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* Suzume is forced to use Sōta as the keystone to save Tokyo from being wiped out by the Wyrm, all the while screaming she doesn't want to do it and begging Sōta to answer her.
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* Suzume is forced to use Sōta as the keystone to save Tokyo from being wiped out by the Wyrm, Worm, all the while screaming she doesn't want to do it and begging Sōta to answer her.
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* After saving her during the climax, Daijin sadly apologizes that he can't be Suzume's cat despite wanting to be, because he knows he has to return to being the keystone, and [[RedemptionEqualsDeath asks her to set things right by using him to defeat the Wyrm]]. Suzume, for her part, has by now forgiven him for his actions and is very saddened to lose him and tearful that she must return him to his fate of the inanimate keystone.
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* After saving her during the climax, Daijin sadly apologizes that he can't be Suzume's cat despite wanting to be, because he knows he has to return to being the keystone, and [[RedemptionEqualsDeath asks her to set things right by using him to defeat the Wyrm]].Worm]]. Suzume, for her part, has by now forgiven him for his actions and is very saddened to lose him and tearful that she must return him to his fate of the inanimate keystone.
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** Even without accounting for disasters, the ''Akiya'', the abandoned houses and building because of the aging japanese population, are a well known problem. Much like the amusement park Suzume gets to visit, entire neighborhoods and town simply cease to be and rot to husks because no one lives there anymore.
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** Even without accounting for disasters, the ''Akiya'', the abandoned houses and building because of the aging japanese Japanese population, are a well known well-known problem. Much like the closed amusement park Suzume gets to and Sōta visit, entire neighborhoods and town towns that were once teeming with life simply cease to be and rot be; slowly rotting to husks and being reclaimed by nature because no one lives there anymore.
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* Souta losing himself as he becomes the keystone, with his body frosting over as he admits he's afraid of dying.
* Suzume is forced to use Souta as the keystone to save Tokyo from being wiped out by the Wyrm, all the while screaming she doesn't want to do it and begging Souta to answer her.
* Suzume is forced to use Souta as the keystone to save Tokyo from being wiped out by the Wyrm, all the while screaming she doesn't want to do it and begging Souta to answer her.
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* Souta Sōta losing himself as he becomes the keystone, with his body frosting over as he admits he's afraid of dying.
* Suzume is forced to useSouta Sōta as the keystone to save Tokyo from being wiped out by the Wyrm, all the while screaming she doesn't want to do it and begging Souta Sōta to answer her.
* Suzume is forced to use
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* To lock up the doors leading to the Ever After, Souta taught Suzume to remember the happy memories of the people who used to inhabit or visit the abandoned places housing those doors. This usually shows up as phantom images of people --tourists, students, office workers, etc. -- walking past Suzume while smiling and spending time with each other. [[spoiler: The final fight consists of Suzume going through ''hundreds'' of flashbacks of the 2011 Tohoku disaster victims ''when they're still alive'', smiling and laughing all the while. This also includes a previous flashback where ''her own mother'' was still there.]]
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* To lock up the doors leading to the Ever After, Souta Sōta taught Suzume to remember the happy memories of the people who used to inhabit or visit the abandoned places housing those doors. This usually shows up as phantom images of people --tourists, students, office workers, etc. -- walking past Suzume while smiling and spending time with each other. [[spoiler: The final fight consists of Suzume going through ''hundreds'' of flashbacks of the 2011 Tohoku disaster victims ''when they're still alive'', smiling and laughing all the while. This also includes a previous flashback where ''her own mother'' was still there.]]
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** Even without accounting for disasters, the ''Akiya'', the abandoned houses and building because of the aging japanese population, are a well known problem. Much like the amusement park Suzume gets to visit, entire neighborhoods and town simply cease to be and rot to husks because no one lives there anymore.
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* Souta losing himself as he becomes the keystone, with his body frosting over even as he admits he's afraid of dying.
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* Souta losing himself as he becomes the keystone, with his body frosting over even as he admits he's afraid of dying.
