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* WhamEpisode: "Chapter 05: The Summer Vacation Finishes."
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* WhamEpisode: "Chapter 05: The Summer Vacation Finishes."Finishes".
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* NewGamePlus: [[spoiler:A second playthrough on will grant you more of Haru's internal thoughts and some extra scenes.]]
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''No, Thank You!!!'' is an adult [[BoysLove BL]]/{{Bara}} VisualNovel. It was first released in Japan on June 28, 2013 by parade, one of the child companies of [=ClockUp=]. On February 27, 2015 [=MangaGamer=] released an official English translation of the game. The game features four main love interests, each with multiple endings, an insane total of '''3000+''' 3000+ [=CGs=] (all drawn by the artist Hamashima Shigeo), and a "No, Thank You!!!" button which gives players a unique way to affect the game's story.
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* InterruptedIntimacy: Happens in Hiroyuki and Maki's routes.
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* InterruptedIntimacy: Happens in Hiroyuki Hiroyuki's, Ryu's, and Maki's routes.
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* EroticAsphyxiation: [[spoiler:Happens at the end Kouichi's route.]]
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* EroticAsphyxiation: [[spoiler:Happens at the end of Kouichi's route.]]
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* PressXToNotDie: [[spoiler: If you ''don't'' touch the "No, Thank You!!!" button at two points in each guy's route, you'll get their bad endings.]]
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* ChekhovsGag: In the first chapter, the sótano staff tries to get Haru to suggest a name for them to call him by, only for Haru to come up with things like Corn-on-the-Cob, Bean Daifuku, and Pool. [[spoiler:Those things are the only happy memories that Haru can recall from his life before arriving at sótano.]]
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* ChekhovsGag: In the first chapter, the sótano staff tries to get Haru to suggest a name for them to call him by, only for Haru to come up with things like Corn-on-the-Cob, Bean Daifuku, and Pool.Pools. [[spoiler:Those things are the only happy memories that Haru can recall from his life before arriving at sótano.]]
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** Ryu's Bad Ending 1: [[spoiler:Haru tells Ryu about his younger sister’s death, and Haru dies from bleeding.]]
** Ryu's Bad Ending 2: [[spoiler:Ryu knows about his younger sister’s situation, breaks down, and tells Haru to kill him. Haru does.]]
** Ryu's Good Ending: [[spoiler:Ryu asks Haru to liberate his younger sister, and to take care of Yufumi.]]
** Hiroyuki's Bad Ending 1: [[spoiler:Haru is unable save Yamato, Haru kills Shindo, and Haru dies from blood loss.]]
** Hiroyuki's Bad Ending 2: [[spoiler:Haru kills Hiroyuki.]]
** Hiroyuki's Good Ending: [[spoiler:Haru leaves Hiroyuki, says that he will come again.]]
** Maki's Bad Ending 1: [[spoiler:Haru has a fight with Maki, and Haru lets Maki kill him.]]
** Maki's Bad Ending 2: [[spoiler:Haru has a fight with Maki, and Haru shoots Maki.]]
** Maki's Good Ending: [[spoiler:Harua has a fight with Maki, and then takes the laptop.]]
** Kouichi's Bad Ending: [[spoiler:Haru kills Kouichi with the drug.]]
** Kouichi's Good Ending: [[spoiler:Haru drugs Kouichi--but just to let him sleep, saying that "WeWillMeetAgain".]]
** Other Ending 1: [[spoiler:Hiroyuki dies, Haru’s true identity is exposed, and he runs away.]]
** Other Ending 2: [[spoiler:The Manufacturing Place is found, and Haru runs away.]]
** Ryu's Bad Ending 2: [[spoiler:Ryu knows about his younger sister’s situation, breaks down, and tells Haru to kill him. Haru does.]]
