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** Downplayed. Having Malty recover from her injuries, but end up getting cursed scars as a problem in chapter 136, the original intention for how the scene happened was that Malty was given too much healing magic. However, because everyone in the story looked to tired to performing miracles or magic, Qinlongfei with the suggestion of Commissar Gaunt, instead changed the reason being that no one had the proper means to heal Malty.
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** Characterizing King Egbert, Qinlongfei never had the intention of characterizing him to be a genuinely smart ruler of Faubley that can force Mirellia into surrendering her most valuable servants in chapter 136. For how King Egbert (Pig King) was portrayed in the canon as just a character that exists to give Malty a KarmicRape death, it was a surprise for Qinlongfei to characterize him more on the intellect rather than be detestable.
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** Introducing ''Manga/HayateTheCombatButler'' back in chapter 32, Qinlongfei intended him to just be a minor SatelliteCharacter that exists for House Malfoy, and because he enjoys adding characters that are a ShoutOut to the works he likes. Coming into chapter 134, where Hayate is reintroduced as a ChekhovsGun to help the Three Heroes, Qinlongfei admits to not having planned that story for Hayate to reappear, alongside play out the ChekhovsGun trope.
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** Writing up chapter 133, Qinlongfei wanted the plot of the chapter to end with Naofumi [[spoiler: receiving a complete victory as a HumiliationConga and KarmaHoudiniWarranty against Consevatie by fleeing Balafon and its villagers with the help of Bed-Chan organizing a fake attack. However, the idea was scrapped, because of the in-universe FridgeLogic for Naofumi to explain his whole plan to all the panicking villagers, and the meta-narrative reason being that the confrontation against Consevatie would have been a fumbled payoff. Instead, Qinlongfei opted to bring in Roger of Ajax back into the plot to serve as the DiscOneFinalBoss against the main characters, and to give them a chance to meet Consevatie as a means to watch him be humiliated.]]
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** [[spoiler: Roger of Ajax appearing in chapter 133 was a last-minute addition by Qinlongfei wanting to build up the tension of the plot with the evacuation of Balafon, and as to not make everything a CurbStompBattle just from Bed-Chan being present.]]
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* AccidentallyCorrectWriting: Since the writing of chapter 3, Qinlongfei gave Malty a tragic past in which Mirellia sold her out to become the wife to the King of Faubley once she reached a suitable age. Initially, Qinlongfei wrote the scene as a way to reward Malty, even if the latter never became queen, but after getting clearer exposition from redditors that Malty's ArrangedMarriage to the King of Faubley was a [[KarmicRape death]] [[MaritalRapeLicense sentence]] in the original canon, Qinlongfei had the scene drastically alter Malty into a much more sympathetic character than what was originally intended.
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** The original plot for chapter 127 would be about Naofumi, Malty, and their travelling companions working together with Bed-Chan to have the brute force needed to overpower the Three Heroes Church. Instead, Qinlongfei scrapped the ideas to opt for the protagonists and their navigators escaping the Three Heroes Church, before more reinforcements are summoned.
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** Between chapter 121 and chapter 122, there was originally going to be a conversation with Pope Balmus regarding the antics of Consevatie the Younger's stupidity in the former chapter. However, the discussion about Consevatie was moved into chapter 122's omake to not disrupt to tonal shift of chapter 121.
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** The mysterious necromancers Balgruuf once mentioned back in Whiterun were people Qinlongfei did not put thought on who they would be. Bringing in Bellatrix and Rudopholus, Qinlonfei then chose to have them be the necromancers Balgruuf mentioned, as written in the chapter 122 author notes.
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** Writing about the characteristics and role of Pope Balmus, Qinlongfei author notes in chapter 121 mentions that he had no direction on whether the former should be portrayed as a villainous antagonist like what the pope used to be in ''Literature/TheRisingOfTheShieldHero'', or be kept a vague personality on what motives lie inside of Balmus' mind. Which had resulted throughout various chapters, the vibe of Pope Balmus had omitted in the story had either came off as mysterious, villainous, or supportive of the main characters.
