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** According to the End of Book 2 Q&A, about a month has passed since the events of "It's a Waybright Life", with the previous chapter and this one being set on the same day.
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** According to the End of Book 2 Q&A, about a month has passed since the events of "It's a Waybright Life", with the previous chapter and this one being set on the same day.Life".
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** According to the End of Book 2 Q&A, about a month has passed since the events of "It's a Waybright Life", with the previous chapter and this one being set on the same day.
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* {{Blooper}}: Terri's name is [[InconsistentSpelling misspelled with one 'R']].
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Check the author's notes. It didn't say Eris was tired, it said people were tired and we showed this in her first appearance.
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* WhatCouldHaveBeen: Eris' motivation was to start an even bigger conflict than the Trojan War because she was tired of people bringing it up, so she decided she would one-up herself out of [[EvilIsPetty pettiness]].
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* WhatCouldHaveBeen: Eris' motivation was to start an even bigger conflict than the Trojan War because she was people were tired of people her bringing it up, up since it happened thousands of years ago, so she decided she would one-up herself out of [[EvilIsPetty pettiness]].
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* WhatCouldHaveBeen: Eris' motivation was to start an even bigger conflict than the Trojan War because people were she was tired of her people bringing it, it up, so she decided she would one-up herself out of [[EvilIsPetty pettiness]].
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* WhatCouldHaveBeen: Eris' motivation was to start an even bigger conflict than the Trojan War because she was people were tired of people her bringing it up it, so she decided she would one-up herself out of [[EvilIsPetty pettiness]].
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** Councilor Obron and his followers are based off of concept art of Belos.
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** Councilor Obron and his followers are based off of concept art unused deigns of Belos.
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* WhatCouldHaveBeen: Eris' motivation was to start an even bigger conflict that the Trojan War because she was tired of people bringing it up out of [[EvilIsPetty pettiness]].
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* WhatCouldHaveBeen: Eris' motivation was to start an even bigger conflict that than the Trojan War because she was tired of people bringing it up out of [[EvilIsPetty pettiness]].
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** Ansem is AdaptedOut so that Chernabog is the embodiment of all darkness, a reversal to the first ''[[VideoGame/KingdomHeartsI Kingdom Hearts]]''.
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** Ansem [=SoD=] is AdaptedOut so that Chernabog is the embodiment of all darkness, a reversal DevelopmentGag to the first ''[[VideoGame/KingdomHeartsI Kingdom Hearts]]''.
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! General
* This is the first chapter in the series and the only one in Book 2 where Zee appears without Cross.
!Tropes
* WhatCouldHaveBeen: Eris' motivation was to start an even bigger conflict that the Trojan War because she was tired of people bringing it up out of [[EvilIsPetty pettiness]].
* WordOfGod:
** Councilor Obron and his followers are based off of concept art of Belos.
** Ansem is AdaptedOut so that Chernabog is the embodiment of all darkness, a reversal to the first ''[[VideoGame/KingdomHeartsI Kingdom Hearts]]''.
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! General
* This is the first chapter in the series and the only one in Book 2 where Zee appears without Cross.
!Tropes
* WhatCouldHaveBeen: Eris' motivation was to start an even bigger conflict that the Trojan War because she was tired of people bringing it up out of [[EvilIsPetty pettiness]].
* WordOfGod:
** Councilor Obron and his followers are based off of concept art of Belos.
** Ansem is AdaptedOut so that Chernabog is the embodiment of all darkness, a reversal to the first ''[[VideoGame/KingdomHeartsI Kingdom Hearts]]''.
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