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---> '''Ollie:''' [[BlatantLies No!]] [[SuspiciouslySpecificDenial It's not like there's anything to feel guilty about!]] I don't feel bad that [[KnowNothingKnowItAll I was wrong about]] ''[[KnowNothingKnowItAll everything]]'', I don't feel bad about ''(tears up)'' [[VanHelsingHateCrimes attacking innocent ghosts]], and I don't feel bad that ''I almost hurt someone you really care about!'' ''(sobs)'' [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone Or, maybe I do feel bad. Really, really bad...]] You were right Scratch. I ''don't'' deserve to be on the team. [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking Or to do cool poses.]] ''([[MoodWhiplash hysterically breaks down onto Scratch]])''
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---> '''Ollie:''' [[BlatantLies No!]] [[SuspiciouslySpecificDenial It's not like there's anything to feel guilty about!]] I don't feel bad that [[KnowNothingKnowItAll I was wrong about]] ''[[KnowNothingKnowItAll everything]]'', I don't feel bad about ''(tears up)'' [[VanHelsingHateCrimes attacking innocent ghosts]], and I don't feel bad that ''I ''[[MyGreatestFailure I almost hurt someone you really care about!'' about!]]'' ''(sobs)'' [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone Or, maybe I do feel bad. Really, really bad...]] You were right Scratch. I ''don't'' deserve to be on the team. [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking Or to do cool poses.]] ''([[MoodWhiplash hysterically breaks down onto Scratch]])''
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** The look on Scratch's face when he realizes he's Todd's wraith is a tearjerker in and of itself. It's almost as if he crossed the DespairEventHorizon in an instant.
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“What the hell was that” indeed.
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* [[OOCIsSeriousBusiness Any time that Molly drops her]] GenkiGirl [[OOCIsSeriousBusiness persona]]. It's even an in-universe TearJerker for Scratch; he declares war on anyone who makes Molly upset. And yes, [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone that includes if he instigates her sadness]]
* [[https://m.facebook.com/groups/690421464917789/permalink/1351046968855232/?mibextid=Nif5oz This post]] on the Crossover Media group.
-->'''Molly:''' How could you do this do to me???
-->'''Sir Topman Hatt:''' Because... [[IAmYourFather I AM YOUR STEPFATHER.]]
-->'''Molly:''' *gasps* [[BigNO NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!]]
-->'''Nikocado Avocado:''' *after seeing the drama unfold* What the hell was that???
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* [[https://m.facebook.com/groups/690421464917789/permalink/1351046968855232/?mibextid=Nif5oz This post]] on the Crossover Media group.
-->'''Molly:''' How could you do this do to me???
-->'''Sir Topman Hatt:''' Because... [[IAmYourFather I AM YOUR STEPFATHER.]]
-->'''Molly:''' *gasps* [[BigNO NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!]]
-->'''Nikocado Avocado:''' *after seeing the drama unfold* What the hell was that???
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* [[OOCIsSeriousBusiness Any time that Molly drops her]] GenkiGirl [[OOCIsSeriousBusiness persona]]. It's even an in-universe TearJerker for Scratch; he declares war on anyone who makes Molly upset. And yes, [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone that includes if he instigates her sadness]]
* [[https://m.facebook.com/groups/690421464917789/permalink/1351046968855232/?mibextid=Nif5oz This post]] on the Crossover Media group.
-->'''Molly:''' How could you do this do to me???
-->'''Sir Topman Hatt:''' Because... [[IAmYourFather I AM YOUR STEPFATHER.]]
-->'''Molly:''' *gasps* [[BigNO NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!]]
-->'''Nikocado Avocado:''' *after seeing the drama unfold* What the hell was that???
.sadness]].
* [[https://m.facebook.com/groups/690421464917789/permalink/1351046968855232/?mibextid=Nif5oz This post]] on the Crossover Media group.
-->'''Molly:''' How could you do this do to me???
-->'''Sir Topman Hatt:''' Because... [[IAmYourFather I AM YOUR STEPFATHER.]]
-->'''Molly:''' *gasps* [[BigNO NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!]]
-->'''Nikocado Avocado:''' *after seeing the drama unfold* What the hell was that???
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-->'''Molly McGee:''' How could you do this do to me???
-->'''Sir Topman Hatt:''' Because... I AM YOUR STEPFATHER.