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* CreatorsFavorite:
** Starting off the story, Qinlongfei did not have much interest in Malty as a character, as he mainly felt he was writing her as a PinballProtagonist to follow Naofumi's journey in going through the original plot points of ''Literature/TheRisingOfTheShieldHero''. As more chapters where written, along with Malty's more sympathetic portrayal of her mother selling her out since as a child, Qinlongfei became more invested in expanding her character, eventually becoming a character Qinlongfei enjoyed writing about.
** Finding Motoyasu to be the most likable of the Four Legendary Heroes for his tragic past and personality as a {{Manchild}}, it became a partial motive why Qinlongfei gave him Katarina, Iris, and Bertia, who are all the main characters of their respective series to become the main female side characters for Motoyasu.
* CreatorsFavoriteEpisode:
** In chapters regarding the fight choreography of Eclair vs. Weiss, and Zellus vs. Pyrrha, Eclair, and Yatsuhashi, they are all the favorite chapters to be written by Ace-Triad for being able to expand his creativity to make what would be interpreted as a great fight sequence.
** Getting into chapter 74 to set up Aldrecht in a GoodVsGood situation against the main characters, Qinlongfei enjoyed having to plot out his ideas to expand Aldrecht as an antagonistic force in what would somewhat fit the mold of a "twist villain".
** Reaching onto chapter 94 and 95, Qinlongfei gets to write out his favorite ideas on having lots of political intrigue onto the story by having those chapters be the main establishments that turn the Three Heroes Church into the BigBad of the story.
** Starting off the story, Qinlongfei did not have much interest in Malty as a character, as he mainly felt he was writing her as a PinballProtagonist to follow Naofumi's journey in going through the original plot points of ''Literature/TheRisingOfTheShieldHero''. As more chapters where written, along with Malty's more sympathetic portrayal of her mother selling her out since as a child, Qinlongfei became more invested in expanding her character, eventually becoming a character Qinlongfei enjoyed writing about.
** Finding Motoyasu to be the most likable of the Four Legendary Heroes for his tragic past and personality as a {{Manchild}}, it became a partial motive why Qinlongfei gave him Katarina, Iris, and Bertia, who are all the main characters of their respective series to become the main female side characters for Motoyasu.
* CreatorsFavoriteEpisode:
** In chapters regarding the fight choreography of Eclair vs. Weiss, and Zellus vs. Pyrrha, Eclair, and Yatsuhashi, they are all the favorite chapters to be written by Ace-Triad for being able to expand his creativity to make what would be interpreted as a great fight sequence.
** Getting into chapter 74 to set up Aldrecht in a GoodVsGood situation against the main characters, Qinlongfei enjoyed having to plot out his ideas to expand Aldrecht as an antagonistic force in what would somewhat fit the mold of a "twist villain".
** Reaching onto chapter 94 and 95, Qinlongfei gets to write out his favorite ideas on having lots of political intrigue onto the story by having those chapters be the main establishments that turn the Three Heroes Church into the BigBad of the story.
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** The original plans for Malty and Naofumi's enslavement in chapter 118 was that the Three Heroes and their allies were supposed to be the ones that saved them from the clutches of the Three Heroes Church. However, [[FridgeLogic because the Three Heroes Church and Pope Balmus were given lots of depth from how they operate]], the plans were scrapped in favor of Qinlongfei taking Datnoob's contribution for Leon Bartfort making a VillainousRescue to have Naofumi and Malty be kept alive, [[EnemyMine just so revenge is enacted on Consevatie]].
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** Qinlongfei got the idea to have Consevatie come up with the fake Vicar Vittorio trap to lure Naofumi and Malty was an inspiration that came from Streibough making out Oersted as a villain in ''VideoGame/LiveALive''.
