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* In order to save Zak, Fiskerton willingly gives himself up to Argost. Zak's screams as he apologizes non stop for the things he said and watches his life long brother be taken away from him. It was at this point Zak finally saw what a monster Argost really is.
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* In order to save Zak, Fiskerton willingly gives himself up to Argost. Zak's screams as he apologizes non stop nonstop for the things he said and watches his life long lifelong brother be taken away from him. It was at this point Zak finally saw what a monster Argost really is.
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** To emphasize this moment, Doc is understandably pissed at his son for his reckless actions and rightfully [[WhatTheHellHero demands to why would he do something so "catastrophically stupid".]] Zak's whole body language is screaming of guilt and shame and softly answers he just wanted to help. Doc ''immediately'' softens up, hugs his son, and reassures him everything will be alright.
* Drew's disbelief and and confusion when the family finds out [[spoiler:Zak is Kur.]]
* Drew's disbelief and and confusion when the family finds out [[spoiler:Zak is Kur.]]
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** To emphasize this moment, Doc is understandably pissed at his son for his reckless actions and rightfully [[WhatTheHellHero demands to why would he do something so "catastrophically stupid".]] Zak's whole body whole-body language is screaming of guilt and shame and softly answers he just wanted to help. Doc ''immediately'' softens up, hugs his son, and reassures him everything will be alright.
* Drew's disbeliefand and confusion when the family finds out [[spoiler:Zak is Kur.]]
* Drew's disbelief
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* Zak's ''temporary'' death. His family, especially Drew cries for the boy to wake up.
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* Zak's ''temporary'' death. His family, especially Drew cries for the their boy to wake up.
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** The six words following her anguish outburst: [[spoiler:Zak: "So, I'm the bad guy, now?"]]
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** The six words following her anguish outburst: [[spoiler:Zak: "So, I'm the bad guy, now?"]]now?"]]
* Zak's ''temporary'' death. His family, especially Drew cries for the boy to wake up.
* Zak's ''temporary'' death. His family, especially Drew cries for the boy to wake up.
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* In order to save Zak, Fiskerton willingly gives himself up to Argost. Zak's screams as he apologizes non stop for the things he said and watches his life long brother be taken away from him. It was at this point Zak finally saw what a monster Argost really is.
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* Drew's disbelief and and confusion when the family finds out [[spoiler:Zak is cur.]]
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* Drew's disbelief and and confusion when the family finds out [[spoiler:Zak is cur.Kur.]]
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** To emphasize this moment, Doc is understandably pissed at his son for his reckless actions, but after hearing Zak's reason, he immediately softens up, hugs his son, and reassures him everything will be alright.
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** To emphasize this moment, Doc is understandably pissed at his son for his reckless actions, but after hearing actions and rightfully [[WhatTheHellHero demands to why would he do something so "catastrophically stupid".]] Zak's reason, whole body language is screaming of guilt and shame and softly answers he immediately just wanted to help. Doc ''immediately'' softens up, hugs his son, and reassures him everything will be alright.
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* [[spoiler: Van Rook's HeroicSacrifice to save Drew's life, and dying right after admitting he loved her.]]
* Zak's [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone reaction]] to accidentally injuring his mother.
** To emphasize this moment, Doc is understandably pissed at his son for his reckless actions, but after hearing Zak's reason, he immediately softens up, hugs his son, and reassures him everything will be alright.
* Drew's disbelief and and confusion when the family finds out [[spoiler:Zak is cur.]]
** The six words following her anguish outburst: [[spoiler:Zak: "So, I'm the bad guy, now?"]]
* Zak's [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone reaction]] to accidentally injuring his mother.
** To emphasize this moment, Doc is understandably pissed at his son for his reckless actions, but after hearing Zak's reason, he immediately softens up, hugs his son, and reassures him everything will be alright.
* Drew's disbelief and and confusion when the family finds out [[spoiler:Zak is cur.]]
** The six words following her anguish outburst: [[spoiler:Zak: "So, I'm the bad guy, now?"]]
