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*** Going off of that is [[http://strongfemaleprotagonist.com/issue-7/page-91-3/ the eventual reveal]] that he [[spoiler: mind-controlled his mother in a desperate bid to get her to love him, but the consequences of that was so traumatic for him that he erased his memory of the event and bottled it up because he, as Alison points out, believed it to the be the one thing that would convince those around him that he wasn't human.]] The statement he makes after explaining how it all worked to her is heartbreaking.

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*** Going off of that is [[http://strongfemaleprotagonist.com/issue-7/page-91-3/ the eventual reveal]] that he [[spoiler: mind-controlled his mother [[http://strongfemaleprotagonist.com/issue-7/page-95-3/ in a desperate bid to get her to love him, him]], but the consequences of that was so traumatic for him that he erased his memory of the event and bottled it up because he, as Alison points out, believed it to the be the one thing that would convince those around him that he wasn't human.]] The statement he makes after explaining how it all worked to her is heartbreaking.
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* Alison viewing Patrick's childhood while inside his mind. [[spoiler: His only friend, the first mind he ever read, was his loyal and unconditionally loving dog. When his parents found out he was psychic he was experimented on by several doctors, at least one of them he reveals is a pedophile who targets third-world children (and is promptly slapped for saying so). His mother [[NeckSnap murders his dog]] one evening [[http://strongfemaleprotagonist.com/issue-7/page-62-5/ right in front of him]] - because the dog [[DisproportionateRetribution had ripped her stocking]]. Even worse, his dog only acted because he could tell that Patrick needed his mother's attention. His father is revealed to have been horrified and upset by finding out Patrick can read minds, which Patrick can, obviously, see. It's [[http://strongfemaleprotagonist.com/issue-7/page-66-4/ heavily implied]] that his mother was going to ''[[MurderIsTheBestSolution murder him]]'' to make her life easier.]] His childhood is so horrible that it's a part of himself he locks completely outside of his mental barriers, so he doesn't have to deal with it.

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* Alison viewing Patrick's childhood while inside his mind. [[spoiler: His only friend, the first mind he ever read, was his loyal and unconditionally loving dog. When his parents found out he was psychic he was experimented on by several doctors, at least one of them he reveals is a pedophile who targets third-world children (and is promptly slapped for saying so). His mother mother, a [[TheSociopath sociopath]], [[NeckSnap murders his dog]] one evening [[http://strongfemaleprotagonist.com/issue-7/page-62-5/ right in front of him]] - because the dog [[DisproportionateRetribution had ripped her stocking]]. Even worse, his dog only acted because he could tell that Patrick needed his mother's attention. His father is revealed to have been horrified and upset by finding out Patrick can read minds, which Patrick can, obviously, see. It's [[http://strongfemaleprotagonist.com/issue-7/page-66-4/ heavily implied]] that his mother was going to ''[[MurderIsTheBestSolution murder him]]'' to make her life easier.]] His childhood is so horrible that it's a part of himself he locks completely outside of his mental barriers, so he doesn't have to deal with it.
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*** Going off of that is the eventual reveal that he [[spoiler: mind-controlled his mother in a desperate bid to get her to love him, but the consequences of that was so traumatic for him that he erased his memory of the event and bottled it up because he, as Alison points out, believed it to the be the one thing that would convince those around him that he wasn't human.]] The statement he makes after explaining how it all worked to her is heartbreaking.

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*** Going off of that is [[http://strongfemaleprotagonist.com/issue-7/page-91-3/ the eventual reveal reveal]] that he [[spoiler: mind-controlled his mother in a desperate bid to get her to love him, but the consequences of that was so traumatic for him that he erased his memory of the event and bottled it up because he, as Alison points out, believed it to the be the one thing that would convince those around him that he wasn't human.]] The statement he makes after explaining how it all worked to her is heartbreaking.

