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* FixFic: Fan writer/editor Joanna Cantor wrote a follow-up story, "[[http://www.trektales.com /cantorparadiseregained.html Paradise Regained]]". The People assume they have been asked by the Sky God to return to the traditions of the "dim time", some of which surprise the anthropologists and agronomists sent to teach them.
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* FixFic: Fan writer/editor Joanna Cantor wrote a follow-up story, "[[http://www.trektales.com /cantorparadiseregained.com/cantorparadiseregained.html Paradise Regained]]". The People assume they have been asked by the Sky God to return to the traditions of the "dim time", some of which surprise the anthropologists and agronomists sent to teach them.
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* FixFic: Fan writer/editor Joanna Cantor wrote a follow-up story, "[[http://www.trektales.com /cantorparadiseregained.html Paradise Regained]]". The People assume they have been asked by the Sky God to return to the traditions of the "dim time", some of which surprise the anthropologists and agronomists sent to teach them.
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* LikeADuckTakesToWater: Kirk isn't too concerned about the newly liberated Vaalians as far as how they will now reproduce. Apparently "sex" needs no instruction manual anywhere in the galaxy.
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* LikeADuckTakesToWater: Kirk isn't too concerned about the newly liberated Vaalians as far as how they will now reproduce. Apparently "sex" and childbearing needs no instruction manual anywhere in the galaxy.
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* RetroactiveRecognition: The role of Makora is one of the first acting roles for future ''Series/StarskyAndHutch'' star David Soul.
* WhatCouldHaveBeen: This episode's original script called for an emergency saucer separation. However, due to budgeting, the effect was only mentioned but not seen. It was seen for the first time in ''Series/StarTrekTheNextGeneration'''s debut, "[[Recap/StarTrekTheNextGenerationS1E1EncounterAtFarpoint Encounter at Farpoint]]".
* WhatCouldHaveBeen: This episode's original script called for an emergency saucer separation. However, due to budgeting, the effect was only mentioned but not seen. It was seen for the first time in ''Series/StarTrekTheNextGeneration'''s debut, "[[Recap/StarTrekTheNextGenerationS1E1EncounterAtFarpoint Encounter at Farpoint]]".
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--> '''Kirk: Ahhhh....Just keep doing what you're doing and you'll find out...eventually.'''
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--> '''Kirk: Ahhhh....'''Kirk:''' Ahhhh... Just keep doing what you're doing and you'll find out...out... eventually.'''
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* LikeADuckTakesToWater: Kirk isn't too concerned about the newly liberated Vaalians as far as how they will now reproduce. Apparently "sex" needs no instruction manual anywhere in the galaxy.
--> '''Kirk: Ahhhh....Just keep doing what you're doing and you'll find out...eventually.'''
--> '''Kirk: Ahhhh....Just keep doing what you're doing and you'll find out...eventually.'''
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* RetroactiveRecognition: The role of Makora is one of the first acting roles for future ''Series/StarskyAndHutch'' star David Soul.
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* DevelopmentGag: Kirk's joke at the end that Spock looks like Satan is a deliberate reference to fears from NBC that viewers would think Spock was Satan and complain. NBC even attempted to hide Spock's ears in early promotional material before Spock quickly became a BreakoutCharacter.
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* PropRecycling: Celeste Yarnall wore Grace Lee Whitney's costume, left over from season one. It was recut and fitted to suit her. Worrying if Whitney might return and need the costume, Bill Theiss assured her that she will ''never'' return.
* WhatCouldHaveBeen: This episode's original script called for an emergency saucer separation. However, due to budgeting, the effect was only mentioned but not seen. It was seen for the first time in ''Series/StarTrekTheNextGeneration'''s debut, "[[Recap/StarTrekTheNextGenerationS1E1EncounterAtFarpoint Encounter at Farpoint]]".
* WhatCouldHaveBeen: This episode's original script called for an emergency saucer separation. However, due to budgeting, the effect was only mentioned but not seen. It was seen for the first time in ''Series/StarTrekTheNextGeneration'''s debut, "[[Recap/StarTrekTheNextGenerationS1E1EncounterAtFarpoint Encounter at Farpoint]]".