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* Suzume angrily rebuffing Daijin after closing the Tokyo gate. While he had it coming, it's almost impossible not to feel at least a bit sorry for the little guy as he realizes just how angry Suzume is with him for what he did to Souta, complete with him returning to his pitiful state before Suzume fed him and sadly murmuring, "Suzume doesn't love me."
* The fight between Suzume and her Aunt Tamaki takes a nasty turn when she explodes about how much of a burden Suzume has been and how much she's been forced to give up. Thankfully it was due to Sadaijin possessing her that she said this and Tamaki later apologizes, admitting that while she has had thoughts like this she does truly love her niece.
* The fight between Suzume and her Aunt Tamaki takes a nasty turn when she explodes about how much of a burden Suzume has been and how much she's been forced to give up. Thankfully it was due to Sadaijin possessing her that she said this and Tamaki later apologizes, admitting that while she has had thoughts like this she does truly love her niece.
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* Suzume angrily furiously rebuffing Daijin after closing the Tokyo gate. gate, screaming that she hates him and even coming close to killing the cat on the spot. While he had it coming, it's almost impossible not to feel at least a bit sorry for the little guy as [[HeelRealization he realizes just how angry Suzume is with him for what he did to Souta, Souta]], complete with him returning to his pitiful state before Suzume fed him and sadly murmuring, "Suzume him.
-->'''Daijin:''' (''quietly, as he slinks away'') Suzume doesn't loveme."
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* The fight between Suzume and her [[ParentsAsPeople AuntTamaki Tamaki]] takes a nasty turn when she explodes about how much of a burden Suzume has been and how much she's been forced to give up. Thankfully Thankfully, it was due to Sadaijin possessing her that she said this and Tamaki later apologizes, admitting that while she has had thoughts like this such thoughts, she does truly love her niece.niece. Even so, it's devastating from the perspective of both niece and aunt; particularly the sight of [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone Tamaki realizing]] ''[[MyGodWhatHaveIDone exactly]]'' [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone what she had just said and absolutely breaking down in Tomoya's arms]].
-->'''Daijin:''' (''quietly, as he slinks away'') Suzume doesn't love
* The fight between Suzume and her [[ParentsAsPeople Aunt
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* Suzume childhood diary starts with some drawings of her and her mother, but what's startling are the ''pages'' of completely black entries. It's a heartbreaking reminder of how a little girl's happy life was completely torn asunder.
* After saving her during the climax, Daijin sadly apologizes that he can't be Suzume's cat, despite wanting to, because he knows he has to return to being the keystone, and asks her to set things right by using him to defeat the Wyrm. Suzume, for her part, has by now forgiven him for his actions and is very saddened to lose him and tearful that she must return him to his fate of the inanimate keystone.
* To lock up the doors leading to the Ever After, Souta taught Suzume to remember the happy memories of the people who used to inhabit or visit the abandoned places housing those doors. This usually shows up as phantom images of people---tourists, students, office workers, etc.---walking past Suzume while smiling and spending time with each other. [[spoiler: The final fight consists of Suzume going through ''hundreds'' of flashbacks of the 2011 Tohoku disaster victims ''when they're still alive'', smiling and laughing all the while. This also includes a previous flashback where ''her own mother'' was still there.]]
* After saving her during the climax, Daijin sadly apologizes that he can't be Suzume's cat, despite wanting to, because he knows he has to return to being the keystone, and asks her to set things right by using him to defeat the Wyrm. Suzume, for her part, has by now forgiven him for his actions and is very saddened to lose him and tearful that she must return him to his fate of the inanimate keystone.
* To lock up the doors leading to the Ever After, Souta taught Suzume to remember the happy memories of the people who used to inhabit or visit the abandoned places housing those doors. This usually shows up as phantom images of people---tourists, students, office workers, etc.---walking past Suzume while smiling and spending time with each other. [[spoiler: The final fight consists of Suzume going through ''hundreds'' of flashbacks of the 2011 Tohoku disaster victims ''when they're still alive'', smiling and laughing all the while. This also includes a previous flashback where ''her own mother'' was still there.]]