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* Alison viewing Patrick's childhood while inside his mind. [[spoiler: His only friend, the first mind he ever read, was his loyal and unconditionally loving dog. When his parents found out he was psychic he was experimented on by several doctors, at least one of them he reveals is a pedophile who targets third-world children (and is promptly slapped for saying so). His mother [[NeckSnap murders his dog]] one evening [[http://strongfemaleprotagonist.com/issue-7/page-62-5/ right in front of him]] - because the dog [[DisproportionateRetribution had ripped her stocking]]. Even worse, his dog only acted because he could tell that Patrick needed his mother's attention. His father is revealed to have been horrified and upset by finding out Patrick can read minds, which Patrick can, obviously, see. It's [[http://strongfemaleprotagonist.com/issue-7/page-66-4/ heavily implied]] that his mother was going to ''[[MurderIsTheBestSolution murder him]]'' to make her life easier.]] His childhood is so horrible that it's a part of himself he locks completely outside of his mental barriers, so he doesn't have to deal with it.
*** After all this, [[http://strongfemaleprotagonist.com/issue-7/page-67-4/ he walled off his need for love and acceptance]]. And then [[http://strongfemaleprotagonist.com/issue-7/page-68-4/ his fear]], and any other emotion that would impede him.
---->'''Young!Patrick''': Money, land, investments. Easy. The parts of myself that weren't useful, I plucked out. [[HadToBeSharp I made myself into the version of me that could survive]].

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* Alison viewing Patrick's childhood while inside his mind. [[spoiler: His only friend, the first mind he ever read, was his loyal and unconditionally loving dog. When his parents found out he was psychic he was experimented on by several doctors, at least one of them he reveals is a pedophile who targets third-world children (and is promptly slapped for saying so). His mother [[NeckSnap murders his dog]] one evening [[http://strongfemaleprotagonist.com/issue-7/page-62-5/ right in front of him]] - because the dog [[DisproportionateRetribution had ripped her stocking]]. Even worse, his dog only acted because he could tell that Patrick needed his mother's attention. His father is revealed to have been horrified and upset by finding out Patrick can read minds, which Patrick can, obviously, see. It's [[http://strongfemaleprotagonist.com/issue-7/page-66-4/ heavily implied]] that his mother was going to ''[[MurderIsTheBestSolution murder him]]'' to make her life easier.]] His childhood is so horrible that it's a part of himself he locks completely outside of his mental barriers, so he doesn't have to deal with it.
*** After all this, [[http://strongfemaleprotagonist.com/issue-7/page-67-4/ he walled off his need for love and acceptance]]. And then [[http://strongfemaleprotagonist.com/issue-7/page-68-4/ his fear]], and any other emotion that would impede him.
---->'''Young!Patrick''': Money, land, investments. Easy. Easy. The parts of myself that weren't useful, I plucked out. out. [[HadToBeSharp I made myself into the version of me that could survive]].survive]].
**** Unfortunately, his friendship with Alison is something part of his mind [[VirtueIsWeakness is a weakness]], so she has to be eliminated.



--->'''Patrick:''' You see, I love people, [[MoralSociopathy and I've always sort of wanted to be one]].

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--->'''Patrick:''' ---->'''Patrick:''' You see, I love people, [[MoralSociopathy and I've always sort of wanted to be one]].

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* Alison viewing Patrick's childhood while inside his mind. [[spoiler: His only friend, the first mind he ever read, was his loyal and unconditionally loving dog. When his parents found out he was psychic he was experimented on by several doctors, at least one of them he reveals is a pedophile who targets third-world children (and is promptly slapped for saying so). His mother [[NeckSnap murders his dog]] one evening [[http://strongfemaleprotagonist.com/issue-7/page-62-5/ right in front of him]] - because the dog [[DisproportionateRetribution had ripped her stocking]]. Even worse, his dog only acted because he could tell that Patrick needed his mother's attention. His father is revealed to have been horrified and upset by finding out Patrick can read minds, which Patrick can, obviously, see. It's [[http://strongfemaleprotagonist.com/issue-7/page-66-4/ heavily implied]] that his mother was going to ''[[MurderIsTheBestSolution murder him]]'' to make her life easier.]] His childhood is so horrible that it's a part of himself he locks completely outside of his mental barriers, so he doesn't have to deal with it.
*** After all this, [[http://strongfemaleprotagonist.com/issue-7/page-67-4/ he walled off his need for love and acceptance]] - the lack of it still hurt, but the pain was nowhere near as sharp.

