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!!The [[Fanfic/TheVow Fanfic]]
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* The happiness of Lianne, Shen and his parents is destroyed when Shen [[spoiler:massacres a village of innocent pandas]] and the crime is exposed in the middle of the wedding. After Shen has been exiled instead of executed [[PleaseSpareHimMyLiege on Lianne's begging]], neither Lianne, Lord Goa or Lady Jing are the same after that. Shen's parents eventually [[DeathByDespair die out of sadness]], and [[TheWomanWearingTheQueenlyMask while Lianne rules Gongmen City competently, she remains privately sad]].
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* The happiness of Lianne, Shen and his parents is destroyed when Shen [[spoiler:massacres a village of innocent pandas]] and the crime is exposed in the middle of the wedding. After Shen has been exiled instead of executed [[PleaseSpareHimMyLiege on Lianne's begging]], neither Lianne, Lord Goa or Lady Jing are the same after that. Shen's parents eventually [[DeathByDespair die out of sadness]], and [[TheWomanWearingTheQueenlyMask [[TheChainsOfCommanding while Lianne rules Gongmen City competently, she remains privately sad]].
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** After [[spoiler:Lianne finalizes their marriage and gives Shen the BigDamnKiss, he finally bursts into tears along with her, and they give their [[TitleDrop Vows]] of everlasting love. Before she leaves, she promises to [[IWillWaitForYou always wait for him]]]]. After [[spoiler:she has left, Shen notices how his tears are white, fulfilling Ah-Ma's prophecy of his marriage with Lianne happening "beneath tears of snow"]].
** The author recommends the reader to start the tune ''"Pastorale"'' of Secret Garden (an Irish-Norwegian music duo) when the above-mentioned [[spoiler:BigDamnKiss]] starts.
** The author recommends the reader to start the tune ''"Pastorale"'' of Secret Garden (an Irish-Norwegian music duo) when the above-mentioned [[spoiler:BigDamnKiss]] starts.
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** After [[spoiler:Lianne finalizes their marriage and gives Shen the BigDamnKiss, TheBigDamnKiss, he finally bursts into tears along with her, and they give their [[TitleDrop Vows]] of everlasting love. Before she leaves, she promises to [[IWillWaitForYou always wait for him]]]]. After [[spoiler:she has left, Shen notices how his tears are white, fulfilling Ah-Ma's prophecy of his marriage with Lianne happening "beneath tears of snow"]].
** The author recommends the reader to start the tune ''"Pastorale"'' of Secret Garden (an Irish-Norwegian music duo) whenthe above-mentioned [[spoiler:BigDamnKiss]] [[spoiler:TheBigDamnKiss]] mentioned above starts.
** The author recommends the reader to start the tune ''"Pastorale"'' of Secret Garden (an Irish-Norwegian music duo) when
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* When Lianne first arrives in Gongmen City, she is behind her dignified and unemotional façade lonely and sad for being separated from her mother so suddenly. Her [[ParentalNeglect father's lack of affection]] touches even Shen.
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* When Lianne first arrives in Gongmen City, she is behind her dignified and unemotional façade lonely and sad for being separated from her mother so suddenly.mother, just for [[CallingTheOldManOut calling her father out of pressuring her into marriage]]. Her [[ParentalNeglect father's lack of affection]] touches even Shen.
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** Lianne's [[CallingTheOldManOut confrontation]] with her father in Shēnghuó implies that he ''was'' hurt by her saying that he's no longer a father to her during the argument that led Lianne's banishment to Gongmen City.
** For extra sadness, [[spoiler:Lady Amelia passed away with the feeling that her only child has found her significant one, not knowing what sadness Lianne would go through before she is able to live with her beloved]].
* The happiness of Lianne, Shen and his parents is destroyed with Shen [[spoiler:massacring a village of innocent pandas]] and the crime being exposed in the middle of the wedding. After Shen has been exiled instead of executed [[PleaseSpareHimMyLiege on Lianne's begging]], neither Lianne, Lord Goa or Lady Jing are the same after that. Shen's parents eventually [[DeathByDespair die out of sadness]], and [[TheWomanWearingTheQueenlyMask while Lianne rules Gongmen City competently, she remains privately sad]].
** For extra sadness, [[spoiler:Lady Amelia passed away with the feeling that her only child has found her significant one, not knowing what sadness Lianne would go through before she is able to live with her beloved]].
* The happiness of Lianne, Shen and his parents is destroyed with Shen [[spoiler:massacring a village of innocent pandas]] and the crime being exposed in the middle of the wedding. After Shen has been exiled instead of executed [[PleaseSpareHimMyLiege on Lianne's begging]], neither Lianne, Lord Goa or Lady Jing are the same after that. Shen's parents eventually [[DeathByDespair die out of sadness]], and [[TheWomanWearingTheQueenlyMask while Lianne rules Gongmen City competently, she remains privately sad]].
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** Lianne's [[CallingTheOldManOut confrontation]] with her father in Shēnghuó implies that he ''was'' hurt by her saying that when she said he's no longer a father to her during the argument that led to Lianne's banishment to in Gongmen City.
** For extra sadness, [[spoiler:Lady Amelia passed away with the feeling that her only child has found her significant one, not knowing [[TraumaCongaLine what sadness Lianne would gothrough through]] before she is able to live with her beloved]].
