but he also came after her to the point she could just as well beat him down, followed by Professor Kingsley giving him just as much of a punch in the face, being arrested by police and thoroughly expelled from school.]]
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* WrongGenreSavvy: Book 1, Chapter 10 is this for Benji. [[spoiler: He learns the hard way that no woman is not only gonna like a creepy stalker who breaks into their apartment to steal their things as well make a rotten food shrine, but he also came after her to the point she could just as well beat him down, followed by Professor Kingsley giving him just as much of a punch in the face, being arrested by police and thoroughly expelled from school.]]
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--> '''Kingsley:''' Today will be the last time we ever see each other. Lose my number, forget my address, and don't ever utter my name again. And just to be absolutely and irrefutably clear, if the Earth ever stops spinning and the crops die off, and the only way to save humanity is to rekindle a relationship between us, then I'd rather embrace the darkness with open arms than even look in your direction!
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--> '''Kingsley:''' Today "Today will be the last time we ever see each other. Lose my number, forget my address, and don't ever utter my name again. And just to be absolutely and irrefutably clear, if the Earth ever stops spinning and the crops die off, and the only way to save humanity is to rekindle a relationship between us, then I'd rather embrace the darkness with open arms than even look in your direction!direction!"
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-->Zoey: "Nothing under the bed either except a box that I ''beg'' you not to open. Mistakes were made today.
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*** [=CrossculturalxLeakey=] (real name: [[spoiler:Caroline Springfield]] felt that she was better than a c student in Kingsley’s class and instead of acknowledging that she wasn’t handing in particularly good papers blames Bea for monopolizing Kingsley’s attention and steals quotes from their notebook.
*** [=Packinleader=] (real name: [[spoiler:Wilson Laguna]] was furious that he was saddled with an EmbarrassingNickname and angry at having lost the presidency of his frat to Liam because he wanted the frat to go back to what they were originally designed for so he tricked them into violating the day time party ban and getting all parties banned for the rest of the year.
*** [=Packinleader=] (real name: [[spoiler:Wilson Laguna]] was furious that he was saddled with an EmbarrassingNickname and angry at having lost the presidency of his frat to Liam because he wanted the frat to go back to what they were originally designed for so he tricked them into violating the day time party ban and getting all parties banned for the rest of the year.
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*** [=CrossculturalxLeakey=] (real name: [[spoiler:Caroline Springfield]] Springfield]]) felt that she was better than a c student in Kingsley’s class and instead of acknowledging that she wasn’t handing in particularly good papers blames Bea for monopolizing Kingsley’s attention and steals quotes from their notebook.
*** [=Packinleader=] (real name: [[spoiler:WilsonLaguna]] Laguna]]) was furious that he was saddled with an EmbarrassingNickname and angry at having lost the presidency of his frat to Liam because he wanted the frat to go back to what they were originally designed for so he tricked them into violating the day time party ban and getting all parties banned for the rest of the year.
*** [=Packinleader=] (real name: [[spoiler:Wilson
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* {{Railroading}}: The plot of Book 2 hinges on Bea being the Queen B, so the new BigBad can challenge her for the throne. If Bea didn't win the title at the end of Book 1, the winner ([[spoiler: Chloe]]) essentially gives her the position, the only difference being that Bea starts out with less support than if she had won the title herself.
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* {{Railroading}}: The plot of Book 2 hinges on Bea being the Queen B, so the new BigBad can challenge her for the throne. If Bea didn't win the title at the end of Book 1, the winner ([[spoiler: Chloe]]) ([[spoiler:Chloe]]) essentially gives her the position, the only difference being that Bea starts out with less support than if she had won the title herself.
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* ATasteOfTheirOwnMedicine: It happened twice during the sstory.
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* ATasteOfTheirOwnMedicine: It happened twice during the sstory.story.
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* AStormIsComing: More in the figurative sense in Chapter 9.
--> '''The T:''' Other than that, Thoroughbreds, all is quiet on the East Coast front. [[ItsQuietTooQuiet Too quiet]], if you ask me... We all know what that means. A storm's brewing, but who's going to be caught in the downpour? We're not scared of a little thunder and lightning, are we?
* ATasteOfTheirOwnMedicine: It happened twice during the sstory.
** Zoey was the subject of human sacrifice, being humiliated in Book 1, Chapter 11. In Book 2, Chapter 9, Zoey pushes Poppy into the pool with fake blood in retaliation for being the victim of this prank the previous year.
** In Book 2, Chapter 11, Lexi sends pictures of Bea along with Kingsley, causing the Professor to be fired. In the next chapter, Bea and Lexi sabotage Lexi's work at the natural history museum causing Lexi to be fired.
--> '''The T:''' Other than that, Thoroughbreds, all is quiet on the East Coast front. [[ItsQuietTooQuiet Too quiet]], if you ask me... We all know what that means. A storm's brewing, but who's going to be caught in the downpour? We're not scared of a little thunder and lightning, are we?
* ATasteOfTheirOwnMedicine: It happened twice during the sstory.
