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[[TeamMom Florence]]: A dignified woman who carries around a baby doll, [[TearJerker believing it to be her son, who died when he was an infant]].
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[[TeamMom Florence]]: A dignified woman who carries around a baby doll, [[TearJerker believing it to be her son, who [[DeathOfAChild died when he was an infant]].
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* HappilyMarried: Mrs. Savage never regretted all of the things she didn't get to do because she married young... until after her husband died.
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** Mrs. Savage never regretted all of the things she didn't get to do because she married young... until after her husband died.
** Mrs. Savage never regretted all of the things she didn't get to do because she married young... until after her husband died.
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* AffectionateNickname: Miss Willie calls Jeff "Bingo," much to his consternation since it's a pet name his wife uses...who happens to be Miss Willie herself.
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* AffectionateNickname: Miss Willie calls Jeff "Bingo," much to his consternation consternation, since it's a pet name his wife uses...uses... who happens to be Miss Willie herself.
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* AffectionateNickname: Miss Willie calls Jeff "Bingo," much to his consternation since it's a pet name his wife uses...who happens to be Miss Willie herself.
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Miss Willie: A nurse.
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Miss Willie: A nurse.
nurse who has her own reasons for working at the understaffed Cloisters.
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** Unbeknownst to Jeff, he and Miss Willie are married. Jeff is well aware that he is married, but he does not recognize her, thinking that her singling him out for attention would make his wife livid. Miss Willie meanwhile works at the Cloisters so she can be by Jeff every step of the way through his recovery, and thinks nothing of throwing herself in harm's way to protect him.
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* IAmSpartacus: Jeff and Florence both claim to be the ones to have taken the bonds, while Hannibal also chimes in that he knows who it wasn't.
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!This play contains examples of:
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[[HouseWife Florence]]: A dignified woman who carries around a baby doll, [[TearJerker believing it to be her son, who died when he was an infant]].
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* DelinquentHair: Before the play begins, Mrs. Savage has invoked this by dying her hair blue as part of her becoming a Senior Delinquent (in her grown-up stepchildren's eyes).
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* DelinquentHair: Before the play begins, Mrs. Savage has invoked this by dying her hair blue as part of her becoming a Senior Delinquent (in her grown-up stepchildren's eyes).
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* DelinquentHair: Before the play begins, Mrs. Savage has invoked this by dying her hair blue as part of her becoming a Senior Delinquent (in her grown-up stepchildren's eyes).
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* CoolOldLady: Mrs. Savage.
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* CoolOldLady: Mrs. Savage.Savage, who wants to use her inheritance to help others realize their dreams.
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[[GenkiGirl Fairy May]]: A plain young woman, with the mind of a six-year-old, who is a CompulsiveLiar. [[DelusionsOfBeauty She believes she is stunningly beautiful]] and is determined to have someone say "I love you" to her at least once a day.
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[[GenkiGirl Fairy May]]: A plain young woman, with the mind of a six-year-old, who is a CompulsiveLiar. [[DelusionsOfBeauty She believes she is stunningly beautiful]] and is determined to have someone say say, "I love you" to her at least once a day.
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* {{Jerkass}}: In a set of three.
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* IJustWantToBeLoved: A non-romantic example. Fairy May is determined to have someone say, "I love you" to her at least once a day.
* {{Jerkass}}:In The Savage stepchildren, in a set of three.
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Mrs. Ethel P. Savage has just inherited $10 million from her late husband. After her husband's death, she realizes her crazy, youthful dreams and plans to use the money to help others do the same. Her stepkids--[[RichBitch Lily Belle]], [[SleazyPolitician Titus]], and [[ObliviousYoungerSibling Samuel]]--commit her to The Cloisters, a sanatorium in Massachusetts, so that they can get their hands on the money. Somehow or another, Mrs. Savage manages to send them on one wild-goose chase after another from her seclusion.
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Mrs. Ethel P. Savage has just inherited $10 million from her late husband. After her husband's death, she realizes her crazy, youthful dreams and plans to use the money to help others do the same. Her stepkids--[[RichBitch stepkids—[[SleazyPolitician Titus]], [[RichBitch Lily Belle]], [[SleazyPolitician Titus]], and [[ObliviousYoungerSibling Samuel]]--commit Samuel]]—commit her to The Cloisters, a sanatorium in Massachusetts, so that they can get their hands on the money. Somehow or another, Mrs. Savage manages to send them on one wild-goose chase after another from her seclusion.