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* Alison viewing Patrick's childhood while inside his mind. [[spoiler: His only friend, the first mind he ever read, was his loyal and unconditionally loving dog. When his parents found out he was psychic he was experimented on by several doctors, at least one of them he reveals is a pedophile who targets third-world children (and is promptly slapped for saying so). His mother [[NeckSnap murders his dog]] one evening [[http://strongfemaleprotagonist.com/issue-7/page-62-5/ right in front of him]] - because the dog [[DisproportionateRetribution had ripped her stocking]]. Even worse, his dog only acted because he could tell that Patrick needed his mother's attention. His father is revealed to have been horrified and upset by finding out Patrick can read minds, which Patrick can, obviously, see. It's [[http://strongfemaleprotagonist.com/issue-7/page-66-4/ heavily implied]] that his mother was going to ''[[MurderIsTheBestSolution murder him]]'' to make her life easier.]] His childhood is so horrible that it's a part of himself he locks completely outside of his mental barriers, so he doesn't have to deal with it.
*** After all this, [[http://strongfemaleprotagonist.com/issue-7/page-67-4/ he walled off his need for love and acceptance]] - acceptance]]. And then [[http://strongfemaleprotagonist.com/issue-7/page-68-4/ his fear]], and any other emotion that would impede him.
---->'''Young!Patrick''': Money, land, investments. Easy. The parts of myself that weren't useful, I plucked out. [[HadToBeSharp I made myself into
the lack version of it still hurt, but the pain was nowhere near as sharp.me that could survive]].

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* Alison viewing Patrick's childhood while inside his mind. [[spoiler: His only friend, the first mind he ever read, was his loyal and unconditionally loving dog. When his parents found out he was psychic he was experimented on by several doctors, at least one of them he reveals is a pedophile who targets third-world children (and is promptly slapped for saying so). His mother [[NeckSnap murders his dog]] one evening [[http://strongfemaleprotagonist.com/issue-7/page-62-5/ right in front of him]] - because the dog [[DisproportionateRetribution had ripped her stocking]]. Even worse, his dog only acted because he could tell that Patrick needed his mother's attention. His father is revealed to have been horrified and upset by finding out Patrick can read minds, which Patrick can, obviously, see. It's [[http://strongfemaleprotagonist.com/issue-7/page-66-4/ heavily implied]] that his mother was going to ''[[MurderIsTheBestSolution murder him]]'' to make her life easier.]] His childhood is so horrible that it's a part of himself he locks completely outside of his mental barriers, so he doesn't have to deal with it.
** Going off of that is the eventual reveal that he [[spoiler: mind-controlled his mother in a desperate bid to get her to love him, but the consequences of that was so traumatic for him that he erased his memory of the event and bottled it up because he, as Alison points out, believed it to the be the one thing that would convince those around him that he wasn't human.]] The statement he makes after explaining how it all worked to her is heartbreaking.