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* Suzume Suzume's childhood diary starts with some crayon drawings of her and her mother, but what's startling are and little stories that go with them. It takes a turn for the tragic when Suzume finds pages upon ''pages'' of completely black entries. entries starting from the [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/2011_T%C5%8Dhoku_earthquake_and_tsunami 11th of March, 2011.]] It's a heartbreaking heart-breaking reminder of how a little girl's happy life was completely torn asunder.
* After saving her during the climax, Daijin sadly apologizes that he can't be Suzume'scat, cat despite wanting to, to be, because he knows he has to return to being the keystone, and [[RedemptionEqualsDeath asks her to set things right by using him to defeat the Wyrm.Wyrm]]. Suzume, for her part, has by now forgiven him for his actions and is very saddened to lose him and tearful that she must return him to his fate of the inanimate keystone.
* To lock up the doors leading to the Ever After, Souta taught Suzume to remember the happy memories of the people who used to inhabit or visit the abandoned places housing those doors. This usually shows up as phantom images ofpeople---tourists, people --tourists, students, office workers, etc.---walking etc. -- walking past Suzume while smiling and spending time with each other. [[spoiler: The final fight consists of Suzume going through ''hundreds'' of flashbacks of the 2011 Tohoku disaster victims ''when they're still alive'', smiling and laughing all the while. This also includes a previous flashback where ''her own mother'' was still there.]]
* After saving her during the climax, Daijin sadly apologizes that he can't be Suzume's
* To lock up the doors leading to the Ever After, Souta taught Suzume to remember the happy memories of the people who used to inhabit or visit the abandoned places housing those doors. This usually shows up as phantom images of
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* After saving her during the climax, Daijin sadly apologizes that he can't be Suzume's cat, despite wanting to, because he knows he has to return to being the keystone, and asks her to set things right by using him to defeat the Wyrm. Suzume, for her part, has by now forgiven him for his actions and is very saddened to lose him and tearful that she must return him to his fate of the inanimate keystone.
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* After saving her during the climax, Daijin sadly apologizes that he can't be Suzume's cat, despite wanting to, because he knows he has to return to being the keystone, and asks her to set things right by using him to defeat the Wyrm. Suzume, for her part, has by now forgiven him for his actions and is very saddened to lose him and tearful that she must return him to his fate of the inanimate keystone.keystone.
* To lock up the doors leading to the Ever After, Souta taught Suzume to remember the happy memories of the people who used to inhabit or visit the abandoned places housing those doors. This usually shows up as phantom images of people---tourists, students, office workers, etc.---walking past Suzume while smiling and spending time with each other. [[spoiler: The final fight consists of Suzume going through ''hundreds'' of flashbacks of the 2011 Tohoku disaster victims ''when they're still alive'', smiling and laughing all the while. This also includes a previous flashback where ''her own mother'' was still there.]]
* To lock up the doors leading to the Ever After, Souta taught Suzume to remember the happy memories of the people who used to inhabit or visit the abandoned places housing those doors. This usually shows up as phantom images of people---tourists, students, office workers, etc.---walking past Suzume while smiling and spending time with each other. [[spoiler: The final fight consists of Suzume going through ''hundreds'' of flashbacks of the 2011 Tohoku disaster victims ''when they're still alive'', smiling and laughing all the while. This also includes a previous flashback where ''her own mother'' was still there.]]
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* Souta losing himself as he becomes the keystone, with his body frosting over even as he admits he's afriad of dying.
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* Souta losing himself as he becomes the keystone, with his body frosting over even as he admits he's afriad afraid of dying.
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* Suzume angrily rebuffing Daijin after closing the Tokyo gate. While he had it coming, you can't help feeling a little sorry for the little guy as he realizes just how angry Susume is with him, complete with him returning to his pitiful state before Suzume fed him.
