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* Chapter 20's Interstitial focuses on how Kokoro got Kicks, which all starts when Kicks's mother was killed by a monster when Kicks was a tiny kitten.
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** A later comic confirms this: Anemone doesn't remember the Woman in White's name.
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* A monster grabbing Vedika's ankle and inadvertently activating her powers leads to a startling revelation: the monsters are sentient, might very well have once been human, and are ''screaming'' to be saved.
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* A monster grabbing Vedika's ankle and inadvertently activating her powers leads to a startling revelation: the monsters are sentient, might very well have once been human, and are ''screaming'' to be saved. And the worst part is Vedika almost immediately forgot about it thanks to the memory block.
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[[AC: Chapter 20]]
* Tessa Alter suggests Anemone isn't as immune to the Woman in White's PsychicStatic as she thinks she is. And based on the WhamShot of static in Anemone's eyes, ''she's right''.
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* It's implied Anemone is quite ''literally'' a BarrierMaiden, aka the source of the inner barrier: when we see her, her inner room, all the objects in it, even her hair and clothes are the same color as the barrier. And she looks asleep, but Tessa Alter firmly believes Anemone can still hear and see her.
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[[AC: Chapter 19]]
* Take a good look at Tessa-Goops's face when Kokoro blames her for the deaths in Team Alchemical. There's almost two reactions on that face: the side with the covered up eye is grinning as she claims it (presumably Goops being proud of that), but the other, with the visible eye...the mouth looks more like it's grimacing. Tessa still blames herself for her friends' deaths.
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* The reason Tessa was the last to get her powers is because the Woman in White saw how strong her potential was...but also knows it's LonelyAtTheTop for magical girls as powerful as Tessa. Tessa just points out she's ''already'' isolated ''because'' she's the only one without powers. This makes so much of Tessa's story arc HarsherInHindsight as her own arrogance led to her going right back to square one: a girl isolated.
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** It's revealed Tessa was the last one to awaken as a magical girl, with her dream showing her being left behind by her friends.
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** It's revealed Tessa was the last one to awaken as a magical girl, with her dream showing her being left behind by her friends.
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* Tessa [[https://www.sleeplessdomain.com/comic/chapter-18-page-32 thought Goops was lying about being able to give her powers and was just trying to lure her out to kill her]]... and she stepped out ''anyway''. She was trying to commit suicide.
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* Tessa [[https://www.sleeplessdomain.com/comic/chapter-18-page-32 thought Goops was lying about being able to give her powers and was just trying to lure her out to kill her]]... and [[DrivenToSuicide she stepped out ''anyway''. She was trying to commit suicide.out]] ''anyway''.
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* Tessa [[https://www.sleeplessdomain.com/comic/chapter-18-page-32 thought Goops was lying about being able to give her powers and was just trying to lure her out to kill her]]... and she stepped out ''anyway''. She was trying to commit suicide.
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* Tessa's thoughts as she sneaks downstairs to meet Goops: she blames herself for all of Undine's troubles, feels like she's dragging everyone down, and is just so tired of it all. No wonder Goops came to her.
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* Tessa's thoughts as she sneaks downstairs to meet Goops: the door: she blames herself for all of Undine's troubles, feels like she's dragging everyone down, and is just so tired of it all. No wonder Goops came to her.
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* Tessa's thoughts as she sneaks downstairs to meet Goops: she blames herself for all of Undine's troubles, feels like she's dragging everyone down, and is just so tired of it all. No wonder Goops came to her.
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***It is actually describing the colours of the Inner Barrier, but the fact the writer describes where they most likely live as a base is saddening enough.
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** Lettie blames herself for Cassidy's disappearance as much as [[NotSoDifferent Undine blames herself.]]
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* Undine finally tells Tessa about Goops, and Tessa is horrified at the idea that Team Alchemical was targeted. Then she asks for a description of Goops, and the fractured frames start appearing again as she realizes she's ''still'' being targeted.
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* Just the title page is enough to get the tears going. Undine is frantically reaching out toward a falling Tessa, who doesn't seem to care at all that she's falling. Then there's the name of the chapter: "Distributary". A distributary is defined as 'a branch of a river that does not return to the main stream after leaving it'. So it's clear right away this chapter will be about the fracturing relationship between Undine and Tessa.
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* Just the title page is enough to get the tears going. Undine is frantically reaching out toward a falling Tessa, who doesn't seem to care at all that she's falling. Then there's the name of the chapter: "Distributary". A distributary is defined as 'a branch of a river that does not return to the main stream after leaving it'. So it's clear right away this chapter will be about the fracturing relationship between Undine and Tessa.Tessa, and how Tessa feels Undine has 'moved on' from Team Alchemical.
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[[AC: Chapter 18]]
* Just the title page is enough to get the tears going. Undine is frantically reaching out toward a falling Tessa, who doesn't seem to care at all that she's falling. Then there's the name of the chapter: "Distributary". A distributary is defined as 'a branch of a river that does not return to the main stream after leaving it'. So it's clear right away this chapter will be about the fracturing relationship between Undine and Tessa.
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** And then there's Leana/Sunlight Spear. In a few moments her (technically former) teammate was killed and her other teammate lost her powers. Now she's as alone as Undine initially was.
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* Mingxing burnt out the rest of her magic in order to get Kokoro to a hospital, and this was literally ''moments'' after losing her arm. At least she thought it was WorthIt.
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* Kokoro ''nearly froze to death'' the night her mother died. She looked so small and pathetic when Mingxing and Leana finally got to her (and no longer had the strength to cry) that it brings tears to one's eyes.
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* Kokoro's relationship with her father is so fractured that she'd rather be interrogated about Cassidy's disappearance than talk about him.
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* Many had suspected it since the flashback to Mitsuki's death, which cut off as a tendril wrapped itself around Mingxing's arm, but this chapter confirmed it: Mingxing lost an arm the night Mitsuki died. She's seen with a prosthetic.
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* Many had suspected it since the flashback to Mitsuki's death, which cut off as a tendril wrapped itself around ice started going up Mingxing's arm, but this chapter confirmed it: Mingxing lost an arm the night Mitsuki died. She's seen with a prosthetic.
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* Many had suspected it since the flashback to Mitsuki's death, which cut off as a tendril wrapped itself around Mingxing's arm, but this chapter confirmed it: Mingxing lost an arm the night Mitsuki died. She's seen with a prostheic.prosthetic.
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[[AC: Chapter 17]]
* We see Team Flash being badly shaken by what happened to Cassidy: The member who was flippant about Cassidy's absence is seen crying, with Lettie and the white-haired teammate trying to comfort her. As Kokoro passes them, Lettie just asks Kokoro not to worry about them.
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* And then the final tearjerker, combined with Nightmare Fuel: Tessa has responded to Goops.
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** Unfortunately, all the revelations leaves Bud hurt that she didn't know about any of this, feeling that no one trusted her with it, and a fight starts. This causes Undine to flash back to the fight Team Alchemical had before they died...thankfully this leads to her MomentOfAwesome.
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** Unfortunately, all the revelations leaves Bud hurt that she didn't know about any of this, feeling that no one trusted her with it, and a fight starts. This causes Undine to flash back to the fight Team Alchemical had before they died...thankfully this leads to her MomentOfAwesome.SugarWiki/MomentOfAwesome in which she gets everyone to talk it out before the infighting tears them apart.
