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* BlackComedy: Checking the dumpster behind Anton's office has Hank comment that it's a good place to hide a body.
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* InSeriesNickname: Anni calls Margaret "Mrs. M" while Beanie calls Oliver "Olly".
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* INeverToldYouMyName: When Hank visits Anton's office, Anton addresses him by name, to his surprise since he never introduced himself first. Anton then says he knew Hank's name before Hank's mom did, except that Margaret didn't name him.
* InSeriesNickname: Anni calls Margaret "Mrs.M" M", while Beanie calls Oliver "Olly"."Olly", while Wade calls his boss Anton "Mister A".
* InSeriesNickname: Anni calls Margaret "Mrs.
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** Anton runs his Dump on the A24, which covers [[WesternAnimation/TheLionKing1994 "everything the stench touches."]]
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* UnusualEuphemism: When Charlotte gets worried, she goes, "Oh, crickets!"
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* WickedWitch: Charlotte is a classical cannibalistic witch. She assures Hank that it's "safe" to enter her house because he's too big for her cauldron, then reveals that she's preparing Wade for pickling.
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* {{Hypocrite}}: Gus is a self-proclaimed {{Jerkass}} who looks forward to the humans returning to Silver Valley because they've "got the best food and baubles", calling them a "jerk's dream". But when Hank thinks Gus doesn't look like a jerk, he takes offense to that.
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* TheAloner: Gus prefers living alone on the A24 and rejects Hank's offer to visit him one day.
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* ComplimentBackfire: Gus doesn't like Hank's compliments because as a {{Jerkass}} resident of the A24, he isn't used to them.
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* ComplimentBackfire: Gus doesn't like Hank's compliments because as a {{Jerkass}} resident of the A24, he isn't used hates people being nice to them.him.
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* ComplimentBackfire: Gus doesn't like Hank's compliments because as a {{Jerkass}} resident of the A24, he isn't used to them.
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* LiteralMinded: When Hank delivers Oliver's letter to Beanie, she's surprised by its contents and calls Oliver a weasel for it. Hank, being a bear, thinks she meant it literally and tells her that Oliver isn't a weasel (although he resembles one), but Beanie clarifies that Oliver found the last page of the atlas they made when they were teens.
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* LiteralMinded: When Hank doesn't have a good grasp on idioms. For example, when Hank delivers Oliver's letter to Beanie, she's surprised by its contents and calls Oliver a weasel for it. Hank, being Being a bear, he thinks she meant it literally and tells her that Oliver isn't a weasel (although he resembles one), but Beanie clarifies that Oliver found the last page of the atlas they made when they were teens.
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* {{Hypocrite}}: Gus is a self-proclaimed {{Jerkass}} who looks forward to the humans returning to Silver Valley because they've "got the best food and baubles", calling them a "jerk's dream". But when Hank thinks Gus doesn't look like a jerk, he takes offense to that.
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* TerseTalker: Gus mostly talks in short sentences, usually not more than five words. Hank remarks that in a way, Gus doesn't talk much.
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* AddedAlliterativeAppeal: Fin's ad for the A24 Motel goes like this:
--> "Be pat of the next Exciting Experience, Enticing Escape, ELECTRIFYING ENTERPRISE!"
--> "Be pat of the next Exciting Experience, Enticing Escape, ELECTRIFYING ENTERPRISE!"
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* HolidayMode: The Fintastic Winter Update added a special shop on the A24 that sells Christmas items.
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* LionsAndTigersAndHumansOhMy: Talking woodland animals work together to build inns for humans. However, [[AnimalTalk the animals only make noises when they talk to humans]], and Sabine is [[SpeaksFluentAnimal the only human who can understand them.]]
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* LionsAndTigersAndHumansOhMy: Talking woodland animals work together to build inns for humans. However, [[AnimalTalk the animals only make noises when they talk to humans]], and while they can vaguely get what they're saying, Sabine is [[SpeaksFluentAnimal the only human who can fully understand them.]]
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* MyBelovedSmother: Margaret is always worried about Hank's safety and warns him to be careful outside the Thicket, to his embarrassment. She also gives him pocket money if he's low on funds, but still reminds him to be careful with spending it.
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* MyBelovedSmother: Margaret is always worried about Hank's safety and warns him to be careful outside the Thicket, to his embarrassment. She also gives him pocket money if he's low on funds, but still reminds him to be careful with spending it. She gets understandably worried when Hank and his friends return to the Thicket several days after Hank builds his first inn, [[GameplayAndStorySegregation even if he talked to her prior to this.]]
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* EarlyBirdCameo: As soon as you get the Atlas from Beanie, you can see Twiggy, Wade, and Charlotte in the southern part of Blackmoss. However, you can't meet them until later in the story because you can't cross the BrokenBridge to that area yet.
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* WarpWhistle: There are bus stops in Silver Valley where Hank can call Oliver to instantly drive him to various places on the map.