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* Alison viewing Patrick's childhood while inside his mind. [[spoiler: His only friend, the first mind he ever read, was his loyal and unconditionally loving dog. When his parents found out he was psychic he was experimented on by several doctors, at least one of them he reveals is a pedophile who targets third-world children (and is promptly slapped for saying so). His mother [[NeckSnap murders his dog]] one evening [[http://strongfemaleprotagonist.com/issue-7/page-62-5/ right in front of him]] - because the dog [[DisproportionateRetribution had ripped her stocking]]. Even worse, his dog only acted because he could tell that Patrick needed his mother's attention. His father is revealed to have been horrified and upset by finding out Patrick can read minds, which Patrick can, obviously, see. It's [[http://strongfemaleprotagonist.com/issue-7/page-66-4/ heavily implied]] that his mother was going to ''[[MurderIsTheBestSolution murder him]]'' to make her life easier.]] His childhood is so horrible that it's a part of himself he locks completely outside of his mental barriers, so he doesn't have to deal with it.
** *** After all this, [[http://strongfemaleprotagonist.com/issue-7/page-67-4/ he walled off his need for love and acceptance]] - the lack of it still hurt, but the pain was nowhere near as sharp.
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Going off of that is the eventual reveal that he [[spoiler: mind-controlled his mother in a desperate bid to get her to love him, but the consequences of that was so traumatic for him that he erased his memory of the event and bottled it up because he, as Alison points out, believed it to the be the one thing that would convince those around him that he wasn't human.]] The statement he makes after explaining how it all worked to her is heartbreaking.
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* Alison viewing Patrick's childhood while inside his mind. [[spoiler: His only friend, the first mind he ever read, was his loyal and unconditionally loving dog. When his parents found out he was psychic he was experimented on by several doctors, at least one of them he reveals is a pedophile who targets third-world children (and is promptly slapped for saying so). His mother [[NeckSnap murders his dog]] one evening [[http://strongfemaleprotagonist.com/issue-7/page-62-5/ right in front of him]] - because the dog [[DisproportionateRetribution had ripped her stocking]]. Even worse, his dog only acted because he could tell that Patrick needed his mother's attention. His father is revealed to have been horrified and upset by finding out Patrick can read minds, which Patrick can, obviously, see.]] His childhood is so horrible that it's a part of himself he locks completely outside of his mental barriers, so he doesn't have to deal with it.

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* Alison viewing Patrick's childhood while inside his mind. [[spoiler: His only friend, the first mind he ever read, was his loyal and unconditionally loving dog. When his parents found out he was psychic he was experimented on by several doctors, at least one of them he reveals is a pedophile who targets third-world children (and is promptly slapped for saying so). His mother [[NeckSnap murders his dog]] one evening [[http://strongfemaleprotagonist.com/issue-7/page-62-5/ right in front of him]] - because the dog [[DisproportionateRetribution had ripped her stocking]]. Even worse, his dog only acted because he could tell that Patrick needed his mother's attention. His father is revealed to have been horrified and upset by finding out Patrick can read minds, which Patrick can, obviously, see. It's [[http://strongfemaleprotagonist.com/issue-7/page-66-4/ heavily implied]] that his mother was going to ''[[MurderIsTheBestSolution murder him]]'' to make her life easier.]] His childhood is so horrible that it's a part of himself he locks completely outside of his mental barriers, so he doesn't have to deal with it.
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* Alison viewing Patrick's childhood while inside his mind. [[spoiler: His only friend, the first mind he ever read, was his loyal and unconditionally loving dog. When his parents found out he was psychic he was experimented on by several doctors, at least one of them he reveals is a pedophile who targets third-world children (and is promptly slapped for saying so). His mother [[NeckSnap murders his dog]] one evening [[http://strongfemaleprotagonist.com/issue-7/page-62-5/ right in front of him]] - because the dog [[DisproportionateRetribution had ripped her stocking]]. His father is revealed to have been horrified and upset by finding out Patrick can read minds, which Patrick can, obviously, see.]] His childhood is so horrible that it's a part of himself he locks completely outside of his mental barriers, so he doesn't have to deal with it.

