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* {{Blooper}}: Chapter 9 of ''A Prehistoric Park Adventure'' has Nigel choosing not to rescue a ''Deinosuchus'' due to it conflicting with the park's current giant crocodilian. Beyond the fact that the ''Deinosuchus'' in this chapter is an AnachronisticAnimal (then again, so is the ''Triceratops'' it is hunting), the park's other crocodilian is a ''Deinosuchus'', so the two shouldn't conflict too much since crocodilians tend to tolerate each other's presence. WordOfGod confirmed that she mixed up the park's ''Deinosuchus'' with ''Sarcosuchus''.
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* ScienceMarchesOn: When the story adapted ''Series/DinosaurRevolution'', Broken Jaw was given AdaptationalSpeciesChange and went from being an ''Allosaurus europaeus'' to an ''Allosaurus lucasi''. Understandable, but in 2019, ''Allosaurus'' was reexamined, and all species in North America were reclassified as being either variations of the type species, ''Allosaurus fragilis'', or members of a single new species, ''Allosaurus Jimmadseni''. Furthermore, the latter is the species that the specimen ''Big Al'' belongs to, meaning that Big Al is ''also'' the wrong species.
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* ScienceMarchesOn: When the story adapted ''Series/DinosaurRevolution'', Broken Jaw was given AdaptationalSpeciesChange and went from being an ''Allosaurus europaeus'' to an ''Allosaurus lucasi''. Understandable, but in 2019, ''Allosaurus'' was reexamined, and all species in North America were reclassified as being either variations of the type species, ''Allosaurus fragilis'', or members of a single new species, ''Allosaurus Jimmadseni''. Furthermore, the latter is the species that the specimen ''Big Al'' belongs to, meaning that Big Al is ''also'' the wrong species. And then a later study came along that indicated that Big Al was actually a female. Woops.
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* DearNegativeReader: During a hiatus to finish school work, both Darksage and Marc called out one reader who continuously wrote in reviews for ''The Long Night of Winter'' that they hoped that Gorgon would try to stomp on Aladar's neck and strangle him, both because that is traumatizing to others and that their posts bordered on trolling.
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* ScienceMarchesOn: When the story adapted ''Series/DinosaurRevolution'', Broken Jaw was given AdaptationalSpeciesChange and went from being an ''Allosaurus europaeus'' to an ''Allosaurus lucasi''. Understandable, but in 2019, ''Allosaurus'' was reexamined, and all species in North America were reclassified as being either variations of the type species, ''Allosaurus fragilis'', or members of a single new species, ''Allosaurus Jimmadseni''. Furthermore, the latter is the species that the specimen ''Big Al'' belongs to, meaning that Big Al is ''also'' the wrong species.
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*** Originally, the story would've featured a slightly altered version of the opening scene from Disney/{{Dinosaur}}.
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*** Originally, the story would've featured a slightly altered version of the opening scene from Disney/{{Dinosaur}}.WesternAnimation/{{Dinosaur}}.
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* ScheduleSlip: The authors don't really have a set updating schedule, so this happens a lot. As of the time of this writing, they've settled on writing new chapters once a month.
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** There were no ''Anurognathus'' clinging to the ''Diplodocus'' when they entered the time portal.
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** There were no ''Anurognathus'' clinging to the ''Diplodocus'' when they entered the time portal.portal.
** For ''The Long Night of Winter'', the author has confirmed that she will be toning down the comedy aspects of the characters from [[spoiler:''Film/WalkingWithDinosaurs'']], as she really didn't find it all that amusing.
** For ''The Long Night of Winter'', the author has confirmed that she will be toning down the comedy aspects of the characters from [[spoiler:''Film/WalkingWithDinosaurs'']], as she really didn't find it all that amusing.
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** Darksage has also stated that the lemurs are supposed to be ''Smilodectes''.
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** Darksage has also stated that the lemurs are supposed to be ''Smilodectes''.''Smilodectes''.
** There were no ''Anurognathus'' clinging to the ''Diplodocus'' when they entered the time portal.
** There were no ''Anurognathus'' clinging to the ''Diplodocus'' when they entered the time portal.
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* AllThereInTheManual: Marc has posted some art for this story that include several details not revealed in the main story, [[EarlyBirdCameo at least not yet.]]
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* AllThereInTheManual: Marc has posted some art for this story that include several details not revealed in the main story, [[EarlyBirdCameo at least not yet.]]