** Ryu's Good Ending: [[spoiler:Ryu asks Haru to liberate his younger sister, and to take care of Yufumi.]]
** Hiroyuki's Bad Ending 1: [[spoiler:Haru is unable save Yamato, Haru kills Shindo, and Haru dies from blood loss.]]
** Hiroyuki's Bad Ending 2: [[spoiler:Haru kills Hiroyuki.]]
** Hiroyuki's Good Ending: [[spoiler:Haru leaves Hiroyuki, says that he will come again.]]
** Maki's Bad Ending 1: [[spoiler:Haru has a fight with Maki, and Haru lets Maki kill him.]]
** Maki's Bad Ending 2: [[spoiler:Haru has a fight with Maki, and Haru shoots Maki.]]
** Maki's Good Ending: [[spoiler:Harua has a fight with Maki, and then takes the laptop.]]
** Kouichi's Bad Ending: [[spoiler:Haru kills Kouichi with the drug.]]
** Kouichi's Good Ending: [[spoiler:Haru drugs Kouichi--but just to let him sleep, saying that "WeWillMeetAgain".]]
** Other Ending 1: [[spoiler:Hiroyuki dies, Haru’s true identity is exposed, and he runs away.]]
** Other Ending 2: [[spoiler:The Manufacturing Place is found, and Haru runs away.]]
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** Ryu's '''Ryu's Bad Ending 1: 1:''' [[spoiler:Haru tells Ryu about his younger sister’s death, and Haru dies from bleeding.]]
**Ryu's '''Ryu's Bad Ending 2: 2:''' [[spoiler:Ryu knows about his younger sister’s situation, breaks down, and tells Haru to kill him. Haru does.]]
**Ryu's '''Ryu's Good Ending: Ending:''' [[spoiler:Ryu asks Haru to liberate his younger sister, and to take care of Yufumi.]]
**Hiroyuki's '''Hiroyuki's Bad Ending 1: 1:''' [[spoiler:Haru is unable save Yamato, Haru kills Shindo, and Haru dies from blood loss.]]
**Hiroyuki's '''Hiroyuki's Bad Ending 2: 2:''' [[spoiler:Haru kills Hiroyuki.]]
**Hiroyuki's '''Hiroyuki's Good Ending: Ending:''' [[spoiler:Haru leaves Hiroyuki, says that he will come again.]]
**Maki's '''Maki's Bad Ending 1: 1:''' [[spoiler:Haru has a fight with Maki, and Haru lets Maki kill him.]]
**Maki's '''Maki's Bad Ending 2: 2:''' [[spoiler:Haru has a fight with Maki, and Haru shoots Maki.]]
**Maki's '''Maki's Good Ending: Ending:''' [[spoiler:Harua has a fight with Maki, and then takes the laptop.]]
**Kouichi's '''Kouichi's Bad Ending: Ending:''' [[spoiler:Haru kills Kouichi with the drug.]]
**Kouichi's '''Kouichi's Good Ending: Ending:''' [[spoiler:Haru drugs Kouichi--but just to let him sleep, saying that "WeWillMeetAgain".]]
**Other '''Other Ending 1: 1:''' [[spoiler:Hiroyuki dies, Haru’s true identity is exposed, and he runs away.]]
**Other '''Other Ending 2: 2:''' [[spoiler:The Manufacturing Place is found, and Haru runs away.]]
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** Ryu's Bad Ending 1: [[spoiler:Haru tells Ryu about his younger sister’s death, and Haru dies from bleeding.]]
** Ryu's Bad Ending 2: [[spoiler:Ryu knows about his younger sister’s situation, breaks down, and tells Haru to kill him. Haru does.]]