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* Alison viewing Patrick's childhood while inside his mind. [[spoiler: His only friend, the first mind he ever read, was his loyal and unconditionally loving dog. When his parents found out he was psychic he was experimented on by several doctors, at least one of them he reveals is a pedophile who targets third-world children (and is promptly slapped for saying so). His mother [[NeckSnap murders his dog]] one evening [[http://strongfemaleprotagonist.com/issue-7/page-62-5/ right in front of him]] - because the dog [[DisproportionateRetribution had ripped her stocking]]. Even worse, his dog only acted because he could tell that Patrick needed his mother's attention. His father is revealed to have been horrified and upset by finding out Patrick can read minds, which Patrick can, obviously, see.]] His childhood is so horrible that it's a part of himself he locks completely outside of his mental barriers, so he doesn't have to deal with it.
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* Alison viewing Patrick's childhood while inside his mind. [[spoiler: His only friend, the first mind he ever read, was his loyal and unconditionally loving dog. When his parents found out he was psychic he was experimented on by several doctors, at least one of them he reveals is a pedophile who targets third-world children (and is promptly slapped for saying so). His mother, who is a sociopath, [[NeckSnap murders his dog]] one evening [[http://strongfemaleprotagonist.com/issue-7/page-62-5/ right in front of him]] - because the dog had ripped her stocking. His father is revealed to have been horrified and upset by finding out Patrick can read minds, which Patrick can, obviously, see.]] His childhood is so horrible that it's a part of himself he locks completely outside of his mental barriers, so he doesn't have to deal with it.

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* Alison viewing Patrick's childhood while inside his mind. [[spoiler: His only friend, the first mind he ever read, was his loyal and unconditionally loving dog. When his parents found out he was psychic he was experimented on by several doctors, at least one of them he reveals is a pedophile who targets third-world children (and is promptly slapped for saying so). His mother, who is a sociopath, mother [[NeckSnap murders his dog]] one evening [[http://strongfemaleprotagonist.com/issue-7/page-62-5/ right in front of him]] - because the dog [[DisproportionateRetribution had ripped her stocking.stocking]]. His father is revealed to have been horrified and upset by finding out Patrick can read minds, which Patrick can, obviously, see.]] His childhood is so horrible that it's a part of himself he locks completely outside of his mental barriers, so he doesn't have to deal with it.
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* Alison viewing Patrick's childhood while inside his mind. [[spoiler: His only friend, the first mind he ever read, was his loyal and unconditionally loving dog. When his parents found out he was psychic he was experimented on by several doctors, at least one of them he reveals is a pedophile who targets third-world children (and is promptly slapped for saying so). His mother, who is a sociopath, murders his dog one evening right in front of him. His father is revealed to have been horrified and upset by finding out Patrick can read minds, which Patrick can, obviously, see.]] His childhood is so horrible that it's a part of himself he locks completely outside of his mental barriers, so he doesn't have to deal with it.

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* Alison viewing Patrick's childhood while inside his mind. [[spoiler: His only friend, the first mind he ever read, was his loyal and unconditionally loving dog. When his parents found out he was psychic he was experimented on by several doctors, at least one of them he reveals is a pedophile who targets third-world children (and is promptly slapped for saying so). His mother, who is a sociopath, [[NeckSnap murders his dog dog]] one evening [[http://strongfemaleprotagonist.com/issue-7/page-62-5/ right in front of him.him]] - because the dog had ripped her stocking. His father is revealed to have been horrified and upset by finding out Patrick can read minds, which Patrick can, obviously, see.]] His childhood is so horrible that it's a part of himself he locks completely outside of his mental barriers, so he doesn't have to deal with it.
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* During the Dynamorphic convention, Alison [[http://strongfemaleprotagonist.com/issue-6/page-74-3/ witnesses a heated exchange]] involving a dynamorph who is a SexShifter depending on emotional state.

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* During the Dynamorphic convention, Alison [[http://strongfemaleprotagonist.com/issue-6/page-74-3/ witnesses a heated exchange]] involving a dynamorph who is a SexShifter depending SexShifter, but not consciously - it depends on their emotional state.
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* During the Dynamorphic convention, Alison [[http://strongfemaleprotagonist.com/issue-6/page-74-3/ witnesses a heated exchange]] involving a dynamorph who is a GenderShifter depending on emotional state.

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* During the Dynamorphic convention, Alison [[http://strongfemaleprotagonist.com/issue-6/page-74-3/ witnesses a heated exchange]] involving a dynamorph who is a GenderShifter SexShifter depending on emotional state.

