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** In a later scene Wayne is disguised as a reclusive scientist, leading to a woman mistaking him for causing her fathers death. Wayne is very clearly reliving the above scene during the confrontation.
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** In a later scene Wayne is disguised as a reclusive scientist, leading to a woman mistaking him for causing her fathers death. Wayne is very clearly reliving the above scene during the confrontation. He has to verbally remind himself that he's playing a role, that the girl thought she was talking to someone else.
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* After all these years, [[spoiler: TenSoon still wears the same wolfhound bones in Vin's memory. When Wax asks what she was like, as a person and not as a mythological figure, TenSoon gets a little wistful...]]
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* After all these years, [[spoiler: TenSoon [=TenSoon=] still wears the same wolfhound bones in Vin's memory. When Wax asks what she was like, as a person and not as a mythological figure, TenSoon [=TenSoon=] gets a little wistful...]]
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* After all these years, [[spoiler: TenSoon still wears the same wolfhound bones in Vin's memory. When Wax asks what she was like, as a person and not as a mythological figure, TenSoon gets a little wistful...]]
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* After all these years, [[spoiler: TenSoon still wears the same wolfhound bones in Vin's memory. When Wax asks what she was like, as a person and not as a mythological figure, TenSoon gets a little wistful...]]]]
--> "She was strong and vulnerable. She put herself into everything she did. In battle, she was the sword. In love, she was the kiss."
--> "She was strong and vulnerable. She put herself into everything she did. In battle, she was the sword. In love, she was the kiss."
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** In a later scene Wayne is disguised as a reclusive scientist, leading to a woman mistaking him for causing her fathers death. Wayne is very clearly reliving the above scene during the confrontation.
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** In a later scene Wayne is disguised as a reclusive scientist, leading to a woman mistaking him for causing her fathers death. Wayne is very clearly reliving the above scene during the confrontation.confrontation.
* After all these years, [[spoiler: TenSoon still wears the same wolfhound bones in Vin's memory. When Wax asks what she was like, as a person and not as a mythological figure, TenSoon gets a little wistful...]]
* After all these years, [[spoiler: TenSoon still wears the same wolfhound bones in Vin's memory. When Wax asks what she was like, as a person and not as a mythological figure, TenSoon gets a little wistful...]]
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* Everything about the scene where Wayne gives the money to the daughter of the man who he killed. Both how much it still hurts him and [[KickTheDog how badly she rubs it in.]] You can hardly blame her but it's still really upsetting to see.
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* Everything about the scene where Wayne gives the money to the daughter of the man who he killed. Both how much it still hurts him and [[KickTheDog how badly she rubs it in.]] You can hardly blame her but it's still really upsetting to see.see.
** In a later scene Wayne is disguised as a reclusive scientist, leading to a woman mistaking him for causing her fathers death. Wayne is very clearly reliving the above scene during the confrontation.
** In a later scene Wayne is disguised as a reclusive scientist, leading to a woman mistaking him for causing her fathers death. Wayne is very clearly reliving the above scene during the confrontation.
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* Everything about the scene where Wayne gives the money to the daughter of the man whose wife he killed. Both how much it still hurts him and [[KickTheDog how badly she rubs it in.]] You can hardly blame her but it's still really upsetting to see.
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* Everything about the scene where Wayne gives the money to the daughter of the man whose wife who he killed. Both how much it still hurts him and [[KickTheDog how badly she rubs it in.]] You can hardly blame her but it's still really upsetting to see.
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* Everything about the scene where Wayne gives the money to the daughter of the man whose wife he killed. Both how much it still hurts him and [[KickTheDog how badly she rubs it in.]]
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* Everything about the scene where Wayne gives the money to the daughter of the man whose wife he killed. Both how much it still hurts him and [[KickTheDog how badly she rubs it in.]]]] You can hardly blame her but it's still really upsetting to see.
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* Wax at the end, having sunk into a deep depression after realizing that his God is fallible and has manipulated him AND [[spoiler:that he killed his wife a second time]].
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* Wax at the end, having sunk into a deep depression after realizing that his God is fallible and has manipulated him AND [[spoiler:that he killed his wife a second time]].time]].
* Everything about the scene where Wayne gives the money to the daughter of the man whose wife he killed. Both how much it still hurts him and [[KickTheDog how badly she rubs it in.]]
* Everything about the scene where Wayne gives the money to the daughter of the man whose wife he killed. Both how much it still hurts him and [[KickTheDog how badly she rubs it in.]]
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* And Wax at the end, having sunk into a deep depression after realizing that his God is fallible and has manipulated him AND that he killed his wife a second time.
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* And Wax at the end, having sunk into a deep depression after realizing that his God is fallible and has manipulated him AND that [[spoiler:that he killed his wife a second time.time]].
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* [[spoiler:As Paalm is killing herself so Harmony can't control her, Wax realizes she really was Lessie. Meaning he just killed his wife ''again'']].
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* [[spoiler:As Paalm is killing herself so Harmony can't control her, Wax realizes she really was Lessie. Meaning he just killed his wife ''again'']].''again'']].
* And Wax at the end, having sunk into a deep depression after realizing that his God is fallible and has manipulated him AND that he killed his wife a second time.
* And Wax at the end, having sunk into a deep depression after realizing that his God is fallible and has manipulated him AND that he killed his wife a second time.
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* A small moment, but when [=TenSoon=] tells Wax that he can't kill people for Harmony because "I'm his Preservation. You're his Ruin." The idea that he's just a weapon hits Wax like a punch to the gut, and [=TenSoon=] doesn't even notice.
* [[spoiler:As Paalm is killing herself so Harmony can't control her, Wax realizes she really was Lessie. Meaning he just killed his wife ''again'']].
* [[spoiler:As Paalm is killing herself so Harmony can't control her, Wax realizes she really was Lessie. Meaning he just killed his wife ''again'']].
