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''National Park Girls'' is an episodic Main/KineticNovel developed with UsefulNotes/RenPy by Studio Coattails (now merged with Creator/StudioElan), who also made ''VisualNovel/HighwayBlossoms'', and published by Sekai Project (up to Episode 4 before self-publishing). The first episode was released on Steam on March 19th, 2019, and its final release came out on September 8th, 2023, and is also available on itch.io.
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''National Park Girls'' is an episodic Main/KineticNovel developed with UsefulNotes/RenPy MediaNotes/RenPy by Studio Coattails (now merged with Creator/StudioElan), who also made ''VisualNovel/HighwayBlossoms'', and published by Sekai Project (up to Episode 4 before self-publishing). The first episode was released on Steam on March 19th, 2019, and its final release came out on September 8th, 2023, and is also available on itch.io.
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* BedsheetGhost: What Yellowstone looks like when trying to scare Eve away from the cabin along with the other Park Girls on her first night back on the job in Episode 1.
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* BedsheetGhost: What Yellowstone Zion looks like when trying to scare Eve away from the cabin along with the other Park Girls on her first night back on the job in Episode 1.
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* TimeSkip: After it's prologue, Episode 5 picks up one month after the end of Episode 4.
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* TimeSkip: [[spoiler: After it's prologue, Episode 5 picks up one month after the end of Episode 4.]]
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* TimeSkip: After it's prologue, Episode 5 picks up one month after the end of Episode 4.
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* DueToTheDead: [[spoiler:After Yosemite finally manages to get through to Eve, and convince her to return home to the cabin, everyone, including Death Valley, have a funeral and mourn for Pup over an empty grave/memorial Eve made for him.]]
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* DueToTheDead: [[spoiler:After Yosemite finally manages to get through to Eve, and convince her to return home to the cabin, everyone, including Death Valley, Valley(though she's just leaning against a tree), have a funeral and mourn for Pup over an empty grave/memorial Eve made for him.]]
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* DueToTheDead: [[spoiler:After Yosemite finally manages to get through to Eve, and convince her to return home to the cabin, everyone, including Death Valley, have a funeral and mourn for Pup over an empty memorial Eve made for him.]]
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* DueToTheDead: [[spoiler:After Yosemite finally manages to get through to Eve, and convince her to return home to the cabin, everyone, including Death Valley, have a funeral and mourn for Pup over an empty memorial grave/memorial Eve made for him.]]
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* DueToTheDead: [[spoiler:After Yosemite finally manages to get through to Eve, and convince her to return home to the cabin, everyone, including Death Valley, have a funeral and mourn for Pup over an empty grave Eve made for him.]]
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* DueToTheDead: [[spoiler:After Yosemite finally manages to get through to Eve, and convince her to return home to the cabin, everyone, including Death Valley, have a funeral and mourn for Pup over an empty grave memorial Eve made for him.]]
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** A few times in Episodes 3 and 4, it's mentioned that Pup was getting a bit too close to the campers, as well as Pup nipping at Eve's hand. [[spoiler:In Episode 4, a young girl gets too close to him and gets her hand bitten, resulting in her losing three fingers, despite being rushed to a Fresno hospital. ]]
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** A few times in Episodes 3 and 4, it's mentioned that Pup was getting a bit too close to the campers, as well as Pup nipping at Eve's hand. [[spoiler:In Episode 4, a young girl gets too close to him and gets her hand bitten, resulting in her losing three fingers, despite being rushed to a Fresno hospital. This also results in Eve having to put Pup down. ]]