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** According to conversation with other authors on ''Website/FanFictionDotNet'', which were done is response to complaint about how few new aniamls there were at the Park prior to the events of the series, ''Pachycephalosaurus'' was originally planned to have been rescued prior to the story. It was removed from the list both to save time and because the author couldn't decide which animal would be it's partner (Nigel rescues at least two species of prehistoric creature each mission, and there were too many good candidates to choose from for ''Pachycephalosaurus''. In hindsight, she said its partner would have probably been ''Ankylosaurus''.
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** According to conversation with other authors on ''Website/FanFictionDotNet'', which were done is response to complaint about how few new aniamls there were at the Park prior to the events of the series, ''Pachycephalosaurus'' was originally planned to have been rescued prior to the story. It was removed from the list both to save time and because the author couldn't decide which animal would be it's partner (Nigel rescues at least two species of prehistoric creature each mission, and there were too many good candidates to choose from for ''Pachycephalosaurus''.''Pachycephalosaurus''). In hindsight, she said its partner would have probably been ''Ankylosaurus''.
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*** Finally, there would've been a wrap-up scene where it would have been revealed that Nigel had secretly recorded Hazel's journey.
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*** Furthermore, Darksage has also stated that Nigel and Hazel have gone on several missions off-camera, it's just that only the ''Therezinosaurus'', ''Protoceratops'' and ''Plateosaurus'' were rescued because the duo didn't want to pass up the opportunity.
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*** Furthermore, Darksage has also stated that Nigel and Hazel have gone on several missions off-camera, it's just that only the ''Therezinosaurus'', ''Therizinosaurus'', ''Protoceratops'' and ''Plateosaurus'' were rescued because the duo didn't want to pass up the opportunity.
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*** Originally, the story would've featured a slightly altered version of the opening scene from Disney/{{Dinosaur}}.
*** There was supposed to be a scene where, while the misfits were wandering through the cave, they tried to find water. During said search, they'd end up wondering what kind of 'voice' Hazel has (any sound which comes from within), to which Hazel responded by singing. After she finished, they ended up finding a river in the cave.
*** Additionally, there would've been a scene after the final battle where Hazel would've comforted Neera over Kron's death and told her that he would always be with her in spirit.
*** There was supposed to be a scene where, while the misfits were wandering through the cave, they tried to find water. During said search, they'd end up wondering what kind of 'voice' Hazel has (any sound which comes from within), to which Hazel responded by singing. After she finished, they ended up finding a river in the cave.
*** Additionally, there would've been a scene after the final battle where Hazel would've comforted Neera over Kron's death and told her that he would always be with her in spirit.
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** According to conversation with other authors on ''Website/FanFictionDotNet'', which were done is response to complaint about how few new aniamls there were at the Park prior to the events of the series, ''Pachycephalosaurus'' was originally planned to have been rescued prior to the story. It was removed from the list both to save time and because the author couldn't decide which animal would be it's partner (Nigel rescues at least two species of prehistoric creature each mission, and there were too many good candidates to choose from for ''Pachycephalosaurus''.
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** According to conversation with other authors on ''Website/FanFictionDotNet'', which were done is response to complaint about how few new aniamls there were at the Park prior to the events of the series, ''Pachycephalosaurus'' was originally planned to have been rescued prior to the story. It was removed from the list both to save time and because the author couldn't decide which animal would be it's partner (Nigel rescues at least two species of prehistoric creature each mission, and there were too many good candidates to choose from for ''Pachycephalosaurus''. In hindsight, she said its partner would have probably been ''Ankylosaurus''.
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** Darksage has also stated that the leurs are supposed to be ''Smilodectes''.
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** Darksage has also stated that the leurs lemurs are supposed to be ''Smilodectes''.
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*** Additionally, there would've been a scene after the final battle where Hazel would've comforted Neera over Kron's death and told her that he would always be with her in spirit.
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*** Additionally, there would've been a scene after the final battle where Hazel would've comforted Neera over Kron's death and told her that he would always be with her in spirit.spirit.
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** After it was asked about in the reviews, Darksage and Marc both confirmed that they will not have Baylene cloned in order to fight off her loneliness, as that is a topic for a [[Film/JurassicPark completely different story]].
** The ''Borealosaurus'' are much larger than they were in real life so that they could keep their titanic stature when compared to Baylene.
** Darksage has also stated that the leurs are supposed to be ''Smilodectes''.
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** After it was asked about in the reviews, Darksage and Marc both confirmed that they will not have Baylene cloned in order to fight off her loneliness, as that is a topic for a [[Film/JurassicPark completely different story]].
** The ''Borealosaurus'' are much larger than they were in real life so that they could keep their titanic stature when compared to Baylene.
