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''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/252084/how-not-to-woo-a-fluttershy How Not to Woo a Fluttershy]]'': A short [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic MLP:FIM]] story, this features poor Fluttershy being stalked by a lovestruck [[NauseaFuel red]]-[[TheScrappy and]]-[[MarySue black]] [[''{{Cliche}}'' alicorn]]. A sure bet for a nightmarish comedy... except that the alicorn in question is somewhere around [[PrecociousCrush eight]]. This dials it down to an only ''mildly disturbing'' comedy, which is much better.
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''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/252084/how-not-to-woo-a-fluttershy How Not to Woo a Fluttershy]]'': A short [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic MLP:FIM]] story, this features poor Fluttershy being stalked by a lovestruck [[NauseaFuel red]]-[[TheScrappy and]]-[[MarySue black]] [[''{{Cliche}}'' [[{{Cliche}} alicorn]]. A sure bet for a nightmarish comedy... except that the alicorn in question is somewhere around [[PrecociousCrush eight]]. This dials it down to an only ''mildly disturbing'' comedy, which is much better.
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''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/252084/how-not-to-woo-a-fluttershy How Not to Woo a Fluttershy]]'': A short [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic MLP:FIM]] story, this features poor Fluttershy being stalked by a lovestruck [[NauseaFuel red]]-[[''{{TheScrappy}}'' red]]-[[TheScrappy and]]-[[MarySue black]] [[''{{Cliche}}'' alicorn]]. A sure bet for a nightmarish comedy... except that the alicorn in question is somewhere around [[PrecociousCrush eight]]. This dials it down to an only ''mildly disturbing'' comedy, which is much better.
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I'm a guy who likes stories, and likes them enough to read about all the little pieces that they are composed of. And even likes them enough to write a couple fanfics.
Dragonjek is the author of the following:
''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/6260492/1/Happy-Families-Are-All-Alike Happy Families Are All Alike]]'': "A dying Sarutobi sends a young Naruto away for the boy's safety; after a hard life alone, he eventually finds his way into Mahora. Negi takes his first steps towards finding his father, even as Naruto discovers that light called 'friendship' for the first time. In the calm before the storm they find happiness, unaware of the true nature of the paths they have chosen."
A crossover between ''Manga/{{Naruto}}'' and [[Manga/MahouSenseiNegima Negima]], it features a much [[EldritchAbomination darker take on the Kyuubi]] than most stories. It is--or will be--an [[GenreBuster Action/Adventure/Romance/Friendship/Family/Hurt/Comfort/Horror/Fantasy/Sci-Fi/Supernatural]] story.
''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/252084/how-not-to-woo-a-fluttershy How Not to Woo a Fluttershy]]'': A short [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic MLP:FIM]] story, this features poor Fluttershy being stalked by a lovestruck [[NauseaFuel red]]-[[''{{TheScrappy}}'' and]]-[[MarySue black]] [[''{{Cliche}}'' alicorn]]. A sure bet for a nightmarish comedy... except that the alicorn in question is somewhere around [[PrecociousCrush eight]]. This dials it down to an only ''mildly disturbing'' comedy, which is much better.
I'm a guy who likes stories, and likes them enough to read about all the little pieces that they are composed of. And even likes them enough to write a couple fanfics.
Dragonjek is the author of the following:
''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/6260492/1/Happy-Families-Are-All-Alike Happy Families Are All Alike]]'': "A dying Sarutobi sends a young Naruto away for the boy's safety; after a hard life alone, he eventually finds his way into Mahora. Negi takes his first steps towards finding his father, even as Naruto discovers that light called 'friendship' for the first time. In the calm before the storm they find happiness, unaware of the true nature of the paths they have chosen."
A crossover between ''Manga/{{Naruto}}'' and [[Manga/MahouSenseiNegima Negima]], it features a much [[EldritchAbomination darker take on the Kyuubi]] than most stories. It is--or will be--an [[GenreBuster Action/Adventure/Romance/Friendship/Family/Hurt/Comfort/Horror/Fantasy/Sci-Fi/Supernatural]] story.
''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/252084/how-not-to-woo-a-fluttershy How Not to Woo a Fluttershy]]'': A short [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic MLP:FIM]] story, this features poor Fluttershy being stalked by a lovestruck [[NauseaFuel red]]-[[''{{TheScrappy}}'' and]]-[[MarySue black]] [[''{{Cliche}}'' alicorn]]. A sure bet for a nightmarish comedy... except that the alicorn in question is somewhere around [[PrecociousCrush eight]]. This dials it down to an only ''mildly disturbing'' comedy, which is much better.