** Ryu's Good Ending: [[spoiler:Ryu asks Haru to liberate his younger sister, and to take care of Yufumi.]]
** Hiroyuki's Bad Ending 1: [[spoiler:Haru is unable save Yamato, Haru kills Shindo, and Haru dies from blood loss.]]
** Hiroyuki's Bad Ending 2: [[spoiler:Haru kills Hiroyuki.]]
** Hiroyuki's Good Ending: [[spoiler:Haru leaves Hiroyuki, says that he will come again.]]
** Maki's Bad Ending 1: [[spoiler:Haru has a fight with Maki, and Haru lets Maki kill him.]]
** Maki's Bad Ending 2: [[spoiler:Haru has a fight with Maki, and Haru shoots Maki.]]
** Maki's Good Ending: [[spoiler:Harua has a fight with Maki, and then takes the laptop.]]
** Kouichi's Bad Ending: [[spoiler:Haru kills Kouichi with the drug.]]
** Kouichi's Good Ending: [[spoiler:Haru drugs Kouichi--but just to him to sleep, saying that "WeWillMeetAgain".]]
** Other Ending 1: [[spoiler:Hiroyuki dies, Haru’s true identity is exposed, and he runs away.]]
** Other Ending 2: [[spoiler:The Manufacturing Place is found, and Haru runs away.]]
** Ryu's Bad Ending 2: [[spoiler:Ryu knows about his younger sister’s situation, breaks down, and tells Haru to kill him. Haru does.]]
** Ryu's Good Ending: [[spoiler:Ryu asks Haru to liberate his younger sister, and to take care of Yufumi.]]
** Hiroyuki's Bad Ending 1: [[spoiler:Haru is unable save Yamato, Haru kills Shindo, and Haru dies from blood loss.]]
** Hiroyuki's Bad Ending 2: [[spoiler:Haru kills Hiroyuki.]]
** Hiroyuki's Good Ending: [[spoiler:Haru leaves Hiroyuki, says that he will come again.]]
** Maki's Bad Ending 1: [[spoiler:Haru has a fight with Maki, and Haru lets Maki kill him.]]
** Maki's Bad Ending 2: [[spoiler:Haru has a fight with Maki, and Haru shoots Maki.]]
** Maki's Good Ending: [[spoiler:Harua has a fight with Maki, and then takes the laptop.]]
** Kouichi's Bad Ending: [[spoiler:Haru kills Kouichi with the drug.]]
** Kouichi's Good Ending: [[spoiler:Haru drugs Kouichi--but just to him to sleep, saying that "WeWillMeetAgain".]]
** Other Ending 1: [[spoiler:Hiroyuki dies, Haru’s true identity is exposed, and he runs away.]]
** Other Ending 2: [[spoiler:The Manufacturing Place is found, and Haru runs away.]]
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* PressXToNotDie: [[spoiler: If you ''don't'' touch the "No, Thank You!!!" button in two points in each guy's route, you'll get their bad endings.]]
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* PressXToNotDie: [[spoiler: If you ''don't'' touch the "No, Thank You!!!" button in at two points in each guy's route, you'll get their bad endings.]]
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* EmbarrassingTattoo: [[spoiler:Haru constantly tries to hide his tribal tattoos and rarely ever gets naked during sex scenes because of it.]]
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* LikeASonToMe: Kouichi's route revolves around this trope.
* LovableSexManiac: Upon meeting new people Haru usually assess their sexiness (and almost always has something nice to say). He spends most of his work day thinking about groping his coworkers, except during his breaks when he offers casual sex to people at inappropriate times.
* LovableSexManiac: Upon meeting new people Haru usually assess their sexiness (and almost always has something nice to say). He spends most of his work day thinking about groping his coworkers, except during his breaks when he offers casual sex to people at inappropriate times.
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* AnythingThatMoves: Haru thinks about sleeping with almost everyone he meets.
-->'''Haru:''' Don't worry, I don't mind that you're a dirty, jobless, virgin loser. Actually, I prefer it that way!
-->'''Haru:''' Don't worry, I don't mind that you're a dirty, jobless, virgin loser. Actually, I prefer it that way!
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* BewareTheSillyOnes: Haru may be dumb, but [[spoiler:[[MoreThanMeetsTheEye he's not clueless]].]] And he's also a pretty good fighter to boot.
* BreakTheCutie: [[spoiler:Hiroyuki near the end of his route.]]
* BreakTheCutie: [[spoiler:Hiroyuki near the end of his route.]]
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* DeathSeeker: Inverted [[spoiler:with Haru.]]
-->[[spoiler:'''Haru:''' I have to prioritize my own survival. Though, there are times when I think a quick death might be preferable. My death won't change anything.]]
-->[[spoiler:'''Haru:''' I have to prioritize my own survival. Though, there are times when I think a quick death might be preferable. My death won't change anything.]]
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* ButNotTooBi: Subverted. Haru has openly showed interest towards to both girls and guys. [[spoiler:He even has a conversation with Maki about what kind of girls they like during a sex scene in his route.]]
