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*[[spoiler Estella's]] [[TheirFirstTime first experience with sex]] is painful to read. Not only does the physical experience sound traumatic but her ideas about romance and ballads are trashed.
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*[[spoiler: Alis']] torment at the hands of Raymond de Toulose. It takes a special kind of twisted mind to even think of that, let alone carry it out with such nonchallance.