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* Daniel's conversation with Alison about the existence of good people in the world. She's the first good person he's met, and he's convinced himself she's the ONLY good person. [[spoiler: When Alison asks why he tells himself that when he knows it's not true, he reveals it's because if other good people exist, that means he's killed a lot of them.]]

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* Daniel's conversation with Alison about the existence of good people in the world. She's the first good person he's met, and he's convinced himself she's the ONLY good person. [[spoiler: When Alison asks why he tells himself that when he knows it's not true, he reveals it's because if other good people exist, [[http://strongfemaleprotagonist.com/issue-6/page-47-5/ that means he's killed a lot of them.]]them]].]]
* During the Dynamorphic convention, Alison [[http://strongfemaleprotagonist.com/issue-6/page-74-3/ witnesses a heated exchange]] involving a dynamorph who is a GenderShifter depending on emotional state.
-->'''Kiele''': When I'm a woman, I'm a woman. When I'm a man, I'm a man. The fact that I can change between the two doesn't make me a fucking monster. It just means I need to figure out twice as much.

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* Pintsize's page long speech about how he hates the idea of deconstruction in a sense. How he feels it's unfair that people want Superheros to be sad and complicated all in the name of being smart, when all it makes him feel is like he's being an idiot just for wanting to be a good person and doing the right thing.

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* Pintsize's page long page-long speech about how he hates the idea of deconstruction in a sense. How he feels it's unfair that people want Superheros Superheroes to be sad and complicated all in the name of being smart, when all it makes him feel is like he's being an idiot just for wanting to be a good person and doing the right thing.thing.
* Patrick attempts to dissuade Alison by giving a pages-long MotiveRant about how good and evil don't really ''exist'', and that lives are a commodity. Alison sees through this and calls him out on his BS before stumbling into an unexpected fact - [[http://strongfemaleprotagonist.com/issue-5/page-113/ he can't read his own mind]]. This revelation shakes him so much that [[http://strongfemaleprotagonist.com/issue-5/page-114/ he doesn't duck]] when Alison literally throws his gift to her back in his face.
** [[http://strongfemaleprotagonist.com/issue-5/page-115/ Said gift]] is [[CallBack a Looney Tunes mug]].



-->'''Patrick:''' You see, I love people, and I've always sort of wanted to be one.

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-->'''Patrick:''' --->'''Patrick:''' You see, I love people, [[MoralSociopathy and I've always sort of wanted to be one.one]].

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* Alison viewing Patrick's childhood while inside his mind. [[spoiler: His only friend, the first mind he ever read, was his loyal and unconditionally loving dog. When his parents found out he was psychic he was experimented on by several doctors, at least one of them he reveals is a pedophile who targets third-world children (and is promptly slapped for saying so). His mother, who is implied to be some sort of sociopath, murders his dog one evening right in front of him. His father is revealed to have been horrified and upset by finding out Patrick can read minds, which Patrick can, obviously, see.]] His childhood is so horrible that it's a part of himself he locks completely outside of his mental barriers, so he doesn't have to deal with it.

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* Alison viewing Patrick's childhood while inside his mind. [[spoiler: His only friend, the first mind he ever read, was his loyal and unconditionally loving dog. When his parents found out he was psychic he was experimented on by several doctors, at least one of them he reveals is a pedophile who targets third-world children (and is promptly slapped for saying so). His mother, who is implied to be some sort of a sociopath, murders his dog one evening right in front of him. His father is revealed to have been horrified and upset by finding out Patrick can read minds, which Patrick can, obviously, see.]] His childhood is so horrible that it's a part of himself he locks completely outside of his mental barriers, so he doesn't have to deal with it.it.
** Going off of that is the eventual reveal that he [[spoiler: mind-controlled his mother in a desperate bid to get her to love him, but the consequences of that was so traumatic for him that he erased his memory of the event and bottled it up because he, as Alison points out, believed it to the be the one thing that would convince those around him that he wasn't human.]] The statement he makes after explaining how it all worked to her is heartbreaking.
-->'''Patrick:''' You see, I love people, and I've always sort of wanted to be one.
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* Daniel's conversation with Alison about the existence of good people in the world. She's the first good person he's met, and he's convinced himself she's the ONLY good person. [[spoiler: When Alison asks why he tells himself that when he knows it's not true, he reveals it's because if other good people exist, that means he's killed a lot of them.]]