* ButNotTooForeign: Maki, the blond who hangs out in the expat community, is a quarter Japanese on his dad's side, and was born in Japan.
* ButNotTooForeign: Maki, the blond who hangs out in the expat community, is a quarter Japanese on his dad's side, and was born in Japan.
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* DepravedBisexual: Haru.
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* GruntingOrgasm: The lead character, Haru.
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* TechnicalVirgin: Played with in Hiroyuki's route several times.
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''No, Thank You!!!'' is an adult [[BoysLove BL]]/{{Bara}} VisualNovel. It was first released in Japan on June 28, 2013 by parade, one of the child companies of [=ClockUp=]. On February 27, 2015 [=MangaGamer=] released an official English translation of the game. The game features four main love interests, each with multiple endings, an insane total of '''3000+''' [=CGs=], [=CGs=] (all drawn by the artist Hamashima Shigeo), and a "No, Thank You!!!" button which gives players a unique way to affect the game's story.
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* BewareTheSillyOnes: Haru may be dumb, but [[spoiler:[[MoreThanMeetsTheEye he's not clueless]]. And]] he's also a pretty good fighter to boot.
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* BewareTheSillyOnes: Haru may be dumb, but [[spoiler:[[MoreThanMeetsTheEye he's not clueless]]. And]] ]] And he's also a pretty good fighter to boot.
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* FourTemperamentEnsemble: We have Hiroyuki (Sanguine), Ryu (Choleric), Kouichi (Melancholic), and Maki (Phlegmatic).
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* GreaterScopeVillain: [[spoiler: Haru's Grandfather.]]
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''No, Thank You!!!'' is an adult [[BoysLove BL]] BL]]/{{Bara}} VisualNovel. It was first released in Japan on June 28, 2013 by parade, one of the child companies of [=ClockUp=]. On February 27, 2015 [=MangaGamer=] released an official English translation of the game. The game features four main love interests, each with multiple endings, an insane total of '''3000+''' [=CGs=], and a "No, Thank You!!!" button which gives players a unique way to affect the game's story.
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* ImmodestOrgasm: Every love interest to some extent except Maki. [[spoiler:Hiroyuki in particular screams like a banshee!]]
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* ImmodestOrgasm: TheImmodestOrgasm: Every love interest to some extent extent...except Maki. [[spoiler:Hiroyuki in particular screams like a banshee!]]banshee! It could be compared to [[VisualNovel/DRAMAticalMurder Aoba's!]]]]
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''No, Thank You!!!'' is an adult [[BoysLove BL]] VisualNovel. It was first released in Japan on June 28, 2013 by parade, one of the child companies of [=ClockUp=]. On February 27, 2015 [=MangaGamer=] released an official English translation of the game. The game features four main love interests, each with multiple endings, ''thousands'' of [=CGs=], and a "No, Thank You!!!" button which gives players a unique way to affect the game's story.
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''No, Thank You!!!'' is an adult [[BoysLove BL]] VisualNovel. It was first released in Japan on June 28, 2013 by parade, one of the child companies of [=ClockUp=]. On February 27, 2015 [=MangaGamer=] released an official English translation of the game. The game features four main love interests, each with multiple endings, ''thousands'' an insane total of '''3000+''' [=CGs=], and a "No, Thank You!!!" button which gives players a unique way to affect the game's story.
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* ArtShift: Certain scenes and actions are presented in a chibi style.
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* ArtShift: Certain scenes and actions are presented in a chibi SuperDeformed style.
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* ADateWithRosiePalms: [[spoiler:Hiroyuki and Kouichi's POV scenes.]]
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* ADateWithRosiePalms: [[spoiler:Hiroyuki and Kouichi's POV scenes.]]
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''No, Thank You!!!'' is an adult [[BoysLove BL]] VisualNovel. It was first released in Japan on June 28, 2013 by Creator/{{parade}}. On February 27, 2015 Creator/MangaGamer released an official English translation of the game. The game features four main love interests, each with multiple endings, thousands of [=CGs=], and a "No, Thank You!!!" button which gives players a unique way to affect the game's story.
