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* The episode begins with Sonic having a poignant flashback to Green Hill. Sonic's friends surprise him with a gift—a picnic in front of a palm tree. Amy explains that the tree represents all the memories the crew made around it, and each of Sonic's friends recount one of their memories with Sonic and the tree (or in Big's case, a humorously random one). However, Sonic is unable to relate to their sentimentality, so he simply brushes off their gestures before digging into the food. What was a harmless moment in the past is now saddening, given that Sonic has no idea when he will ever see his friends again, and it all started precisely because he dismissed something important they were trying to tell him.
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* The episode begins with Sonic having a poignant flashback to Green Hill. Sonic's friends surprise him with a gift—a picnic in front the "gift" of a palm tree. Amy explains that the tree represents all the memories the crew made around it, and each it. Each of Sonic's friends recount one of their memories with Sonic and the tree (or in Big's case, a humorously random one). However, Sonic is unable to relate to their sentimentality, so he simply brushes off their gestures before digging into the food.food they brought for a picnic. What was a harmless moment in the past is now saddening, given that Sonic has no idea when he will ever see his friends again, and it all started precisely because he dismissed something important they were trying to tell him.
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-->'''Sonic:''' [[ArmorPiercingQuestion Is ''that'' what you want? ''More'' destruction?]] [[SuddenlyShouting LOOK OUTSIDE!]] (...) I'm sorry for everything, Nine. I missed my home so much and was so focused on getting it back that I didn't listen to what you wanted or appreciate what you were trying to do. I ''never'' meant to hurt you.\\
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-->'''Sonic:''' [[ArmorPiercingQuestion Is ''that'' Is]] ''[[ArmorPiercingQuestion that]]'' [[ArmorPiercingQuestion what you want? ''More'' want?]] ''[[ArmorPiercingQuestion More]]'' [[ArmorPiercingQuestion destruction?]] [[SuddenlyShouting LOOK OUTSIDE!]] (...) I'm sorry for everything, Nine. I missed my home so much and was so focused on getting it back that I didn't listen to what you wanted or appreciate what you were trying to do. I ''never'' meant to hurt you.\\
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-->'''Sonic:''' Is ''that'' what you want? ''More'' destruction? [[SuddenlyShouting LOOK OUTSIDE!]] (...) I'm sorry for everything, Nine. I missed my home so much and was so focused on getting it back that I didn't listen to what you wanted or appreciate what you were trying to do. I ''never'' meant to hurt you.\\
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-->'''Sonic:''' [[ArmorPiercingQuestion Is ''that'' what you want? ''More'' destruction? destruction?]] [[SuddenlyShouting LOOK OUTSIDE!]] (...) I'm sorry for everything, Nine. I missed my home so much and was so focused on getting it back that I didn't listen to what you wanted or appreciate what you were trying to do. I ''never'' meant to hurt you.\\