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* Suzume angrily rebuffing Daijin after closing the Tokyo gate. While he had it coming, you can't help feeling it's almost impossible not to feel at least a little bit sorry for the little guy as he realizes just how angry Susume Suzume is with him, him for what he did to Souta, complete with him returning to his pitiful state before Suzume fed him.him and sadly murmuring, "Suzume doesn't love me."
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* After saving her during the climax, Daijin sadly apologizes he couldn't be Suzume's cat and asks her to set things right by using him as the Keystone.
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* After saving her during the climax, Daijin sadly apologizes that he couldn't can't be Suzume's cat cat, despite wanting to, because he knows he has to return to being the keystone, and asks her to set things right by using him as to defeat the Keystone.Wyrm. Suzume, for her part, has by now forgiven him for his actions and is very saddened to lose him and tearful that she must return him to his fate of the inanimate keystone.
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* The fight between Suzume and her Aunt Tamaki takes a nasty turn when she explodes about how much of a burden Suzume has been and how much she's been forced to give up. Thankfully it was due to Sadaijin possessing her that she said this and Tamaki later apologizes, admitting that while she has had thoughts like this she does truly loves her niece.
* Suzume remembering how, at just four years old, she spent days searching for her mother after the tsunami while none of the adults could bring themselves to tell her that her mother is most likely dead. When teenage Suzume meets and hugs her younger self, she admits deep down she already knew her mom was gone. Young Suzume breaks free and runs away, still now wanting to accept the harsh truth.
* Suzume remembering how, at just four years old, she spent days searching for her mother after the tsunami while none of the adults could bring themselves to tell her that her mother is most likely dead. When teenage Suzume meets and hugs her younger self, she admits deep down she already knew her mom was gone. Young Suzume breaks free and runs away, still now wanting to accept the harsh truth.
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* The fight between Suzume and her Aunt Tamaki takes a nasty turn when she explodes about how much of a burden Suzume has been and how much she's been forced to give up. Thankfully it was due to Sadaijin possessing her that she said this and Tamaki later apologizes, admitting that while she has had thoughts like this she does truly loves love her niece.
* Suzume remembering how, at just four years old, she spent days searching for her mother after the tsunami while none of the adults could bring themselves to tell her that her mother is most likely dead. When teenage Suzume meets and hugs her younger self, she admits deep down she already knew her mom was gone. Young Suzume breaks free and runs away, stillnow not wanting to accept the harsh truth.
* Suzume remembering how, at just four years old, she spent days searching for her mother after the tsunami while none of the adults could bring themselves to tell her that her mother is most likely dead. When teenage Suzume meets and hugs her younger self, she admits deep down she already knew her mom was gone. Young Suzume breaks free and runs away, still
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* Suzume remembering how, at just four years old, she spent days searching for her mother after the tsunami while none of the adults could bring themselves to tell her that her mother is most likely dead.
** When teenage Suzume meets and hugs her younger self, she admits deep down she already knew her mom was gone. Young Suzume breaks free and runs away, still now wanting to accept the harsh truth.
** When teenage Suzume meets and hugs her younger self, she admits deep down she already knew her mom was gone. Young Suzume breaks free and runs away, still now wanting to accept the harsh truth.
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* Suzume remembering how, at just four years old, she spent days searching for her mother after the tsunami while none of the adults could bring themselves to tell her that her mother is most likely dead.
**dead. When teenage Suzume meets and hugs her younger self, she admits deep down she already knew her mom was gone. Young Suzume breaks free and runs away, still now wanting to accept the harsh truth.
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* Souta losing himself as [[spoiler:he becomes the keystone]], with his body frosting over even as he admits he's afriad of dying.
* Suzume is forced to [[spoiler:use Souta as the keystone]] to save [[spoiler:Tokyo]] from being wiped out by the Wyrm, all the while screaming she doesn't want to do it and begging [[spoiler:Souta to answer her]].
