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* Dogamy is ''completely dejected'' during the encounter with him, which makes sense when you see that he's not alongside Dogaressa. Frisk is able to cheer him up a little by petting him, only for Asriel to get angry about him not doing his job properly. After Chara cuts Asriel off and thanks Dogamy, he slinks away for some alone time.
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* Dogamy is ''completely dejected'' during the encounter with him, which makes sense when you see that he's not alongside Dogaressa. Frisk is able to cheer him up a little by petting him, only for Asriel to get angry about him not doing his job properly. After Chara cuts Asriel off and thanks Dogamy, he slinks away for some alone time.
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* In Shift 1. Also doubles as [[CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming Heartwarming]], but in the King's mess of a bedroom, there's only one thing that's well cleaned. A framed letter from his brother.
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* In Shift 1. Also doubles as [[CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming Heartwarming]], SugarWiki/{{Heartwarming|Moments}}, but in the King's mess of a bedroom, there's only one thing that's well cleaned. A framed letter from his brother.
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** If you go into Chara's room, you'll find them lying face down on their bed. The narration tells you not to disturb them.
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'''Undyne''': [[OhCrap Alphys?! Alphys, wait]]--! ...[[MyGodWhatHaveIDone She...she hung up]]...
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'''Undyne''': [[OhCrap Alphys?! Alphys, wait]]--! ...[[MyGodWhatHaveIDone She...she hung up]]... Crap, crap!! I haven't heard from her in ages!! I have to--\\
'''''([[BarrierBustingBlow CRASH!!]])'''''\\
'''Dr. Asgore''': That is ENOUGH, Undyne!\\
'''Undyne''': I...I messed up...
'''''([[BarrierBustingBlow CRASH!!]])'''''\\
'''Dr. Asgore''': That is ENOUGH, Undyne!\\
'''Undyne''': I...I messed up...
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* In Shift 1. Also doubles as [[CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming Heartwarming]], but in the King's mess of a bedroom, there's only one thing that's well cleaned. A framed letter of his brother.
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* The ending to the fight against Undyne [[spoiler:Umbra, the Magical Girl upgrade version of Undyne]]. Her weak point is her will to fight. She ends up losing it when she gets a phone call from Alphys, and unintentionally blows up on her.
-->'''Undyne''': [[VillainousBreakdown NGAHHH! DIE ALREADY, YOU LITTLE BRAT! I WILL NEVER TAKE MERCY FROM THE LIKES OF YOU! I WILL NEVER LET YOU TAKE ASGORE'S SOUL! I CAN'T LET THAT HAPPEN!! I WON'T FALL TO YOUR LIES]]!!!\\
''(Undyne's phone rings)''\\
'''Undyne''': WHAT IS IT!?!? I'M IN THE MIDDLE OF SOMETHING!!! AND I CAN ASSURE YOU. IT'S WAY MORE IMPORTANT THAN ANYTHING YOU HAVE TO SAY!!\\
'''Alphys''': ...oh... o-okay. I-I'll just go now. S-s-s-sorry for wasting your time. ''(she hangs up)''\\
'''Undyne''': [[OhCrap Alphys?! Alphys, wait]]--! ...[[MyGodWhatHaveIDone She...she hung up]]...
* In Shift 1. Also doubles as [[CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming Heartwarming]], but in the King's mess of a bedroom, there's only one thing that's well cleaned. A framed letterof from his brother.
-->'''Undyne''': [[VillainousBreakdown NGAHHH! DIE ALREADY, YOU LITTLE BRAT! I WILL NEVER TAKE MERCY FROM THE LIKES OF YOU! I WILL NEVER LET YOU TAKE ASGORE'S SOUL! I CAN'T LET THAT HAPPEN!! I WON'T FALL TO YOUR LIES]]!!!\\
''(Undyne's phone rings)''\\
'''Undyne''': WHAT IS IT!?!? I'M IN THE MIDDLE OF SOMETHING!!! AND I CAN ASSURE YOU. IT'S WAY MORE IMPORTANT THAN ANYTHING YOU HAVE TO SAY!!\\
'''Alphys''': ...oh... o-okay. I-I'll just go now. S-s-s-sorry for wasting your time. ''(she hangs up)''\\
'''Undyne''': [[OhCrap Alphys?! Alphys, wait]]--! ...[[MyGodWhatHaveIDone She...she hung up]]...
* In Shift 1. Also doubles as [[CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming Heartwarming]], but in the King's mess of a bedroom, there's only one thing that's well cleaned. A framed letter
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* In spite of it being a ForegoneConclusion, the tale of [[spoiler:Mettacrit, Mettaton's ghostly form in Shift 1]], heard by Shifty in New Home, is really sad. [[spoiler:Mettacrit]] was a monster who managed to convince the other monsters that they should give humanity a second chance and that not all humans were bad. Then, a human child fell in the Underground... [[spoiler:and proved that he was right, as she was a kind girl who wanted to help them. [[HopeSpot Together, they both gave hope to the Underground.]] Then, Mettacrit crossed the Barrier with her SOUL (for now, it's ambiguous whether or not she agreed to give it to him). And he was killed by humans. After they found the remains of his cousin, Napstablook [[DeathByDespair crumbled away]].]] All monsters lost hope and, angry and vengeful after the death of their friends, [[spoiler:pressured the King to wage war on humanity]].