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''No, Thank You!!!'' is an adult [[BoysLove BL]] VisualNovel. It was first released in Japan on June 28, 2013 by Creator/{{parade}}. parade, one of the child companies of [=ClockUp=]. On February 27, 2015 Creator/MangaGamer [=MangaGamer=] released an official English translation of the game. The game features four main love interests, each with multiple endings, thousands ''thousands'' of [=CGs=], and a "No, Thank You!!!" button which gives players a unique way to affect the game's story.
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* SurpriseIncest: [[spoiler:Played straight [[ILied but then averted]] with Kouchi's route.]]
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* SurpriseIncest: SurpriseIncest + LukeYouAreMyFather: [[spoiler:Played straight [[ILied but then averted]] with Kouchi's route.]]
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Our story begins when our protagonist [[HeroicSacrifice jumps in front of a car to protect a man about to be run over]], but gets hit and [[IdentityAmnesia loses his memory]] while doing so. Kouichi, the man he saved, own a jazz bar called sótano. He decides to set his savior up with a job at the bar and a place to live until he gets his memories back. Our protagonist is delighted at the setup, and depending on the route chosen will pursue one of the other employees at the bar. Due to his memory loss, he was unable to recall his own name, so the staff at sótano, Hiroyuki Akiyama, Ryu Kurosawa, and Maki, after much deliberation, gave him the name "Haru."
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Our story begins when our protagonist [[HeroicSacrifice jumps in front of a car to protect a man about to be run over]], but gets hit and [[IdentityAmnesia loses his memory]] while doing so. Kouichi, the man he saved, own owns a jazz bar called sótano. He decides to set his savior up with a job at the bar and a place to live until he gets his memories back. Our protagonist is delighted at the setup, and depending on the route chosen will pursue one of the other employees at the bar. Due to his memory loss, he was unable to recall his own name, so the staff at sótano, Hiroyuki Akiyama, Ryu Kurosawa, and Maki, after much deliberation, gave give him the name "Haru."
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* AbusiveParents: Yufumi's mom[[spoiler:, [[ParentalIncest Sorato's mom]], and Haru's grandpa to an extreme extent.]]
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* AbusiveParents: Yufumi's mom[[spoiler:, [[ParentalIncest mom, [[spoiler:[[ParentalIncest Sorato's mom]], and Haru's grandpa to an extreme extent.]]
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* BruiserWithASoftCenter: Yamato, a {{Yakuza}} with a mean looking face[[spoiler:, was caught feeding cats in the middle of the night.]]
* ButNotTooBi: Subverted. Haru has openly showed interest towards to both girls and guys.[[spoiler: He even has a conversation with Maki about what kind of girls they like during a sex scene in his route.]]
* ButNotTooBi: Subverted. Haru has openly showed interest towards to both girls and guys.[[spoiler: He even has a conversation with Maki about what kind of girls they like during a sex scene in his route.]]
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* BruiserWithASoftCenter: Yamato, a {{Yakuza}} with a mean looking face[[spoiler:, face, [[spoiler: was caught feeding cats in the middle of the night.]]
* ButNotTooBi: Subverted. Haru has openly showed interest towards to both girls and guys.[[spoiler: He [[spoiler:He even has a conversation with Maki about what kind of girls they like during a sex scene in his route.]]
* ButNotTooBi: Subverted. Haru has openly showed interest towards to both girls and guys.
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* ChekhovsGag: In the first chapter, the sótano staff tries to get Haru to suggest a name for them to call him by, only for Haru to come up with things like Corn-on-the-Cob, Bean Daifuku, and Pool.[[spoiler: Those things are the only happy memories that Haru can recall from his life before arriving at sótano.]]
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* ChekhovsGag: In the first chapter, the sótano staff tries to get Haru to suggest a name for them to call him by, only for Haru to come up with things like Corn-on-the-Cob, Bean Daifuku, and Pool.[[spoiler: Those [[spoiler:Those things are the only happy memories that Haru can recall from his life before arriving at sótano.]]
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-->[[spoiler:'''Haru:''' I have to prioritize my own survival. Though, there are times when I think a quick death might be preferable. My death wont won't change anything.]]
