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MutantRancor is a college student working toward a degree in library science, and an aspiring author. He lives in a small town nobody has ever heard of ([[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Forest,_Indiana except, apparently, Wikipedia]]).
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He is straight, male (with all this speaking-in-the-third-person, you'd better have already figured that out), nineteen years old, American (but not an EagleLand American, as you probably guessed from his use of metric instead of the Imperial/Customary system), and has strange taste in girls. To be more specific, he thinks girls are most attractive when they're not trying to be--no skirts, no makeup, minimal jewelry, no heels, just a shirt and blue jeans. Also, short hair (optional). And [[{{Meganekko}} glasses]] (also optional). Preferably without the MostCommonSuperpower. Function over looks, or as Ash from {{Misfile}} said it, substance as opposed to appearance. And all this falls by the wayside when personality comes into play. (Intelligent, tough, reliable, and independent, if you must know.)
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He is straight, male (with all this speaking-in-the-third-person, you'd better have already figured that out), nineteen twenty years old, American (but not an EagleLand American, as you probably guessed from his use of metric instead of the Imperial/Customary system), and has strange taste in girls. To be more specific, he thinks girls are most attractive when they're not trying to be--no skirts, no makeup, minimal jewelry, no heels, just a shirt and blue jeans. Also, short hair (optional). And [[{{Meganekko}} glasses]] (also optional). Preferably without the MostCommonSuperpower. Function over looks, or as Ash from {{Misfile}} said it, substance as opposed to appearance. And all this falls by the wayside when personality comes into play. (Intelligent, tough, reliable, and independent, if you must know.)
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MutantRancor is a fan of StarWars, {{Discworld}}, {{Naruto}}, {{Bleach}}, FullmetalAlchemist, and for that matter any good story well told. (Except for the filler.) His favorite series (yet) is YuYuHakusho. He's most certainly an {{Otaku}} for anime and manga.
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