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* In spite of it being a ForegoneConclusion, the tale of [[spoiler:Mettacrit, Mettaton's ghostly form in Shift 1]], heard by Shifty in New Home, is really sad. [[spoiler:Mettacrit]] was a monster who managed to convince the other monsters that they should give humanity a second chance and that not all humans were bad. Then, a human child fell in the Underground... [[spoiler:and proved that he was right, as she was a kind girl who wanted to help them. [[HopeSpot Together, they both gave hope to the Underground.]] Then, Mettacrit crossed the Barrier with her SOUL (for now, it's ambiguous whether or not she agreed to give it to him). And he was killed by humans. After they found the remains of his their cousin, Napstablook [[DeathByDespair crumbled away]].]] All monsters lost hope and, angry and vengeful after the death of their friends, [[spoiler:pressured the King to wage war on humanity]].
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* In spite of it being a ForegoneConclusion, the tale of [[spoiler:Mettacrit, canon!Mettaton's counterpart in Shift 1]], heard by Shifty in New Home, is really sad. [[spoiler:Mettacrit]] was a monster who managed to convince the other monsters that they should give humanity a second chance and that not all humans were bad. Then, a human child fell in the Underground... [[spoiler:and proved that he was right, as she was a kind girl who wanted to help them. [[HopeSpot Together, they both gave hope to the Underground.]] Then, Mettacrit crossed the Barrier with her SOUL (for now, it's ambiguous whether or not she agreed to give it to him). And he was killed by humans. After they found the remains of his cousin, Napstablook [[DeathByDespair crumbled away]].]] All monsters lost hope and, angry and vengeful after the death of their friends, [[spoiler:pressured the King to wage war on humanity]].
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* In spite of it being a ForegoneConclusion, the tale of [[spoiler:Mettacrit, canon!Mettaton's counterpart Mettaton's ghostly form in Shift 1]], heard by Shifty in New Home, is really sad. [[spoiler:Mettacrit]] was a monster who managed to convince the other monsters that they should give humanity a second chance and that not all humans were bad. Then, a human child fell in the Underground... [[spoiler:and proved that he was right, as she was a kind girl who wanted to help them. [[HopeSpot Together, they both gave hope to the Underground.]] Then, Mettacrit crossed the Barrier with her SOUL (for now, it's ambiguous whether or not she agreed to give it to him). And he was killed by humans. After they found the remains of his cousin, Napstablook [[DeathByDespair crumbled away]].]] All monsters lost hope and, angry and vengeful after the death of their friends, [[spoiler:pressured the King to wage war on humanity]].
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--> '''Toriel!Papyrus''': "Human, let me tell you about some complex feelings of mine. Feelings like... Meeting someone, only to never see them again."
--> '''Toriel!Papyrus''': "Human, let me tell you about some complex feelings of mine. Feelings like... Meeting someone, only to never see them again."
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--> '''Toriel!Papyrus''': "Human, let me tell you about some complex feelings of mine. [...] Wanting to trust someone close who's done something wrong. Knowing that you've made mistakes you can't take back. These feelings. I hope you never have to deal with them. You want to leave here to go back to your home, right? I understand. It's been ages since I've been home too."
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--> '''Toriel!Papyrus''': "Human, let me tell you about some complex feelings of mine. [...] Feelings like... Meeting someone, only to never see them again. Wanting to trust someone close who's done something wrong. Knowing that you've made mistakes you can't take back. These feelings. I hope you never have to deal with them. You want to leave here to go back to your home, right? I understand. It's been ages since I've been home too."
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* While the first meet in the Judgement Hall with Chara is heartwarming (if Shifty hasn't killed anyone), repeated reloading will quickly make them sour. The first reload causes them to believe that it was done to avoid getting hurt by them. The second reload will distress them. But on the third reload, they realize Shifty is trying to gain something from them. They promptly throw the key to their room in your face in exchange for letting them be before leaving. The build-up for a shocking discovery in canon has been turned into a PlayerPunch.
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* While the first meet in the Judgement Hall with Chara is heartwarming (if Shifty hasn't killed anyone), repeated reloading will quickly make them sour. The first reload causes them to believe that it was done to avoid getting hurt by them. The second reload will distress them. But on the third reload, they realize Shifty is trying to gain something from them. They promptly throw the key to their room in your face in exchange for letting them be before leaving. The build-up for a shocking discovery in canon has been turned into a PlayerPunch.PlayerPunch.
* When Shifty finally meets King Sans, and they go to the Barrier before their fight, Shifty follows Asgore's suggestion and asks to stay in peace...
-->'''Sans''': ...i won't stall any more after this.
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-->'''Sans''': kid. these people are desperate. if it wasn't for the captain keeping an eye out for hunters, we would have already been free. do you think they will let freedom go a second time? they won't listen to me anymore either. not unless they hear what they want. one bullet? i can dodge. all the bullets in new home? i'm dusted. somehow i don't think you'll be any better off. sorry, [[spoiler:i can't say yes]].
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* When Shifty finally meets King Sans, and they go to the Barrier before their fight, Shifty follows Asgore's suggestion and asks to stay in peace...
-->'''Sans''': ...i won't stall any more after this.
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-->'''Sans''': kid. these people are desperate. if it wasn't for the captain keeping an eye out for hunters, we would have already been free. do you think they will let freedom go a second time? they won't listen to me anymore either. not unless they hear what they want. one bullet? i can dodge. all the bullets in new home? i'm dusted. somehow i don't think you'll be any better off. sorry, [[spoiler:i can't say yes]].
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[[AC:Go Back]]