-->'''Sir Topman Hatt:''' Because... I AM YOUR STEPFATHER.
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-->'''Sir Topman Hatt:''' Because... [[IAmYourFather I AM YOUR STEPFATHER.]]
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-->'''Molly McGee''' How could you do this do to me???
-->'''Sir Topman Hatt''' Because... I AM YOUR STEPFATHER.
-->'''Molly McGee''' *gasps* [BigNO NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!]
-->'''Nikocado Avocado''' *after seeing the drama unfold* What the hell was that???
-->'''Sir Topman Hatt''' Because... I AM YOUR STEPFATHER.
-->'''Molly McGee''' *gasps* [BigNO NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!]
-->'''Nikocado Avocado''' *after seeing the drama unfold* What the hell was that???
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-->'''Molly McGee''' McGee:''' How could you do this do to me???
-->'''Sir TopmanHatt''' Hatt:''' Because... I AM YOUR STEPFATHER.
-->'''Molly McGee''' -->'''Molly:''' *gasps* [BigNO NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!]
[[BigNO NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!]]
-->'''NikocadoAvocado''' Avocado:''' *after seeing the drama unfold* What the hell was that???
-->'''Sir Topman
-->'''Nikocado
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* [[OOCIsSeriousBusiness Any time that Molly drops her]] GenkiGirl [[OOCIsSeriousBusiness persona]]. It's even an in-universe TearJerker for Scratch; he declares war on anyone who makes Molly upset. And yes, [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone that includes if he instigates her sadness]].
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* [[OOCIsSeriousBusiness Any time that Molly drops her]] GenkiGirl [[OOCIsSeriousBusiness persona]]. It's even an in-universe TearJerker for Scratch; he declares war on anyone who makes Molly upset. And yes, [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone that includes if he instigates her sadness]].sadness]]
* [[https://m.facebook.com/groups/690421464917789/permalink/1351046968855232/?mibextid=Nif5oz This post]] on the Crossover Media group.
-->'''Molly McGee''' How could you do this do to me???
-->'''Sir Topman Hatt''' Because... I AM YOUR STEPFATHER.
-->'''Molly McGee''' *gasps* [BigNO NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!]
-->'''Nikocado Avocado''' *after seeing the drama unfold* What the hell was that???
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* [[https://m.facebook.com/groups/690421464917789/permalink/1351046968855232/?mibextid=Nif5oz This post]] on the Crossover Media group.
-->'''Molly McGee''' How could you do this do to me???
-->'''Sir Topman Hatt''' Because... I AM YOUR STEPFATHER.
-->'''Molly McGee''' *gasps* [BigNO NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!]
-->'''Nikocado Avocado''' *after seeing the drama unfold* What the hell was that???
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-->'''Scratch:''' ''She'd be on a surfboard,\\
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** When the song ends, Ollie reveals that when wraiths are out of their bodies for too long, they'll start to forget their lives when they were human, and it's a common thing for wraiths.
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And I'd be on my sofa,\\
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And I'd be on my the sofa,\\
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That's a spice!\\
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'''''I wasted my whole life.'''''\\
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** How sad is "Maybe Next Time," the song Scratch sings as he explains his past as Todd? Even the song's one joke ends up being heartbreaking.
-->'''Scratch:''' ''She'd be on a surfboard,\\
Riding on a swell.\\
And I'd be on my sofa,\\
Eating nachos by myself.\\
On the one hand, they were very tasty nachos--\\
That's a spice!\\
But on the other hand...\\
'''''I wasted my whole life.'''''\\
So, there is that.''
-->'''Scratch:''' ''She'd be on a surfboard,\\
Riding on a swell.\\
And I'd be on my sofa,\\
Eating nachos by myself.\\
On the one hand, they were very tasty nachos--\\
That's a spice!\\
But on the other hand...\\
'''''I wasted my whole life.'''''\\
So, there is that.''
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-->'''Scratch:''' Dream team. You and me?\\
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-->'''Scratch:''' Dream team. You team, you and me?\\
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* The last words between Molly and Scratch before he goes back to being Todd are a reference to the theme song:
-->'''Scratch:''' Dream team. You and me?\\
'''Molly:''' For all eternity.
-->'''Scratch:''' Dream team. You and me?\\
'''Molly:''' For all eternity.