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* HappilyAdopted: Yufumi[[spoiler: in Ryu's True Ending.]]
* ImmodestOrgasm: Every uke to some extent except Maki. [[spoiler: Hiroyuki in particular screams like a banshee!]]
* HappilyAdopted: Yufumi[[spoiler: in Ryu's True Ending.]]
* ImmodestOrgasm: Every uke to some extent except Maki. [[spoiler: Hiroyuki in particular screams like a banshee!]]
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* GruntingOrgasm: The lead character and seme, character, Haru.
* HappilyAdopted:Yufumi[[spoiler: in Yufumi [[spoiler:in Ryu's True Ending.]]
* ImmodestOrgasm: Everyuke love interest to some extent except Maki. [[spoiler: Hiroyuki [[spoiler:Hiroyuki in particular screams like a banshee!]]
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* ManipulativeBastard: [[spoiler: Haru for the majority of the story. Ryu and Kouichi also have their moments.]]
* MeaningfulEcho:[[spoiler: In Maki's route, Haru chastises Maki for not saying anything to Tojo, Maki's last living childhood friend, when he was about to leave and return to [[TheSyndicate the syndicate]]. Maki later repeats those words to him when Haru was about to [[HistoryRepeats leave and return to]] [[BiggerBad his organization]].]]
-->[[spoiler:'''Haru:''' What's wrong with saying 'don't die, it'd make me sad'? Are you too embarassed or something?]]
* MeaningfulEcho:[[spoiler: In Maki's route, Haru chastises Maki for not saying anything to Tojo, Maki's last living childhood friend, when he was about to leave and return to [[TheSyndicate the syndicate]]. Maki later repeats those words to him when Haru was about to [[HistoryRepeats leave and return to]] [[BiggerBad his organization]].]]
-->[[spoiler:'''Haru:''' What's wrong with saying 'don't die, it'd make me sad'? Are you too embarassed or something?]]
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* ManipulativeBastard: [[spoiler: Haru [[spoiler:Haru for the majority of the story. Ryu and Kouichi also have their moments.]]
*MeaningfulEcho:[[spoiler: In MeaningfulEcho: [[spoiler:In Maki's route, Haru chastises Maki for not saying anything to Tojo, Maki's last living childhood friend, when he was about to leave and return to [[TheSyndicate the syndicate]]. Maki later repeats those words to him when Haru was about to [[HistoryRepeats leave and return to]] [[BiggerBad his organization]].]]
-->[[spoiler:'''Haru:''' What's wrong with saying'don't 'Don't die, it'd make me sad'? Are you too embarassed embarrassed or something?]]
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-->[[spoiler:'''Haru:''' What's wrong with saying
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* PlotDeviceAllAlong: In Ryu's route, Haru makes Ryu childish I.O.U coupons that he can exchange to make Haru do anything Ryu wants him to do. Haru gives them to Ryu whenever he cooks food for him. Ryu accepts them but rarely ever uses them.[[spoiler: It turns out that Ryu has been saving up those coupons so he can interrogate Haru about the whereabouts of his sister and make him answer truthfully about it, because [[CallBack he did say that he'd do anything.]]]]
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* PlotDeviceAllAlong: In Ryu's route, Haru makes Ryu childish I.O.U U. coupons that he can exchange to make Haru do anything Ryu wants him to do. Haru gives them to Ryu whenever he cooks food for him. Ryu accepts them but rarely ever uses them.[[spoiler: It [[spoiler:It turns out that Ryu has been saving up those coupons so he can interrogate Haru about the whereabouts of his sister and make him answer truthfully about it, because [[CallBack he did say that he'd do anything.]]]]
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* Grunting Orgasm: The lead character and seme, Haru.
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* Grunting Orgasm: GruntingOrgasm: The lead character and seme, Haru.
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* Immodest Orgasm: Every uke to some extent except Maki. [[spoiler: Hiroyuki in particular screams like a banshee!]]
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* Immodest Orgasm: ImmodestOrgasm: Every uke to some extent except Maki. [[spoiler: Hiroyuki in particular screams like a banshee!]]