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* WarpWhistle: There are bus stops in Silver Valley where Hank can call Oliver to instantly drive him to various places on the map. He has to repair and put bus signs on them in order to use them.
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* OddFriendship: Oliver, a friendly, easygoing bus driver, doesn't seem bothered by Took, a sneaky, crazy raccoon, stealing his food. The narration describes them as living in "peculiar harmony".
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* WarpWhistle: There are bus stops in Silver Valley where Hank can call Oliver to instantly drive him to various places on the map.
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* LiteralMinded: When Hank delivers Oliver's letter to Beanie, she's surprised by its contents and calls Oliver a weasel for it. Hank, being a bear, thinks she meant it literally and tells her that Oliver isn't a weasel (although he resembles one), but Beanie clarifies that Oliver found the last page of the atlas they made when they were teens.
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* ActuallyIAmHer: When Hank is tasked by Oliver to deliver the latter's letter to Beanie at Sawdust, he goes to Sabine's outpost to ask where she is. Sabine immediately clarifies that she's the person Hank is looking for because Beanie's her nickname.
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* ActuallyIAmHer: When Hank is tasked by Oliver to deliver the latter's letter to Beanie at Sawdust, he goes to Sabine's outpost to ask her where she Beanie is. Sabine immediately clarifies that she's the person Hank is looking for because Beanie's her nickname.
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* ActuallyIAmHim: When Hank is tasked by Oliver to deliver the latter's letter to Beanie at Sawdust, he goes to Sabine's outpost to ask where she is. Sabine immediately clarifies that she's the person Hank is looking for because Beanie's her nickname.
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* ActuallyIAmHim: ActuallyIAmHer: When Hank is tasked by Oliver to deliver the latter's letter to Beanie at Sawdust, he goes to Sabine's outpost to ask where she is. Sabine immediately clarifies that she's the person Hank is looking for because Beanie's her nickname.
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* DoNotCallMePall: Sabine prefers going by her nickname Beanie, but nobody but Oliver calls her that while her mom still calls her by her real name.
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* DoNotCallMePall: DoNotCallMePaul: Sabine prefers going by her nickname Beanie, but nobody but Oliver calls her that while her mom still calls her by her real name.
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* ActuallyIAmHim: When Hank is tasked by Oliver to deliver the latter's letter to Beanie at Sawdust, he goes to Sabine's outpost to ask where she is. Sabine immediately clarifies that she's the person Hank is looking for because Beanie's her nickname.
* DoNotCallMePall: Sabine prefers going by her nickname Beanie, but nobody but Oliver calls her that while her mom still calls her by her real name.
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* SpeaksFluentAnimal: Hank is shocked to find out that Sabine can understand his [[AnimalTalk bear noises]]. Since she's been around Sawdust for a while, she can get the gist of what the animals are saying.
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* SpeaksFluentAnimal: Hank is shocked to find out that Sabine can understand his [[AnimalTalk bear noises]]. Since she's been around Sawdust for a while, she can get the gist of what the forest animals are saying.
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* SpeaksFluentAnimal: Hank is shocked to find out that Sabine can understand his [[AnimalTalk bear noises]]. Since she's been around Sawdust for a while, she can get the gist of what the animals are saying.
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* LionsAndTigersAndHumansOhMy: Talking woodland animals work together to build inns for humans. However, [[AnimalTalk the animals only make noises when they talk to humans.]]
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* LionsAndTigersAndHumansOhMy: Talking woodland animals work together to build inns for humans. However, [[AnimalTalk the animals only make noises when they talk to humans.humans]], and Sabine is [[SpeaksFluentAnimal the only human who can understand them.]]
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* LionsAndTigersAndHumansOhMy: Talking woodland animals work together to build inns for humans. However, [[AnimalLanguage the animals only make noises when they talk to humans.]]
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* LionsAndTigersAndHumansOhMy: Talking woodland animals work together to build inns for humans. However, [[AnimalLanguage [[AnimalTalk the animals only make noises when they talk to humans.]]
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* LionsAndTigersAndHumansOhMy: Talking woodland animals work together to build inns for humans.
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* LionsAndTigersAndHumansOhMy: Talking woodland animals work together to build inns for humans. However, [[AnimalLanguage the animals only make noises when they talk to humans.]]
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* ToiletHumor: Hank gets grossed out by Took figuring out the answer to the 1982 crossword semis -- logorrhea, mistaking it for [[PottyFailure "the other thing"]], which the latter also found in the puzzle.
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* MyBelovedSmother: Margaret is always worried about Hank's safety and warns him to be careful outside the Thicket, to his embarrassment. She also gives him pocket money if he's low on funds, but still reminds him to be careful with spending it.
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* {{Bookworm}}: Will gets Hank to retrieve magazines and pamphlets from the trash to learn more about humans from them. He often cites books as his source of knowledge about them.
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* {{Bookworm}}: Will gets Hank to retrieve magazines and pamphlets from the trash to learn more about humans from them. He often cites books as his source of knowledge about them.
