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* After killing Rorschach, Dr. Manhattan tells Lauri he's going to leave the human galaxy in a ''very'' somber tone, not after a lengthy discussion with Ozymandias. He shares a final kiss with her before departing.
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* After killing Rorschach, Dr. Manhattan tells Lauri Laurie he's going to leave the human galaxy in a ''very'' somber tone, not after a lengthy discussion with Ozymandias. He shares a final kiss with her before departing.
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* After killing Rorschach, Dr. Manhattan tells Lori he's going to leave the human galaxy in a ''very'' somber tone, not after a lengthy discussion with Ozymandias. He shares a final kiss with her before departing.
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* After killing Rorschach, Dr. Manhattan tells Lori Lauri he's going to leave the human galaxy in a ''very'' somber tone, not after a lengthy discussion with Ozymandias. He shares a final kiss with her before departing.
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** For added TearJerker, the face off between Rorschach and Dr. Manhattan lasts longer, and Doc has a rather unhappy expression during their final exchange. Now, remember what Adrian said in regards to Jon's apparent lack of emotion, how his "subtle facial twitches" actually translate to him being in a sobbing state, and rewatch him killing Rorschach with that in mind. ''Yeah''.
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** For added TearJerker, the face off between Rorschach and Dr. Manhattan lasts longer, and Doc has a rather unhappy expression during their final exchange. Now, remember what Adrian said in regards to Jon's apparent lack of emotion, how his "subtle facial twitches" actually translate to him being in a sobbing state, and rewatch him killing Rorschach with that in mind. ''Yeah''.''Yeah''.
* After killing Rorschach, Dr. Manhattan tells Lori he's going to leave the human galaxy in a ''very'' somber tone, not after a lengthy discussion with Ozymandias. He shares a final kiss with her before departing.
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* After killing Rorschach, Dr. Manhattan tells Lori he's going to leave the human galaxy in a ''very'' somber tone, not after a lengthy discussion with Ozymandias. He shares a final kiss with her before departing.
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** His girlfriend Janie running away rather then watch him die, while understandable as it would be too much for most people and especially knowing what is about to happen to him, is devastating to Jon who only has Wally to stay with him in what seemed his final moments.
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** His girlfriend Janie Janey running away rather then watch him die, while understandable as it would be too much for most people and especially knowing what is about to happen to him, is devastating to Jon who only has Wally to stay with him in what seemed his final moments.