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* Daniel's conversation with Alison about the existence of good people in the world. She's the first good person he's met, and he's convinced himself she's the ONLY good person. [[spoiler: When Alison asks why he tells himself that when he knows it's not true, he reveals it's because if other good people exist, that means he's killed a lot of them.]]]]
* Alison viewing Patrick's childhood while inside his mind. [[spoiler: His only friend, the first mind he ever read, was his loyal and unconditionally loving dog. When his parents found out he was psychic he was experimented on by several doctors, at least one of them he reveals is a pedophile who targets third-world children (and is promptly slapped for saying so). His mother, who is implied to be some sort of sociopath, murders his dog one evening right in front of him. His father is revealed to have been horrified and upset by finding out Patrick can read minds, which Patrick can, obviously, see.]] His childhood is so horrible that it's a part of himself he locks completely outside of his mental barriers, so he doesn't have to deal with it.

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* The reveal about Patrick. [[spoiler: He really IS evil, after all.]]. however, this doesn't mean he's not a well-developed, three dimensional character, who's firmly convinced what he is doing is right. And, Allison's pain is REAL.

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* The reveal about Patrick. [[spoiler: He really IS evil, after all.]]. however, However, this doesn't mean he's not a well-developed, three dimensional character, who's firmly convinced what he is doing is right. And, Allison's Alison's pain is REAL.REAL.
* Daniel's conversation with Alison about the existence of good people in the world. She's the first good person he's met, and he's convinced himself she's the ONLY good person. [[spoiler: When Alison asks why he tells himself that when he knows it's not true, he reveals it's because if other good people exist, that means he's killed a lot of them.]]
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* Pintsize's page long speech about how he hates the idea of deconstruction in a sense. How he feels it's unfair that people want Superheros to be sad and complicated all in the name of being smart, when all it makes him feel is like he's being an idiot just for wanting to be a good person and doing the right thing.

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* Pintsize's page long speech about how he hates the idea of deconstruction in a sense. How he feels it's unfair that people want Superheros to be sad and complicated all in the name of being smart, when all it makes him feel is like he's being an idiot just for wanting to be a good person and doing the right thing.thing.
* The reveal about Patrick. [[spoiler: He really IS evil, after all.]]. however, this doesn't mean he's not a well-developed, three dimensional character, who's firmly convinced what he is doing is right. And, Allison's pain is REAL.
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-->'''Alison:''' I should...I should stop her, right? But...it's the most heroic thing anyone's ever done, but I can't--

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-->'''Alison:''' I should...I should stop her, right? But...it's the most heroic thing anyone's ever done, but I can't--can't--
* Pintsize's page long speech about how he hates the idea of deconstruction in a sense. How he feels it's unfair that people want Superheros to be sad and complicated all in the name of being smart, when all it makes him feel is like he's being an idiot just for wanting to be a good person and doing the right thing.
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* Feral's plan to save the world. [[spoiler:She speaks to some doctors about seeing if she can donate her organs multiple times using her HealingFactor. Initial tests prove a complete success, so she decides to spend the rest of her very long life on an operating table, having her organs, blood, and skin constantly removed and regenerated, pausing only briefly when doctors get tired or machines wear out. Oh, and she's immune to anesthetic]]. It is the most heartwarming, heroic, and '''''horrifying''''' thing anyone has ever seen. Alison breaks down crying when she hears the whole story, because she has ''no idea'' what to do.
-->'''Alison:''' I should...I should stop her, right? But...it's the most heroic thing anyone's ever done, but I can't--

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