** Zoey was the subject of human sacrifice, being humiliated in Book 1, Chapter 11. In Book 2, Chapter 9, Zoey pushes Poppy into the pool with fake blood in retaliation for being the victim of this prank the previous year.
** In Book 2, Chapter 11, Lexi sends pictures of Bea along with Kingsley, causing the Professor to be fired. In the next chapter, Bea and Lexi sabotage Lexi's work at the natural history museum causing Lexi to be fired.
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--> '''The T:''' Other than that, Thoroughbreds, all is quiet on the East Coast front. [[ItsQuietTooQuiet Too quiet]], if you ask me... We all know what that means. A storm's brewing, but who's going to be caught in the downpour? We're not scared of a little thunder and lightning, are we?
--> '''The T:''' Other than that, Thoroughbreds, all is quiet on the East Coast front. [[ItsQuietTooQuiet Too quiet]], if you ask me... We all know what that means. A storm's brewing, but who's going to be caught in the downpour? We're not scared of a little thunder and lightning, are we?
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* ATasteOfTheirOwnMedicine: It happened twice during the sstory.
** Zoey was the subject of human sacrifice, being humiliated in Book 1, Chapter 11. In Book 2, Chapter 9, Zoey pushes Poppy into the pool with fake blood in retaliation for being the victim of this prank the previous year.
** In Book 2, Chapter 11, Lexi sends pictures of Bea along with Kingsley, causing the Professor to be fired. In the next chapter, Bea and Lexi sabotage Lexi's work at the natural history museum causing Lexi to be fired.
** Zoey was the subject of human sacrifice, being humiliated in Book 1, Chapter 11. In Book 2, Chapter 9, Zoey pushes Poppy into the pool with fake blood in retaliation for being the victim of this prank the previous year.
** In Book 2, Chapter 11, Lexi sends pictures of Bea along with Kingsley, causing the Professor to be fired. In the next chapter, Bea and Lexi sabotage Lexi's work at the natural history museum causing Lexi to be fired.
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!!''Queen B'' includes examples of:
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* [[Flanderization]]: Chloe goes from a normal person who's a bit ditzy in Book 1 to [[TooDumbToLive so dumb in Book 2 that she can barely function, struggles to understand simple sentences, and it is surprising that she hasn't failed out of college.]]
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* [[Flanderization]]: {{Flanderization}}: Chloe goes from a normal person who's a bit ditzy in Book 1 to [[TooDumbToLive so dumb in Book 2 that she can barely function, struggles to understand simple sentences, and it is surprising that she hasn't failed out of college.]]
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* Flanderization: [[Flanderization]]: Chloe goes from a normal person who's a bit ditzy in Book 1 to [[TooDumbToLive so dumb in Book 2 that she can barely function, struggles to understand simple sentences, and it is surprising that she hasn't failed out of college.]]
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* ATasteOfTheirOwnMedicine: It happened twice during history.the sstory.
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Welcome to Belvoire, New Girl. Do you have what it takes to steal the Queen Bee’s crown? Let the games begin <3
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* GlassesAreSexy: Bea can comment that Professor Kingsley looks hot in glasses.
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* SexySpectacles: Bea can comment that Professor Kingsley looks hot in glasses.
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** Zoey was the subject of human sacrifice, being humiliated in Book 1, Chapter 11. In Book 2, Chapter 9, Zoey pushes Poppy into the pool with fake blood in retaliation for being the victim of this prank the previous year.
** In Book 2, Chapter 11, Lexi sends pictures of Bea along with Kingsley, causing the Professor to be fired. In the next chapter, Bea and Lexi sabotage Lexi's work at the natural history museum causing Lexi to be fired.
** Zoey was the subject of human sacrifice, being humiliated in Book 1, Chapter 11. In Book 2, Chapter 9, Zoey pushes Poppy into the pool with fake blood in retaliation for being the victim of this prank the previous year.
** In Book 2, Chapter 11, Lexi sends pictures of Bea along with Kingsley, causing the Professor to be fired. In the next chapter, Bea and Lexi sabotage Lexi's work at the natural history museum causing Lexi to be fired.
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--> "She strides away, and you follow with a sigh, scooping up your smoothie on the way. It tastes awful, BTW. Matcha ''and'' kale? Unneccessarily green.''
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--> "She strides away, and you follow with a sigh, scooping up your smoothie on the way. It tastes awful, BTW. Matcha ''and'' kale? Unneccessarily Unnecessarily green.''
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** Chapter 7 has Professor Kingsley call a random student named Caroline Bea by mistake, especially if you're romancing them. You get reputation points by saying they were preoccupied by the lecture. That since they have so many students coming into their class, they defaulted to their TA, in this case, Bea.
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** Chapter 7 has Professor Kingsley call a random student named Caroline Bea by mistake, especially if you're romancing them. You get reputation points by saying they were preoccupied by the lecture. That since Since they have so many students coming into their class, they defaulted to their TA, in this case, Bea.
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--> "Poppy crosses her legs, leaning closer. She settles her chin on her fist as she gives you a simpering smile, batting her eyelashes. Wait, where's my shock and awe, damnit?"