* The happiness of Lianne, Shen and his parents is destroyedwith when Shen [[spoiler:massacring [[spoiler:massacres a village of innocent pandas]] and the crime being is exposed in the middle of the wedding. After Shen has been exiled instead of executed [[PleaseSpareHimMyLiege on Lianne's begging]], neither Lianne, Lord Goa or Lady Jing are the same after that. Shen's parents eventually [[DeathByDespair die out of sadness]], and [[TheWomanWearingTheQueenlyMask while Lianne rules Gongmen City competently, she remains privately sad]].
** For extra sadness, [[spoiler:Lady Amelia passed away with the feeling that her only child has found her significant one, not knowing [[TraumaCongaLine what sadness Lianne would go
* The happiness of Lianne, Shen and his parents is destroyed
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** Despite the fact that Shen brought his exile onto himself, his last moment with his parents includes his father [[IHaveNoSon disowning him]] coldly and his mother crying out of shame and saying nothing to him. For the following three decades, Shen deludes himself into thinking that his parents hated him.
** The ''Far Longer Than Forever - Piano'' video of [[https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCMuq9FNZYOXGXKw5gV3LYJQ Calikokat1ab]] is recommended to be listened during the wedding. It suits the atmosphere so beautifully right [[MomentKiller until Lang arrives]].
** The ''Far Longer Than Forever - Piano'' video of [[https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCMuq9FNZYOXGXKw5gV3LYJQ Calikokat1ab]] is recommended to be listened during the wedding. It suits the atmosphere so beautifully right [[MomentKiller until Lang arrives]].
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** Despite the fact that Shen brought his exile onto himself, his last moment with his parents includes his father [[IHaveNoSon disowning him]] coldly and as well as his mother crying out of shame and saying nothing to him. For the following three decades, Shen deludes himself into thinking that his parents hated him.
** The''Far ''[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=utthuzwGHuY Far Longer Than Forever - Piano'' Piano]]'' video of [[https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCMuq9FNZYOXGXKw5gV3LYJQ Calikokat1ab]] is recommended to be listened during the wedding. It suits the atmosphere so beautifully right [[MomentKiller until Lang arrives]].
** The
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** The sad video ''Lord Shen/Lianne - I Know Those Eyes/This Man Is Dead'' made by [[https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCHgaSY3PEcLmryIBSO1EACg/videos Alicia Donovan]] is based on their first talk after Shen's return, with Lianne being portrayed as [[WesternAnimation/TheSwanPrincess Odette]] in her swan form and the music being from Wildhorn and Murphy's musical version of ''Literature/TheCountOfMonteCristo''. The song includes some of the lines used in that conversation.
* Zhan's [[WasItAllALie feelings of being betrayed]] when Jade is caught as a spy and her [[ItMeantSomethingToMe confession of the truth of her fondness for him]]. He decides to sever their ties and send her away from the city, threatening to kill her if she returns.
* Zhan's [[WasItAllALie feelings of being betrayed]] when Jade is caught as a spy and her [[ItMeantSomethingToMe confession of the truth of her fondness for him]]. He decides to sever their ties and send her away from the city, threatening to kill her if she returns.
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** The sad video ''Lord Shen/Lianne - I Know Those Eyes/This Man Is Dead'' made by [[https://www.''[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=87Lf94UCPlE Lord Shen/Lianne - I Know Those Eyes/This Man Is Dead]]'' made by [[https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCHgaSY3PEcLmryIBSO1EACg/videos Alicia Donovan]] the author]] is based on their first talk after Shen's return, with Lianne being portrayed as [[WesternAnimation/TheSwanPrincess Odette]] in her swan form and the music being from Wildhorn and Murphy's musical version of ''Literature/TheCountOfMonteCristo''. The song includes some of the lines used in that conversation.
* Zhan's [[WasItAllALie feelings of being betrayed]] when Jade is caught as a spy and her [[ItMeantSomethingToMe confession ofthe truth of her genuine fondness for toward him]]. He decides to sever their ties and send her away from the city, threatening to kill her if she returns.
* Zhan's [[WasItAllALie feelings of being betrayed]] when Jade is caught as a spy and her [[ItMeantSomethingToMe confession of
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** When Shen and Lianne are [[spoiler:about to be married for the second time]], he suddenly [[spoiler:interrupts the ceremony and tells her to go]], having realized [[spoiler:that [[IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy he values her happiness more than his future]]. He insists that [[IveComeTooFar he can't be redeemed]], despite her pleas. He prepares to hear her leaving, his heart overwhelmed with pain]].
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** When Shen and Lianne are [[spoiler:about to be married for the a second time]], he suddenly [[spoiler:interrupts the ceremony and tells her to go]], having realized [[spoiler:that [[IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy he values her happiness more than his future]]. He insists that [[IveComeTooFar he can't be redeemed]], despite her pleas. He prepares to hear her leaving, his heart overwhelmed with pain]].
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCHgaSY3PEcLmryIBSO1EACg/videos Alicia Donovan's]] music video ''Shen/OC - "Coming Back To Me"''. The author chose "It's All Coming Back To Me Now" of Music/CelineDion because she felt it to suit the story perfectly.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCHgaSY3PEcLmryIBSO1EACg/videos Alicia Donovan's]] (now deleted) music video ''Shen/OC - "Coming Back To Me"''. The author chose "It's All Coming Back To Me Now" of Music/CelineDion because she felt it to suit the story perfectly.