** Darksage has also stated that the leurs are supposed to be ''Smilodectes''.
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*** Furthermore, Darksage has also stated that Nigel and Hazel have gone on several missions off-camera, it's just that only the ''Therezinosaurus'', ''Protoceratops'' and ''Plateosaurus'' were rescued because the duo didn't want to pass up the opportunity.
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*** Furthermore, Darksage has also stated that Nigel and Hazel have gone on several missions off-camera, it's just that only the ''Therezinosaurus'', ''Protoceratops'' and ''Plateosaurus'' were rescued because the duo didn't want to pass up the opportunity.opportunity.
** Also, several scenes were planned in the original fic but were ultimately scrapped. Some of them were later put in the extras. Among them were:
*** From ''Dinosaur: A Prehistoric Park Adventure'':
**** Originally, the story would've featured a slightly altered version of the opening scene from Disney/{{Dinosaur}}.
**** There was supposed to be a scene where, while the misfits were wandering through the cave, they tried to find water. During said search, they'd end up wondering what kind of 'voice' Hazel has (any sound which comes from within), to which Hazel responded by singing. After she finished, they ended up finding a river in the cave.
**** Additionally, there would've been a scene after the final battle where Hazel would've comforted Neera over Kron's death and told her that he would always be with her in spirit.
** Also, several scenes were planned in the original fic but were ultimately scrapped. Some of them were later put in the extras. Among them were:
*** From ''Dinosaur: A Prehistoric Park Adventure'':
**** Originally, the story would've featured a slightly altered version of the opening scene from Disney/{{Dinosaur}}.
**** There was supposed to be a scene where, while the misfits were wandering through the cave, they tried to find water. During said search, they'd end up wondering what kind of 'voice' Hazel has (any sound which comes from within), to which Hazel responded by singing. After she finished, they ended up finding a river in the cave.
**** Additionally, there would've been a scene after the final battle where Hazel would've comforted Neera over Kron's death and told her that he would always be with her in spirit.
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* VirtualSoundtrack: Has two so far: the one for the first story is in the first chapter of the extras, while the second has it's soundtrack as its 28th chapter.
** Additionally, each chapter also has a song that will set the mood listed in the author's notes prior to the main body of the chapter.
** Additionally, each chapter also has a song that will set the mood listed in the author's notes prior to the main body of the chapter.
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** According to conversation with other authors on ''Website/FanFictionDotNet'', which were done is response to complaint about how few new aniamls there were at the Park prior to the events of the series, ''Pachycephalosaurus'' was originally planned to have been rescued prior to the story. It was removed from the list both to save time and because the author couldn't decide which animal would be it's partner (Nigel rescues at least two species of prehistoric creature each mission, and there were too many good cnadidates to choose from for ''Pachycephalosaurus''.
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** According to conversation with other authors on ''Website/FanFictionDotNet'', which were done is response to complaint about how few new aniamls there were at the Park prior to the events of the series, ''Pachycephalosaurus'' was originally planned to have been rescued prior to the story. It was removed from the list both to save time and because the author couldn't decide which animal would be it's partner (Nigel rescues at least two species of prehistoric creature each mission, and there were too many good cnadidates candidates to choose from for ''Pachycephalosaurus''.''Pachycephalosaurus''.
*** Furthermore, Darksage has also stated that Nigel and Hazel have gone on several missions off-camera, it's just that only the ''Therezinosaurus'', ''Protoceratops'' and ''Plateosaurus'' were rescued because the duo didn't want to pass up the opportunity.
*** Furthermore, Darksage has also stated that Nigel and Hazel have gone on several missions off-camera, it's just that only the ''Therezinosaurus'', ''Protoceratops'' and ''Plateosaurus'' were rescued because the duo didn't want to pass up the opportunity.
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** According to conversation with other authors on ''Website/FanFictionDotNet'', which were done is response to complaint about how few new aniamls there were at the Park prior to the events of the series, ''Pachycephalosaurus'' was originally planned to have been rescued prior to the story. It was removed from the list both to save time and because the author couldn't decide which animal would be it's partner (Nigel rescues at least two species of prehistoric creature each mission, and there were too many good cnadidates to choose from for ''Pachycephalosaurus''.
** According to conversation with other authors on ''Website/FanFictionDotNet'', which were done is response to complaint about how few new aniamls there were at the Park prior to the events of the series, ''Pachycephalosaurus'' was originally planned to have been rescued prior to the story. It was removed from the list both to save time and because the author couldn't decide which animal would be it's partner (Nigel rescues at least two species of prehistoric creature each mission, and there were too many good cnadidates to choose from for ''Pachycephalosaurus''.