* Suzume angrily rebuffing [[spoiler:Daijin]] after closing the [[spoiler:Tokyo]] gate. While he had it coming, you can't help feeling a little sorry for the little guy as he realizes just how angry Susume is with him, complete with [[spoiler:him returning to his pitiful state before Suzume fed him.]]
* The fight between Suzume and her Aunt Tamaki takes a nasty turn when she explodes about how much of a burden Suzume has been and how much she's been forced to give up. [[spoiler:Thankfully it was due to Sadaijin possessing her that she said this and Tamaki later apologizes, admitting that while she has had thoughts like this she does truly loves her niece]].
* Suzume is forced to [[spoiler:use Souta as the keystone]] to save [[spoiler:Tokyo]] from being wiped out by the Wyrm, all the while screaming she doesn't want to do it and begging [[spoiler:Souta to answer her]].
* Suzume angrily rebuffing [[spoiler:Daijin]] after closing the [[spoiler:Tokyo]] gate. While he had it coming, you can't help feeling a little sorry for the little guy as he realizes just how angry Susume is with him, complete with [[spoiler:him returning to his pitiful state before Suzume fed him.]]
* The fight between Suzume and her Aunt Tamaki takes a nasty turn when she explodes about how much of a burden Suzume has been and how much she's been forced to give up. [[spoiler:Thankfully it was due to Sadaijin possessing her that she said this and Tamaki later apologizes, admitting that while she has had thoughts like this she does truly loves her niece]].
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* Souta losing himself as [[spoiler:he he becomes the keystone]], keystone, with his body frosting over even as he admits he's afriad of dying.
* Suzume is forced to[[spoiler:use use Souta as the keystone]] keystone to save [[spoiler:Tokyo]] Tokyo from being wiped out by the Wyrm, all the while screaming she doesn't want to do it and begging [[spoiler:Souta Souta to answer her]].
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* Suzume angrily rebuffing[[spoiler:Daijin]] Daijin after closing the [[spoiler:Tokyo]] Tokyo gate. While he had it coming, you can't help feeling a little sorry for the little guy as he realizes just how angry Susume is with him, complete with [[spoiler:him him returning to his pitiful state before Suzume fed him.]]
him.
* The fight between Suzume and her Aunt Tamaki takes a nasty turn when she explodes about how much of a burden Suzume has been and how much she's been forced to give up.[[spoiler:Thankfully Thankfully it was due to Sadaijin possessing her that she said this and Tamaki later apologizes, admitting that while she has had thoughts like this she does truly loves her niece]].niece.
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* Suzume angrily rebuffing
* The fight between Suzume and her Aunt Tamaki takes a nasty turn when she explodes about how much of a burden Suzume has been and how much she's been forced to give up.
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* Suzume childhood diary starts with some drawings of her and her mother, but what's startling are [[spoiler:the ''pages'' of completely black entries]]. It's a heartbreaking reminder of how a little girl's happy life was completely torn asunder.
* After saving her during the climax, [[spoiler:Daijin sadly apologizes he couldn't be Suzume's cat]] and asks her to set things right [[spoiler:by using him as the Keystone]].
* After saving her during the climax, [[spoiler:Daijin sadly apologizes he couldn't be Suzume's cat]] and asks her to set things right [[spoiler:by using him as the Keystone]].
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* Suzume childhood diary starts with some drawings of her and her mother, but what's startling are [[spoiler:the the ''pages'' of completely black entries]].entries. It's a heartbreaking reminder of how a little girl's happy life was completely torn asunder.
* After saving her during the climax,[[spoiler:Daijin Daijin sadly apologizes he couldn't be Suzume's cat]] cat and asks her to set things right [[spoiler:by by using him as the Keystone]].Keystone.
* After saving her during the climax,
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* The film overall has a feeling of melancholy for the aftermath of the many disasters which Japan has endured. The focal point of the doors are in abandoned areas, which Rumi sadly notes seem to be all too common these days.