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[[GenkiGirl Fairy May]]: A plain girl, with the mind of a six-year-old, who is a CompulsiveLiar. [[DelusionsOfBeauty She believes she is stunningly beautiful]] and is determined to have someone say "I love you" to her at least once a day.
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[[GenkiGirl Fairy May]]: A plain girl, young woman, with the mind of a six-year-old, who is a CompulsiveLiar. [[DelusionsOfBeauty She believes she is stunningly beautiful]] and is determined to have someone say "I love you" to her at least once a day.
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[[GenkiGirl Fairy May]]: A plain girl, with the mind of a six-year-old, who is a CompulsiveLiar. She believes she is stunningly beautiful and is determined to have someone say "I love you" to her at least once a day.
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[[GenkiGirl Fairy May]]: A plain girl, with the mind of a six-year-old, who is a CompulsiveLiar. [[DelusionsOfBeauty She believes she is stunningly beautiful beautiful]] and is determined to have someone say "I love you" to her at least once a day.
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* NobilityMarriesMoney: Lily Belle once married a Slovak prince. She's remarried five times since then.
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* NobilityMarriesMoney: Lily Belle once married a Slovak prince. She's remarried five times since then.
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[[GoodWithNumbers Hannibal]]: A former statistician, who lost his sense of reasoning after being replaced by an electronic calculator and not finding work again. [[GiftedlyBad He believes he is an excellent violinist]].
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[[GoodWithNumbers Hannibal]]: A former statistician, statistician who lost his sense of reasoning after being replaced by an electronic calculator and not finding work again. [[GiftedlyBad He believes he is an excellent violinist]].
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* ButNowIMustGo: Inverted. Mrs. Savage is given permission to leave the sanitarium, but doesn't want to, because she's found a peace in The Cloisters that she's never experienced elsewhere. Dr. Emmett has to persuade her that it's the outside world that needs her.
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* ButNowIMustGo: Inverted. Mrs. Savage is given permission to leave the sanitarium, sanatorium, but doesn't want to, because she's found a peace in The Cloisters that she's never experienced elsewhere. Dr. Emmett has to persuade her that it's the outside world that needs her.
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* KillTheLights: Mrs. Paddy, who has given up electricity for Lent, does this many times, causing mayhem.
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* KillTheLights: Mrs. Paddy, who has given up electricity for Lent, does this many times, more than once, causing mayhem.
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* DelusionsOfBeauty: Downplayed. Fairy May, one of the inhabitants of the Cloisters, believes she's beautiful when she's actually fairly homely. When Mrs. Savage sees the inhabitants as they view themselves at the end, Fairy May is a lovely, well-dressed girl standing and waving to the people admiring her.
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* DelusionsOfBeauty: Downplayed. Fairy May, one of the inhabitants of the Cloisters, May believes she's beautiful when she's actually fairly homely. When Mrs. Savage sees the inhabitants as they view themselves at the end, Fairy May is a lovely, well-dressed girl girl, standing and waving to the people admiring her.
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* DelusionsOfBeauty: Downplayed. Fairy May, one of the inhabitants of the Cloisters, believes she's beautiful when she's actually fairly homely. When Mrs. Savage sees the inhabitants as they view themselves at the end, Fairy May is a lovely, well-dressed girl standing and waving to the people admiring her.
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* DoubleEntendre
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* MonkeyMoralityPose: At one point, Hannibal, Jeff, and Fairy May assume this pose on a couch for a while.
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[[GrumpyOldMan Mrs. Paddy]]: An artist who paints only seascapes, each consisting of one undulating line. This strikes Hannibal as "odd, because she's never seen the ocean." Her husband once told her to shut up, and she never spoke again, except to rant: [[LongList "I hate lightning, skunk cabbage, custard, mustard, spiders, blisters...."]]
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[[GrumpyOldMan Mrs. Paddy]]: [[TerribleArtist An artist who paints only seascapes, each consisting of one undulating line. line.]] This strikes Hannibal as "odd, because she's never seen the ocean." Her husband once told her to shut up, and she never spoke again, except to rant: [[LongList "I hate lightning, skunk cabbage, custard, mustard, spiders, blisters...."]]