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--> "Poppy crosses her legs, leaning closer. She settles her chin on her fist as she gives you a simpering smile, batting her eyelashes. Wait, where's my shock and awe, damnit?"dammit?"
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*** [=2fingerguns=] (real name: [[spoiler:Pete Scotch]]) was angry Bea got TA position with Kingsley and furious she gave him a B on a paper she graded for their class. Which was why he exposed their texts to Bea when she was avoiding them last year.
*** [=CrossculturalxLeakey=] (real name: [[spoiler:Caroline Springfield]] felt that she was better than a c student in Kingsley’s class and instead of acknowledging that she wasn’t handing in particularly good papers blames Bea for monopolizing Kingsley’s attention and steals quotes from their notebook.
*** [=Packinleader=] (real name: [[spoiler:Wilson Laguna]] was furious that he was saddled with an EmbarrassingNickname and angry at having lost the presidency of his frat to Liam because he wanted the frat to go back to what they were originally designed for so he tricked them into violating the day time party ban and getting all parties banned for the rest of the year.
*** [=throwaway1989=] (real name: [[spoiler:Lexi Montgomery]]) was GreenEyedMonster over Bea’s relationship with Kingsley and got them fired and Bea nearly expelled as well as forging an application at her workplace for Kingsley so they’d work together and she could try to seduce them.
*** [=CrossculturalxLeakey=] (real name: [[spoiler:Caroline Springfield]] felt that she was better than a c student in Kingsley’s class and instead of acknowledging that she wasn’t handing in particularly good papers blames Bea for monopolizing Kingsley’s attention and steals quotes from their notebook.
*** [=Packinleader=] (real name: [[spoiler:Wilson Laguna]] was furious that he was saddled with an EmbarrassingNickname and angry at having lost the presidency of his frat to Liam because he wanted the frat to go back to what they were originally designed for so he tricked them into violating the day time party ban and getting all parties banned for the rest of the year.
*** [=throwaway1989=] (real name: [[spoiler:Lexi Montgomery]]) was GreenEyedMonster over Bea’s relationship with Kingsley and got them fired and Bea nearly expelled as well as forging an application at her workplace for Kingsley so they’d work together and she could try to seduce them.
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* DumbBlonde: Chloe can be portrayed this way if the player chooses dialogue options to insult her intelligence.
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** Chloecan be portrayed this way if is semi-intelligent at the player chooses dialogue options beginning of Book 1, but she gets dumber and [[TheDitz ditzier]] as the series goes along, to insult her intelligence.the point where she's barely functional as an adult by the end of Book 2.
** Trixie and Ohio are also routinely mocked for their lack of intelligence, especially in Book 2.
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** Trixie and Ohio are also routinely mocked for their lack of intelligence, especially in Book 2.
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** Book 2, Chapter 15 features an appearance from [[VisualNovel/LawsOfAttractionPixelberry Marcus Sharpe]].
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* BestServedCold: After being the human sacrifice for last year's bacchanalia, Zoey finally gets her revenge on Poppy by making her this year's human sacrifice.
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* BestServedCold: After being the human sacrifice for last year's bacchanalia, Zoey finally gets her revenge on Poppy by making her this year's human sacrifice.
** You can set one up in Book 2 chapter 15 between [[spoiler: Poppy and Persephone to score more votes]].
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* SequelHook: Book 1's ending: [[spoiler: A mysterious person named X hijacks The T, locking Thomas out and removing the anonymous submissions page... who then posts the incriminating of Bea and Professor Kingsley, even though Bea removed any physical and digital evidence held by Poppy earlier.]]
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* SequelHook: Book 1's ending: [[spoiler: A mysterious person named X hijacks The T, locking Thomas out and removing the anonymous submissions page... who then posts the incriminating photo of Bea and Professor Kingsley, even though Bea removed any physical and digital evidence held by Poppy earlier.]]
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** In Book 2, the elusive "X" is quickly set up as this, and challenges Bea for the throne.
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* WouldRatherSuffer: In Book 2, Chapter 12, after finding out that Lexi got them fired out of petty jealousy towards Bea (and then forged an application for the company she works at, just to get closer to them), Professor Kingsley gives this statement to Lexi:
--> '''Kingsley:''' Today will be the last time we ever see each other. Lose my number, forget my address, and don't ever utter my name again. And just to be absolutely and irrefutably clear, if the Earth ever stops spinning and the crops die off, and the only way to save humanity is to rekindle a relationship between us, then I'd rather embrace the darkness with open arms than even look in your direction!
--> '''Kingsley:''' Today will be the last time we ever see each other. Lose my number, forget my address, and don't ever utter my name again. And just to be absolutely and irrefutably clear, if the Earth ever stops spinning and the crops die off, and the only way to save humanity is to rekindle a relationship between us, then I'd rather embrace the darkness with open arms than even look in your direction!
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* OverlyNervousFlopSweat: Wilson Laguna ended up suffering from this when he tried to give a speech in front of the Alphas in Book 2, Chapter 11, grossing out the other members, embarrassing himself and earning the nickname "Pit Stain". In a premium scene later on, Bea confronts him over getting the Alpha's charter revoked as revenge, and he sweats himself silly a second time.