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* Suzume remembering how, at just four years old, she spent days searching for her mother after the tsunami while none of the adults could bring themselves to tell her the truth.
** As teenage Suzume meets her younger self and hugs her she admits deep down she had figured it, Young Suzume breaks free and runs away still now wanting to accept the harsh truth.
** As teenage Suzume meets her younger self and hugs her she admits deep down she had figured it, Young Suzume breaks free and runs away still now wanting to accept the harsh truth.
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* Suzume remembering how, at just four years old, she spent days searching for her mother after the tsunami while none of the adults could bring themselves to tell her the truth.
that her mother is most likely dead.
**As When teenage Suzume meets her younger self and hugs her younger self, she admits deep down she had figured it, already knew her mom was gone. Young Suzume breaks free and runs away away, still now wanting to accept the harsh truth.
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** As teenage Suzume meets her younger self and hugs her she admits deep down she had figured it, Young Suzume breaks free and runs away still now wanting to accept the harsh truth.
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''Suzume'' comes with plenty of tears.
* Souta losing himself as [[spoiler:he becomes the keystone]], with his body frosting over even as he admits he's afriad of dying.
* Suzume is forced to [[spoiler:use Souta as the keystone]] to save [[spoiler:Tokyo]] from being wiped out by the Wyrm, all the while screaming she doesn't want to do it and begging [[spoiler:Souta to answer her]].
* Suzume angrily rebuffing [[spoiler:Daijin]] after closing the [[spoiler:Tokyo]] gate. While he had it coming, you can't help feeling a little sorry for the little guy as he realizes just how angry Susume is with him, complete with [[spoiler:him returning to his pitiful state before Suzume fed him.]]
* The fight between Suzume and her Aunt Tamaki takes a nasty turn when she explodes about how much of a burden Suzume has been and how much she's been forced to give up. [[spoiler:Thankfully it was due to Sadaijin possessing her that she said this and Tamaki later apologizes, admitting that while she has had thoughts like this she does truly loves her niece]].
* Suzume remembering how, at just four years old, she spent days searching for her mother after the tsunami while none of the adults could bring themselves to tell her the truth.
* Suzume childhood diary starts with some drawings of her and her mother, but what's startling are [[spoiler:the ''pages'' of completely black entries]]. It's a heartbreaking reminder of how a little girl's happy life was completely torn asunder.
* After saving her during the climax, [[spoiler:Daijin sadly apologizes he couldn't be Suzume's cat]] and asks her to set things right [[spoiler:by using him as the Keystone]].
* Souta losing himself as [[spoiler:he becomes the keystone]], with his body frosting over even as he admits he's afriad of dying.
* Suzume is forced to [[spoiler:use Souta as the keystone]] to save [[spoiler:Tokyo]] from being wiped out by the Wyrm, all the while screaming she doesn't want to do it and begging [[spoiler:Souta to answer her]].
* Suzume angrily rebuffing [[spoiler:Daijin]] after closing the [[spoiler:Tokyo]] gate. While he had it coming, you can't help feeling a little sorry for the little guy as he realizes just how angry Susume is with him, complete with [[spoiler:him returning to his pitiful state before Suzume fed him.]]
* The fight between Suzume and her Aunt Tamaki takes a nasty turn when she explodes about how much of a burden Suzume has been and how much she's been forced to give up. [[spoiler:Thankfully it was due to Sadaijin possessing her that she said this and Tamaki later apologizes, admitting that while she has had thoughts like this she does truly loves her niece]].
* Suzume remembering how, at just four years old, she spent days searching for her mother after the tsunami while none of the adults could bring themselves to tell her the truth.
* Suzume childhood diary starts with some drawings of her and her mother, but what's startling are [[spoiler:the ''pages'' of completely black entries]]. It's a heartbreaking reminder of how a little girl's happy life was completely torn asunder.
* After saving her during the climax, [[spoiler:Daijin sadly apologizes he couldn't be Suzume's cat]] and asks her to set things right [[spoiler:by using him as the Keystone]].
